*The Cavernous Perceptions*'A SaJan Saga||Pt12P#77 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soo cool i just love it


Thanks a lot.. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

Awesome concept ...looking forward forthe update ...plss cont soon n thnx for the PM dear ...


Thanks Sonia!😃 We would continue soon..!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sweetsurabhi94


Hey nivi n bidz

congo guys fr ur new combine ff

n nw cming to it superb idea guys totally different n new really n the cs ohh my god the shergills n bhushans totally diff
really great idea n cncept n m loving it great job
please cnt soon
n do add me to the pm list i was trying to pres like tab bt its cming error so srry fr tht!
Love
surabhi


Thanks for your lovely feedback Surabhi!😃 We would add you to the PM list and continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: 358674

awesome concept

really nice 👍🏼


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Posted: 14 years ago
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nic concept realy wating for next part
plzzz add me for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: seejeet.huju201

nic concept realy wating for next partplzzz add me for pm


Thanks Seejeet..😳
We will update soon..😃

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Bidushy and Nivriti..❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Greetings to all you wonderful people🤗,

Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments😳..
We are shocked yet overwhelmed with the responses.😃

We hope we don't disappoint your expectations :D
We are trying our level best!⭐️

This is our very first update of this Saga and we truly hope you all enjoy it and it gives you a clearer impression of our story line and concept :D

So without any further ado, here comes the first and foremost update of our Saga... "The Cavernous Perceptions!"

With loads of love,
Bidushy and Nivriti❤️
Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

Haunts from the past: Part I

Banner Courtesy: Pragya [pragya_luvsajan]

Note: The song Jaane Kyun is taken from the flick Always Kabhi Kabhi... We would rather prefer if you heard it along! Jaane Kyon (Sufi Version) Click there to hear it..

"Gunjan, how could you even think that I would marry you? I mean you and me?! Come on! You are not my type, got it? So get lost!" ' These words haunted Gunjan in her dreams. She squeezed her eyes and gripped the bed sheet and trying her best to get the thoughts of his past out of her mind but it seemed like she couldn't get out of those horrible memories. She took heavy breaths as her past was making her sick. Suddenly, she jumped up in shock and felt short of breath. Quickly, she took the asthma pump which was kept on the side table and made her feel better with it. After that, she took a deep breath and got up from her bed. Wearing her sandals, she went to the washroom and stood in front of the mirror. She stared at herself for a long time. A memory from her past came in her mind and she had a flashback of the moment when they get closed to each other for the first time. She stared at herself through the mirror in anger and frustration. She turned on the shower and stood under it and tried her best to make herself pure and clean. She wanted to remove the feeling of Rahul's touch within herself. At last, she screamed out in frustration and anger, "Why don't you go out of my mind, Rahul? Just get lost from my thoughts. I don't want to remember you. Please go away. Just leave me alone. LEAVE ME ALONE!"

Saying these words, she fell on the floor and cried her heart out. "I can't tolerate it anymore. I CAN'T!"

Jane kyon, har lamha hai tham gaya
Jaane kyun, hoon zara jum gaya
Jaane kyun, aankhen namm si hui
Jaane kyun, manzilen kho gayi aur so gayi

Gunjan kept crying and letting all her sorrow and frustration out. She was trying like hell to get out of her past but it kept haunting her like anything.


Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein bin alphaason ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki hai barsaatein ab main jaanu kyun

She had the flashbacks again of the moments she spend with Rahul. How could she let him getting so close to her? That was making her hate herself even more!

Tujh bin jaane kyun
Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein bin alphaason ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki barsaatein ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun

She walked out of the washroom numbly. Her face was emotionless and she walked toward her cupboard as if she was a living dead. "I can't live here. I shall go back to India." Thinking of India, a slight smile curved on her face. "I hope my past will leave me alone after I go to India. I hope that I'll be able to start a life afresh there. I just need some peace and I am feeling like I'll get that in India in between my own people."

