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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dj_adnanss

no i just wanted u to take time as i am busy too so difficult to read updates..

Dj jyada time lgaoongi to kya story likh rahee hoo woh bhool jaoongi ..😆😆 .. one week is enough 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Will update soon.😃. Sorry for delay
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

Will update soon.😃. Sorry for delay


i knew it- akhir adat se majboor ho..lol lol lol

btw finally ur red batti is ON...- congrats ...:D
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-


i knew it- akhir adat se majboor ho..lol lol lol

btw finally ur red batti is ON...- congrats ...:D

Yes Faria ..Finally 😆😆😆😆... Hopefully i will update soon...😳... bahut der kar diya is baar... i hope u guys will like that update ..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

Yes Faria ..Finally 😆... Hopefully i will update soon...😳... bahut der kar diya is baar... i hope u guys will like that update ..


ab main bhi hope he kr sakti hu- aur kuch nehi..:( :( :(

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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay .. this update seems not great again because i had to write romantic lines 😆😆 and it did not come as i expected😕 ..so if there is any mistake kindly ignore it.. Please do not hesitate to point out either positive or negative feedback... Sorry for Delay.. thanks to everyone who reads my FF😃, I will surely update chapter 19 by Monday, thanks for encouraing. -------------------------------------------------------------------------

Chapter 18

Mayank aur Nupur ke liye aaj ka din bahut special thaa, as soon as mayank n nupur confessed their love for each other, baadlo ne bhee inka sath de diya inkee khushi main aur halki halki barish suru ho gayee, yeh dono bahar khade bheeg rahe the ek doosre ka hath pakad kar , isase badhiaya aur kya najara ho sakta thaa jahan aaj ek shadi shuda jodi ne apne pyaar ke ijhaar kiya wahi badlo ne apnee blessing de di barish ke roop main.Nupur could not believe her luck because her favourite season is rainy n she loves rain, mayank hates rain but he could not think about running away n hiding to the safer plce by leaving nupur alone .

Mayank was looking at nupur face, she was busy enjoying the rain, she is smiling with each drop of the rain water, he is amused to see this reaction on Nupur face , suddenly Nupur hold mayanks hand n pull him bit closer so both of them can enjoy the rain and mayank thinking " kee hum dono barish main khade khde bheeg rahe hai , we should go inside " but Nupur wanted to dance in the rain with her husband, isase acha mauka kahan milega, Her only wish to be with Mayank n enjoy the rain together.

Nupur its raining, yeh Mumbai kee barish hai, ander chalo, he looked bit irritated with the rain n hating him getting wet but when he looked at Nupurs face, he forgot about himself n his irritation changed to smiling n he stand there staring at her, Nupur was looking flwlessley beautiful in wet black sarree n wet hair

Mayank, kya Mumbai kee barish?, her jagah same barish hai aur yeh beautiful hai,chaliye naa barish main dance karte hai, it is so beautiful, she pulled him closer n pur her hands on his shoulder n his hands on her bare waist, lekin mayank ke hosh ude hue hai Nupur ko dekh kar, bheege hue black saree main he can see her figure clearly n loosing his sense , he did not even hear what nupur said, he kept staring at Nupur n her beauty in wet saree, wet long hair , wet lips'everything was so inviting , he started feeling like kissing nupur again, hugging again, he wanted to feel her again, he wanted nupur, he is not able to control himself after seeing Nupur in this condition, his heart started playing the same game again.

Mayank, kahan kho gaye hai aap, main aapse baat kar rahee hoo, chaliye naa dance karte hai, she shaked him hard this time because he was busy staring at her, that shake brought his sencse aback n he realise Nupur is holding him tight on his shoulder n he is holding her waiste ,

Nupur raat bahut ho gayee ho, its too late,barish main dance nahi , bilkool nahim ander chalo , Mayank just wanted to go away from nupur, agar thodi der aur pass raha to kuch na kcuh hone wala hai n he tried to move away

Mayank nahi mujhe aapke sath dance karnee hai, abhee, barisho ke boonde main aako suro ke tarang nahi sun de rahe hai, dhyaan se suniye, She pulled mayank so hard towards her n both of them collided n their chest tocued to each other, Mayank looked at her with a passionate eyes and Nupur suddeny started blushing n going red after getting contact with Mayank body.

