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Posted: 14 years ago

hey i just read all ur ff from begining and i must say super work done👏the character were so different.waiting how will the story proceed further.who will win pyar ya abhiman

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Originally posted by: tukun2009

hey i just read all ur ff from begining and i must say super work done👏the character were so different.waiting how will the story proceed further.who will win pyar ya abhiman

thanks for liking it ...i m not at all FF writer.. this is just a trial ..
Well pyaar n Abhiman will go together when mayur relationship will start.its not about winning or losing ..mayank n nupur r different , they might change also but one thing never changes and that is human nature..
Mayank arrogant n apne usoolo per chanle wala ladka hai and nupur confident but shy girl hai when it comes to her personal life...let see how it progrsses..Mayank can openly express himself if he wants but nupur will be shy to do that...
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Chapter 5:- Part B- Mr and Miss Arrogant kee Panchagani Journey kee suruat 😛

Its around 8.15 AM and for the first time mayank is fresh n happy in the morning, he is wearing blue denim jeans n white shirt looking very handsome ( dono ne white pahna ..kya conincidence hai J ) driving his car n enjoying English music.Nupur is looking stunning in her white anarkali outfit, her long antique earings n bangle ,high heel sandle n her sunglasses, she is looking traditional as well as smart.Nupur always carry her IPOD while travelling n listen to her fav classical music including bollywood songs, Nupur life in her family n music. Nupur is waiting for the past 20 mins at bandra caf bus stand n trying to kill the time with her music.Mayank arrived but could not see Nupur anywhere, he tried to call her but nupur did not pick her phone because she ws busy listening music. Myank has to park his car n started looking for Nupur near the Bus Stand near bandra caf house. Nupur is standing behind the bus stand n busy in her music

Mayank ' WTH, where is she now n not picking my phone, jaroor dekh kar ignore kar diya hoga 😆😆

Nupur: - Looked at her watch n talking to herself saying "this guy will never come on time" n getting annoyed

Anyways after 10 minutes, Mayank saw a girl ( back ) with a long black hair, perfect figure n her fingers were moving rythemic way, he went to check as he was not sure whether it was Nupur or not. He went to check n was stunned to see her n lost it completely😳, he kept looking at her😳, Suddenly Nupur opened her eyes n found Mayank infront of her, she got shock

Nupur:- Mr Sharma aap, kya dekh rahe hai, she asked surprisingly😲?

Mayank:- You sing very well , that is why kids love u😃

Nupur:- Music is my life after my family, she said it quietly

Mayank- good, shall we go , as I have been looking for u everywhere here

Nupur:- I m here for the past 25 minutes , don't u think u shud apologise

Mayank:- Hello I have been looking for u for the past 10 minutes

Nupur- Hmm, I do not want to argue Mr Sharma, Shall we leave, I need to be back in Mumbai by 6.00 PM, btw I will plan my journey back to Mumbai.

Mayank- he said , Okay as you wish . Lets go (Mayank thinking-this girl is a discipline queen, whoever will come in her life will go mad, bhagwan use bande ko bachaye)

Nupur:- we will get late again for Panchgani L

Mayank:- No lecture pls , he started getting annoyed ( thinking I better not plan anything ever after today, I cannot stand her, itna arrogant).

Nupur:- we better be professional Mr Shrama when it comes to work, I know u r the owner but I m still an employee n I definetly do not want to hear complain about my work.

Mayank:- R u like this in ur personal life , he asked with curiosity

Nupur:- No, said it quietly but what about u?

Mayank:- I m same like this in personal as we all professional life , bindass J

Nupur:- Hmm ,shall we go now.

Maynk:- Yes , lets go

Nupur sat in the front seat beside mayank, settled herself, put the seat belt on, and put her ipod on n prayed quickly thinking bhagwan jaldi pahucha de n said to mayank "Please Drive Safely" , if u get tired do let me know.

Mayank was amused to see n hear all these n thinking "aisee ladkee se mera pala kabhee nahi pada hai, ladkiyan mere peeche bhagti hai n i get attention without any invitation but this girl is so different " , he kept looking at Nupur n said " Lets Enjoy Our First n Last long trip together, I will make it special" 😉.Nupur said '" Yes this is our official trip Mr Sharma n ofcourse last one"😃 . Mayank had never that sort of experience in his life when girl is not giving attention to him at all, he is getting curious to know more about her now.

