THE PERFECT PROPOSAL-MONAYA OS UPD PG 3)

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THE PERFECT PROPOSAL


PART 1.......

It was 7 in the evening'.n we can see a guy combing his hair standing infront of the mirror actually he is not combing he is lost in his own thought's

Boy's pov: what will happen today??? Will their will be a yes or n no'.does she actually love me like I do??? Will his proposal make my valentines day more special or the worst'..its the first valentine I will be celebrating with my friends rather than my parents''..

These thoughts were running in the boy's mind '.when someone knoked his room door

"knock knock knock"

"whose there??" he asked

"it's me mohit shweta'"she replied

"ohh di come on in u don't have to knock" mohit said while straighting his shirt collar'..

(Mohit is none other than mohit sehgal n its her di shweta which sanaya mostly mention in their sbs segment)

She came inside the room an was shocked seeing mohit and finally spoke'.

"ohhh someone is looking dashing today huh'..??" she spoke while smiling and looking at him

"ohh I know tht bt thnks fr the compliment di" he said while smiling

"tht ok my sweet bro" n pulled his cheeks while smiling'.

"ohh di don't do that" he said a bit irritated

"ohk ohk so what's d plan today???" she asked while sitting on the bed

"nthng much as u know tomorrow is valentines day so mjht producers have organized a party 'so that we all can be together when it stike 12 n can wish each other ''a a a a a a I mean the guyzz can propose their love infront of everyone" he said wearing his coat n looking at her sis through the mirror

"so r u gonna do vt I said???" she said

"what are u saying di ??? I am nt getting it" looking at her through mirror

"don't be soo sweet mohit u know what i mean???" she said roughly

"di '.what???" he said turning towards her

"r u gonna propose sanaya today or nt????" she said

" diii" he said n sat on the floor putting his hand on her hand n said

"u know I don't knoe what she feel about me '.i don't know wheather she feels the same as I '.u knw na di I don't want to loose our friendship" he said sweetly

"bt atleast u can try please" she said pleading

"di''." He said

"for me please''." She said again

"bt di u know na " he said

She finally gt irritated n gt up n went towards the door as she reached the door she looked back at him n spoke

"mohit this time u better say she might also be in love with u ???u don't know anything'''.please say it this time'..otherwise u will have to regret ur who;e life" she said n left behin a confused mohit

"what di was saying was it true??? Maybe she is right ??? I must talk to her once'..di don't worry I will say it today ''.n this time I will nt delay as today is the perfect day fr expressing my feeling fr sanaya'..my love'.." he thought n looked at himself he was looking very hot and sexy ''..he wore a black shirt with a red simple shirt with a black coat with his hairs falling on his head made him look more n more adorable''.he looked at himself in mirror n thought

"ny bad mohit urf mr.samrat shergill''..today is ur day" n he had a glance at his watch which stoke 9 p.m n he was shocked

"nw rush fast me.mohit otherwise sanaya will kill u " he thought n ran towards his car n rush off to sanaya's place''..

"now we can see a home beautifully decorated n awesome interiors but something was happening here don't know???me too lets have a look"

A girl was walking here n there n was constantly mumbling in herself n looking at her watch n was thinking

"was does he think of himself its quarter pas 9 n he is still nt here what does he thing am I depended on him hah if he thinks this then he is wrong '.bt he mst be stuck up in some problem ''god knows"

Her mother who was sitting on the sofa was constantly looking at her n was trying to study her mind bt could nt so finally broke the silence

"what happened sanaya??" she asked

"nthing mom" she replied with a sigh

"u can tell me beta''" she asked

" mom u know its quarter past 9 n mohit has still nt arrived'.the party was of 8 n nw it was 9:15 n he is still nt here I was soo excited to be ther bt he made my excitement vanished away" she replied

"so what's d matter ??u can call him n ask him nt to pick u up" she said calmly

"what ??? what did u jst said mom???"she asked with a question mark in her face

" I was saying beta u can ask mohit to reach the venue directly n u cn go with our driver???" she answered

" ya I mst call him '..bt wait'..mom I can't say no to him" she asid

"n why so???" she asked while lifying up her one eyebrow

"mom u know mohit is such a sweet guy he asked me for the lift so sweetly'n moreover I enjoy going with him cause he make me feel so special tht I love being with him always" she said lost in his thoughts n saw her mother's face who was smiling

"mom what??" she asked

" are u in love with him???"she asked

" me '.in love '.no mom'." She replied confusingly

"then why do u like mohit n prefer to stay with him alwayzz beta???" she asked

"its jst because I like being with him'.i like his company'..i mean he is a perfect guy'.." she said

"n what is all this??" her mother asked

"friendship mom we r jst good friends''" sanaya replied

" I think u r denying to understand ur feelings beta u know n I know how much u r fond of mohit'..n u know u r in love with him''"she said smiling'

"I don't know mom I can't understand the feeling mom"she said finally giving up

"beta u will soon" she said smiling

N soon her phone rang n so here is the one sided conversation

"hello" she said

"oh u r here'." Said being excited

"ya I am ready"with a smile

"jst in 2 mins" she said cutting her phone

"mom I must go mohit is here waiting fr me" she said

"ok beta enjoy"she said

"ya mom b bye n love u " said while hugging her

She quickly went down n finally gt his white skoda waiting fr her she could see him listening the song n moving his head n patting his fingers on the handle oh his car she smiled at his behaviour n went towards the opened the door towards the driver's seat n sat besides him she was lost in him he ws looking soo adorable

"hi'.."he said smiling

"hi" she replied

"u r looking stunning today sanaya" he said lost in her beauty

" thanks n u too r looking damn hot I mst say" said while blushing

"ohh thnk u mam so ready for the party???" he asked

" ya fr sure" she said smiling

"so here we go'.."

N they went towards the party destination

(so guyzz here was my os on sanaya still incomplete as I was getting short of time I did'nt updated the rest bt will do it tomorrow I hope u all will like it its my first attempt to write n os on monaya so I hope u all like it finger's crossed)

Love

surabhi

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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOw!!!!! It's lovely!
Written vey well! Do write more!
P.S.-Mohit's sister's name is Shivani..not Shweta :D
Edited by Palak.MS - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Palak.MS

WOw!!!!! It's lovely!

Written vey well! Do write more!
P.S.-Mohit's sister's name is Shivani..not Shweta :D

THNX FR TELLING SHWETA I WS RATHER CONFUSED REGARDIN D NAME....BT NAAM MAIN KYA RKHA HAI...WELL THNX FR LIKING IT...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the PM. Loved the OS........you are doing a good job. Do write more OS's dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really cute
very nice
plzzzz continue 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Monaya os
it was awesome dear.
Plssss continue soon.
& ya do write more os u r just amazing writer.
Thanx for pm me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was Awesome,cute OS............gr8 job.........do write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi...
very nice os...
plz cont it soon...
want 2 read hw he proposes her...
thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow!!!!!!! Well done dear.
wat an os ,just luvd it.
it ws awsm, mindblwing,totaly rcking.
do cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey surbhi it was seriously wonderful part loved it now can't wait for next part of this OS and thanks for pm hon 😳

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