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hi everyone
this is my 2nd os
my 2 of friends has request me 2 write on os on mayur
so i m writing it for them
also if u wanna check out my first os
its here: its on SaJan
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1484234
okay now lemme start with this OS
so this OS is a bit different, in this os nupur is telling her own story, n mayank n nupur knows each other from their childhoon, but the problem which stays here is nupur is a month older than mayank, n mayank is middle class, n nupur is rich, but dont worry will deff give u guyx happy ending😃 😆
starting:
it was raining, i was so happy, the rain was falling on my silky hair as golden dimes.
it was fun to do rainy dance that night, so is always
n a boy was crossing the street, stop suddenly when he looked @ me
n lukin worry by thinking now nupur has become old, its her age to get marry, yes she is 18, but i love her a lot, no one can else love her the most, but of course it's not my luck to get marry with her, n the day she will b getting marry, it will b the day i will die!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
i was getting wet in rain, n now its stop
--XX--XX--XX
continue
rain has stop, there is a sadness on my face like a bracelet without shining
not because rain has gone, but because with rain all my last memories has gone, which was with a boy from my childhood, named mayank, use to get wet in rain together, like rain falls on both of us as it's all the flowers are falling on us...huh!! unbelievable!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
it was mayank, who was keep looking @ nupur, n thinking the same thing
--XX--XX--XX
continue
now suddenly nupur has seen mayank
nupur screams mayank (2) lets do rain dance together (2)
by hearing word "together" mayank is saying, i wish it will b for whole life
but anyway mayank has come to me, start rain dance, n now rain has start
i got happy, as my all memories has come back!! ohh yes they did!!
n now raining is falling on both of them as love
mayank is very to happy to see my words for him, like be never happy before that much!!
i always wanted to share my feelings with mayank
like what i feel for him, it was my love, but m a month older than him, so he probably have never looked @ me as his love, m sure he has never feel anything for me except a friendship from childhood, than how come its me feeling all this!!
n mayank is keep looking @ me, n dancing with me
n thinking how cum i can have all this love feeling for nupur, even she is just taking me just as a good friend, as i can never take our relationship like that!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
the things that i have think in the last part, its telling me that being rich is not good @ all, but mayank is all the way opposite
--XX--XX--XX
continue
mayank is still dancing with me, making me feel awesome, as its my lucky day of life
while dancing mayank is thinking i never knew that a rich person can only marry with rich person, for example nupur, she can never like a middle class person as her husband!!
n @ the same time, i was thinking that being rich is very bad, rich people alwayz gets what they like, if even that thing belongs to them or not!!, for example me, i m rich i buy everything i want, but i cant but mayank, but i want him, n i know i will tell him that, but its on him if he will say yes or no to me, i cant force mayank to be mine!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
i have tell u reason that y being rich was a bad thing for me!!
--XX--XX--XX
continue
now i can't live without him, he is like a golden ticket for me, that can not everyone get, n if i will not tell him all this about love, than all the words will stay in my heart as they are now!!, n in my future, i will end up by saying at least once i have try to tell mayank all the feeling i have in my heart for me, even it will not hurt me more if mayank will say no about this, but at least i can try!!
@ the same time mayank is thinking, i will never tell nupur that i love her more than my life, cuz it might hurt her, n i cant see that!!
n now what i decide to do m doing that now
suddenly i stop dancing
mayank: what happen?? y u stop??
me: cuz i cant control over my feelings, that are killing me inside
mayank: sorry??
me: i love u mayank, i know ur answer will alwayz no, but i m rich, i cant control over my feelings, n that is what so bad about being rich
mayank: than u must b the lucky cuz ur rich
me: what?? i dont get it
mayank: i luv u too, n if u will not b rich u have never saying this 3 words to me
n we both smile, hug each other n now after a month we r married😳
hope u all lyk it
sorry i know its a bit bad, but its only my 2nd one, n it will improve with the tym😳
P.S: all my readerz, the age problem i made in this os, is cuz just to tell all of u that there is no age in love or after😃 love is only love😳
this is my 2nd os
my 2 of friends has request me 2 write on os on mayur
so i m writing it for them
also if u wanna check out my first os
its here: its on SaJan
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1484234
okay now lemme start with this OS
so this OS is a bit different, in this os nupur is telling her own story, n mayank n nupur knows each other from their childhoon, but the problem which stays here is nupur is a month older than mayank, n mayank is middle class, n nupur is rich, but dont worry will deff give u guyx happy ending😃 😆
starting:
it was raining, i was so happy, the rain was falling on my silky hair as golden dimes.