Okay Nupur lets dance, waise tum blush karna suru kar di ho to I cannot control myself now, I wanted to go away because u r making me crazy like this, do u know that? Mayank started loosing his sense again when got contact with nupur body again, he hugged her tight n they were dancing slowly n he started getting response back from Nupur also, next move he wanted is to Kiss her passionately n this time definetly for long

Mayan this is so beautiful, one of the most beautiful moment of my life, main apne pati kee bahon main hoo, is barish main, aur kya chahiye mujhe. Enjoy this moment, Nupur did not realise till now that she is soaked wet n making mayank crazy, Nupur was busy admiring weather , slow dance n enjoying with her husband

Lekin mujhe kuch aur chahiye Nupur and I am craving to do more than kissing but I will wait for you, he looked at Nupur, she knew what mayank meant but today she only wanted to be with him , she just wanted to hug him , kiss him n be with him, she knows what mayank was asking but she seems not comfortable yet, there must be some reason?

Mayank, mujhe maloom hain aap kya chahte hai, siraf 2 din wait kar lijiye fir I will surrender myself to you for whole life hamesha ke liye , aaj ke din I just want to be with you , she looked at him , saw passion in his eyes n she wanted to hug him , hugging mayank has become comfort zone for Nupur now.

Tumne mujhe bahut bade dharam sankat main daal diya Nupur,kaise control karoonga main apne aapko aaj, lekin koi gal nahi,aaj ke hugging aur kissing se main kam chal longa, theek hai, tum pahlee ladkee ho jo mujhe instruction de rahee kya karna and I m surprised muujhe bura nahi lag raha hai, kya main wahi mayank hooo, jo itnaa arrogant, ghamandi, anger se bhara pura hota thaa, jo use chahiye hota tha, he used to get

Mayank aap bahut ache hai, bas gussa thoda jaldi karte hai, lekin main aapke gusse ko kam kar sakti ek cheej se , aap jab bhee gussa karoge to main aapko chup kara saktee hai, Nupur was actually opening up giving hint to mayank that whever he will be angry, she can shut him up by kissing him on his lips

Acha Nupur, aisa kya karogi tum, saaf saaf bolo ,main kuch samjha nahi aa raha , waise you need to show me now , he knew what Nupur meant and he is teasing nupur , chalo abhee batao, let pretend I m angry and tell me how will you stop my anger

Kya mayank, aap meri tang kheench rahe hai , jab aap sachme gussa honge tab main karoongi abhee nahi, her face was getting red due to the blushing n she cannot even look at him while answering, sharam se uskee halat kharab thee

Nupur tum kitna sharmati ho, yeh tumhara sarmana mujhe aur crazy karta hai,, chalo main hee demonstrate kar deta hoo n suddenly he pulled Nupur close to him n she got to know that " Mayank is in a mood to kiss her again", she wanted that from him also..they have become comfortable with each other by kissing, hugging, physical contact, ofcourse mayank wants more than that

She smiled back at him with a yes on her face, mayank got to know she wanted the same, so he cupped her face , brought her face closer to her , Nupur looked at Mayank, " OMG he is looking like a greek god in his shirt n trouser, wet hair " n she got desire to kiss him back but mayank was fulfilling that desire of her anyways without asking , she smiled n moved closer to mayank so he can kiss her easily, mayank saw that move n smiled back to her, it seems Nupur is comfortable holding him closely & passionately, " Nupur kabhee kabhee tumhe bhee initiave lena chahiye apne husband ko kisee karne ke, kyon? Nupur " mayank aap kare yaa main karroon baat to ek hee hai'.n she moved more closer to him ''''''''

