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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice os... I loved it... You wrote it superbly...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini4

happy holi ruchi!!!!🤗

beautiful n cute os!!!!😊
mayank's reaction on seeing nupur was just so cute!!!n d confession in d end was just perfect..👍🏼
thanx for d pm!!


Originally posted by: shria19

Nice os:)

i really liked it😃


Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Aww it ws cute..
As cute as my Mayur is..Loved it..😍
Specially the way mayank said 'har bat kahi nahi jati'...Really romantic...
That ws so lovely-dovey sa OS...Loved it dil se...
And Happy Holi ruch...🤗


Thanx to all🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

im very late in commenting...d holi os was really cute ruchi...😊do write more on mayur...:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Here is next OS...HOLI special One shot.hope that u like it..Pardon mistakes.😳


jaan teri...saanse teri...
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"I am fed up!!!just fed up with my boring husband...!!!"a 22 years old newly married girl was grumbling while organizing her totally unorganized room.

"Huh...!!! din bhar ghar me pade raho...aur ghar thik karte raho..that's it!!! That's his soul purpose of getting marry...he wants wife so as to organize his room,cloths,watch,vollet..."she picked up pillow in anger and frustaion and threw it on bed..."Hell!!! I wanna die..God plz give me some peace!!!"

After the storm of anger and frustation calm downs,a tear of sorrow formed in her eyes,

"Kya kya sapne dekhe the tune nupur...ke ek din tere sapno ka raajkumar safed ghode me aayega aur tujhe iss duniya se kahin door apne pyaar ki duniya me le jayega..."a smile curved on her lips while dreaming but soon she came back in reality and tears again rolled down on her cheeks..."par sapne toh sapne hote hai na nupur...reality me koi sapno ka raajkumar nahi hota...koi DDLJ ka Raaj nahi hota...jo apni simran ke liye saat samundar paar jaye !"

She felt like crying out loudly but she could'nt because in the very next room which is official library of her flat her husband was engrossed in reading some book and her cry would certainly disturb him.She also knew that he don't like to be disturbed while he is concentrating on something.

She closed her eyes and composed herself,taking a deep breath she felt a little lighthearted..."this is the reality nupur that you have been married to very unromantic person,books are his best friends and nothing matters for him more than his carrier,books and success...!this is the bitter truth and as soon as you accept it,it will give you less pain...!

She went into kitchen for making routine break fast...toast and pinnapple juice.Her husband likes that only and she was told on very first day after marriage that what she has to make in break fast,lunch and dinner.Although she was tired of same food again and again but she did not have courage to change it and then get a glare,stand with rough looks of him.

"but its holi nupur...at least on this day u can make ur choice of break fast!!"her heart urged,"at least today she should enjoy...its her right to enjoy this festival and bring some colors in their boring life!

"Yes!! I will certainly do that,no one can stop me today!!!"she decided and tied her duppatta around waist as going for a fight!She was filled with energy and headed towards her husband like a soldier...

Entering in his room,she took a breath,hold the door with one hand,put another on side of her waist,put her head slightly up and spoke like a commander,

"Mr.Mayank Sharma!!!"

Mayank was shocked with that sudden and powerful call,he immediately looked up and found Nupur standing in front of him.Though she believed that it was style but actually the way she stood,her gestures were very funny and Mayank burst out in laughter,being angry instead!

That made her more frustated,

"aap hans rahe hai...you think I am a joker!!!"she screamed.

Mayank tried to supress his laugh,"Woh..tum..!! anyways tell me what happened?"in the very next moment he became serious as usual.

Nupur noticed that her husband had just laughed and that too so openly and loudly.It was a good sign and she could demand for a holi celebration.

"Woh..aapko ek news deni thi."she said.

"What?"

"Today is a festival named holi...it is celebrated by playing colors and meeting people...social get togethers and eating sweets specially Gujhiya.."she was in flow when Mayank cut her in between,

"Nupur!Are you in your senses...tum mujhe ye holi par essay kyu suna rahi ho? " he annoyingly said.

"Aapko ye yaad dilane ke liye ke hume bhi aisa kuch karna chahiye..."she completed.

Mayank became thoughtful,"see nupur I don't like playing colors...but if you want u can enjoy with our neighbours...there is no restrictions on u but do not try to force me!"he said and again bed down in his book.

Nupur became disappointed..."kya matlab hai ke tum enjoy kar lo...bina unke hum akele neighbours ke sath kya enjoy kare..."she made faces and came out of home...

children were playing holi,throwing baloons and coloring others...one of them came to her and rubbed red color on her cheeks..

"Happy holi didi...aap wahan muma ke sath kheliye nah..aaiye na wahan sab bahut wnjoy kar rahe hai..."he said and dragged her to parking area of their apartment where almost everyone on their apartment was gathered and playing holi.

