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Posted: 14 years ago
that was a nice update...
things will soon fall into place...
really like the caring nature of mayank and his guilt too...
par i am angry with u...!!!
why dint u PM me...u updated...and i am reading it after sooo long...😡
next time se time pe PM karna...warna...😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

chapter>7

wowww
very nice update.
beautifully written.
i dnt link mayank...i ws really angry on him...hw could he???
he dint say anything to dia n rv...n hw cld he let them humilated her.
poor nupur
feel sorry for her
she dint deserve so much humiliation.
i hate dia n rv.
benji was nice.
so, benji's fiance annie ws nupur's coligue.
grt news.
i hope, everything ll alright soon.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.



Thanks forliking it n also for the feedback😃..
Will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

that was a nice update...

things will soon fall into place...
really like the caring nature of mayank and his guilt too...
par i am angry with u...!!!
why dint u PM me...u updated...and i am reading it after sooo long...😡
next time se time pe PM karna...warna...😆😆😆

Thanks for liking it ...
Are yaar is baar PM nahi kar payee kisee ko bhee ...Next time pakka PM karoongi gussa mat ho😃
Will Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

Thanks for liking it ...

Are yaar is baar PM nahi kar payee kisee ko bhee ...Next time pakka PM karoongi gussa mat ho😃
Will Update soon

are yaar...me is kidding...itna bhi seriously mat lo mujhe...
😆😆😆😆
chalo no problem...jaldi jaldi update kar dena...😆😆😆😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Guys ... Sorry for not PMING anyone ..
Nest update will be done soon..Sorry yaar college main busy hoo aajkal
@sanchari.. will updat soon.. thanks for liking it
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Chapter 8 :- Mayanks Guilt n Nupurs Confusion

Mayank is driving back to his house n benji is with him. He seems very much affected by todays incident n feeling very guilty over everything , he is blaming himself for nupurs situation, he knows he does not like Nupur but he never wanted to see her suffer like this.He was on his own thought , than suddenly Benji interrupted him.He just wanted to make pleasant environment

Benji:- where did u meet Nupur, she is very different n not ur type at all

Mayank:- What?

Benji:- Where did u meet her

Mayank:- At School , I told u when she humilatated me because I came late on the first day of Suhani School, she lectured me for not being punctual etc , I just hated her on that day

Benji:- and now ??

Mayank:- I do not hate her, she is sweet girl, very different from others, she does not even know me , Who I am..Mayank sharma to paper main hamesha gossip column mai deekhta hai😆😆 ?

Benji:- Interesting , that is why i said she is diferent

Mayank:- Yes Interesting, our journey in the morng was good although we do not agree with each other n gave space and that help,.she treat me as a boss n I treat her as an employee.

Benji:- R u Sure:?

Mayank:- Confused, ofcource I m sure,

Benji :- If she is your employee than why did want to take revenge with her by using ur friends , you could have taken revenge on your own for this humiliation, she did not humiliate you infront of people but she got humiliated n hurt infromt of so many people .I never knoew an employer can treat his employee like this L

Mayank:- Hmm, yes that was the worst mistake I have done by disucssuing my personal problems with my friends.

Benji:- Learn from this Mayank, that girl is scared, confused, shocked with todays situation

Mayank:-I know, I just want to apologise to her for todays incident n promise her it will never happen

Benji:- Mayank Sharma is going to apologise to a girl, I m impressed , this girl has changed you.

Mayank:- Nobody can change me , got it , I knhow who I m and what I am. I love my lifestyle , my work, my social life , these are more than enough to keep me busy.

Benji:- Mayank, change ur attitude,think about finding good girl, settling down nahi to ladkiya aatee rahenge n fayada uthati rahengi n u will endup alone

Mayank:- My mum is very alone also jabkee unkee aur papa kee love marriage thee, maa ne bahut suffer kiya hai, I have seen my mum suffering L

Benji:- Hmm , Mayank but ur mother wants you to settle down like Uday Bhaiya

Mayank:- Uday is suffering also, its good he is not like me, he is happy when people r happy , he is sad when people r sad, he lives for Suhani

Benji:- Hmm, But Mayank

Mayank:- I m not ready to commit n I do not believe in marriage,Let it as it is Benji, my life will be always like this n I m happy with this.

