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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Nice update..
Glad to see that Mayank really regrets his mistake and he's concerned about Nupur.
Hope they clear all the misunderstandings soon๐Ÿ˜›
Update soon and do pm me.I didnt get pm for previous updates

Thanks for liking it ... will PM you for sure ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

really nice update...

continue soon...

Sanchari thanks for liking it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.. will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nyc update priyanka...
i hope all d misunderstandings btwn MN clear out soon!!
cant wait 4 next update!
continue soon!
luv ya!๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc update priyanka...
i hope all d misunderstandings btwn MN clear out soon!!
cant wait 4 next update!
continue soon!
luv ya!๐Ÿค—

Thanks Supriya ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—..
Aage Aage Dekho Hota Hai Kya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ... Will update soon Supriya ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I need to see ur Vm .. but my crap net... ๐Ÿ˜•
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

So sweet of you Ria ... Thanks for liking it n ur feedback also๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Will update soon ...
We have brilliant FF writers on this MJHT forum including you ... main to just beginner hoo with so many mistakes in FF when it comes to writing .. .. but i love mayur so much ..so i took risk to write something about my all time onscreen couple MAYUR๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

darling, even i am an amateur ... and never compare yourself to anyone else... honge acche writers... but no one can take your place na? if Rabindranath Tagore thought the same, we wouldnt have known who he is today... jus keep writing. all make mistakes. without mistakes, no one learns. but that doesnt mean you stop writing, does it? ๐Ÿ˜Š
waiting for your next update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanka for liking it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bhavna thanks for liking it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rapunzel_angel

darling, even i am an amateur ... and never compare yourself to anyone else... honge acche writers... but no one can take your place na? if Rabindranath Tagore thought the same, we wouldnt have known who he is today... jus keep writing. all make mistakes. without mistakes, no one learns. but that doesnt mean you stop writing, does it? ๐Ÿ˜Š
waiting for your next update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ria Jhappi to you ๐Ÿค—
Thanks for the encouragement ..yes we cannot improve without making mistakes ...so keep working n improving .. that shud be motto of our life...
Thanks again ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ana.khan

nyc update...

๐Ÿค—

Thanks Ana ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 9:- Mayur naa chahte hu fir se Mile

Most important Note: - Nupur think Suhani is Mayanks Daughter n Mayank thinks Aditya is Nupur Son. Nupur has not seen wedding ring his finger n Mayank has not seen mangalsutra in nupur neck n Nupur has not seen wedding ring in mayanks fingers.Mayank thinks Nupur is Single Mother that is why she is irritating and Nupur thinks Mayank is single father that is why he is irresponsible.

Mayank n Nupur are goin through different emotions, Mayank is worried about Nupurs welfare n feeling guilty for yesterdays incident n Nupur is annoyed n confused for not able to see Mayanks true color. Mayank just wanted to apologise to her for this incident n Nupur does not want to see his face ever in life but both of them are going to meet again J at Sunshin Public School.

Today nupur is looking very fresh n pretty in her pink salwar kurta , she reached school with Aditya n about to go inside , suddenly she heard sweet voice n she turned back . she saw Suhani is running very fast to meet Nupur n Aditya.

Nupur :- Suhani, slow down please, I m waiting

Suhani:- Miss I Missed You So much

Nupur :- I missed u too

Suhani:- I thought " u might not come again today"

Nupur :- Why , she ask surprisingly

Suhani:- Because you did not come yesterday, I missed u so much , do u know that

Nupur :- Mujhe kuch nahi hua hai, I m fine and I missed you a lot

Suhani :- Good, you shud be fine always

Nupur :- and you also, ander chale , she said is smiling

Nupur could not find Aditya anywhwere ,so she started looking for him everywhere with Suhani. Suddenly she sees Aditya in a deep talk with Mayank in his car about something๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Aditya :- Uncle , your car is so good , I liked it , he said it in excited voice

Mayank:- Do u like , this is boys car , one day I will take you home in my car

Aditya :- Promise, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Mayank: - Promise๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Aditya :- But our Nano is better than your car

Mayank;- what is Nano , mayank asked surprisingly

Aditya :- Can u see that Pink Car , that's my car , I mean our car,

Mayank:- your car , pink color ?, this is girls color aditya

Aditya: - Really, yuck so its not mine anymore, your car is mine because its boys car, is'nt it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Mayank:- Yes that's sounds better , he said is smiling.. he gets along with Aditya very well .

Suhani n Nupur were listening to Mayank n aditya deep talk about Car n Suhani could not stop herself by telling mayank n aditya that she loves Nupur Car.Nupur is amused to see Aditya bonding with Mayank, somehow she seems happy to see aditya happy.

