Zindagi Na Milegi Dobara- updt part 12 on pg 13

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Guys! I'm starting an OS on the current track............ wid a SLIGHT DIFFERENCE!
I'm starting wid the characters & a bit storyline.
The Characters are:
Samrat- the coolest dude of Excel College Gang & Gunjan's fiance';
Gunjan- a very cute girl wid a charming smile & even more FANTASTIC voice & Samrat fiancee';
Nupur- the JAAN of the Gang- a very vibrant, fun-loving, filmy, full of life kinda girl & Mayank's wife;
Mayank-the academic champ of the college & Nupur's hubby;
Nitin- Mayank's Bro & Natasha's hubby- very caring, sweet guy;
Natasha- Sam's Sis & Nitin's wife- very protective about her bro & frends;
Benji- Sam's BFF & Diya's BF- freindly, cheerful & always ready 2 help his frends;
Diya- Benji's GF & Uday's sis- loves her frends & is an introvert girl;
Uday- Dia's bro, loves food & thinks ONLY about food.

The story starts from the accident which changed their lives forever-
In the hospital:
Everyone is dead worried as to what will happen now. Natasha is sitting on one of the chairs. Her eyes are red and sore as she has been crying for what seemed an eternity; Diya is also crying & Benji & Uday are trying to comfort her, even though they are also shaken from inside; Nitin comes wid some coffee and gives to everyone. He comes & sits near Tashu & hands out the coffee cup to her & gestures her 2 tk it. Tashu simply looks at him & suddenly hugs him & cries again; Nitin just caresses her hair & tells to be calm. He makes her break the hug & forces her to look at him.
Nitin: Shhhhh Shhh.... Tashu... Relax. OK. Calm down.. Calm down.. fine. Dekho mujhe. Look at me.
Tashu now breaks the hug & looks at him.
Tashu (beyween sobs): S..... Sa.... Sab... T... Th...Theekh.. to...Toh..Ho..ja...jaayega.. na.. N..Nitin?
Nitin: Ha Baba. Sab Theekh ho jayega. OK. Bas ek baar doc ko bahar aane do. Woh hi kuch bata sakte hain.
Hearing the word "DOC", Tashu again started to cry & hugged him.
After 15 mins,
The OPT red light goes off & the theatre doors open. The doctor comes out. Nitin gestures Tashu dat the doc has come out.
Everyone rushes towards the doc.
Tashu: Doctor. Kya hua? Sab theekh toh hain na?
Doc ( with a heavy sigh): Dekhiye... Hum sab ne apni taraf se poori koshish ke aapki dosto ko bachane ki. Lekin....
Nitin: Lekin? Lekin kya Doc? lekin kya?

Doc: Lekin.. aapke chaar dosto main ase hum sirf 3 ko bach paaye hain.
AAPKI EK DOST AB COMA MAIN CHALI GAYI HAIN!

Nitin (stammering): A... Aap...ki.....kis.....kisski....b...baat...k....kar..r..rahe...h..hain..d..doc?
Doc (thinking about the name): I don''t know her name. Par haan, in chaaro main se, jo SHAADISHUDA HAIN, woh ab COMA main chali gayi hain!

Diya: U mean..... NUPUR SHARMA!

Doc (finally remembering the name): Haan! Yaad aaya. U ARE ABSOLUTELY RIGHT! WOH LADKI MRS. NUPUR SHARMA HI HAIN!!!



That's just for now guys! If u all like my OS, pl press the LIKE button & do put in ur comments.
I'll be waiting.Thnx & Tk Cre.


INDEX-
Part1- pg 1.
Part2- pg 2.
part3- pg 3.
part4- pg 4.
part5- pg 5.
part6- pg6.
part7- pg7.
part8- pg8.
part9- pg9.
part10- pg10.
part11- pg12.
part12- pg13.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Recap-
Nitin: WAAH!!!! ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO AAKE SAMJHAYE KI USSE KYA KARNA CHAHIYE!!!
Benji (correcting him): Nitin!!! Dude, tune galat muhawara bola hain! ITS NOT ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO SAMJHAYE! Its " ULTA CHOR KOTWAAL KO DAANTE!!!"
Nitin & Tashu are galring at him.
Nitin & Tashu: BENJI!!!!! YAHA PE SITUATION SAMBHLI NAHIIN JAA RAHI HAIN! AUR TUJHE MUHAAWARE KI PADI HAIN!! 😡 😡 😡