Benji:- Mayank i understand ur pain but u never show ur pain

Mayank:- Benji, meri life kee ramayan band karo pls , I m more worried about Nupur, Ranvijay n Diya were very harsh with her, Nupur is very scared of that situation, what shall I do to make it normalL

Benji:- Hmm, Ranvijay n Diya has to apologise for their deed but before that she need proper apology from you.

Mayank:- I know, I have to, if Dadi will get to know about this than meri to khair nahi.

Benji:-Sort it out before dadi knows,

Mayank:- Speak to Annie pls , we need her help

Benji:- okay I will speak to her in the morning, mayank relax now.

Mayank:- If something happens to Nupur than I will never forgive myself, I took responsibility of her as a boss to bring her safe from Panchgani trip n it turned out to be hell L

Benji :- Mayank u r thinking too much n feeling guilty, yes mistake happen but it was not expected, bas Nupur theek ho jaye than everything will be normal, now cheer up , go n sleep , u had tiring journey.

Mayank: - Thanks Benji, see u tomorrow morning , we will go at Annies place n meet Nupur n I Will apologise.

Benji:- thanks for dropping n drive safely back.

Annie House:- Nupur is sleeping peacefully n her temperature was going down, she was relieved with that n decided to stay awake to check on Nupur. Suddenly Annie got call from Benji, Annie came out from Nupurs Room so she can talk to Benji

Benji:- Annie , its me

Annie:- han bolo

Benji:- you need to help Mayank in this situation, I know Nupur hates mayank for whatever happened today but it was not complelty his mistake

Annie:- Well mayank is responsible for his friends behaviour, he could have stopped them

Benji:- I know but he did not get chance, everything happened so fast

Annie:- Hmm

Benji:- Mayank is nice guy n do not disrespect girl, he himself said Nupur is sweet girl.

Annie:- What do u want me to do

Benji:- Convince her n tell her its not his fault completely

Annie :- Okay I will try

Benji:- People think he is happy guy , but its not true, he is going through so much also, I do not want someone hating him for something he has not done

Annie :- Okay Benji, I will try to convice Nupur

Benji:- Thanks, I m proud of my mum's choice

Annie :- Good Night Benji

Benji:- GN ,thanks

Around 6.00 AM Next Morning:- Nupur woke around 6.00 in the morning n feeling little bit better but bit confused to find herself somewhere else, than she saw Annie was sleeping on the sofa beside, she could not understand what is happening. Annie woke up by hearing Nupur movement.

Annie :- Nupur are u feeling better

Nupur :- main kahan ho n what has happened to me

Annie :- You are at my place

Nupur :- what happened to me , did u tell papa that I m here

Annie :- yes I have spoken to uncle ji n he is fine with that

Nupur :- What has happened to me Annie, pls tell me n who brought me here.

Annie :- Please calm down Nupur, do not get excited

Nupur:- Annie , kya hua thaa mujhe ??

Annie :- You fainted middle of the road n mayank saved u n brought you here

Nupur:- Do u know Mayank ?

Annie: I do not know but he is best friend of my would be fianc "Benji"

Nupur: - Benji , said it surprisingly

Annie: - Yes Benji J , How r u feeling now?

Nupur :- I m okay n I just want to go home

Annie :- Nupur I want to speak to you about Mayank, he has been very worried about you n he truly feel guilty for whatever happened yesterday due to his friends. He did not want that to happen.

Nupur:- Annie, I do not want to speak about him from today onwards, Im thankful to him for brining me here safely.

Annie:- Nupur , he is feeling very sorry for your condition n very angry at his friends behaviour towards you,

Nupur;- Annie, you do not even know Mayank but u r talking on his behalf, did he ask you to do that , same like he asked his friends to take revenge for the humiliation he had from me

Annie :- Nupur he did not ask me to do anything, benji told me n you were very harsh with him on that

Nupur:- I did not think I wss harsh n I humiliated him, uske liye aisa revenge , he could have spoken to directly, why to do all these things infront of his friends

Annie:- Nupur jyada mat socho naa,he knows his mistake n wants u to forgive him , he is truly upset about the whole situation..

Nupur :- I will defiantly forgive but wont forget , I should keep myself away from these sort of people, my only fault was that I trusted him n went to panchgani with him.