Suhani:- But I like Miss Nupur car a lot, my fav color

Aditya :- okay suhani u go with Nupsie n I will go with mayank ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Mayank:- Yes , good deal ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Aditya :- Nupsie mummy is sweet n cute , she wont mind

Mayank:- Yeh , suddenly he heards someone calling Aditya

Nupur :- Aditya we r getting late for the class , she said it without looking at Mayank

Aditya :- Nupsie Mummy , bas 5 min ,

Nupur :- Aditya , school main u will call me Miss , is that clear ?

Aditya: - yes Miss , he said it making his face sad

Suhani:- Miss I liked your name " Nupsie " So cute , Miss can u take me in ur car one day ' I love the color , very cute car , your car is matching matching just like my room.

Nupur :- Thanks Suhani, yes I will take u in my car one day, only me n you J NOW both of u shud go inside the class pls .

Mayank:- Nupur how r u feeling now?

Nupur:- I m fine thanks Mr Sharma, she said it without even looking at him๐Ÿ˜•

Aditya :-why r u angry at Mr Sharma Miss ๐Ÿ˜ฒ??

Suhani:- Hmm , he must have done something again๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†

Aditya:- Mayank uncle does mistakes like us ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Suhani :- More than us ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Adi n dadu shouts at him just like Miss Nupur ๐Ÿ˜†

Aditya :- Really ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Mayank:- Do not believe what Suhani is saying ..gosh these children ๐Ÿ˜•

Aditya :- Okay Mayank Uncle ..I will believe u , he said it smiling๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Nupur :- we r getting late for class , shall we go inside .

Mayank got idea that Nupur is tying to ignore him and not even ready to look at him after yesterdays incident, he though today is not the right time to discuss.He said Bye to Suhani n Aditya n about the leave but collided with Mrs Decosta J . Mrs Decosta was delighted to see Mr Sharma at the school again n invited him to join her in the office n asked Nupur to follow them.Nupur could not say no to Mrs Decosta but she does not want to see Mayanks face today. Mayank wanted to apologise to Nupur. Three of them are sitting in Mrs Decosta room. As soon as Mrs Decosta started talking , she got call n asked Mayank n Nupur to wait for her in the office and told them to wait for her .

Both Mayank n Nupur are sitting in Mrs Decosta room but trying to avoid each other. Rooms is very quite and this quite atmosphere is killing Mayak.Mayank could not take it anymore n decide to talk to Nupur, somehow he wanted to aplologise to her n finish this as soon as possible but his problem is kee "ek baar agreesive ho gaya to handle karna isko mushkil hai " .But mayank decided to take intiative n prepare himself to talk to Nupur n apologise ASAP.

Mayank:- How are you Nupur , he asked her politly ?

Nupur :- she did not answer , Just trying to avoide him

Mayank:- Nupur I m talking you, not to the walls

Nupur :- Mr Sharma slow down ur volume , please do not talk to me

Mayank:- Hmm, Nupur relax, pls do not take stress

Nupur :- Mr sharma we better not talk to each other ever and that will reduce my stress.๐Ÿ˜•

Mayank:- I m trying to talk to u politly , ( Itnaa attitude hain, bechara Aditya to Hitler jaise mother ke sath rahta hai )

Nupur:- Do not try please, we are waiting for Mrs Decosta , so lets do it quitly ( Itnaa jabardasti, Suhani kaise ise tolerate kartee hogi )

Mayank:- you cannot tell me what to do. I m trying to start conversation politly

Nupur :- I m not interested at all Mr Sharma

Mayank:- Nupur you have to listen to me atleast for once

Nupur :- I m not interested at all Mr Sharma,

Mayank:- I have never requested that much to anyone in my life ( Mayank thinking ,,itna ghamand, mana bahut badi galati hai but she shud give me chance to explain )

Nupur :- Mr Sharma , why r u trying hard than, shanty se baithyee n wait for Mrs Decosta , she will be coming here anytime.

Mayank:- Nupur , give me chance to speak to you yesterdays incident.

Nupur:- I m least interested , if you talk about that than I will leave now

Mayank:- Yaar give me one chance to explain

Nupur :- My name is Nupur , do not call me yaar , I m not interested at all

Mayank:-but you have to listen me ( Mayank is getting impatient now )

Nupur :- Why do I have to listen to you Mr Sharma, fir se ek aur insult ?

Mayank:- Nupur , I apologise on behalf of my friends , they were very rude to you .

