*The Cavernous Perceptions*'A SaJan Saga||Pt12P#77

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Nila

@Glowing_Star

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#381

suuupeeerbbb update.. it was terrific. sajan scenes are awesomely written...👏
plzzz do cont soon & thanks a lot for pm dear..😊

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#382

wowww once again superb update hon guys loved it loved the way sajan's bonding is increasing and they r supporting each other loved the way he cared and she gave him strength now can't wait for next part and thanks for pm

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neefa!

@--softyy--

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#383

when is sid comin!!!!

i just luv it!!!!

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ammykhan

@ammykhan

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#384

awesome part

loved it

cont asap

thx 4 the pm

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fend

@fend

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#385

awesome update
loved sajan scene
very well written
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm

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Twinkle

@princess009

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#386

Hi m new 2 this forum n seriously m completely in love wid ur ff simply u both rock guys n plz...add me to ur pm list.continue soon

Twinkle

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#387

Awesome update. Loved it. I liked the way u have written. But, frankly speaking, i personally hadn't liked that sam crying for sheena. I know he was heart-broken. And i can understand his pain. U have shown very nicely. Please make him realise that sheena is not his true love. Sorry, if u hurted by my comment. Thanks for pm

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: gnaneswari
Awesome update. Loved it. I liked the way u have written. But, frankly speaking, i personally hadn't liked that sam crying for sheena. I know he was heart-broken. And i can understand his pain. U have shown very nicely. Please make him realise that sheena is not his true love. Sorry, if u hurted by my comment. Thanks for pm

I am not hurt at all .. 😃 Well, Sammy saw Sheena with someone else, it had hurt him as once upon a time, he used to love her madly .. Yes, he cried but he was strong too as Gunjan was with him .. He did smile at the last after Gunjan hugged him and kissed on his forehead .. 😳 I hope u got my point .. 😊 He will realize that his tears r not worth for that Sheena .. Just wait and read ..😉 Thanks a lot for ur precious comment!! 😃

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
Very nice update bidu and nivi👏
Gunjan samy in dark room😉
Loved that part,gunjan scared of dark and she hugged samy😛

And Gunjan's bro is evil..ufff finally villen came😆
the asthma part scared me,Gunjan is Asthma patient..sad 😔
like samy's caring nature,he is really sweet...

do update soon
love
Ruchi❤️

P.S see my signature now😛😉

Thanks for ur detailed comment Ruchi! Glad u loved it!😃
P.S.- thanx for keeping my gift as ur sign😳

Originally posted by: 358674
awesome
excellent part 👍🏼

Thank u so much sweets!😳

Originally posted by: tasnin96
suuupeeerbbb update.. it was terrific. sajan scenes are awesomely written...👏
plzzz do cont soon & thanks a lot for pm dear..😊

Thank you tasnin! glad that u loved the update! will cont soon n the pleasure is ours!

Originally posted by: aashizin
wowww once again superb update hon guys loved it loved the way sajan's bonding is increasing and they r supporting each other loved the way he cared and she gave him strength now can't wait for next part and thanks for pm

Hey aashizin! thank u so much for ur sweet response! we r truly humbled tht u loved our update! will cont soon n the pleasure is ours!

Originally posted by: roknstarz_mjht
when is sid comin!!!!
i just luv it!!!!

thanks neefa dii! glad u loved the update! sid will come soon! have patience!😛

Originally posted by: Lekshmic7
NICE PARt.continue soon

thank u so much! will cont soon!

Originally posted by: ammykhan
awesome part
loved it

cont asap

thx 4 the pm

thanks ammy! glad u loved it! will try to cont asap! the pleasure is ours!

Originally posted by: fend
awesome update
loved sajan scene
very well written
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm

thank u so much for the appreciation! glad u loved it! will continue soon! the pleasure is ours!

Originally posted by: princess009
Hi m new 2 this forum n seriously m completely in love wid ur ff simply u both rock guys n plz...add me to ur pm list.continue soon

Twinkle

hey twinkle🤗.. first of all, welcome to the forum.. we r truly glad tht u loved our ff n thank u so much for appreciating..😃 hope u have liked the pm list post on the first page.. will try to continue soon..😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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KuchBhiMatBol

@KuchBhiMatBol

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#389

hey buzzz oops sorry bidz ryt hehehae
wow yar what an update
truly awesome
loved sajan
the way they console each other
was truly awesme n lovely
u r an amazing writer
do cnt soon

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#390

Hey Bidu Di!!

I am so sorry I edited the title, read the part but did not reserve or comment!

Kay Kay.. Let me digest the facts.. 🤔

Firstly, it is a sad one! What's up with people these days?😕😕 All are writing sad-sad stories! Is it a new trend here on I-F?😉 But yeah, our story-line is such!

Secondly, the story!

Hmm... What shall I say 🤢? I am confused😕 like I am about the trend thing!😆😆..

The story is really.. Let me find some appropriate words! Wait a second, I will check the online thesaurus.. 😆 You know the all new cool technology😎 where you just click on a site and type the word! Viola, you get the synonyms and appropriate praises and/ or criticisms..

Kay! I guess you got some valuable information thanks to me!😛

So..Thirdly, Light off!! 🤣 🤣

Bidu Di.. The update was a little depressing 😭 but sumptuous😃 [found online😉] and confusing..😕 As in both, trend wise and story wise! But yeah, don't forget Angry-Young Man! *Light off* Gunjan was scared like a poo!!! 🤣 🤣

And yeah, confusing not in a criticism way but the suspense way!😎 Which is way way cool!😉 But yeah, not exactly for me as I know it all but as a reader's point of view!😳

So.. Hmm!! Enough of my BHASHAN and appropriate information, The update was just wonderful yet depressing! Yeah.. Karan is going to come!! 🥳

Now will the story take a turn😉.. And aw! Poor Samrat.. He saw his love married to another guy and standing right in front of him without looking!😭

You described it really well!👏 Glad Gunjan was there to console and support him!😃

And oh, the jumping around scene was even more cool.. But the attack was scary!😲

Please Update soon or else you are dead😡!

I will kill you by popping out of your desktop screen and/or laptop TFT and kill you with a Rampuri Choori..🤣

Oh yeah! Loved the confused looks of SaJan towards Gayatri when she asked them to go to "Delhi" the next day!😆

Thanks a ton for your honoring PM and I am truly humbled by commenting here! [It's my Saga too na!]

And again a humble apology for my least participation but our timings clash! But if I do get, I will share couple of ideas with you!😃

Love and Best Wishes <33

Nivriti❤️

-P.S:: Great job.. I could write a long enough comment😆! Will try to edit the previous one right now! But can't promise a long one as now I have run out of ideas!😳