Annie:- Nupur okay calm down, jyada stress mat lo, have breakfast , fir main tumhe ghar drop kar doongi school jate samay

Nupur :- Annie papa is coming to pick me, I spoke to him few minutes ago, first I will go home, get change n I will see u at the school. Mr Sharma ka heesab barabar ho gaya , to ab hamara kuch lena dena hai ek doosre se. I do not want to speak to him anymore.

Annie: - Okay Nupur , I m always here for you .

Nupur: - Thanks for everything , papa aa gaye hai , I will go now, see u later ,

Sharma House:- Mayank could not sleep at all, first time in his life, he wanted " Subah Jaldi Ho" so he can find about nupurs health, Mayank ke aankhon se neend udee hue hain, but he does not want to meet her. He just wanted one thing at the moment "Nupur theek ho aur maaf kar de ". He has seen her worried n terrified face when RV was trying to scare her. He has never hurt anybody intentionally but today he feels all these things happen due to him n him as a boss should not let this happen to his employee.

He could not sleep whole night so he decided to go downstairs to meet everyone at the dinning table. Mayanks Dadi Janki, Mom Shilpa, Dad Adiya, Bhiaya n Bhabhi (Uday n Tam) and Suhani was getting ready in her room with help of housekeepers. Dadi n Shilpa was surprised to see him early in the morning.

Janki Sharma:- Kya baat hai mayank , kab aaye raat ko tum pata hee nahi chala, ab kahan ja rahe ho?

Mayank:- Morning everyone , Dadi Raat ko der se aaya , kahin nahi jar aha but I can drop Suhani to the school.

Aditya:- What a pleasant surprise , Mr Sharama is awake at 8.30 in the morning, kiska asar hai bhiaya, kisee ladkee ka chakkar hai kya, hum to yeh to tumhari mummy ke liye karte the tumhare age main😆😆

Shilpa:- hamari chodiye , kya karte the aur kya nahi karte the, Mayank kee sochte hai

Aditya :- App batayiye kya kare mayank ka

Shilpa :- iskee shadi karwa dete hai

Janki:- han ab iskee shadi kar deni chahiye

Mayank: Subah Subah yeh sab nahi, isliye main breakfast table per aata nahi

Tam:- main apne mummy papa ko kab bulaoon

Uday:- Kyon, bat mayank kee shadi kee ho rahee hai , tumhare mummy papa kya karenge

Tam:- Udya Darling, Puri high society main pata hain mayank-diya couple hai

Uday:- really , yeh kab hua .. mayank tumne nahi bataya , tum aur Diya , asked surprisingly

Mayank- WTH , he almost spill his tea

Aditya :- Okay Tam , please call ur parents

Mayank:- Hold ON everyone, mere aur diya ke becch kuch nahi hai.We r good friends n jitney pics page 3 main aaye hai because diya loves attending Sharmas Party, Kyon Tam Bhabhi?.

Tam:- But diya told me that she likes u

Mayank:- Tam Bhabhi I like her also " AS A RELATIVE N FRIEND" that's it . Shaadi ka topic band.

Shilpa:- Mayank , I woul like you to get married , will u do it for ur mom

Mayank:-Mom , you know me, I do not believe in love, marriage, commitment n I wont be able to keep any girl happy , I m just like DAD

Aditya :- Mayank , U r crossing ur limit , yahan tumhare shadi ke baat ho rahee hai

Mayank:- Dad sorry, but kuch qualities to aapse hee mila hai naa mujhe

Shilpa:- Mayan enough now

Janki:- Rahne de Shilpa, aajkal bache apne bado se aise hee behave karte hai, hamari koi izzat nahi hai

Mayank:- Dadi Maa, aap to aisa mat boliye

Janki:- Mayank beta Me and Shilpa wants u to settle down, cannot see u like this

Mayank: -Dadi I m happy like this

Janki:- Hmm, mere dil kee tammanna hai kee main marnse se pahle apne grandson kee shadi dekhoo

Mayank: Dadi Emotional Blackmailing band

Janki;- Waise panchgani ka trip kaisa raha tumhara aur suhani ke teacher ka

Mayank:- It was okay, official trip hai to kya hoga, he said in a irritating voice

Janki:- bhadak kyon rahe ho , I just asked

Mayank:- Suhani kahan hai? We r getting late

Janki:- Tam Suhani ko lekar aao , Waise Mayank Sunday Free Rakhna Suhani ke liye

Mayank:- Okay Dadi, Suhani ke liye anything J

Mayank just wanted to know about Nupur health lekin iske ghar wale inhe chodte hee nahi hai, bahut mushkil se Breakfast Table yaa Dinner Table per milta hai. Mayank mostly out of business meetings in the evening or parties n din main 12 baje tak sona, sometimes he comes home drunk. mayank kee lifestyle yehi hai, Dadi m shilpa wants him to settle down now n they have chosen the girl for him without even seeing her.Both of them r waiting to meet Nupur on Sunday.

