SaJan-MaYur(FF)pgno6 DREAM SEQ-saJan...updated - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
lovely updt
mayur are soo cute...loved nupur 's jealousy ....waiting for the next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Surbhi123

awwwwwwww its a very cute , lovely ff.......and ur side by side commentary from the very starting looks like cherry on the cake........from the intro to the present update.........i dont think there was anything i dint loved........mayur first meeting and their first hug were just awesome........even sg meeting was nice,.........just picture perfect moment ........and now this jealousy track......awwwww .........nupur is very possessive girl........but it's all mayu mistake.......woh apna pyaar dhang se kabhi nahi jatata.........waiting for mayur confession eagerly.......sajan one was awesome..........and even the third couple is nice..........in short.......it was woth reading , fantastic and mind blowing ff........u rock...........please do pm me whenever u update next and do update soon........

love
surbhi 🤗❤️.....

oh!!thnx a lot sweety...gald that u liked it....
yup wil surely pm u ....🤗
love u too....❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: gopi06

lovely updt
mayur are soo cute...loved nupur 's jealousy ....waiting for the next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm

thnx a lot 4 ur reply
ya wil cotinue sooon!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
OMG!! :O

It was F-A-B! <3<3<3<3
Firstly , Its been ages u ve updated so Welcome back into the world of writing Di! 🤗
Di I ever tell you I LOVE Rohit! If I didn't then now I am telling you! Really superb! Pls do keep continuing it this time....pls! *joins hands*
I love ur FF! 👏
and yes I love you also....muwaaaaas to you!

Love Adya! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

OMG!! :O


It was F-A-B! <3<3<3<3
Firstly , Its been ages u ve updated so Welcome back into the world of writing Di! 🤗
Di I ever tell you I LOVE Rohit! If I didn't then now I am telling you! Really superb! Pls do keep continuing it this time....pls! *joins hands*
I love ur FF! 👏
and yes I love you also....muwaaaaas to you!

Love Adya! 🤗

ohhhhhhh!!!!adya its soooo sweet of u !!!🤗🤗
u in love wid ROHIT!!😳😳.....ohh!!.....grt dat u hav fallen for him.....
now i wil hav a jealous track between u and ragini 😆😆...thnx a lot 4 liking yaar....
and ya thnx 4 welcomng me toooo....and thnx 4 remmberng it dear.....🤗🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

long time but nice update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

long time but nice update

thnx 4 the reply....😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls edit it sooooooooooon!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiiiii guys,
i am back wid the update and a lot of romance!!
RECAP:nupur planng to break ragini and mayank friendship
gunjan wants to ask samrat sumthng
nupur asks mayank nt to talk to ragini
rohit strts to flirt😆 to ragini
sanu confusion talk!!😆
samrat forcng gunjan to say it!!!😉 and ragini gng to speak to mayank alone!😆
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samrat"chashmish..batao na kya pooch na chathi thi"...gunjan "samrat ok mein pooch lethi hun" samrat"atlast chashmish plsss kaho mein tumhare liye intaazar kar raha hun" gunjan"intazaar????"
samrat"arrey ..mein toh yeh sooch sooch kar pagal ho jaunga ki tum mujhe kya kehne waali ho kaho chashmish😳😳" samrat comes closer ..and gunjan feeling very shy..and puts her heads down and asks..hearng it samrat is shocked and goes back...😆😲 u know what gunjan asks "kya tum ragini se pyaar kar the ho??😆🤣" and samrat has no words and just thinks "arey yeh kya wrong line par chal raha hai ...kya use mein batao agar chashmish aisa sochthi hai toh mujse kaise pyaar karregi samrat tu toh gaya!!pehla pyaar aur aisa🤣" gunjan"samrat bolo hain ya na??!!" samrat "chashmish agar mein kise se pyaar kar tha toh tumhe bata dethe😉...nahin jaise tum sooch rahi ho waise kuch bhi nahin" gunjan"mein tumko samj thi hun samrat mere dil kehraha hai ki tum kisi se pyaar kar the ho kyunki woh dare mein jab tum ne woh lines kaha mujhe kuch feeling hua tha jaise ki tum woh sab feel kar ke kaha...😳😳" gunjan ne toh samjh liya ki samrat kisi se pyar kartha hai lekin woh samjh nahin payi ki woh ladki wohi thi jisko samrat apna jeevan se zyaada pyaar kar tha hai..*HAILA*😳☺️..and samrat speaks out "chashmish" and catches her shoulder wid his hands "hain mein pyaar kartha hun jan the ho kis se??" and gunjan's heart beat toh tham jatha hai ek second ke liye kyunki samrat ne uska naam kaha hain samrat"tumse chashmish ...tumse chashmish mein ar kisi se pyaar kabhi nahin"☺️☺️ gunjan"kya??mujse tum joke nahin kar rahe ho na??" and gunjan was also happy hearng this and she couldnt understand why!beause she didnt knw jane anjane mein usne bhi samrat se pyaar use betha hua ek ek ek pal ko une enjoy kiya aur pyaar bhi kiya tha!!😳😳
samrat"chashmish tum wrongly mat sajo tum meri best friend ho us tarah se mein tumhe pyaar kar tha hun" gunjan"oh!!tum aise bola...😕."and gunjan's face changes..and samrat sees his chashmish first time feeling unhappy wen he said he loves her as a best friend😉 and he had said it wantedly...pyaar ko koi itna jaldi bata saktha hai kya..aur woh chashmish mein bhi wahi pyaar dekna chatha hai😊... samrat hai...apne pyaar ko itna simply propose nahin karega?!!😃

