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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: TheWandmaker
No Adi! it was just a moment thing, u dont need to..!!
nyways its a lovely piece of work, i particularly love the description n the style of narration...glad u shared it here🤗

but as you said the credit shud go to the author na! I wanted to write something on supernatural and fantasy..So I asked Lea n she eagerly asked me to borrow this part so that from here I can continue the next one! she ended with Gunjan gone and Samrat still waiting fr his true love..but as I have to extend, I made Sam determined to search for Gunjan!😉

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

but as you said the credit shud go to the author na! I wanted to write something on supernatural and fantasy..So I asked Lea n she eagerly asked me to borrow this part so that from here I can continue the next one! she ended with Gunjan gone and Samrat still waiting fr his true love..but as I have to extend, I made Sam determined to search for Gunjan!😉

Yes definitely, u mentioned in a note na, thts more than enuf :D

n i saw the footnote now, yes u should continue, n i guess now when i check the title 'Dreams come true' m glad tht u r giving it a happy ending! xDD

Do cont soon, m excited to knw wat next..!

Thanks for the PM🤗

PS: Tell ur frnd she's an amazing writer!! Just like u, n tell her to write more!! xDD

Luv

Zee

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VRITIKA

@karantakiar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Hey dear it ws simply rcking.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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XDevilsDesireX

@XDevilsDesireX

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

OMGGG RESS you finally wrote it.I was sooooo waiting for this 😍 😍Thanks Angel 🤗Will unres soon😳

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Ady I simply have no words left after reading this Heart-touching OS 👏 👏 .What I really loved the most is the Description abt the Nature ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.It was written in such a beautiful way that I can simply imagine Him in such a Lovely place 😍 😍.So after reading this I got the idea that Sam had been abandoned by his friends and is wandering in the countryside 😒 searching and luking for his true love that his Creator had promised him 😳.

And Gunjan,s presence in that park attracted him instantly 😳.He was so mesmerised in her beauty but more than beauty,he was more into her gentleness and calmness which he had hardly found in other ladies.At first,she was simply scared becuz of his apperence but then they started having a convo with eachother ever so comfortably and discussed all their sadness with eachother.

It seems that She is suffering becuz of her husband and she shared this pain with him,though he was a stranger but still she did as they both faced the same pain yet different situations.And Am very sure that you have planned a nice upcoming part for us as the ending lines were enough for my excitement 😳.Do cont soon Ady 😃and Yes thank you sooooo much for starting this OS🤗 🤗and you knew that how much eagerly I was waiting for this one 😳

Edited by -BlueFairy- - 14 years ago