Nupur :- Its allright Mr Shrama, I do not want to listen n think about yesterday, I feel it was bad dream n I want to forget that now.

Mayank:- But I want to talk n explain

Nupur :- I m not interested Mr Sharma n please do not be bossy to me , aur uth kar wahan se jane lagi ,

Mayank;- Nupur , gosh maine itna request aaj tak nahi kiya kisee se , mayank ne suddenly Nupur ka hath pakad liya use rakne ke liye

Nupur :- Mr Sharma , please leave my hand

Mayank:- Nahi, tumhe meri baat sunani padegi , you cannot ignore me like this n pulled nupur towards him. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Nupur :- Mr Sharma , please behave

Mayank:- Can u please behave like a good girl for 10 minutes n listen to me

Nupur :- as I said I just want to forget everything about yesterday and please leave my hand , she said angrily

Mayank:- No I wont Nupur, everyone gets chance to speak n I shud also get chance

Nupur :- mayank u r hurting me now, leave my hand n let me go , I just wanna leave

Mayank just wanted Nupur to stay for 10 minutes and listen to him about yesterday , Nupur seems not interested at all, her behaviour was making Mayank more annoyed, he has never done that much pleading in his live for a Girl, Mostly Mayank ke case main Ladiya sunti hai aur mayank bolta hai but Nupur ke case main sab ulta pulta ho raha hai. Mayank decided to stop Nupur , usne Nupur ka hath pakda aur deewar ke samne drag karke le gaya n blocked her way , so she cannot get chance to skip.

Nupur :-What the hell is this, how dare you Mr Sharma, she said it angrily

Mayank:- Nupur u did not give me chance to speak, so I had to take this step

Nupur :- Let me go , maine bola naa " I do not want to listen "

Mayank:- tumne 10 baar yeh bola hai yeh n I m getting annoyed with that, so let me finish what I want to say n than let u go happily ever after , he said it annoyingly

Nupur :- kya jabardasti hai Mr Sharma,

Mayank: -Bilkool Chup Nupur now, let me finish , he put his finger on her lips unknowingle aur use mushkil se chup karya,

Nupur :-trying to tell him to remove his finger but could not , her eyes were tryin to tell mayank leave her but mayank kahan sunane wala, he is ziddi number 1 also like her.

Mayank:- Good Listen to me now Nupur, he was talking to nupur seriously now directly looking at her but removed his fingers fron her lips, he did not want her to suffocate

Nupur:- Okay boliye Mr Sharma lekin thoda distrance se ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Mayank :- Oh yes sure , suddenly he realised he is standing very close to Nupur , he took 2 steps back but still making sure Nupur shud not escape , Poor Nupur Deewar se chipak kar khadi hai n Mayank is blocking her way so he can complete whatever he wanted to say

Nupur: - Boliye n let me go

Mayank:- Nupur I sincerely apologise to you for whatever happened yesterday.RV behaviour was disgusting n I apologise to you for his act n Diya insulted n humiliated you for no reason, when I first met you at the school on Suhanis first day, you misbehaved with me , I felt unsulted n humiliated but I would have spoken to you about that rather than discussing with my friends.I just wanted to take revenge n involved my friends But Yesterday Morning Jounrney from Mumbai to Panchagni changed everything.I realised you r not that proudy, arrogant n stubborn as u presented on that day.

Nupur :- Apology Accepted Mr Sharma, let me go now, she just wanted to leave

Mayank:- I have not finished yet Nupu

Nupur :- But I m done, your plan worked n you got succeed in ur plan, I was fool to believe you n came with you to panchagani

Mayank:- Nupur I m not that bad , I know it was my mistake n I m apologising for that

Nupur :- Mr Sharma , as I said apology accepted n I wanted to say thank you also for bringin me back to Mumbai

Mayank:- Nupur can't we forget everything , I will make sure RV n Diya apologise to you for their behavipur

Nupur :- Why , they did it whatever you wanted

Mayank:- I did want revenge but than I changed my mind but forgot to call them to cancel it because I was busy at the school

Nupur :- Mr Sharma, I just want to forget everything about yesterday including you n do not want to see your face again

Mayank:- I m not interesting in seeing ur face also but I felt I shud apologise but tum to sunane ke liye bhe ready nahi ..galati huee hai , forgive us now

Nupur :- I said it before apology accepted n I do not wanna see you around me

Mayank:- Itne der se apology mang raha hoo, tum to sar per chadh rahee ho, Sajhadari naam kee cheej hee nahi hai, he was getting impatient

Nupur :- What en excuse, ek bachee ke baap ban gaye ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†lekin itnee ghatiya harkat