and ragini "mayank.hi" mayank"hi tum jaise act kar rahi ho ki hum pehli bar mil rahe hai😆" ragini'mujhe yeh jealousy thng na tekh nahin lagtha dekho nupur ko itna tension mein hai aur mujhe bahut hate kar rahi hogi..isiliye tum use bata dena ki hum sirf bas use jealous kar ne ke liye natak kar rahe hai" mayank"arey...abhi abhi toh woh dere dere mere pyaar ko samjh rahi hai...agar mein use aise kahun na woh toh zyada tumhari saath hi time spend karegi tumhe sorry bolne ke liye😆" ragini"tekha woh bahut tension mein hai.." mayank "jaantha hun aur tumne mujse aise akele mein baat kar rahi ho na..uske face ko dekho actually mujhe yahi hi nupur se pasand hai woh jo bhi kehna chathi hai uske aankhe bol dethe hain"😳 ragini"ohh!!*laughs*..
mayank"aur woh mujse kehrahi thi ki tum bahut bure ladki ho aur tumse baat na kare i am loving it!!" ragini"loving it??!!mayank mujhe lag raha hai yeh tekh nahin hai" mayank"mein sambal loonga...tum parishan mat ho" and both leave..and all are in there postions to start the dance practice

while dancing rohit and ragini teaching one by one....nupur"mayank tum mere liye itna bhi nahin kar sakthe?" mayank"nupur dance mein dhyaan do no talkng😆😆" nupur"BY GOD!!SADOO..mein tumhe us katiya vampire se bachana chahtha hun aur tum woh ki mre baat nahin sun rahe ho" mayank"VAMPIRE???!!!🤣🤣" nupur"hain mayank ragini vampire hai mein na jab use akele mein baat kar ne ke liye milne rahithi tab woh ek ladka ko bite kiya use vampire teeth se😆😆..tumne woh serial deka nahin pyaar ki ek kahani 😆😆" mayank"nahin..nahin tum joot bol rahi ho aur vampire toh yeh world mein exits nahin ho ta hai jo serial tum ne kaha na woh tumko bewakoof bana raha hai" nupur"hain mein bewakoof hun pata nahin tumse kyun pyaar kar thi hun😳" mayank"kya boli???nupur jaise tum soch rahi ho waise nahin hai hum dono bahut acche dost hai dats it..."and mayank says this because he understands she couldnt withstand him speakng to ragini!😳 nupur"ohh!!tekha hai tekha hai agar tum use pyaar bhi karthe ho toh mujhe kya prob hai..waise bhi tumse woh akeli kya baat ki??" mayank"kuch nahin bas pooch rahi thi dance practice kaisa chal raha hai aur hum dono acche practice kar rahe hai ya nahin aur tumne use vampire kaha!!!🤣" nupur "chodo chodo..dance practice kar the hai!😆"

rohit"ragini sab log acha kar rahe hai na?" ragini "hain rohit,tum jasie ek dance master toh mila un logon ko" rohit "oh!!thnk u and same to u.😆" rohit"toh hum agala step karna shuru kar dethe hai" and everyone watches them..and woh dono toh kamal ke salsa dance kar the hain aur ek step hotha jo in dono ke beech hua pyaar ko cheen detha hai..aur they hav a beautiful eye contact😳😳 and all are wondering why they hav stopped dancing and is amazed by their chemistry for the first time they are seeing other than their fights!😆and they realise they had stopped dancing and rohit in hesitation leaves raginii 4rm his hands and again catches her back before she fell😳wowowwwww!!!and again they were lost in each others eyes....and again wake up from love!!😆 rohit"ok guys practice this step" samrat "kya woh eye contact aur catch bhi😆" rohit"nahin all things befor dat 😆" rohit and ragini walk down to teach one by one to everyone and rohit"samrat practice karo ..." samrat"mein jaantha hun.." rohit"shut up samrat aur dance par dhyaan do gunjan dont make him talk😆" samrat"LOVE IS IN THE AIR!!" gunjan"samrat,woh bahut gursa hojatha hai tease mat karna" samrat"chashmish tumne dekha na dono ke beech kuch toh hai" gunjan:pehle tum dance kar phir hum discovry karthe hai pyaar ke baaare mein😆" samrat"chashmish tum ab bhi kitne cute lagrahi ho😆😆" gunjan"samratttt"😆😆

after the practice is over...rohit and ragini have a chat ragini"mein toh sochtha hai tum mujhe chod doke!😆 rohit"nahin..mein toh itna rude toh nahin hun ki mere assitant to dance karne ke waqt neeche chodun!" ragini"sirf assitant??😳" rohit"nahin tum mere friend bhi ho!hain na??" ragini"hain of course!!" rohit"toh kyun na hum ek coffee pe chale u knw...😳" ragini is really excited and doesnt want to agree to him fast ....ragini"nahin rohit mein nahin...." rohit:plssss plssss...." ragini:nooo rohit sorry .." rohit "ok just leav it mein ab se tumse aise kabhi nahin poochunga ....aur mein soochtha ki tum bhi mere saath jaana chahtha ho lekin mein galat tha bahut galat! " and rohit walks off in anger....😲 and ragini is running behind him to make him ok again lekin rohit is very stubbrn and just walks..kya ragini rohit ko mama payegi???
keep waiting guys!!!😊
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love
harini😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Ragini Vampire...😆
By God Possesive Nupur😳
True Love is in the air..
Really Nice Part Yar..
Now talk to me...😆
Next Time dnt give me Dhamkees😆
Continue Soon Not like & months...😆

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