--Singhania Group of Industries'

"Priya! Sent Samrat inside.", said Gayatri in an ordering tone.

"Ma'am, Samrat Sir hasn't arrived yet.", said Priya.

Gayatri shockingly said, "What? Umm.. Okay! Inform me when he will come."

"Yes Ma'am!", said Priya.

Gayatri thought in confusion and concernedly, "Everyday he comes on time and today he's an hour late. I hope he's okay."

Thinking that, she tried to call Samrat but Samrat didn't respond.

"Where is Samrat?", wondered Gayatri.

**Scene Shifts**

Samrat was sitting on a rock near the shore. He threw stones one after one. Deep in thoughts, he stared at the sea and remembered about Sheena, the girl he loved crazily and she dumped him. "Why the hell are you still in my thoughts, Sheena? Please just get out of my thoughts. JUST GO!"

Jaane kyun, har lamha hai tham gaya
Jaane kyun, hoon zara jum gaya
Jaane kyun, aankhen namm si hui
Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein bin alphaason ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki hai barsaatein ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun


"I can't marry you, Samrat. I can't marry you." ' These words haunted him once again. "DAMN! GET OUT OF MY THOUGHTS, SHEENA! GO AWAY!", screamed Samrat in anger and sorrow. He stood up and started walking near the shore with a hope to find some peace in the beauty of the nature. The wind was blowing lightly. He loved feeling the wind. He stretched out his hands and closed his eyes and felt the wind. A strange smile curved on his face. He made himself lost in the serenity of the nature and tried his best to forget all his sorrows ' at least for a while. For a second, or even for a moment, he wanted to smile and to be happy. He opened his eyes slowly and again the same words sounded like echo in his mind. He shut off his eyes with his palms and screamed out, "SHUT UP! JUST SHUT UP! GOD DAMN IT! LEAVE ME ALONE!" He punched on the rock for which his hand was bleeding. But he didn't care. He kept walking and walking without knowing what his destination was.

Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein bin alphaason ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki hai barsaatein ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun

Gunjan was sitting inside the plane beside the window. She stared at the clouds outside and sarcastically smiled at her condition and said, "There was a time when I used to be scared of travelling by air. But now, nothing matters! Nothing at all matters. After such a suffering, Gunjan Bhushan has become strong. In a way, I guess, everything happened for good. At least, it has made me strong."

Saying all these, she again stared outside the clouds and bravely faced with her fear.

Bas khushi ki talaash mein main toh yunhi chalta raha
Jaane na dheere dheere yun chalte chalte main kahan aa gaya
Dekhenge mera rasta gham bhi kahin yeh socha na tha
Maine inn raaston se mazaak raasta poocha na tha

Tears streamed from her eyes but she didn't let those make her weak. She instantly wiped out her tears and said, "Now I won't be weak! I will be strong. Please God, help me in this."

Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein bin alphaason ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki hai barsaatein ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun

Staring outside, gradually she fell asleep.


After 2 days..

Samrat was driving to his office when suddenly, a girl came in front of his car and he immediately gave break to his car. "Oh god!", he said in shock.

He went out of the car and rushed to the girl. The girl was lying upside down unconscious. He held her shoulders and made her turned around. She was Gunjan! Her forehead was bleeding. Samrat got scared seeing her injured. People gathered around them. Samrat immediately carried Gunjan and took her into his car. He rushed to the hospital.

Precap: Gunjan getting conscious and blasts out at Samrat.. 😉


Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

Hey guys🤗,

Here is the the next part, I really hope you liked the part :D
I truly wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too. :D

Hope we made up to your expectations😳..

If you have any queries, feel free to ask one of us...

And if anyone of you want to be, please add us to your buddy list..

Love,

Nivriti & Bidushy ❤️

Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: seejeet.huju201

amazing part dear
loved it


Thanks for your lovely comment Seejeet. 😳

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