Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Payal-15

Amazing 1st part Ishita👏

u wrote so well...Thanks for sharing!!!!😃

Originally posted by: vincikhurana

wondeful update...........!!!!waiting fr a new one .........

Originally posted by: -moona-

wow very nice part..

very very sweet and romantic part...

mithai wali kiss....☺️

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey Ishita
beautiful update dear
mayur and shilpa aunty convo was vey nice
and then mayur romantic rain scene was just awesome
beautifully written Ishi
loved it so much
keep it up

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

hey ishita!

awesome update dear...seriously.......

ur potrayin mr. n mrs sharma😳 really well.......

the mornin scene d clinic n d terrace......amazing

full of love care passion n tatally mayurish!

ur a great writer!

do cont really soon.....n thnx for d pm!😳

Originally posted by: mulan.

awww........ toooo goood ishita!!!!!!!!!
i am reading u for the first time and i must say u write so well!!!! 😊
thanks for the pm!!!!!! :)

Originally posted by: ruexangel

omggg, totally awesome!!

you made us wait soo long, but it was worth it!

all the care and love of Mayur is totally there!

and you fullfilled so many mayurians wishes too, Maa's presence, rain scene, and then cute little unexpected scenes, so awesome!! continue soon

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

amazing update

loved caring mayank n sweet nupur....

loved mayur n maa convo

soooooo romantic n caring...beautiful written

cont soon dear n tnx fr pm

Originally posted by: achoose

beautifully written..awesome..............................

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

awwwwwwwwwwww...it was to sweet, dam romantic.n i was all lost....lovely part of shilpa anty too...evrythng was so gr8

the sadu part...the rain..the guilt...i just loved it