Mayank is more concerened about Nupur health but do not want to see her or meet at the moment, he just wanted to give her space today so she can come out from this situation, so he decided to call Annie to find out about Nupurs health.

Mayank:- Hi Annie , How is things

Annie:- hey mayank, Nupur is better n gone home now.

Mayank:- How is her fever ?

Annie :- she is fine now, so do not worry

Mayank:- I need to apologise to her but I just wanna give her space at the moment

Annie :- Yes that's better , maine samjhane kee koshee kee but no use ,she does not want to listen anything

Mayank:- I know she is stubborn an ziddi

Annie:- bahut kuch jante ho tum Nupur ke baraain main ,

Mayank:- Mujhe pahlee meeting main hee pata chal gayee thaa, he said it smiling

Annie

Annie :- Mayank do not worry , we will sort it out , time to go to school now

Mayank:- I m coming also to drop Suhani

Annie :- Cool bye mayank. Take care n do not worry she is fine .

Mayank:- thanks , Benji is very lucky

Nupurs Home :- Nupur went home; meet everyone happily as if nothing has happened, got ready for school n just wanted to start her day as a fresh. She does not want to give tension to her family. She kept thinking "Why he had to plan to take revenge of her with the help of his friends, he is arroagant n outspoken. Nupur is confused with yesterday's incidents n trying to find her fault. If mayank thinks he was humiliated by my behaviour than he could have come to me directly n speak up about that, lekin uska badla lene ke liye Panchgani tak ka plan bana diya aur bahana school thaa. I started thinking he is arroagant but nice but I was completely wrong.

Nupur decided not to think much n went to Adityas room n wake him up, Adiya was delighted to see his nupsie masi. He missed her so much. Nupur just wanted to leave yesterdays incidents behind but she is very confused with Mayank.

Aditya :- Nupsie mummy, I missed u so much

Nupur/:- me too Adi.

Aditya:- do u remember my birthday.

Nupur :- Yes ofcourse , I do darling, we will have party on Sunday J

Aditya :- I have invited my friends

Nupur :- acha , good, what do u want on ur birthday?

Aditya :- I want bicycle , nupsie mummy , please please

Nupur :- done , did u ask your birthday gift from your dadaji, dadi maa, n badi dadi

Aditya :- No I need to think what to ask from them

Nupur :- Okay than get up ,get ready , we can discuss while going to school .

Sushma:- Nupur beta , we missed u a lot jabkee tum bas ek din ke liye bahar gayee thee, Tumhari ho jayegi tab humlogo ka kya hoga

Nupur:- Isliye to main shadi karoongi hee nahi kabhee, hamesha aapke pass rahoongi

Sushma:- nahi beta , aisa nahi bolte, Kavita n me wants u to get married

Nupur :- Dadi subah subah nahi

Sushma :- Nupur tu theek hain naa ?

Nupur :- Han Dadi , bilkool theek

Sushma:- Sun maine apno kuch dosto ko bulaya hai Aditya ke Birthday main, is that okay

Nupur :- No problem dadi but I did not know apke yaha dost hai

Sushma:- main chupi rustam hoo

Nupur:- Okay Dadi ,, Sham ko milti hoo, school ka time ho raha hai .

Precap: - Mayur naa chahte hu fir se Mile😳

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_27_23

nice update eagerly waiting for next update

Thanks for liking it ...
Next update kal karoongi.. half type kar liya hai .. soch rahee hoo kya likhoo aage ... maine purane chapeters bhool jati .. fir se padhna padta hai.. confuse nahi karna chahiti😆😆😆
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for liking it ...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Will pakka PM everyone tonight who reads my FF😃 or those who would like to take risk to readmy ff 😆😆 ... give me sometime pls so i can pm 😃
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago

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