Part 6-
Nitin & Tashu: BENJI!!!!! YAHA PE SITUATION SAMBHLI NAHIIN JAA RAHI HAIN! AUR TUJHE MUHAAWARE KI PADI HAIN!!! 😡 😡 😡
Benji immediately shut up. Dia & Uday came out of Gunjan's ward & told the others that she was out of danger, usse hosh toh aa gaya tha par woh baar-baar apni dii, jeeju aur Samrat ke baare main pooch rahi thi.
Tashu: Toh tumne kya kaha?
Diya: Kehna kya hain! Hum dono ne usse yeh jhooth bola ki teeno khatre se bahaar hain aur abhi behosh hain!
All of them heaved a sigh of relief. Tashu was worried as to how will she break the news to either Samrat, Mayank or Gunjan!
Tashu (thinking): THANK GOD Diya ne bhabhi ko kuch nahi bataya!! Par mujhe toh iss baat ki chinta ho rahi hain ki mein Sam, Mayu ya bhabhi ko yeh baat kaise bata paaongi? Ya phir bata paaongi bhi ya nahi? HEY BHAGGU!!! Yeh mein kiss mushkil main phass gayi hu? Na toh khud iss se nikal paa rahi hu na toh mujhe koi raasta dikh raha hain!!!! 😕 😕 😕
Tashu heard a snap of fingers which came from Nitin. She somehow came back to her senses & nitin gestured her, "Kahan kho gayi?"to which Tashu just shook her head gesturing back, "kahin nahi."
Benji: Pata nahi ab aage kya hoga!Guys, tum log hi batao ki hum sab in teeno se sach kab takchupa ke rakhenge?
Nitin: Pata nahi kab tak. Par abhi ke liye mein sirf itna jaanta hu kihum sabko in teeno se jhooth toh bolna hi padega! Kyun Tashu?
Nitin turned around to find that Tashu was not there. Everyone got worried as to where tashu must have gone.
Meanwhile, Tashu had overheard the conversation between Nitin & Benji. She came to the conclusion that she would have to tell Gunjan, Samrat & Mayank the truth!
She entered inside Samrat's ward & went upto his bed. Samrat was sleeping peacefully like a child. Tashu went & sat next to him; very gently, she started to caress his forehead. She knew that whenever Samrat is sleeping & she caresses his head like this, he really likes this a lot. But, she also does this ONLY WHEN some kind of tragedy is going to strike them. Tashu mentally prepared herself for this. Samrat woke up after a few seconds & saw Tashu sitting in front of him.
Samrat: Tashu? Tu... Tu yaha pe? Tum sab abhi-bhi yahi pe ho?
Tashu: Haan Samrat! Hum sab abhi-bhi yahi pe hain! Aur waise bhi mujhe tujhse kuch bahut zaroori baat karni hain!
Samrat: Haa, bol na! Mein sun raha hu!
Tashu: Samrat woh.....

Dats it guys! I hope u all like it. Do read & comment!
tk cre.
tania 😊 😊
Edited by Tania92 - 15 years ago
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guys,
i hav sm bad news 4 u all. My sis tania is suffering 4rm common flu since the past 3 days. So, she wont be able to update & i'm updating on her behalf. Pl pray 4 her so dat she bcms healthy again. I heard all ur complaints & critisims, & i'll change the storyline A BIT. my update will be thoda chchota!

Precap-
The OPT red light goes off & the theatre doors open. The doctor comes out. Nitin gestures Tashu dat the doc has come out.
Everyone rushes towards the doc.
Tashu: Doctor. Kya hua? Sab theekh toh hain na?
Doc ( with a heavy sigh): Dekhiye... Hum sab ne apni taraf se poori koshish ke aapki dosto ko bachane ki. Lekin....
Nitin: Lekin? Lekin kya Doc? lekin kya?

Doc: Lekin.. aapke chaar dosto main ase hum sirf 3 ko bach paaye hain.
AAPKI EK DOST AB COMA MEIN CHALI GAYI HAIN!

