~Memories down the lane~ mayur/sajan version

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey surbhi first of all extremely sorry for late reply gosh what a OS yar marvelous 👏it was most cutest and adorable OS ❤️i seriously enjoyed reading it sajan and their memories loved poem u have added in it superb hon plz keep writing more it was seriously treat to read this OS 🤗

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Silhoutte92

@Silhoutte92

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

very awesome n very nice the both versions

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rija

@gunurlove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Hey Surabhi ji...😊

finally i read it and yup it was a fabulouse update 😳

very well written...Specially the poem was really veryyy nice👏

i did read the Sajan version but mene Mayur ko b ek bar imagine kar lia tha same story me...😆

Stupid girl...Sorry to say but tere writing style se start to end mujhe yahi lga k may b hero died in this os😉..(Sorryyy joote mat lgana mujhe..lekin tu ne Maa bete ki convo me Samrat/Mayank ko likha hi aese past version me tha..😉..like the way they were sharing their memories... ...k me confuse ho gai na😕)

but at the end Samrat ki entry made me really happy...😃😆

overall wonderful OS..

thanks for the pm

haan now happy na..dekh subha hone se pehle pehle comment kar dia he mene...😊😉

Edited by gunurlove - 14 years ago

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GHUNCHA SHABBIR

@-Ghuncha-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

WOW...

I like SAJAN...❤️

Nice update dear...

very sweet...n very well written...

good jb...keep it up...👍🏼

luv...🤗

Ghuncha...

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GHUNCHA SHABBIR

@-Ghuncha-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Mayur one was also good yaar...👏

I really enjoyed reading them...

thanks for the pm dear...😊

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jessica

@crazzygal_jenny

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Hey sur, ohh gawwdd great finallyU wrote an os ! Gud gud

nw talking abt it ,
first talk abt the poem,
seriously u really wrote it ?
I meam it was tooo goood !
Hmmm u were talented in poems to i didnt knew i only thought u r only talented in pulling legs 🤣

now talking about the os
it was sooo sweeettt awww loved rehan , u knw in starting i thought samrat was dead by the way u narrated it , bt thank god it didnt happened
bt seriously it is d sweetest os i ever read

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Awesome os. Loved it a lot. Thanks for pm

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KuchBhiMatBol

@KuchBhiMatBol

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -roshnee-
i read the mayur version. the poem is beautiful. so is the os.

thank u soo much for liking it and commenting

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KuchBhiMatBol

@KuchBhiMatBol

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

meeri - oyee tu na mere post mjhe pe chod de
tjhe yeh res karna suit nahi karta
yeh bas mera job hai samjhi!!

Aur thanks yar for liking the os !
Han poem likh le apni diary main
tm bhi kya yad rakhogi meri kurbani ko hehehdm

and haan thanks for the cmment
par mjhse kbhi aise cmment ki umeed mat rakhna hahaha