Mayank cupped her face, bring more closer and started kissing on her forhead, then eyes, nose and then gently pressed his lips on her, deepen the kiss ,soon it became passionate n exciting, this time both of them manage to kiss bit longer but mayank released nupur so she can breath but he just cannot tak his eyes off from her, he was noticing her each and every curve of the body through that black wet sareen Nupur saw that n she blushed gain and tries to hide herself by turning around and burying herself in his chest. Mayank smiles at her innocence and bends down, pulling her face towards him. Cupping her face in his hands he stares deeply into her eyes and this time he kissses around her neck n slowly slowl he kissing below her neck, Nupur breathing increased noticeably, her chest heaving, her eyes glazed over him, Nupur could not take this intimacy anymore and she hugged mayank very tight and that interrupted his kiss, mayank is loosing his sense complety by looking at her body, he decided to take her inside the house , he carried her softly while nupur hiding her face in his chest ,he put her slowly on the couch in the living room,.

Mayank looked at Nupur, her eyes were closed, so he kissed her eyes n pulled her bac n made her sit (her head was resting on headrest), she was loosing her sense more n more now with mayank close intimate touches, mayan put nupurs wet hair at left side n he kissed her shoulder, then another sansous kiss near her neck,nupur started responding bit faster with that passionate kiss n came more closer to mayank,mayank moved from couch, sat behind Nupur so nupur head can rest on mayank chest, he is one hand was passionalty roaming over nupurs bare waist, his another hand was ready to untie blouse ka uper ka dori, he kisses that first n untie the dori n other hand started moving above the waist n mayank pull her aanchal down, his has started feeling her bosom n making him more wilder now, maynak started kissing her bare back n about to untie last dori of the blouse than he suddenly felt Nupur moving away, he ignored that n pulled her back and now he wanted her to face him so he moved his position sat infront of nupur and started kissing n his hands went down to another dori of the blowse, Nupur Blowse was about to come off, Nupur came back to his sense when she realised her blowse is nearly coming off, she was not expecting this , she wanted mayank to stop now, her shyness changed into tears blaming herself why did not she stopped him, mayank is getting more n more intimate n passionate , Nupur just could not take it anymore n asked mayank to stop but it seems he did not hear her, , in his head he just wanted Nupur completely today afterthis passionate touch. Nupur had to stop mayank hands moving over her bosom,waist n other places'''''''''..

Mayank please ruk jayeeye aaj,, maine bola mujhe aur 2 din chahiye, I m sorry I did not stop you , she tried to move away from mayank but could not , he is still busy kissing her back.

Disturb mat karo Nupur, Just enjoy thie beautiful moment, gosh do you know how beautiful you are, how beautiful body you have got, he was just busy admiring Nupur n ignoring her plea to stop

Maynk I do not want this , please apna hath hatayeeye, She was requesting him to stop but it seems he was completely lost in her beauty

Nupur we both want each other, you need me , I need you, we know that , aaj se acha din kya hoga, do you know how inviting u r looking,I can see each n every curve of your body n u r stopping your husband,that's not fair , he was still kissing her neck passionatelyn , he did not even realise that Nupur is trying to cover herself

Mayank please stop it , do not want to do it , please chod dijiye mujhe , She said it bit louder but it was ignore by mayank again, we can not blame mayank for this because Nupur was making him wild

Kya Nupur, please mood mat kharab karo ,we both know we want each other,you r looking damn sexy,slowy slowly his hands gone to blows ke neeche wala dori and he unties that he sounded irritating, he did not want any interruption, he wanted his wife only today on that time, he just got carried away .

Mayank, please stop it now, I do not want to do it , I m begging you, not today , she said it bit loudly n pushed mayank n stop her blouse falling , mayank was shocked to see this move by her, Suddenly he felt " rejected by her " , that was his first reaction when Nupur pushed him so hard.

