Mayur FF part 4 updated on pg 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
it was mindblowing update ..wow mayur meet n dey wil live in one house so sute nok jhok will gt 2 c... 😳luvd it n thnxx 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
wow!! 👏
great job! 👍🏼
thanks for the pm! 😊
~Alisha~
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
awesome update😊😊
nupur was so cute😃😃
thanks 4 the pm😊😊
do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
please update soon and please pm me when you update please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

hey guys this is part three 😊
hope u all like it 😃
thnx alot for u r encoragement 🤗
n i m really sorry i couldn't cont. for many days due to exams 😆
anywayz enjoy this part 😳
n plz can u all suggest me a title for this?????????? 😉

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Mom: mayank ye nupur hain hamare neighbour n shez just like my daughter n nupur he's mayank my son

mayank n nupur : wat?

Nupur: kya maa? Ye sadu aap ka beta hain?

Mayank: wat? Mom aap aise neighbours rakte hoo I guess we shud shift to some other place

Mom: mayu aise mat bolo after all shez also like my daughter n nupur tum bhi ? nupur I think u should now go at u r home u must be tired na ? n mayu tum bhi chalo khanaa khana hain na ?

Mayank n nupur left from there glaring each other angrily

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Next morning

Mayank was busy having his breakfast

Mom: mayu jaldi karo tumhe college jaana hain na? (she said this while arranging few things)

M: ha mom bus ho gaya , tho aapne kaunse college main admission karvaya hain?

Mm: excel college "MUMBAI's BEST CLLG"

M : okk mom aap mujhe address dijiae main chala jaaonga

Mm: nahi ek kaam karo tum nupur ke sath chale jaao vo bhi usse cllg main parahte hain

M:no mom!

As he says this the bell rings n shilpa opens it n finds none other than nupur standing there

N: good morning maa (saying this she hugs her)

Mm: good morning beta

N; maa aapne mujhe call kiya that vo actually main kitchen main thi

Mm: ha beta vo actually kya tum mera ek kaam karoge?

N: ha maa boliye

Mm: kya tum apne sath mayank ko excel cllg lekar jaaoge

Meanwhile mayank who is buzy listening to this interepts

M: nahi maa I told u first only ki main isske sath nahi jaaonga

Mm: mayu tum do minute chup raho!

N: ha ha mujhe bhi koyi shock nahi hain tumhare sath jaane ka vo maa kehraheye issiliye

N: okk maa par meri ek sharat hain purre rasate bhar ye chup chap rahega?

Mm; ha ha beta tum usse baat ki chinta mat karo main usse samajaha donge

N: okk maa so muje abh cllg ke liye ready hona hain main chalti hoon aur isse kehna ki late na kare

Mm: okk beta

She glared at mayank n left from there

M: mom mujhe uske sath nahi jaana

Mm: nahi beta u have to go with her n itz an order

Mayank made a sad face n went to get ready .

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Mm: mayank beta jaldi karo na nupur tumhara wait kar rahe hain

M: ha maa bus aa gaya

Mayank came out n both of them left from there . nupur n mayank both were waiting for rickshaw but did not find any. Nupur was walking very fast n mayank had to lterally runing behind her'..

Nupur in her mind :phele itna late kar deya aur abhi itna deehre chal raha hain. Bagwaan kya karo main iska ka? Iske chakar main tho main first lecture bhi miss kar dongi.bagwaan mujhe pata hain peechale janam main maine kuch bura kaam kiya hoga jo ye mere life main aaya

Mayank n his mind: aare ye kini fast chal rahi hain zarror peechale janam main cheetah rahi hogi tabhi tho itna fast chal rahi hain. (he said this by glaring at her which was un noticed by her)

Meanwhile they reached the cllg. Nupur looked at her watch n they were late . they had missed the lecture

N: dekha tumhari vajah se main kitna late ho gayi hoon

M: maine kya kiya?

N: dekha kitna bhoola ban raha hain?tumne hi late kiya aur tumahri vajah se hum first lecture miss kar chuke hain

M: wat?

N: ha

M: tho abh yaha statue of liberty ki tarah khadi kya kar rahi hoon jaana nahi hain nahi tho second lecture bhi miss kraenge?

Saying this he left from there leaving nupur angry

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After the first lecture got over they went in their classes for the second lecture. Mayank catched a seat for himself n then after sum time nupur came who had no option rather then sitting beside mayank coz all the other seats were already reserved, sir enters in'''''.

Students: good morning sir

Sir; good morning

Sir: so class aaj hum apne class main history karenge n before that I wud like to introduce to u all the new student I our cllg "MAYANK SHARMA"(he said pointing towards mayank . mayank stood up)

Sir: mayank hamare cllg ka naya student hain so I would like if u r all help him so how wud like to help him?

No one voluntered to help mayank n seeing this all nupur started gigling there which never went unnoticed by sir

Sir: nupur

N: ye' yes sir

Sir: nupur ye sab main kya dekh raha hoon tum ek acchi student ho aur aise dosro par haste ho shame on u maine tumse ye expect nahi kiya tha? Ab tum hi mayank ko help karogi

N: sir main '''

Sir: ha tum aur agar tumne kuch bahana kiya tho mujhse bura aur koyi nahi hoga

N: okk sir''''..

The bell rang. All the students were getting out as next lecture was cancelled were in nupur was also leaving the class when mayank started laughing . nupur turned back n shouted

N: hey mr sadu zyaada natak mat karo ? main bhi dekhti hoon tum kitne din iss cllg main tikte ho?

M: ha ha dekh lena .

Saying this he left from there

This was chapter 3

Hope u all like it!

Do leave u r comments!

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Edited by ...Mitali... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
it was so mayurish................loved it................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
😆 😆 inki fights kab khatam hongi
although very sweet , n interesting 😆
but fight khatam hogi tabhi toh 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
hmmmm after a long time update mila.......
waise nice update mitali........
next update should be early.....
thnx fr pm...


khushi....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Uff after soo long.....................but nice update as usual cute nok-jhok............update soon plsss.............thnx for pm...........!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
i love their fights. no other couple in the entire world could fight so cutely. loved the update.

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