"Arey Nupur...what a surprise!!! happy holi.." her frnd shilpa said in excitement and rubbed color on her face.Nupur gave a faded smile and did the same.

"What happened nupur,is there any problem?"she asked.

"Kya batau tujhe shilpa...ye Mayank hain na..ekdum sadu hain..aaj holi khelne ko kaha par unhone man kar diya..."she said sadly.

"Toh..isme tension lene wali kya baat hai..mere paas na ek aisa tareeka hain ke wo khud aakar holi khelenge..."she said and winked.

"Wo kya?"nupur asked happily.

She went somewhere and came back after a moment with a glass,

"bas isey pila de..aur phir dekhna asar..."she smirked.Nupur's eyes gleed and she immediately rushed to Mayank.

She went in kitchen, took half glass of milk and mixed it in the glass.

"Ab aayega maza..Mr.Mayank Sharma aaj agar maine bhi aapko apne piche na nachaya to mera naam bhi nupur bhushan nahi..."she smirked...and went up to his room.He was still reading same book in same pose.She jerked her head ,

"How boring!"thought she and brought an innocent smile on her face,

"Aaj breakfast nahi bna paayi..sorry!aap iss se hi kaam chala le.."she put the glass on side table..."Plz jaldi se pi le.."she said stood beside him.

Mayank looked at her with a cold breath,"Okay!"and took the glass and holding it,passed a glare.

Nupur started dusting of room for time paas...and glancing at him to check if it started working or not.After 10-15 minutes..he started jerking his head,closing his eyelids and behaving awkwardly...

"Nupur...mujhe chakkar aa rahe hai..."he said.

Nupur bited her lips...and attacked on him,

"HAPPY HOLIII...!!!"she shouted and rubbed dry colors on his cheeks.Mayank was in total intoxication and he too took colors in his hand and ran before her shouting.."ruko nupur..I won't let u go... so clear..."

Nupur made a circle of their main hall and mayank was running before her throwing colors here and there...she ran outside and Mayank too...

After a long chase he captured her in his arms...Nupur was breathing heavily and he too...she was shivering slightly and her wet suit became too skiny too make her sensuous.Mayank embraced her in his arms and looked directly into her eyes...

"Happy holi wifey..."

Nupur was astonished...he was'nt sounding weird..he was allright.

"Shocked!!! "he smiled.

"Yeahh..aapne wo milk piya tha nah?"she asked doubtdly.

He snatched her more closer where she could feel his hot breath,"No...kyuki mai apni wife ko achi tarah janta hu...maine woh milk nahi piya tha...par mai tumhara dil kaise tod sakta tha..u wanted to play holi with me right?"he asked.

Nupur was in great astonishment,"Aaapp..I mean.."

"I love you!"he said,"Its true nupur I am unromantic,dry and boring...but I love you since the very first day you came in my life..."

Nupur's eyes became teary,"to phir kabhi kaha kyu nahi?"

"Kyuki mai chahta tha ke tum isey meri aankho me dekho...har baat kahi nahi jaati nupur...Love is something to feel...mujhe laga shayad tum samjh jaaogi..."

Nupur was feeling guilty now,"Par mai nahi samjhi...how idiot I am.."

"Yeah..that's true!"he giggled

"Mayank aap bhi nahh..."she pushed him a bit but he pulled her even more closer...and put his lips on her...

"Mayank..!"a whisper escaped from her mouth...before deepning the kiss.

"I love you nupur...aaj se ye dil tera...mayank tera..jaan teri..saanse teri..."he said drammatically.

Nupur opened her arms wide,"Mujhe mera raaj mil gaya..I LOVE YOU MAYANK..!!"She shouted.

Their love mingled in the air with colors.
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Hope you all liked it.Press like if so.and wishing u all a very happy and colorful holi😊




👏 👏 👏 👏 LOVED IT RUCHI DI! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u so much for liking previous OS🤗

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I have written something after a long time...don know how is it...Please read and give your valuable feedback...
and pardon me for not continuing my FFs...will be back with updates soon.😳

Love
Ruchi❤️
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Life in memories...

Wo kehti hai suno jaana,
Mohabbat moum ka ghar hai,
Tapish-e-bud-gumani ki,
Kahin pighla na de is ko?
Main kehta hoon,
Jis dil main zara bhi bad-gumani ho,
Wahan kuch aur ho to ho,
Mohabbat ho nahi sakti...

I always love this shayari...listened it somewhere...dint remember now...anyways that does'nt matter...

When I listened it for the first time I did not know its depth,its meaning as I dint know 'Love' at all...!then why while listening it her face came into my mind...the face which was as common as any other girl yet so unique...a face which is forgo table in all ways yet so unforgettable for me...since I remember i am known to this face...!