it was fun to do rainy dance that night, so is always
n a boy was crossing the street, stop suddenly when he looked @ me
n lukin worry by thinking now nupur has become old, its her age to get marry, yes she is 18, but i love her a lot, no one can else love her the most, but of course it's not my luck to get marry with her, n the day she will b getting marry, it will b the day i will die!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
i was getting wet in rain, n now its stop
--XX--XX--XX
continue
rain has stop, there is a sadness on my face like a bracelet without shining
not because rain has gone, but because with rain all my last memories has gone, which was with a boy from my childhood, named mayank, use to get wet in rain together, like rain falls on both of us as it's all the flowers are falling on us...huh!! unbelievable!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
it was mayank, who was keep looking @ nupur, n thinking the same thing
--XX--XX--XX
continue
now suddenly nupur has seen mayank
nupur screams mayank (2) lets do rain dance together (2)
by hearing word "together" mayank is saying, i wish it will b for whole life
but anyway mayank has come to me, start rain dance, n now rain has start
i got happy, as my all memories has come back!! ohh yes they did!!
n now raining is falling on both of them as love
mayank is very to happy to see my words for him, like be never happy before that much!!
i always wanted to share my feelings with mayank
like what i feel for him, it was my love, but m a month older than him, so he probably have never looked @ me as his love, m sure he has never feel anything for me except a friendship from childhood, than how come its me feeling all this!!
n mayank is keep looking @ me, n dancing with me
n thinking how cum i can have all this love feeling for nupur, even she is just taking me just as a good friend, as i can never take our relationship like that!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
the things that i have think in the last part, its telling me that being rich is not good @ all, but mayank is all the way opposite
--XX--XX--XX
continue
mayank is still dancing with me, making me feel awesome, as its my lucky day of life
while dancing mayank is thinking i never knew that a rich person can only marry with rich person, for example nupur, she can never like a middle class person as her husband!!
n @ the same time, i was thinking that being rich is very bad, rich people alwayz gets what they like, if even that thing belongs to them or not!!, for example me, i m rich i buy everything i want, but i cant but mayank, but i want him, n i know i will tell him that, but its on him if he will say yes or no to me, i cant force mayank to be mine!!
--XX--XX--XX
flashback
i have tell u reason that y being rich was a bad thing for me!!
--XX--XX--XX
continue
now i can't live without him, he is like a golden ticket for me, that can not everyone get, n if i will not tell him all this about love, than all the words will stay in my heart as they are now!!, n in my future, i will end up by saying at least once i have try to tell mayank all the feeling i have in my heart for me, even it will not hurt me more if mayank will say no about this, but at least i can try!!
@ the same time mayank is thinking, i will never tell nupur that i love her more than my life, cuz it might hurt her, n i cant see that!!
n now what i decide to do m doing that now
suddenly i stop dancing
mayank: what happen?? y u stop??
me: cuz i cant control over my feelings, that are killing me inside
mayank: sorry??
me: i love u mayank, i know ur answer will alwayz no, but i m rich, i cant control over my feelings, n that is what so bad about being rich
mayank: than u must b the lucky cuz ur rich
me: what?? i dont get it
mayank: i luv u too, n if u will not b rich u have never saying this 3 words to me
n we both smile, hug each other n now after a month we r married😳
hope u all lyk it
sorry i know its a bit bad, but its only my 2nd one, n it will improve with the tym😳
P.S: all my readerz, the age problem i made in this os, is cuz just to tell all of u that there is no age in love or after😃 love is only love😳
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