Nitin (stammering): A... Aap...ki.....kis.....kisski....b...baat...k....kar..r..rahe...h..hain..d..doc?
Doc (thinking about the name): I don''t know her name. Par haan, in chaaro main se, jo SHAADISHUDA HAIN, woh ab COMA MAIN CHALI GAYI HAIN!
Diya: U mean..... NUPUR SHARMA!
Doc (finally remembering the name): Haan! Yaad aaya. U ARE ABSOLUTELY RIGHT! WOH LADKI MRS. NUPUR SHARMA HI HAIN!!!

Part 2

Everyone: KYA???
There were mixed emotions on every1's face. Tashu was shaken & shattered, Diya, Uday & benji were shell-shocked & Nitin was equally shattered. They could not believe their ears!
Par sabse bura haal toh Natasha ka ho gay tha. She went hysterical & was not able to believe this thing!
Tashu: NAHIIN! A...AISA B...BIL....BILKUL NAHIIN HO S... SAKTA H..HAIN! DOC, AAP J..JH...JHOOTH KEH RAHE HAIN NA? NUPURTaNUPUR COMA MAIN JAA SAKTI HAIN! A..AISA BILKUL NAHI HO SAKTA HAIN! N..NUPUR! YAAR, W.. WOH TOH HUMARE GANG KI JAAN HAIN! WOH ZINDA HAIN, TOH HUM BHI ZINDA HAIN. WOH C.. COMA MAIN KAISE JAA SAKTI HAIN, YAAR? NAHIIN, AAP JHOOTH BOL RAHO HO!
She was screamin out these words with anger, shock & she was totally shattered! Somehow, Nitin tried to control her.
Nitin (rushing towards her & trying to support her): Tashu, pl! Bas bahut ho gaya! Pl, sambhalo apne aap ko! CONTROL YOURSELF! Tumhari tarah, hum sab bhi kaafi hadh tak shocked hain is news ko sunkar!

dats 4 now guys, i hav to tk cre of my sis! i hope u all like this OS!
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Precap-
Nitin (rushing towards her & trying to support her): Tashu, pl! Bas bahut ho gaya! Pl, sambhalo apne aap ko! CONTROL YOURSELF! Tumhari tarah, hum sab bhi kaafi hadh tak shocked hain is news ko sunkar!

Part 3-

Tashu (remembering abt Mayank, Samrat & Gunjan):MAYANK!!!! NITIN, MAYANK KO KUCH NAHIN PATA HAIN ISSKE BAARE MAIN! AUR... AUR AGGAR.... AGGAR USSE ISS BAAT KA PATA CHAL GYA NA, TOH.... TOH WOH TOOT JAAYEGA NITIN, WOH TOOT JAYEGA! WOH.... WOH APNE AAP KO NAHI SAMBHAL PAYEGAA! 😭
Benji: Haan, Nitin! Tashu theekh hi keh rahi hain dude! Mayank toh bilku toot jaayega!
Uday: Aur SAM? USSKA KYA??😕 😕
Diya: Haan guys! Saamy ka kya hoga? Woh toh... apni poori zindagi issi soch main guzzar dega ki Nupur coma main ussike wajah se gayi hain! Doc, Nupur ke waapis aane ke chances kitne hain?
Doc: Approx. AT LEAST 5 SAAL!!
EVERYBODY: 5 SAAL?????
Doc: Haan! Abhi main chalta hoon! Mujhe aur bhi patients ko dekhna hain! Filhaal, thodi hi der main, sabko hosh aa jaayegaa aur phir aap sablog unse mil sakte hain!


After some time-
Samrat opens his eyes and finds Tashu sitting next to him & she has his hand in hers! Her eyes are closed as she was crying the whole night!
Samrat: T...Tashu!
Tashu wakes wid a jerk & finds Samrat awake!
Tashu: S.. SAMRAT!!

Dats for now guys! I'll upload again tomorrow!
bye tk cre !
Edited by Tania92 - 15 years ago
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hi guys,
i'm back wid a new update-

Precap-
After some time-
Samrat opens his eyes and finds Tashu sitting next to him & she has his hand in hers! Her eyes are closed as she was crying the whole night!
Samrat: T...Tashu!
Tashu wakes wid a jerk & finds Samrat awake!
Tashu: S.. SAMRAT!!