I was shocked..totally shocked...why this happened???why her face came into my mind???why not any other girl???The girls who used to be friendly with me...good with me..why not they??? Why a girl to whom I always fight...a girl whom I always think brainless...why she???Why???Why you??? Nupur Bhushan!!!

At that time I dint know that one day I'll fell into love with this girl as I fell into love with this shayari...but life is all about unpredictable events...it happened and it so happened that we could never thought...!It was during our college days when I used to be most shy guy in the class,studious,calm and intelligent.I was favorite of all professors and those who love to study or more preferably feared of failing in exams..!It was going well...I was happy with my 'Most sincere'

student image and being amongst 'Intellectuals' used to give me satisfaction.That was then 'She' entered

in our college.'She' Nupur Bhushan the famous 'Morena' girl came with a tsunami which was targeted to destruct my carefully formed image with materials of 'ego' and 'pride'.

This self-obsessed girl I tell you!Soon she became the most wonder girl of my life...initially we fought on every small reason...then a time came when we 'like a sensible human being' decided to end it up with 'cease-fire'

It was then when those un-usual feelings developed inside me...suddenly I started liking her every silly talk...finding smartness in her deeds and getting jealous if she talks to some other guy.I dint know what was it..what was that I was feeling...now even when I heard this shayari and her face came in my mind.!

A time came when everything was beautiful...beautiful was that drama...beautiful was that drama audition...beautiful was what I felt...and the most beautiful this among all was 'She'!

We were lost in our drama characters...love,pain,emotions and feelings..everything was so new to me on the other hand same things were her fantasy...while playing my character I found a new Mayank sharma inside me...a common guy who wants to be special for a girl,who was deeply in love and who 'like any other guy' wants to have a girl of his own...and I wanted her to realize my feelings for her...realize

her own feelings for me..everytime I tried to do so...she looked confused...she was feared,confused and scared..scared of being shattered...everytime I looked into her eyes..I found them asking endless questions...

Wo kehti hai sada aise he,
Kia tum mujh ko chaho ge?
K main is main kami koi bhi,
Gawara ker nahi sakti,
Main kehta hoon,
Mohabbat kia hai ye tum ne sikhaya hai,
Mujhe tum se mohabbat k siwa,
Kuch b nahi aata...

She believed me..she trusted on her heart and finally her feelings made her to speak what she was hiding in her heart...that I am his dream man...not as perfect as she dreamt...not at all like her fantasy..yet she loves me...she found her perfect man in my imperfections.!

We were deeply in love...we were feeling what we never felt before..it was new..it was mesmerizing...and soon we decided to get marry...she was so excited...

Once while sitting beneath a tree in garden...she asked me,

"Mayank will you be always with me???"

I was dreaming about our marriage leaning my head on her lap...opened my eyes a bit shocked...what kind of question was that...

"offcourse jaan..I'll be with you always..."

She was looking at me intensly...her eyes were full of pain...I could'nt understand her pain and helplessness at that time...I caressed her cheeks to assure her that I would be there with her in all stages of life...no matter what!!!

Wo kehti hai,
Judai se bohat darta hai mera dil,
K khud ko tum se hat ker dekhna,
Mumkin nahi hai ab,
Main kehta hoon,
Yahi khadshe bohat mujh ko satate hain,
Magar sach hai mohabbat main,
Judai saath chalti hai...

How true!!! how true are these lines..I never knew that...!

Wo kehti hai,
Batao kia mere bin jee sako ge tum?
Meri baaten, meri yaaden, meri aankhen,
Bhula do ge?
Main kehta hoon,
Kabhi aisi baat per socha nahi main ne,
Ager ek pal ko bhi sochon to,
Saansen rukne lagti hain...

We married...we were happy...life was like a fairy tail...we used to go college together...study together...live together but in all I forgot that Life is not a fairy tail...!

I can't forget that dark night..I was about to sleep when heard her scream...I got up and ran towards bathroom...there she was lying unconsciously on the floor...I lost my consciousness for sometime...then I gathered me up and shook her hard...

"Nupur!!!Nupur!!!For heaven's sake get up...plzzz"

I was screaming...tears were flowing down from my eyes...I was scared..I could'nt see you like this nupur...never...plz get up...

After some hard shakes,she mumbled..."Ma..yaankk..."

I found my own life back in me.."Nupur...han nupur I'm with you...I here only..."

I carried her in my arms and lied her carefully on bed..she was subconsious...I touched her forehead..it was cold...I rubbed her palms,toes to give her some warmth...but she was still not fully in her senses...then I embraced her passionately...after few seconds she whispered...

"Mayank!"

