MN VM Gallery#2-Ankhoki Gustakiya, Jaane Yeh-pg 49 - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
Jess this was an AWESOME VM dear😃😃

The way you outlined the whole MayUr story...the way it went from being friends, to the start of feelings, to the confession and after that also....😃😃

Just too good...you are Awesome, Lady👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Archana,

Just remember I love you and think you are very talented. However even as your friend I can not break my own rule, which is unless necessary and beneficial, say something good or remain silent.

I have mixed feelings over this vm BUT not because of your effort but rather the song, and probably specifications given by the requester. I have already pointed out once before to you, that vms requested tend to lack that glimmer found in those inspired by your heart, not only in your art but this tends to be a common rule for all artists.

After a long thought I decided to just comment upon the things I liked, I am no true judge after all, for I could not even segue two random clips together let alone make a masterpiece.

1. Firstly your impeccable editing, selection of songs (more details later), choreographing were exceptional, as always. I am always astounded at the level of your intricacy and 'fine brushstrokes' Wonderful! ⭐️

2. I loved the opening scene, that first 'date' or rather that first time Mayank volunteered his hand of friendship, of companionship, that Nupur keeps open for all, always! The masti in beat to the music's. ⭐️

3. the scene you chose for 'sit down and talk for a while' that smile of Mayank's, that genuine elation he felt in Nupur's company. very well chosen. ⭐️

4. For that 'everytime you are near me, my heart is running away, excellent choice, reminding us of how our thoughts fast track on a freeway, as 'depicted' in actuality in MJHT and thereafter whenever I saw mayank's 'far off' face, I knew he was back to those thoughts of 'strawberry ice cream! 😆

5. 'How can I tell you in words' Again just exceptional choice! ⭐️

6. The timing of 'I wanna know' with Mayank's head tilt, inquiring look, just brilliant! ⭐️

7. At 2:14, that sly glance of Mayank's, to I wanna know, again I loved that synchronization, your editing, the selection! ⭐️

8. I loved that scene from mere haath mein, where Mayank removed her duppata, I always wanted to write a piece on it. Here you added 'I wanna make you see, everything you are to me,' as Mayank removes that 'parda' from him and her, that distance, that barrier. Very well done! ⭐️⭐️

HOWEVER my most favourite part was that final scene, with 'I would do anything to know that I am more than a friend,' cutting it at that point, that Mayank's own heart is asking, how deep is your love too?

Just genius to cut it at Nupur's knowing smile, Mayank left hanging in the background. A metaphor for all lovers who ask such questions, Surely you should already know, do not doubt that hope, that wish, that CERTAINTY that resides in your heart.

Of course I love you, you idiot!

Archana, really well done. Love Sabah

EDIT that piece on that moment in mere haath mein. Thank you gift for being my sister.

As I have said before, life is a series of successive moments and each moment is a lifetime.

That moment Mayank removes that red dupatta from across Nupur, her face and being, that one moment encompasses many lifetimes and is worth many more.

It is as if he is asking her to remove that 'parda' between them, that distance and barrier. The song is about the closeness of two souls not merely 'do jism' or 'do jaan.' He seeks to be as close as the companionships of nature, which thereby adorn each other in their own lights, which thereby imbue each other in their own beauty and which thereby become dependently independent; two and yet one. Each line, like from 'Jitne paas paas saagar ke lehar' becomes like 'Saagar ki Lehar' like 'Mayank ki Nupur'; the melody of their moving, their entwined embrace; his earthly hold and hold over her ethereal freedom, his mighty restraint and resignation towards her wildness.

It is also as if he is asking her to remove that 'veil' that is preventing her from seeing the truth of his being, that he is in love with her, enamoured, enchanted and endeared, forever.

It also reminds me of that moment in Khuda Jaane, that 'hatke' act as she passes her hand over his 'aching' face 'yeh tumhe na jaane kya hua.' [That is another moment, another piece :P]

However for me, this moment is about haya, Mayank's and Nupur's, the translucent 'RED' duppatta. Mayank never reaching out to touch, any other, against Nupur's carefree touch of friendship upon any that would offer; yet both understanding the intimacy of belonging to another's heart, but first they must relinquish their willful stubborn attachment to independent independence. It is not about personal gratification but about closeness to his beloved, wanting her to seek that closeness too; BUT alas for their haya, that pull of respectfulness, that bashfulness at intimacy.

It is also about him asking her to remove that rosy red emotion of haya, to look him in the eyes, to witness the sincerity of his love, AND by that love to move closer to him, his soul and his heart.

He is asking himself too, to remove that haya that is between him and his love, for in truth he knows that neither of their hayaa would allow for them to move closer, but someone MUST take the next step, AND it must be him NOT only because he was the first to understand their own truth, but because he was her lover.


Edited by a little faith - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
waO iTS TOO BEAUTIFUL
gREAT CHOICE OF SONG
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Posted: 14 years ago
^^ Sabah... you just made my day... I was waiting for someone to notice those editing details and scenes I chose with expressions.
And like always... you perfectly caught those details.
But I'm still nervous for my perfectionist friend's approval of this VM. She said she loved it...umm.. but I think she was envisioning a little different version.
Sweetu... no peaking in our conversation...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jess .. 👏 .. Loved your Vm " more than a freind" ...Loved the song... Loved the scenes .. Loved Mayur ... Thanks for sharing.. Beautifullllllllllllllllllllll😊...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jess-

^^ Sabah... you just made my day... I was waiting for someone to notice those editing details and scenes I chose with expressions.

And like always... you perfectly caught those details.
But I'm still nervous for my perfectionist friend's approval of this VM. She said she loved it...umm.. but I think she was envisioning a little different version.
Sweetu... no peaking in our conversation...😆



Archana, Another perfectionist? I thought being friends with one was bad enough. You know I don't really understand this temperament, however I am learning 😆

Archana, really well done. ⭐️ Haan, another star, I know how you like them, it reminds you of your report card. 😛

Love Sabah
Edited by a little faith - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome vm!!!
remembered the old moments
ah!! miss them so much!!
great work..loved the vm!!😊

divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome vm
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my comment on pg 39......... You will be scared seeing the length.......🤣 but meri koi galti nahi, its only u to be blamed........... 😳🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited my post.

Love ya :)

And hope the post makes you understand that i indeed, really, loved the VM!!
Edited by ak12 - 14 years ago

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