Memories of My Heart - MN OS Gallery - Page 9

Wao so beautiful So lovely Dear

that was cutest update ever.....when you kept saying "was" i was like you better not have killed mayank or something!.....but the way mayank described his feelings was so beautiful....i was all teary while reading it....and the ending was so cute with their 2 kids reliving their snowball fighting days....thanks for a wonderful story 😊.......naina

This is extra ordinary writing! ishita........i just finished reading four parts together.......& i m speechless......it was so so so beautifully wqritten story! so simple yet so amazing! i absolutely loved it...falling for ur best freind is not a new story , but the way u wrote it made me imagine every single incident that was taking place in the story & sense every single emotion that Nupur was going through......I connected with the story immediately & that was the best part of ur writing!Ur writing to me to a whole new world... i was simply lost in to the words of mayank & nupur.Beautiful!

Excellent ishita.i m already in love with ur FF ...& now u opening this Os gallery made me even happier....i can now look forward to more & more great OS from u!!!!!!!!
ohh it was amazing! thanks a ton ishita...keep writing........& take care🤗
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I was teary eyed when i read mayank's confession.................it was simply heart touching!!!!!!!! a special thanks to u for such awesome confession!

Tthis was really interesting,interesting because you've put some innovative things in it that gave it a fresh flavour. i liked the countdown part very much and the house Mayank bought for Nupur was cute.

ishi di it was such a sweet os i cant tell you.wow i really loved how u started the story....it got me hooked....i read all the 4 parts in one go😃that snowball hitting thing was wayyyy too cute....

and the way you maintained the pace of story..... the feelings of nupur....her first realization....loved it to core😳 you know now i am really liking the whole concept of best friends falling in love after reading your os😳😳😳 thanks a lot di for writing....you really are aa amazing writer😊😊 p.s.sorry for replying so late

Originally posted by: -Faria-

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Ishi congrats for our Mayur OS gallery(Dont b shocked yaar - of course its not only urs- its our gallery- )

A big thanx 4 dedicating it to me and other friends
Love u loads dear.............


Any way finally u updated first part of this OS
U know what at first i copied it and then paste it to MS Word- and i have found the first part become seven and half page---------------------yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i m really veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy happy now-bcoz i alwz love longgggggggggggggggggggggggg FF/OS/SS.

My joys knows no bound.............

Awwwwwwwww what a lovely start dear-u started with a snowy morning- ahhhhhhhh its beautiful na- i hav never seen it i mean practically.
So my lil nups loves to play with snow- She was the only member of her family who was very excited abt it(Hey u also love snow na- and u r the only member of ur family who loves it. baat kya hai bhai. kahi ye tum tou nehi ho na???)

My lil nups wanted play with my sadu mayank but he directly refused her bcoz she is a girl LOL.-BY GOD mayu was fulltush Sadu.

Oyeeeeee Mayu said- he dont want to play with a girl bcoz they cry for every lil thing....

(Ishi itna bada insult............................main tou aise nehi hu- tu hai kya aisa)
OMG nupur got angry and she threw snow towards maynk.(Shabash i mean bravo Nups meri jhansi ki raani)

i loved this line when mayu caught her and smiled at her

""I had even wondered if the snowball had made its way through the ears to your brain and frozen it.""

finally he said sorry to her and they had becme frnd 4ever- hmmmmmmm thats very good.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh no Mayus dad got transferred to California - it means mayur r going to separate.
Ishiiiiiiiiiii wanna kill u sure.

ok let me read next portion(actually i m reading and side by side commenting on it.lol)

Oh GOD both were damn sad- i can understand re.......

i loved the way they were trying to enjoy their last 3 weeks and cherishing all the happy moments
the gift part was very nice

but i loved the part where nups was reminding him abt his promises that he made for her.
awwwwwwww it was too good re- really touching

ohhhhhhhhhh so both them r now professionally successful- but the emptiness is exist b/w them bcoz they didnt meet each other 4 last 5 years.

hmmmmmmmmmm so here is the end of part 1
awesome ishi- mind blowing...........


Now waiting for part 2

(Sorry 4 my messy type comment and for using big size emotions. )

Dedication – No need to thank me for it Fari!! Honestly, I wouldn't have written this OS without all your encouragements! Luv u loads too!! 🤗

Hun, this OS was 21 pages long (checked it just now on MSWord)! I told u when I started I thought it would be like 4 pages max. Even after I talked to u on cc, I never thought it would be more than 12 😆! I'm glad u loved the fact that it was long though!! 😃

Snowy mornings are really a beautiful sight to wake up to! Yes, I love snow but this is definitely not me!!😆 I wanted something to get them together in the beginning!

Yup Mayu is a sadu but he did say sorry..

😆😆😆Yup typical rxn from Nupur…she is not one to just take in insult and be quiet!

U r such a cutie!!

I'm glad u loved the promises part!

"ohhhhhhhhhh so both them r now professionally successful- but the emptiness is exist b/w them bcoz they didnt meet each other 4 last 5 years." – Bingo!!

Luv u too! And I loved the emoticons! 🤗

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

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Yayyy u updated🥳

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loved the first part... it was awesome👏

the snow fight was adorable😳

and their friendship was soooooooooooo cute😳

but what's dis😲

Mayank chala gaya😭

the last month together was so touching... specially the last day... 😭

they didn't want to let go

awesome portrayal of emotions Ishi🤗

thnx for writing and sharing this🤗

Originally posted by: VasanthaArTi

ishu.............. OS gallery...... 😲 😲

woahhhhh

a big RESSSSSSSSSSSSS..... 😃 😛

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ll not write longg...but ll say ..

PERFECT START ishu..... OMGG childhood frends...i so love childhood kahaani...... and that too about two best frends... falling for my best frend.....

i had already told ya how much i liked this part ..... i so wished i have a frend like this.... i mean boy 😉 😆

loved the promise he made to her....

"You are leaving me na Mayank? You promised Mayank that you would always be there for me. You promised we'd go through senior year together. You promised that we would go to the Winter Festival Dance in Grade 12 together. You promised that we would sit together on graduation. You promised we'll go to the same university. You promised." I broke down crying. Like every time I had cried in the past, your hands touched my shoulder.

and yea the special part..when nupur extended her hand and asked him if he would like to be her frend and then his reply and her snow ball throw...... its so mayurish .....

awesome part ishuuuu......👏 👏

thanks for the pm jaana!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

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i thought of commentin here only but will comment afresh......😆😳

congoz fr ur new gallery...🤗

u kno na u r one of my fav writers here! n these osz are way to spl.........i kno....😳😃

congo😳 ok me off to read....😆

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

wow.......new os galary.........waiting for ur update