Mayank:- ek bachee ka baap main???, he asked surprisingly ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Nupur :- Suhani aapse jyada samjhadar hain, beti better hai baap se , now I know the reason why ur wife left u , you r so annoying n arrogant ๐Ÿ˜•

Mayank:- Meri chodo, tum ek bache kee maa hokar impatient, arrogant, ghamandi aur full of attitude hai๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Nupur:- Main ek bache kee Maa??? ๐Ÿ˜ฒMeri chodiye, aap Kuch seeekhiye apne btee Suhani se

Mayank: - mera seekhne ke chodo, Aditya tumser jyada polite hai,acha hai maa per nahi gaya hai aur pati bhee bhag gaya ๐Ÿ˜†

Nupur: - Yes learn from your daughter, Kuch seekh loge

Mayank: - Do not lecture me again , Apology accept karo finish this.

Nupur:- Mr Sharma, enough now , I just want to forget everything n I prefer not to interact with you in the future n will keep distance .

Mayank:- I m done now, I wanted peace but I do not think it will happened, I also wont come near you and I m not suhani Father for ur kind information but I love her more than myself.

Nupur :- Okay , I m happy and just to let you know Main Aditya kee maa jaisee hoo but not his mother aur mera pati kabhee bhagega nahi because I believe in relationship๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

Mayank:- Thank God Aditya bach gaya, meri wife kabhee hogi bhee nahi ๐Ÿ˜•kyonki I do not believe in relationship ๐Ÿ˜•

Nupur :- Woh aapko dekh kar deekhta hai what kind of person u r๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† .

Mayank:- apne life main aajtak maine aisee ladkee nahi dekhee hia, itna abhiman

Nupur:- but aaapke jaise bahut logo ko maine apne life main dekha hai

Mayank:- enough now, u r insulting me again

Nupur:- nope Mr Sharma, that's ur department, move pls n please shakal mat deekhana ๐Ÿ˜†

Mayank:- Enough now and mujhe tumhari shakal dekhne ka koi shaun nahi hai.๐Ÿ˜†

Bechare indono ke yeh nahi pata kee yeh baar baar milenge kisee naa kise wajah se chahe kitna bhee door bhage ek doosre se ๐Ÿ˜† Gosh, these two were arguing for the past 20 min standing in a same position for the but iska solution kuch nahi nikla, Nupur just want to forget n stay away from Maaynk n Mayank sincerely apologised to her for yesterday. But nothing happen n they endup fighting back again,Thank God Mrs Decosta interrupted them

Mrs Decosta:- yeh kya ho raha hai mere absence main๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Mayank:- Hello Mrs Decosta, he moved away from Nupur n went to Mrs Decosta

Mrs Decosta:- Mr Sharma, I did not know u r flirty also but not in my room and not with my teacher๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† , she said it with naughty smile

Mayank: - Mrs Decosta , aap galat samajh rahi, jo deekhta hai who hota nahi hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Mrs Decosta :- Mr Sharma , its okay I was just joking , Nupur tum abhee tab waha kyo khadi ho n why r u blushing ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณcome here ... Mr Sharma ka flirting session khatam

Nupur :- Yes Mrs Decosta , bechari nupur gusse se lal ho rahee thee n mrs decosta thought she is BLUSHING๐Ÿ˜†

Mayank:- aapko hamse kuch baat karnee hai, you asked us to wait, mayank behave like a professional in front of Mrs Decosta as if nothing has happend , he was looking at nupur with mrs decosta comment n smiling on blushing word for nupur๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Mrs Decosta/:- I needed to talk to you so you can convey my msg to Mrs Janki Sharma

Mayank:- Okay go ahead

Nupur :- Mrs Decosta, Can I leave now, it seems i do not required for this meeting

Mrs Decosta:- not directly, if you to leave than I am okay darling, Btw R u okay Nupur ?

Nupur :- Yes I m fine thanks, She just wanted to leave from that room asap.

Mrs Decosta:- Okay Nupur, you may leave , please have a sit Mr Sharma

Nupur: - Good Bye Mr Shama

Mayank;- Good Bye Miss Nupur

Both mayank n nupur decided not to see each other face ever again, mayank tried his best to apologise n nupur seems still hurt at the moment may be that is why not able to accept mayanks apology from her heart , she needed space n mayank needed to clear things out asap, is chakkar main dono main fir se ho gayee ladai . Fir Milenge yeh ..i feel like changing the title to Milenge Milenge ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ...

Precap:- Mayur Meet again๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† on Aditya Birthday Party

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago

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