Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149 - Page 17

Originally posted by: achoose

everything is ur wish dear..v trust u..and v r sure that u will do justice to mayur.....

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

Originally posted by: stuti123

ishita dear ......i loving the pace at which u r writing the story its not all boring .........infact i am loving the way ur writing it.......you need not go fast at all.............nd the imagination with which u r writing i am loving it ..........a mixture of romance nok jhok cute ,caring scenes ............i am loving all this ...........so do let ur imagination run free ....all i would want to request for is plz do update soon .........it becomes really difficult to wait for the next part u write soo well...........

Originally posted by: Ishita16

Hello Everyone,

First of all, Thank you all so much for your immense support and encouragement.

Secondly, Sorry if u thought I had posted the next part. I have written about half of it but then I had this question I wanted to ask my readers.

Question: I know the last two parts has been going at snail's pace and if anyone got bored, I'm really sorry. As a Mayur fan, I wanted some Mayur moments and some clearing up as to what other characters in the story are doing/reason behind their absence. So that's what I've been trying to do in the last two parts and the one I'm writing at the moments. After a couple of more parts, I'll move the story a little faster. However, I'm really curious as to what is expected from my readers. Do u want me to go at a faster speed and show important moments in their life or do u want me to also show some day-to-day fights/romance/routines/etc? Please do send me a pm/post a reply here. Thank you for your input.

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan

i loved the second part

also i feel that the scenes should show day to day fights romance masti n nok jkok n routines

it feels nice n personally i love reading such ffs

also plz do pm me when u update the next part

luv

shruti

Hey Ishita, well you are doing full justice to MN as character wise, I mean i can see that you have tried very hard to keep them same as they were in the show and that is what i LOVE most about your story. And the pace is fine as long as we are not stuck on the same nok jhoks for 3 - 4 updates😆 i hope you understand what i mean, I want something different to be showed here what we never got to see through MJHT. The true MN, Mayank who is responsible yet loving and Nupur is just out of this world. In MJHT we always had mayank questioning Nupurs at some point at any other and in the end the CVs just wavered off the suspicous as if it were some joke? I mean i would have loved to see Mayank realizing his mistake and truly saying to her he trusts...even more than himself?

Anyway i'm going off point here, just want to say the pace is okay as long as you keep moving the story ....with MN😛

Sajjal

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

Anyway i'm going off point here, just want to say the pace is okay as long as you keep moving the story ....with MN😛

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

superb update.

it was awesome.continue soon.

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

Hey Ishita, well you are doing full justice to MN as character wise, I mean i can see that you have tried very hard to keep them same as they were in the show and that is what i LOVE most about your story. And the pace is fine as long as we are not stuck on the same nok jhoks for 3 - 4 updates😆 i hope you understand what i mean, I want something different to be showed here what we never got to see through MJHT. The true MN, Mayank who is responsible yet loving and Nupur is just out of this world. In MJHT we always had mayank questioning Nupurs at some point at any other and in the end the CVs just wavered off the suspicous as if it were some joke? I mean i would have loved to see Mayank realizing his mistake and truly saying to her he trusts...even more than himself?

Anyway i'm going off point here, just want to say the pace is okay as long as you keep moving the story ....with MN😛

Sajjal