Mayank and Nupurs Journey started, its around 9.30 in the morning, weather is very nice n pleasant, so mayank decided to put music on n he turned towards Nupur, OMG he could not take his eyes off from Nupur, Nupur was looking stunningly cute with her closed eyes, her long black hair was moving with the wind n she was enjyong music. Mayank was kept staring at Nupur while driving suddenly he heard Nupur Screamed Mr Sharma? Mayank turned back n he was about to hit his car to the tree.

Nupur: - Mr Sharma, Be Careful Please, she said it angrily😡?

Mayank: what? He was confused n shocked to hear Nupur Voice

Nupur:- accident ho jata to Mr Sharma, she said it angrily

Mayank:- Hua nahi naa , so chill

Nupur:- No I can't chill, , you have not been through this L, than suddenly she got quite

Mayank:- Sorry , can u say it agai

Nupur:- I do not want to discuss ,

Mayank:- Okay as u wish , but he found something strange on her face

Nupur:- Mr Sharma , I can drive ,so let me drive

Mayank:- Why ?

Nupur:- I do not want to take risk with my life , I have to go back home to Aditya n my Family

Mayank- Calm Down Nupur, Now u r insulting my driving

Nupur:- Mr Sharma, you were about to hit the car,

Mayank:- I did not hit ,did I, he said it angrily

Nupur :- Mr Sharma, let me drive pls

Mayank:- I do not let touch my car to anyone so I m gonna drive okay .

Nupur:- Hmm how arrogant ( Nupur just remember something , I do not let touch my nano to someoneelse also n smiling widely)

Mayank:- U r laughing at me ( he thought Nupur is lauging at him), pls kindly tell me rather than laughing

Nupur:- I do not let anyone touch my car also, she said it smiling

Mayank:- Oh I c , BTW r u okay now , Subah Subah main thoda drive kam karta hoo may be that is why 😕( he was avoiding eye contact but was delighted to see her smling after sudden scary shock ),

Nupur:- Mr Sharma it seems u r not morning person , so let me drive, I do not want to take risk with our life by not driving safely

Mayank:- Calm down pls😡 , enough now of ur lecture , it wont happen again , he said it smiling

Nupur:- better not because I can't go through another pain in my life ( she said it accidently n tears started coming )

Mayank:- Pain ?? what do u mean ( he was shock to see her sad face again)

Nupur ' Nothing, Mr Sharma, Drive Safely Pls , I will keep an eye on u n ur driving😕

Mayank- You r going to keep an eye on me, I do not mind at all , said is smiling 😆😆

Nupur:- Hmm ( nupur was tooo shy to answer mayank )

Mayank:- U r blushing, hahah😉 ( first time mayank has seen nupur shy n blushin infront of him )

Nupur:- Mr Sharma , please drive carefully , we need to reach on time

Mayank:- Yes Sure ( yeh ladkee bahut ajeeb hai , ek minute angry, next minute smiling, another minute sad but I love the way she was blushing n feeling shy ).

Mayank n Nupur r having nice journey, they did not speak much but mayank could not stop stairing at Nupur, he seems curious to know about her more now; he seems startes enjoying her company. Mayank is liking this different kind of experience where this girl is not giving him attention at all n behaving different from all other girls he has met in his life.Most of the girls he met in the past wer after his money,status, looks etc. Even Diya who is his so called GF is with him for his money n status.He found Nupur very different from other girls who can be angry, sad, and happy at the same time and also mature. Mayank n Nupur reached to Panchgani School, Mayank stopped the car n found Nupur sleeping in the car cutely, her hair was falling on her face n was looking very pretty. Somehow first time in his life, he drove for 3 hrs early in the morning n still finding himself fresh n happy.

This guy who used to get cranky n grumpy in the morning is feeling fresh. He liked Nupur as a person n decide not to take revenge anymore for his humiliation n wanted to make this professional trip successful , he decided to cancel all his plans he had for this evening and also he decided to take Nupur back to Mumbai safely without any problem. He got off from the car without disturbing Nupur and tried to call Diya, but could not get through so he left message for her n other friends about cancelling n asked them not to come to Panchgani. He could not manage to speak to them because all these people are party animal n sleep till late. Mayank decided to call them again later n went to his car to wake Nupur. Nupur was already awake n was waiting for Mayank to finish his call so they can go together.