I looked at her..her eyes were open...full of pain...weakness..I kissed on her forehead...

"Thank God nupur...i was so scared...I love you..love u so much..."

I said almost 100 times at that moment that I love her...feeling of loosing her made me scared.She lovingly caressed my cheeks and smiled...

Wo kehti hai tumhen mujh se,
Mohabbat is qader kyon hai?
K main ek aam si larki,
Tumhen kyon khaas lagti hon?
Main kehta hoon,
Kabhi khud ko meri aankhon se tum dekho,
Meri dewaangi kyon hai,
Ye khud he jaan jao gi...

Life is all about going on...it never stops...not for anyone...its really rude...nothing matters for it...people come..people go...made us alone...but it goes on...

Soon we came across the most cruel truth of our life...Nupur was diagnosed leukemic...she has blood cancer...and that too incurable...it snatched earth beneath out feet...I lost my senses hearing this news...was standing numb in doctor's cabin...he gave me water...I gulped whole glass and holding head I shouted on him...

"HOW CAN YOU SAY THAT!!!MY NUPUR CAN NEVER DIE!!!SHE CAN'T LEAVE ME ALONE!!!"I was shouting like mad...

Doctor and his assistant hold me and made me normal...I looked at nupur..she was looking at me pathetically...her eyes full of tears...she was looking at me with hopes that I can make everything fine...that I can do something..at least something..!

But I was as helpless that time as I am today..neither I could save her...nor could die with her...!

"I won't let you die.."I said with trembling voice caressing her forehead.

She looked at me with a faint smile,"You still love me...you kept your promise...not leaving me even at this stage of life..when I can do nothing for u..."

I was holding my tears so long...burst out in crying hearing her..."Why r u saying so...you will be fine...nupur...I won't..."

She put her finger on my lip..."Promise me that you will be happy..promise me that you will live..you will move on...promise me..."she said weakly.


I looked at her...she was still worried for me in so much pain..so much of helplessness..she is thinking about me!!!

"I can't..I love you nd will die with you...my life is nothing without you..."I said.

Wo kehti hai,
Mujhe waraftgi se dekhte kyon ho?
K main khud ko bohat,
Qeemti mahsoos kerti hoon,
Main kehta hon,
Mata-e-jaan bohat anmol hoti hai,
Tumhen jub dekhta hoon zindgi,
Mahsoos kerta hoon...


"You are very bad...you don love me...don leave me alone plzzz..."I cried.
She was in her last few breaths...her eyes were getting closed and I was like a mad shaking her...as though my screams,my shakes would awake her...

She smiled..she still managed to do so...could'nt speak though her eyes which she opened with all her efforts..perhaps for the last time...said it all...

Wo kehti hai,
Mujhe alfaz k jugno nahi milte,
K tumhen bata sakon,
K dil main mere kitni mohabbat hai,
Main kehta hoon,
Mohabbat to nigahon se jhalakti hai,
Tumhari khamoshi mujh se,
Tumhari baat kerti hai...

Wo kehti hai,
Batao na kiss ko khone se darta ho?
Batao kon hai wo jise,
Ye mousam bulate hain?
Main kehta hoon,
Yeh meri shayeri hai aaina dil ka,
Zara dekho batao kia,
Tumhen is main nazar aaya...

Life is all about keeping our promises...after her I kept my promise...I lived my life successfully...but I failed to keep one promise...I could'nt live it happily without her...every moment I felt her presence around me...if she disappears for a moment it made me sad...she died but she never died in my memories...

Wo kehti hai,
bohat baaten banate ho,
Magar sach hai ye baaten,
Bohat he shaad rakhti hain,
Main kehta hoon,
Yeh sub baaten ye fasane ek bhana hain,
K pal kuch zindagani k,
Tumhare saath kat jayen,
Phir us k baad khamoshi ka,
Dilkash raqs hota hai,
Nigahen bolti hain aur,
Lub khamosh rehte hain'!!!

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That's all for now...hope u liked it...press "Like' if so😊
Edited by --Ruchi-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so emotional OS ruchs loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ruchi how dare u 2 write such a touchy,emotional ,sad story on mn.How could u make me cry.I hate u bt love u lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
it's so emotional.. so touchy...awsome OS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res..pleasure to read ur writings

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its extremely hard to comment on this OS.. its extra ordinary

intehai khubsorat kalam.. aur us kalam k bakhubi istmal...

ajeeb se tareer thi yeah..muhabbat per rashk kero ya taqeer se gila... samjh nhi aya...
per jo bhi ho.. beintheha khubsoorat...

buhat dino baad kuch asa parha jis k ehass buhat dair tak rahy ga...

likha kero... acha lagta hai..
aur aj apki tareer ny urdu mein comment kerny per majboor kiya


God bless u

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

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