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ginny munjal

@ginny09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

wow kya freeze point dhoonda hai aage ka jaldi update karo......................

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

omg keep continuing i wanna c dis all in mjht specially nupur in white sari again bt i knw da mahan cvs dey r nt gonna show any single bit of it instaed dey wud show a sajda song seq again n wud wind up mayur's track n wud start sajan's story as dey always do injustice wid our angel mayur😡

loving evry bit of it

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

awesome part!!!
it was superb...
plzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

OMG Mehak!!!!!!!!!
Part 8...freakingly awesum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
pls update soon & pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv ya!🤗

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Thank u guys...🤗

PART 9:

Nupur stood exactly in front of mayank...and he was just looking at her captivating beauty..

N..mayank...

M..uh..haan...

She was very nervous, even her voice was shaking..

N..main kaisi lag rahi hon..

Mayank's eyes shone like stars...HOW BEAUTUFUL SHE WAS LOOKING??..he himself didnt had the answer,...he just held her hand and said..

M..chalo,..late ho rahe hain...

Nupur was afraid, although she was comforted that mayank was with her but still she was so used to her small paradise...which was just like dreams...waking up early, mayank leaving for work and then she loved waiting for him and all those lovely moments but this was something she always wanted to aviod..

Mayank was driving silently...he knew that his paradise was dream like...but if dreams are not confronted with reality then they break,and he wanted nupur to live in a dream while facing the reality....he dint want her to break gain..

They reached the restraunt....as expected it was full of people...they were happy, all of them enjoying there time, no sign of confusion or problem, nupur remebered that once she was also like them, care free and jolly, but now..

M..nupur..

Mayank's vioce made her come out of her thoughts..

N..haan..

M..tu tum kia banane wali thi ghr pe...woi order karte hain...

Nupur told her the name and mayank orderd, they were wiating for their order and nupur was admiring all the peole in the restraunt..SHE LANGED THEIR CONFIDENCE..

M..nupur kia deh rahi ho..

N..sab kitne khush hai mayank..

M..sab mtllb?..tum khush nai ho?..

N..nahi mera mtlb hai k sab aisey mtlb..

M..nupur ye sab bilkul tumhari tarah hai,.aur in main aisa kuch hai hai jo tum wish karo k kash tumhre pass bhi hota..

Nupur had a tiny tear in her eyes...mayank saw it,..

M..aur sab se barh kar tu tumhare pas merey jaisa pati hai..

He said it in a naughty manner, puffing his collar..

This brought a smile on her face, but she was serious

N..haan..waqai....merey pas tumhare jaisa pati hai...sab ki aisay kismat nahi hoti...

M..nupur plz...ab itni serious mat ho..

Their order arrived..

M..dehan se khana..ghr pe bilkul asiey hi bani chaiye..

N..thek hai,...phir ghr pe itna mahnga bill bhi pay kar dena...

They both gave it a laugh and enjoyed thir dinner with teasing each other...

They were about to leave when some one called from behind..

MAYANK SHARMA!!

They both turned..

M..oh!...gaurav..hi...

He went forwArd to the person and shook hands with him..

G..long time yar..bhol gaye mujhe?

M..arey tumhe kaise bhol sakta hon....

Gaurav looked ta nupur and mayank thought that he should introduce him...

M..gaurav ye..

G..let me guess...nupur?..

Nupur smiled weakly..

M..yes..

G..OH MY MY!..ab samjh ayi k tu kisi aur larke ki taraf ku nai dekhta tha....she is beautiful...

H ld his hand forward to nupur, she was a bit confused and she hesitaed but then she did shook hands with him..

N..thank you..

M.. mumbai kab aye?..

G..pechle hafte, aur kal main aur meri wife wapis US ja rahe hain..

M..wife?,tum ne shaadi kar li..wow..congrats...kis se ki?..

G..well agr meri wife se milna hai tu chalo , isey restraunt k party hall main meri shaadi ki party chal rahi hia..chalo...

M...reception?

G..sort of, bus mumbai k friends k liye di hai..ar tum bhi mil gaye...chalo..

Mayank looked at nupur, she was hesitating..

G..main hall mian ja raha hon, 5 miniute main a jao...and no excuses..be quick..

Mayank asked nupur...

M..chalen?..

N..um..mayank..wo

M..nupur bus thori dair..mera bht acha dost hai..agr tumhe thek nai lage ga tu wapis a jayen gey...plz thori dair

Although nupur wasnt comfprtable at all, but she agreed..Both of them wnt to the hall, and as they entered gaurav welcomed the.m.

G..chalo main tumhe apni wife se milwata hin...

He took them inside...

G..payal dekho kaun aya hai..

A modern fair girl wearing a knee lengyh gown turned and almost screamd..

P..ahhhh...MAYANK SHARMA...OMG!!...

She literally ran toward sher and hugged maynk...Mayank himself was surpridsed to see payal, he was bit embarrased by her hug, but he knew she was like this, he hugged her back..

P..i dont belive this..wow gaurav..tum is se acha gift nai de sakte they mujhe...

She kissed mayank on his cheek...

Nupur was standing there and amazed to her utmost heights...

HUG AND THEN KISS!...

and most of all MAYANK WAS SMILING!...she coudnt speak a word..

M..i dont belive this payal..tum ne shaadi kar li..wo bhi gaurav se...

P..dont wrry mayank, mujhe bhi abhi tak yakken nai ho raha...

Both of them laughed, then mayank was aaout to introduce her to nupur whe she said..

P...wait a minite..is she nupur?..

Mayank knodded with a smile..

