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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

iot was such a sweet os

i just dont know wat to say

nupurs excitement n nervousness

mayank making up vows on his own

every thing was perfect

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MAYURIKTA

@MAYURIKTA

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#182

hey what do i tell you manjari... Love u man!!! Thanx a lot for making a mayur ka OS... GOD!!! i cant biliv it.. 1 suggestion, u could make it a lil more cuter... More of english dialogues. The essence of mayur was kinda missing, BUT GR8 TRY YAAR!!! BTW IF I HAVE FORGOTTEN TO TELL U, I HAD LOVED YOUR 1ST VM ON SAJAN....

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan
iot was such a sweet os
i just dont know wat to say

nupurs excitement n nervousness

mayank making up vows on his own

every thing was perfect

Hey !! Thanks soooooo much!

Im glad u likedd it! My first try!

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: MAYURIKTA
hey what do i tell you manjari... Love u man!!! Thanx a lot for making a mayur ka OS... GOD!!! i cant biliv it.. 1 suggestion, u could make it a lil more cuter... More of english dialogues. The essence of mayur was kinda missing, BUT GR8 TRY YAAR!!! BTW IF I HAVE FORGOTTEN TO TELL U, I HAD LOVED YOUR 1ST VM ON SAJAN....

Hey! Thanks for ur comments!

Well.. maybe.. But there were no dialogues hunnie..

I was just explaining in english..

Hindi thodaa weak hai! LOL!

but next time will try writing in hindi!!

Ok?

Thanks!

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#185

congratsssss on ur os gallery manjiiii
i'l def read ol ur os n cmnt..bt gv me sumtym dear

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr
congratsssss on ur os gallery manjiiii
i'l def read ol ur os n cmnt..bt gv me sumtym dear

yeaah richa! sure take ur time!!!! Thanks!😃😉

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XDevilsDesireX

@XDevilsDesireX

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#187

Manjari Superbbbbbbb Oses dear okay 1st am going to comment for heartbroken

The way you described their emotions of samrat during the the time of heartbreak was just Perfectttt 👍🏼and Gunajn supporting him during this situation 😳It was a Beauuuuutiful OS yet touchy and heartbreaking 😭I lireally had tears while reading this one 😭.But Must say Manjari it was an Awesome OS and the ending was really painful but you penned it very nicely ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

The thoughts of being a father

Well I really loved reading this one and it was an adorable OS and I loved reading the feelings of Samrat as a to-be-father 😳 ⭐️.His thoughts about his children was sooooo Cute 😍 😳.and the ending scene was Just perfect and glad to see that his wish came true 😃.Reallly Nice work Dear and cont soon 😳

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: -BlueFairy-
Manjari Superbbbbbbb Oses dear okay 1st am going to comment for heartbroken
The way you described their emotions of samrat during the the time of heartbreak was just Perfectttt 👍🏼and Gunajn supporting him during this situation 😳It was a Beauuuuutiful OS yet touchy and heartbreaking 😭I lireally had tears while reading this one 😭.But Must say Manjari it was an Awesome OS and the ending was really painful but you penned it very nicely ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

The thoughts of being a father

Well I really loved reading this one and it was an adorable OS and I loved reading the feelings of Samrat as a to-be-father 😳 ⭐️.His thoughts about his children was sooooo Cute 😍 😳.and the ending scene was Just perfect and glad to see that his wish came true 😃.Reallly Nice work Dear and cont soon 😳

Hey Ashy! thanks alot...!!!

Im soo glad u enjoyed the OSes!

and yeah... Heart-broken actually made my heart heavy while writing because i cud feel everything gunjan felt at that time..!

Im glad u liked my first OS!

and Thoughts of being a father! that was just because everyone told me to write something happy.. because I usually write alot of pain! (I can express that better😉) so thats why wrote this for them!

But thanks alot!

Ur comments mean alot to me =))