Nupur what happened, I thought we both wanted this n you did not stop me, you were responding with the same passion, Gosh u r making it like I m forcing you ,he was shocked to see sudden change in Nupur mood n felt that Nupur is rejecting

No mayank I did not mean that,I was not expecting this to happen , sab kuch bahut jaldi jaldi ho raha thaa, , she realised mayanks mood changed completely as soon as she asked him to stop

Nupur, WTH , what were u not expecting, you were responding with the same passion dammit , to mai kya samjhata n now I feel like an idiot, you r trying to say I was forcing you, why did not you stop me , C'mon Nupur tum itnee bhee to innocent nahi ho , I regret why did I come here today with you.

No Mayank,I did not say" you r forcing me" , I just wanted u to stop it from wherever it was heading , I really do not want to do it today, I m enjoying our hugging,snuggling n kissing but we will consummate our marriage after 2 days, I just asked for 2 days, tears started coming .

You did not say it by urself but you pushing me so hard said it everything n you made me feel " I m trying to molest my wife without her consent "i shud bee feeling ashamed of myself ..Mayank is still shock with Nupurs reaction when she pushed him so hard

Mayank I did not mean to push you, maine aapko bolna rukne ke liye, aapne suna nahi, aap aise hee gussa kar rahe hai, sorry if I hurt you ,, she just could not undersand what to say and what else can make mayank understand that " she did not reject him, she cannot reject him, she has already accepted him in her life " ..

Nupu do not be modest, Its is my mistake, that I came here with you, I m mad that I fell in a love with a girl like you , mujhe tumhare close kabhee aanaa hee nahi chahiye thaa, I was happy in my own life ,tumhare wajah se sab kuch badal gaya , Aaj se main koseeh karoonga kee tumse door rahhoo, I cannot take this anymore , he said is angrily without even thiking , he did not even look at Nupur

Mayank aisa nahi hai,mere ek decision ke liye kya aap sare ache moments ko galat thahra rahe hai, I did not mean to hurt you, Nupur was shocked to hear mayanks line ,,,she could not believe what she heard , kya iske ek Naa ne sare ache moments ko bhula diya

Nupur, mujhe pata chal gaya kis type ke tadkee ho tum, ladko ko apne isharo per ghumati ho that's what u did today to me also, I m an idiot n fool who fall for u, Mayanks ka gussa badhta hee ja raha hai , he is not even thinking anything before saying

Mayank kya kah rahe hai aap ? main aapko kyon ghumaoongi, you r my husband, how can u think like that about me, she was getting shock per shock from mayank n whatever was coming out from his mouth, she knew he is angry , she never said " he was forcing her " , mayank saw her crying ..

Nupur kash maine socha hota , anyways der aaye durust aaye , tumhare barain main pata to chala what exactly r u " Sati Savitri" ,I promise myself that " I m not going to touch you from today onwards" ' Jo hua aaj woh meri bahut badi galati thee, mayanks anger is out of control

Nupur is in a shock after hearing all those words from mayank, she did not expect this, she just could not understand what to say , she went numb and tears started coming😭, mayank did not look at her at all n saying things without thinking, that's what he does when he is angry , situation gone from bad to worst, abhee thodee der pahle yeh dono sath neebhnae kee kasam kha rahe the and now mayank does not want to come near to Nupur,

Its okay Nupur, you can enjoy whatever you want , I better keep my distance from you now onwards will keep my distance f , I m done now with this stuped drama , I feel like an idiot, and he left the place without looking at Nupur, he felt rejected by his wife , it did hurt his ego,

Nupur sat their thinking where was she wrong 😕?, was she wrong by stopping mayank😕?, she asked him to wait for only 2 days, was it wrong that she asked mayank to wait?thodi der pahle indono ke beech kitna passion thaa aur abhee yahi passion sadness aur anger main badal gaya hai😕,Nupur kee ankhon se aansoon ane lage😭, she sat their for 10 mins thinking did she do wrong by stopping mauank ???