Mayank:- Ready to go n deal with kids?

Nupur:- Yes Mr Sharma, I m ready

Mayank:- You can call me Mayank, when you call me Mr Sharma , to mujhe aisa lagta hai koi mere maths ke teacher ko bula raha hai

Nupur :- Okay Mr Sharma

Mayank:- I will call u Nupur n you call me Mayank

Nupur :- Ok Mayankji J, We have to behave like a professional, you r my boss n I m your employee , so I shud not cross my limit 😃

Mayank:- Okay Nupurji 😆

Mayank n Nupur had a nice meeting, Mayank was busy with other stuff in school n nupur was busy with work. They finished all work by 4.00 PM n mayank was happy with today's achievement. Mayank is ready to take nupur back to Mumbai.He completely forgot to call Diya n his friends again about cancelling todays plan. Mayank is waiting outside the school for Nupur.

Mayank:- Nupur , r u happy with the school now

Nupur:- Yes very happy , mayankji

Mayank:- So shall we go back to Mumbai

Nupur:- I can plan my journey , I will take bus.

Mayank:- If I m going than you can come with me, I will drive safely

Nupur:- No Mayankji, thank you for all your help today , I had fantastic time in school n now we shud plan our journey separately

Mayank:- Well nupur I have taken responsibility of ur todays journey ,so no argument n discussion , is that clear.

Nupur :- Hmm, that's allright, thank you again, Mayankji

Mayank:- Please call me Mayank , not mayankji .. jab bhee mayanji bulati ho to aisa lagta hai " main school ka headmaster hoo😆😆😆 , BTW I m not that old😳

Nupur :- okay I will call u Mayank 😃and said thank you to him ( Nupur became comfortable with mayank, she did not see that much arrogance in him today )

Mayank:- Your Welcome, lets go.. ( Mayank just wanted drop her home safely )

Mayank n Nupur did manage to create comfort zone between each other today😃. First time nupur did not find Mayank Arrogant and Maynk did not find Nupur Proudy 😃.They were about to start their journey back to Mumbai, Suddenly Diya n Group arrived 😡😭

Precap:- Huge Misunderstanding between Mayur 😭

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Will PM everyone tomorrow morning ...
Sorry about the delay
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Posted: 14 years ago
I had read this story before but couldnt comment...just read the 5B and it seems things are getting better between Mayank and Nupur...and now Diya ppl have arrived...i dont even want to imagine what will happen...

Plz do pm me when you update next :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AmyArTiMayUr

I had read this story before but couldnt comment...just read the 5B and it seems things are getting better between Mayank and Nupur...and now Diya ppl have arrived...i dont even want to imagine what will happen...

Plz do pm me when you update next :)

Thanks .. Will PM next update to you...I m not a FF writer , this is just a trial n you might find so many mistakes ...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

Thanks .. Will PM next update to you...I m not a FF writer , this is just a trial n you might find so many mistakes ...😆



Rule Number 1: You should NEVER underestimate yourself :)

This is a beautiful story...and you write it very well :) so dont worry about the mistakes...everyone makes some...its what makes us human, doesnt it?? :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amy I have never spoken to you before but i do read ur comments most of the time.. I must tell you that " You are the most positive person on this forum" 😃...
Thanks for the encouragmeent... will try to learn from my mistake n i wont underestimate myself 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

Amy I have never spoken to you before but i do read ur comments most of the time.. I must tell you that " You are the most positive person on this forum" 😃...

Thanks for the encouragmeent... will try to learn from my mistake n i wont underestimate myself 😃



Hmm now thats a better attitude :)

And well, yeah we have never spoken before..but since we are both ArTians, we had to speak at one time or another and i guess this is that time :))

As for being positive...lols...im not the most positive person around...i have my weak moments...i just had one a few minutes ago and you and another friend of mine made me feel better :) and so thanks for the compliment...but honestly, and im not being modest, im not the most positive...though it makes me feel real good when ppl say that to me :)) hehe
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