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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for all silent readers for your support
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Posted: 14 years ago
@shaffy next update main mayank nupur ko propose karega tab dekho madam kaise react karegi
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Posted: 14 years ago
here is my next part hope you like it thanks a lot dear for your comments
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part 11

Mayur reach home. He sees nupur still sleeping he slowly wakes her up

N-kya hua

M-ghar pahunch gaye andar chale

(both go their room )

(he goes to freshup by the time he comes out she was sleeping sitting on the bed he makes her sleep properly, kisses her forehead and goes down)

Sam and Gunjan in the car

G-sam gaadi rokho

S-tumhein is waqt paanipuri kaani hain iswaqt koi nahin hoga

G-isliye nahin tum mujhe yeha chod do main ghar apne aap jaongi

S-par kyun

G-sabko doubt hoga ki main tumhare saath kaise aayi

S-kuch nahin hoga agar kisiko doubt hain toh main clear kardoonga ab chup chap baito

G-par sam

S-par var kuch nahin kahaana I will manage

(they reach home)

M-tum dono ek saath sab teek toh hain na

S-nahin majburi madam ki gaadi kharab hogayi thi isiliye mere saath aayi

Shilpa-waise tum dono ab tak kahaan the

S-project ke kaam se office main the

Shilpa-jab benji se poocha toh usne kahaan ki office main uske aur dia ke alaawa aur koi nahin hain

S-haan hum client se milne client ke office gaye the

M-really tum dono zaroor koi naatak kar rahe ho saaf saaf batao baat kya hain

S-kuch bhi toh nahin aap bewajah hum par shak kar rahe hain

G-haan mayank sam sach keh raha hain tum jaisa soch rahe ho waisa kuch nahin hain

M-main kaisa soch raha hoon ek minute tu sam ki side kabse le rahi hain

S-main fresh hone jaa raha hun

G-main bhi

M-mom aapko nahin lagta ki kuch gadbad hainwarna aakar aada ganta hua indono ne ladai nahin ki aur toh aur ek dusre ki support kar rahe hain

Shilpa-agar yeh dono ek saath honge toh humein pata chal jayega

M-kaise

Shilpa-zaroor usdin earthquake aayega

M-yeh baat toh sach hain(both smile)

Shilpa-waise nupur kahaan hain

M- bahut tak gayi hain isiliye sogayi

Shilpa-par khana

M-hum dono aate waqt dinner karke aaye

(benia on road)

D-benji leave me

B-lekin tumhara paon ko moch aaya tha na

D-ab teek hain

(he gets her down)

D-thanks

B-dosti main no thanks

(benia enter)

Shilpa- tum dono ko late kyun hua

B-project ki wajah se

(sajan come there)

Shilpa-acha hua tum dono bhi aagaye yeh sab ho kya raha hain

B-kya mom

Shilpa-subah se lekar sham tak bahar ghumne ke alawa koi kaam nahin hain kya ghar pe mujhe akela chod kar tum sab enjoy kar rahe ho kal se tum sab log seeda ghar aaoge yeha wahaan nahin ghumoge warna dekho main kya karti hun

Four of them nod their head

Shilpa-tujhe specially bolna padega kya

M-maine kya kiya 6 baje tak ghar pahunchta hun

Shilpa-aake kya karte ho nupur ko apne saath le jaate ho agar nupur baahar hoti toh tum bhi use baahar se pickup karlete tujhe dekhkar hi sab ke sab bigde hain

M-par mom aap jaante hain na main nupur ko baahar kyun leke jaata hun

Shilpa-tujhe yeh bahaana ache se mil gaya tujhse baat karna bekaar hain sab jaldi dinner khane aajao

Everyone at same time

"humne already dinner kar liya"

Shilpa-kya unity hain kal se tum logo ke liye naashta bhi nahin banaongi baahar hi kha lo

(she leaves from there in anger)

(all go to convince her)

G-aunty we are sorry please kuch kha lijiye

Shilpa-mujhe khane ka mann nahin hain waise bhi tum log meri fikar kyun karoge sab ke sab bahut tak gaye honge jaake aaram karo

M-mom aapne kuch nahin kaaya hum aaram se kaise so sakte hain

Shilpa-tu meri fikar kyun karta hain nupur hain na jaake uski fikar kar

M-aapki problem nupur hain

Shilpa-nahin tum sab tum sab ki galti ke liye us bechari ko dosh kyun doon tum sab log pehle se hi aise ho tum sab ki apni apni duniya hain main kaise rahoon tum logo ko koi faraq nahin padega

M-aisa nahin hain mom humein aapki fikar hain humne aapko hurt kiya we are sorry dil se sorry duniya main jitni sorry hain utne(everyone catch their ears )

Sanjay 'kyun bewajah lad rahi ho insabko sudharna impossible hain

M-dad aap bhi

Sanjay-haan nahin toh kya tum sab logo ko khud ke alawa aur kisi cheez ki fikar nahin hain

Shilpa-kyun gussa kar rahe ho mere bacho par yehi time hain enjoy karne ka warna baad main mauka nahin milega

Sanjay 'tumhine insabko bigaada hain main yeha tumhare liye baat kar raha hun aur tum apni bacho ki side le rahe ho

Shilpa-haan loongi tumhein itni jealousy kyun hain

S-love you mom (he hugs his mom atlast they convince and make her have dinner)