Mayank went directly to the washroom n looking at himself n thinking did he go too far without Nupurs consent, leking nupur to pura response kar rahee thee, I did not tried to force her, why is she making it up kee " I was forcing her" . I know I was compeltly turned on after seeing her , I could not stop myself, C'mon she is my wife, we just confessed our love , we were having passionate, romantic wild kisses , dance n hugging fir ek minute main kya ho gaya, he could not think anything after this so he decided to take a quick hot shower n forget about everything ( whatever happened), he is not ready to admit that he was forcing, he can only see one thing, his pov " he wanted to make love to his wife today " that's it but she rejected him. He is angry that Nupur rejecjed him when he wanted her badly, she knew he wanted but she still rejected him, this rejectetio seems getting on his nerves .. he is very angry at himself on the whole thing happen 'no one ever rejected him, girls used to throw themselves to him , but than he started thinking and his heart saying Nupur is not like those girls, she is special, very special n give her some time n his mind saying She is rejected me after giving so many signals.

After 20 minutes , he came out from the bathroom thinking that Nupur shud be here thiking no point arguing with her , things are said n done now , we both shud sleep now and give space to each other from now on , so he put pillow between them , he did not want to take any intiative from today onwards,but somehow he is worried about her by not finding her in the bedroom. He went to the living roon n saw Nupur Crying, his heart said " Jao aur use chup karao " but his mind said " main kyon karaoon, I shud be crying, not her, she is superior that she reject me ' I m laughing at myself. This time his heart won over mind n he decided to go n tell her to change the saree n go to bed.

Nupur kafee raat ho gayee hai, tumhe jo karna thaa who kar liya 😕 , tum puri tarah se bheegi huee ho ,bimar pad jaogi tab sab log mujhe hee blame karenge, he said it in serious tone by giving her towel n night gown but nupur was not moving at all, she was shocked n thinking " She has ruined everything , mayank is the most loving n caring husband, I shud have let him go ahead whatever he wanted today"

Nupur jao , jakar so jao , its too late now, bakee kaa planning kal kar lena,I do not want to waste more time here in the living room, did u get it , he was again serious, Nupur felt his anger voice it says " I m not happy whatever happened few minutes ago here" and you r the reason for that,

Nupur moved from the couch n followed him , she was still crying but decided not to look and talk to mayank at present, she went to the washroom directly , cried there quietly and decided to speak to Mayank about that n clarify " that's its her mistake n she wont do it again" , she changed n came outside the bathroom, saw light was switched off, only one dim light was on, she saw " mayank has put pillow between them" , her heart fell out, kitnee mushkil se humlogo ne is pillow ke deewar ko hataya thaa, fir se hum wahi aa gaye , Nupur blaming herself for stopping mayank, her husband, her heart saying aaj hum consummate karte yaa 2 din ke baad karte, baat to ek hee hai naa but mind saying " kyan mayank 2 din wait nahi kar sakte the"

After battling between her mind n heart, she decided to listen to her heart n decided to speak to mayank about this, she knows mayank is not sleeping, Itnee jaldi who raat ko so hee nahi sakt , she went to mayanks side of the bed n started stroking Mayanks hair, he got annoyed n pushed her hand very hard, her bangle broke n mayank realised I shud not have pushed her so hard n turend to the other side '

Mayank, I should not have stopped you, I knw we both wanted this but I was just not prepared, I m preparing myself mayank, I m ready now, if you want to do it now we can do it, this girl is so much in love with her husaband, she is ready to surrender herself even if she is not ready'.

Wah Nupur, tumhe mujhe kya samjh rakha hai, Jab man kia reject kar do, saj man kiya accept kar lo, sab kuch tumhare hee mood se chalega kyon?, yes I was mad about you , was crazy about you ( his heart saying I m still mad, crazy, about you) ..but your rejection made me realise that I m forcing my wife, I have never done to a single person, Mayank was indeed very hurt with that moment, he is still hurt when nupur questioned " kyat um mujhe 2 din bhee nahi de sakte" she made me Villain in one minute '.

Mayank , I am sorry for whatever happened, its my fault also , I did not know what to do, , how can I reject you , you r the first guy in my life n you r my first love, Please gussa mat karo n tears were coming from nupurs eyes

Nupur ,I made wrong move , it was my biggest mistake, so please forgive me, switch of the light and go from here NOW , it too late , I m not in a mood to discuss about this anymore ever' he said it angrily without looking at nupur n covered his face with a sheet.