P..OH DAMN!...U ARE BEAUTIFUL...

she hugged nupur also...nupur was so shocked...

P..ab samjha ayi k tum ne mujhe reject ku kiya?..

Nupur was amzaed at her staement..and most of all at the sight that MAYNK WAS AGAIN SMILING!...

Mayank saw nupur amzaed expression, he was about to say something when gaurav spoke up..

G..nupur is se pehle k ap kuch ghalat socho..real story hai k main maynk aur payal US main class fellows they..hum ne ik sath MBA kiya tha..aur payal ko mayank pe bht bara crush tha...

Payal interupted..

P..tha ka kia mtlb hai...abhi bhi hai... i love mayank..

She pulled mayank's cheeks...

Nupur was furthur amazed or rather she was JEALOUS..MAYANK WAS AGAIN SMILING!....

G..ok abhi bhi hai..per hamre mayank tu ik number k devdas type they..kisi ko dekhtey nai they...aur payal ka dil torr diya unhon ne aur phir payal ne mujhe choose kar liya...thank u mayank..

M..oh come on gaurav, mujhe tu pehle hi pata tha k tum dono ik dosre k liye ho, kitni special frinedship thi tum dono ki..i am really happy for both of u..

Nupur was quiet in all this..Gaurav and payal excused them for a momenet, as one of their friends called them..

N..mayank ye..

M..nupur relax..ye dodno US main bare hoye hian, is liye itne open hain..

N..haan phir bhi..payal dekho tu..kaise tum se..aur tum ho k enjoy kar rahe ho..

Mayank laughed..

M...oh God nupur, tum jealous feel kar rahi ho?..

Nupur got confused...

M..wasie tum ghr pe kia poch rahi thi k tum kaisi lag rahi ho?

Nupur was shy...

M..tu main tumhe bata don k tum ik sapne ki tarah khobsorat lag rahi ho..

Nupur was blushing..she changed the topic

N.. ye dono mujhe kaise jante hian?..inhon ne mujhe kaise pehchana?..

M..Nupur tum abhi bhi un dono main atki ho...

N..batao na..

M..nupur jo mujhe janta hai wo tumhe bhi janta hai...

Maynk looked at he rand this was mayank's quality, no matter what happened, his one staement made her forget everthing..

N..nahi lekin jab tum US gaye tab tu mtlb tumhe lagta tha k main marr

M..nuur plz..main ne tumhare liye kabhi ye lafz use nai kiya...and aur na hi kisi ko bataya tha... main kehta k tum merey pass nai ho..lekin sath zaror ho.

Mayank's words were penetrating into nupur's soul..HE LOVED HER SO MUCH...

Payal came from behind..

P..i am back!..ok mayank now tell me, tum nupur se bht pyar karte ho ..is k tu victim main hon...

Mayank smiled..

P..per tum dono door ku they..tum ne kabhi nai bataya

This made nuur very confused...very much...her lips trembeld and she was feeling embarrased that what would maynk tell..

M..pata nai, bus door they, ab phir se sath hain..

P..Oh God..mayank and his innuendos..tum kabhi apne dil ki baat share nai karte ho..

M.payal tum phir se...

Gauarv came from behind..

G..mayank chalo main tumhain kuch friends se milwata hon..

M..nupur mai ata hon..

Nupur was again a bit confused..Payal was very strongly observing her,

P..nupur u are fine?.

N..haan...

P..pata hai mayank was the most handsome person in the whole university..itni larkiyan thi is k pxche..lekin jaldi hi mashoor ho gaya k mayank married hai..sab k dil toot gaye..mera bhi..

Nupur smiled..

P..wo tum se bht pyar karta hai..aur main witness hon...tum ku door chali gayi thi us se?..

Nupur looed at mayank and ters dwelled in her ees...Payal sensed that she had volumes to speak, but coudnt...It semed as if nupur wanted to talk to mayank but couldnt..there ws something holding her back....She was struck with an idea..

P..nupur chalo..

She took with her..

Mayank after sometime was looking for nupur in the hall, he found that she was sitting on a table at the corner...he went there,..

M..nupur chalo chalte hain...

She looked at him with an almost striaght expresssion..mayank sensed something wrong..

He came close to her..

M..nupur...

He sudenly looked at the 5 glasses on her table..he picked one of them and smelled...

M..OH GOD!..ye tum ne piye hain?..

Nupur knodded like innocent children..

M..oh no..NUPUR TUM NASHE MAIN HO?..

nupur signaled him to bring his ear...mayank put forward his ear and epected that nupur will say something gently BUT SHE SHOUTED IN HIS EAR!..

N..HAAN!!..

Mayank put his hand on his ear..it hurted him..

Nupur stood on the chair and said in a loud jubilent vioce

N..haan main nashe main hon!!..

Next she stepped on the table and held her arms wide open and shouted in a very happy and jolly vioce..

N...NUPUR BHUSHAN SHARMA IS DRUNK!!...

and Mayank was shocked out of his wits!..

do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

mehak i just finshed reading part 8 nd 9 both were amazing .............so nupur is drunk .......... aww cant wait to readwat happens next ........ you are amazing writer mahek ............

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

woow..thalli nupur...cant wait to read more.................................

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

wow Mehak.. phirse Talli Nupur... ab mazaa aayega

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

omg!nupurz drunk!wooooow!

lots gonna happen! wow!

eagerly waitin for part 10!

do update soon!!

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Mehak...please continue the next part today😆😆 Please Please Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😆😆

I really want to read what happens next...a drunk Nupur...OMGGGGGGGG😆😆😆

You write beautifully😃😃

Loved it and thanks for the pm once again😃😃

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