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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear it was short but sweet part and best of luck for ur exams hon and can't wait for samrat manao mission and thanks for pm do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow palak

awsome part
loved it
cont soon
love
tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey palak ...though it was a short part but really amazing part loved it OMGGG how can someone wont fall in love wid my boy😲 😲 😆 but not to worry....awww Gunji vld surely fall for him sooner or later....aftr all he is jst unresistable☺️☺️😉 awwwiiee precap sounds interesting do continue soon n Best of Luck for ur exams! 😳

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IISHAFS thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was niceee its hamraaz kind of ff but awesome i hope soon sajan will get together i want gunjan to get mayank really truth

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the PM Palak...............loved the start...........but Gunjan thinking all this about Samrat😔..........but would love to read how Gunjan realises her love for Sammy boy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
IMP NOTE-----

HIII GUYS M BACK
BUT JUST TO BID A TEMPORARY BYE..😭
I HAVE TO TAKE LEAVE FROM THIS FORUM TILL 18TH MARCH😡😆
AS MY BOARDS LL FINISH ON THIS DAY...😉
I LL SOON COME BACK N CONT SOON WITH ALL MY FFS
I M FEELING SOO BADD RITE NOW...SOO😭
ALL OF U PLZ TAKE CARE
❤️I L REALLY MISS ALL MY FRIENDS ESPECIALLY❤️
KARANTIAKAR
MULAN
SAMRATROCKS
AASHIZIN
HIIIIII
SWANIA_1
SWANIA_2
AND MANY OTHERS AS WELL...

SOO PLZ TAKE CARE
I LL MAKE A COMEBACK SOON



LOVE U ALL
PALAK😊
KEEP SMILING

P.S--PLZ DO SEND ME THE PM OF UR FFS..I LL READ THEM N PAKKA COMMENT ON THEM WHEN I COME BACK..PLZ DONT FORGET TO SEND ME A PM OTHERWISE I LL RILY FEEL BAD..N INOE U GUYS WONT DISAPPOINT ME😳
Edited by mohit_rockstar - 14 years ago
SwaNia_2 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
All the best , Palak.👍🏼...........do well in your boards.
IISHAFS thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
its ok Palak take your time good luck your with your boads exams
karantakiar thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh palak m going to miss u too sW*Hrt.
all d best for ur xamz.
n plz plz if u get d time plz scrap or msg me swty.
jus giv ur xamz rckingly. i wish dat u wil top in ur all xamz..
luv u
wid best wishes
lots of hug
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys i ve written an os for u all before leaving..i hope u like it
plz doo give long comments
i ll c it and pakka comment later...

thanks
DOORIYAN

A couple taking a walk along the beach side were remisniscing there past…

And as they wre remembering the waves hit the rocks and some touched their feet and some wnt back again…

Boy said to the girl

Yaad hain hum yahi pehli baar mile the..

Haan mujhe yaad hai par kis tarah mile the yaad hain?girl said while giggling..

The boy said hasi aa rahi hain naa tumhe abhi bataata hoon..and he started running after her…

God in the sky started to smile and then rewinded…

5years back

at the beach there was a party goin on..ppl in their swimsuits were having fun n some were just basking..some played games and some sat like ideals…

a girl was taking a drink wen some1 pushed her and her drink fell down on her pretty white chiffon gown..

the boy saw her n was left amused..she was the most elegant being he had ever seen in his life…

he went ahead to touch her..her milky skin..bt before that that boy tasted the flavour of her hand…

THUDDDDD…A SLAP on his face

Every1 turned and looked shocked..

How any1 cld possibly slap him..

Girls ouldnt resist him n by seeing him girls started smiling..

N the slapper was also a girl..he guessed,..oh yeah

Shes different

She is angelic

Ahe is beautiful

She is CHASHMISH

I LIKE THAT NAME..NICE NAME HUH?

Hii chashmish

The girl looked shocked…

Her pov—

I don't believe this..i ve seen many guys of his kind bt nt as shameless as this 1…

And on top of that he is making fun of me?how dare he?

He deserves another slap

Noo wait y d hell m I thinking abt him soo much?

Hes not worthy of that..

Just ignore dear…

He s a big crap

She came out of her world

And that boy was still waiting for hr reply

Chashmish?

Nooo don't call me by that name?

If u cant tell me ur real name then I have to do this only naa..winkin his eyes..

I cant believe this guy..he is such a..wateva

I must b get goin..

Bt wen I left something holed me back..

And I knew that guy was again gonna ake fun of me

I turned back and saw that my dress was stuck with his watch?

U did this purposely didn't u?

And many started laughing

I felt soo bad

I just wothdrew and left with tears in my eyes..

Boys pt of view---

Heyy was she crying?

Why?

Did I hurt her?

Noo i wasn't at fault..then he understood as he kept on remembering her eyes..

Ohh crap—shes soo sensitive..

I must ask forgiveness from her..yess

Bt wait..dude r u crazy..u have never said a soory even to ur mom

And 4 this girl u ll be sayong sorry?

Nooo ways..i m not..hmphh..let her cry..shes not my anything..y d hell?

And then after that both of them didn't meet and departed their ways

After 4 years they again met in a friends marriage by the same way

Bt the slap was nt there

There were just tears

And she said "tum mera peecha kab chodoge?"

He looked into her eyes and said to himself "dude she not been able 2 forget u..even u ve not been able 2 forget her..

U always c her in ur dreams

And in the back grnd this music was played

- (Love Theme From "Titanic")

Every night in my dreams (they remember how they met)
I see you. I feel you. (their first touch)
That is how I know you go on.

Far across the distance (wen both if them departed)
And spaces between us (the distance created in course of time)
You have come to show you go on.

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on (they remember how much they missed each other)
Once more you open the door (how they used to open d door thinking it must b him/her)
And you're here in my heart (disappointed going back n visauling faces)
And my heart will go on and on (then smiling)

Love can touch us one time (both of them again part ways)
And last for a lifetime (they feel their touch as their hand touch)
And never go till we're one

Love was when I loved you (tears r flowing continuously)
One true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on (they r pulled in 4 a dance)
Once more you open the door (rays of hope r seen)
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on (they r conversing thru their eyes)

There is some love that will not
go away (they r coming closer)

You're here, there's nothing I fear, (the boy wipes her tears..girl closes her eyes)
And I know that my heart will go on (and both hug each other)
We'll stay forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

the song is over girl…

the girl opens her eyes and fiinds no1 beside her and says u r rily mad

and starts moving

wne I voice stops her

noo u r not

she turns back

she sees that boy

who kneels dwon

and says sorry

the girl

says

its ok..couldnt u say this earlier?

I m sorry..my ego came in b/w…I m sorry

Its ok…

They both hold their hands and start walking

The boy stops and kneels down

I love u chashmish

The girl picks him up

And asks what?

I love u

I fell in love with u at the first sight

Bt these distances made me realize that I m in love with u

Do u feel the same as me?

A pause

Yes I doo..u idiot…

Couldn't u say this earlier

How I have lived these 4 years I only know..

Only with a hope 2 c u

The boy smiled and said these dooriyan only bought us close noo?

The girl nodded and both hugged each other

And kissed each others's lips softly

And left…for their destination which was one….

I love u samrat

I love u 2 chashmish..samrat said after gettibg hold of her and both hugged each other n remembered their times spent together..

God smiled and said "MADE FOR EACH OTHER"and went to his lavishly chambr looking out for such love stories which was pure…


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i hope u all liked it..plz do comment and let me now if u all liked it..i ll b glad u noe ur views

bye for the final time

love u all

palak

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