Nupur could not take this anymore, she just wanted to run away from that room ( this is second time mayank has said to go from here), she knows mayank felt insulted , rejected and it all happened due to me , I m the one who is to blame, heart sayin..but maine mafee to manga usase kitnee baar😕, head saying:-he is angry because he got rejected by you 😕, uske ego ko hurt hua hai , all mens are same" again she decide to listen to her heart n move away from mayank n her tears were not stopping, she was sobbing 😭mayank can hear that but did not react, nupur standing in the bedroom n thinking what can she do make him feel better ,

So Nupur decided to try for the last time to manao him n remembered what she said to him outside " Mayank main aaapko gusse ko pyaar main badal sakti hoo, jab aap gussa honge i will use that weapon" , She just wanted mayank to calm down n rethink at the sitution so she went back to the bed, saw mayank tried to sleep" ..She went to his side of the n sat beside mayank and she slowly bent down to placed her lips on him to convert his anger into smile " , mayank was not expecting this but again he resposnded very harsh to nupur by kissing her hard n telling Nupur" I m angry and this will not help at all" so stop it 😕
Mayank:- Nupur band karo yeh drama,i have had enough n i m not anymore interested in all these, leave me alone 😕
She could not take his anger n bitter words anymore and decided to leave the bedroom immediatly and ran towards living room crying😭 mayank saw her leaving , he saw her crying , he saw her being upset but did not do anything😕
Mayank knows " she was hurt by him n his words n action" and she knows " he wast hurt by her " But this time who is going to take initiative to make things normal, will it be mayank or nupur 😕???? Why did Nupur wanted 2 more days???
My Pov:- Both of them are right at their place so we cannot blame either Nupur or Mayank, Mayank could not control , its not his fault and Nupur shud have stopped it earlier but she could not control either ...So we should blame the situation rather than mayan-nupur. In current situation Mayank abhiman is overpowring his love
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
actually disliking both mayank and nupur...mayank is being a complete ***...she tried numerous to tell him to stop...of course the only thing she couldve done at that point is push him off...and nupur im hating right now cuz she's just backing down saying its her fault...stand up for yourself woman!...i cant believe she repeatedly just said lets do it...found that to be incredibly silly

it better be mayank who reconciles cuz hes being unreasonable...if mayank cant think about what makes his wife comfortable then thats just messed up...nupur may have flown with the moment for a little bit, but when your spouse seriously tells you to stop, you should!...in this update, mayank was nothing more than a lustful husband
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Posted: 14 years ago
Priyanka.. Hmm I was not expecting this kind of update , this update is indeed different 😃 and reality also , people cannot deny this..Please Update Soon Chapter 19...
Mayank knew Nupur is not ready but he flown with the moment n tried to cross the limit without his wife's consent , i do not find anything wrong in that because it does happen but his ego hurt big time when " Nupur pushed him to stop him" n he took her step negativlely by thinking " She has Rejected Me" ...mayank proceeced that moment because nupur was responding so we cannot blame him completly ...
I wanna know why did Nupur asked him to do it if she is not ready, is it because mayank is hurt or something else ?? Nupur has to stand up for herself ,
Eager to read chapter 19.
Thanks for updating
Edited by Its-My-Life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
kuch jyada hi passionate tha...
issiliye sab garbar ho gayi...
all dat i want to say u said it here...


My Pov:- Both of them are right at their place so we cannot blame either Nupur or Mayank, Mayank could not control , its not his fault and Nupur shud have stopped it earlier but she could not control either ...So we should blame the situation rather than mayank-nupur. In current situation Mayank abhiman is overpowring his love



i think now we will be able to see""Pyar Bada ya Abhiman""
eagerly waiting for d next update...
plzzz continue soon...
love ya...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
at this mpment mayank abhiman is coming between them but i know sooner love tale over pride.

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