S-thanks dad hamari help karne ke liye

Sanjay 'agar nahin karta toh tumhari mom khana nahin khati koi so nahin paata ab tum sab apne apne rooms main jao goodnight

Two days later in the night nupur was sleeping peacefully in her room

(she hears some sounds and gets up she doesn't find mayank there)

N-mayank kahaan chala gaya aur yeh aawaaz kahaan se aarai hain

(she goes out and finds outside it was totally dark and still some sounds were coming she starts shivering and calls mayank she doent find him)

(she enters into hall )

N-mayank tum kahaan ho

M-yehaan

(all lights are on )

All Shout 'happy birthday nupur

(she sees him goes and hugs him and starts crying)

M-tum ro kyun rahi ho

Shilpa-tum log itne pyar se utaoge toh aisa hi hoga tum use surprise party de rahe ho ya use dara rahe ho

M-sorry nupur humein tumhein kaise neeche laana samaj nahin aaya isiliye aisa karna pada ab rona band karo main tumhare paaas hi hoon na(he wipes her tears and takes her with him to cut the cake)

(she blows the candles and cuts the cake)

(all give the gifts to her )

S-bhai aapka gift kahaan hain

M-ek minute abhi aaya

(he brings a big bag)

G-itna bada bag kya hain ismein

1) he first gives teady bear

M-cute si girl ke liye cute teddy

2) next chocolate box

M-tumhare sweet smile ke liye delicious chocolates

3) next candles

M-symbol of sacrifice candles till its last second it gives light to others

4) next laughing Buddha

M-tum roti bahut ho isiliye jab bhi rone ka mann karega ise dekhlena has padogi

5) next mirror

M-tumhara dil bhi is mirror ki tarah honi chahiye taaki main tumhare dil ki har baat jaan sakhu

6) Novel

M-knowledge ek aise cheez hain jise koi humse cheen nahin sakta isiliye yeh book tumhare liye

7) Diary

M-diary ek aise cheez hain jismein hum hamari dil ki har baat bejijak likh sakte hain aur pen ke bina diary aduri hain jis tarah tumhare bina main adhura hun

8) Sparkles

M-yeh tode der ke liye hote hain par phir bhi colourful hote hain isiliye tumhare life bhi inki tarah colourful hona chahiye

9) Anklets

M-iski aawaz tumhari smile ki tarah bahut sweet hain isiliye yeh tumhare liye

(he puts anklets on her legs)

10) Red Roses

M-yeh roses main beauty ke saath thorns bhi hain life main bhi khushi ke saath dukh bhi hota hain ab se tumhare life main koi thorns nahin honge

11) Ipod

M-music is the best way to relax isiliye yeh ipod

12) Flower pot

M-yeh chota sa flower pot nahin hamari life hain yeh marne ke baad bhi hamari kaam aati hain iski beauty iske flowers main chupi hain jis tarah meri khushi tumhari hasi main chupi hain

13) Pearl chain

M-iske pearls tumhare heart jitna pure hain(he puts it in her neck)

14) Saree

M-yeh hain beautiful par jab koi ladki ise pehnti hain yeh aur beautiful lagti hain

15) Bangles

M-iski aawaz main tumhare dil ki awaaz hona chahiye

16) Ring

M-yeh ring main tumhare ring finger ko isiliye pehna raha hun kyunki iska connection tumhare dil se hain aur main tumhare dil main rehna chahta hun

17) Perfume

M-iski khushboo tumhein hi nahin tumhare aas paas ke logo ke chehre pe smile laati hain. Next gift ke liye terrace par jaana padega

(all go to terrace because all are now keen interested to know what would be her next gift)

18) Cage with 18 love birds

M- tum jab 18 years ki thi tum us pinjre se baahar aayi na isiliye yeh raha mera 18th gift in 18 love birds ki aazadi tumhein de raha hun inhe aazad kar do
(he gives her one by one and asks her to set them free)

19) Promise

M-tumhare pichle 18 birthdays ke liye woh 18 gifts tumhari aaj ka gift hain(he kisses her forehead)promise main tumhare saath hamesha rahoonga tumhein hamesha khush rakhoonga tumhari aankhon main kabhi aansoon nahin aane doonga
These are his 19 gifts for her 19 birthdays .Everyone gives gifts but for mayank each of his gift had a special meaning
Jaanti hoon bahut jyada hogaya par kya karein thought aaya likh di
That's enough for today

Hope you liked it

precap

M-I Love You Nupur
N-matlab
M-jab tak tum I Love You ka matlab nahin jaanogi tab tak main har pal tumhein propose karoonga
Edited by --unknown-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sweet 19 gifts on her 19th birthday...
nice...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
itni lambi gift list! baki log so nehi gaye yeh list sunkar?😆
but the gifts were very cute!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.😛
its a request dear plzz put some thing interesting some excitement n shocking twist in ur update ...
i want some thing very very intrusting...
dont mind it a request 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SHILPA-CUTE

nice part.😛
its a request dear plzz put some thing interesting some excitement n shocking twist in ur update ...
i want some thing very very intrusting...
dont mind it a request 😃

it will happen but little time is required thats why i am updating now and then
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... such an beautiful update!!! 😍
19 gifts 4 Nupur's 19th B'day!!!
such an fantastic idea!!!👏
i luvd it 2 d bits!!!
pls continue soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗
*edit*
precap sounds exciting... cant wait 4 it!😳
Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 14 years ago
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superb update...👏
cont soon...😊

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