Part 4-
Tashu: S... SAMRAT!!! T...Tu kab utha?
Samrat: B.. Bas abhi abhi. Tu yahan kabse hain?
Tashu: Kal raat se. Jabse tumhare woh accident ki kahbar ka pata laga, mein, Nitin, Dia, Benji aur Uday yahi pe hain!
Samrat suddenly gets a faint fb of that accident & he gets frantic about others.
Samrat: Tashu! Tashu, baaki sab kaise hain? Chashmish, Mayank aur....aur NUPUR!!! Bolo na Tashu! Sab theekh toh hain na??
Hearing Nupur's name, Tashu lifts her head & looks at him with shock. However, she decides to tell him the truth.
Tashu (trying to control him): SAMRAT! SAMRAT!! SAMRAT!!! Woh.... Mayank aur Gunjan bhabhi bilkul theekh hain! Ab khatre se bahar aa gaye hain!!!
Samrat: aur NUPUR??
Tashu: Woh.... Samrat, N....Nupur........
Tashu did not know how to Samrat the truth. She feared that if she told him, he would go hysterical and might start blaming himself for Nupur's condition.
Tashu (acting): Woh.. Samrat! M.... Mujhe Doc bahar bula rahe hain! Shayad se tere aur baaki sab ke baare main kuch kehna chahate ho! Mein 2 mins main aati hu!
Saying this, she ran out of the room. But once she came out, she covered her mouth with her hands and cries again. Nitin comes out of Mayank's ward & saw Tashu crying. He goes upto her, puts his hand on her shoulder & gestures her not to cry. He gently wipes away her tears and hugs her & just caresses her hair; she just crushes herself in Nitin's arms & firgets everything & starts to cry.
Nitin: Samrat kaisa hain ab?
Tashu (bwn sobs): Hosh main aa toh gaya hain, par abhi sirf Gunjan bhabhi, Mayank aur Nupur ke baare main soch raha hain! Aur mayank, how's he?
Nitin (sighing): Bhai bhi theekh hain! Sam ke tarah, woh bhi sab ke baare main pooch raha hain! KHASSKAR KE BHABHI KE BAARE MAIN!
Tashu (breaking the hug abruptly): Toh tumne kya kaha? KAHI TUMNE MAYANK KO NUPUR KE BAARE MAIN TOH NAHI BATA DIYA?

Dats it for now, guys!
I'll try & update more the next tym.
till dat tym, tk cre.
tania.
Edited by Tania92 - 15 years ago
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Precap-
Nitin: Samrat kaisa hain ab?
Tashu (bwn sobs): Hosh main aa toh gaya hain, par abhi sirf Gunjan bhabhi, Mayank aur Nupur ke baare main soch raha hain! Aur mayank, how's he?
Nitin (sighing): Bhai bhi theekh hain! Sam ke tarah, woh bhi sab ke baare main pooch raha hain! KHASSKAR KE BHABHI KE BAARE MAIN!
Tashu (breaking the hug abruptly): Toh tumne kya kaha? KAHI TUMNE MAYANK KO NUPUR KE BAARE MAIN TOH NAHI BATA DIYA?

Part 5-
Tashu (breaking the hug abruptly): Toh tumne kya kaha? KAHI TUMNE MAYANK KO NUPUR KE BAARE MAIN TOH NAHI BATA DIYA?
Nitin (almost shouting): PAAGAL HO GAYI HAIN KYA TU??? MEIN KYA TUJHE BEVAKUF DEKHTA HU JO MEIN MAYANK KO JAAKAR ITNI BADI BAAT ITNI AASAANI SE KEH DU?
Tashu was shocked hearing Nitin shout at her for the first time.
Nitin (regaining himself):IAM SORRY!!! DEKH TASHU, TERE LIYE YEH BAAT SAMRAT KO KEHNI JITNI MUSHKIL HAIN, USSE KAYI ZYAADA MUSHKIL MUKHE HO RAHI HAIN MAYANK KO YEH BAAT BATANE KI!!!
Tashu: Mein samjh sakti hu Nitin ki abhi iss waqt tujhe khud yeh baat jaakar Mayank ko kehne main kitni mushkil hogi! Lekin jo bhi hain, batana toh padega hi na!!!!
Nitin is surprised to hear this kind of thing from Tashu.
Nitin: WAAH!!!! ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO AAKE SAMJHAYE KI USSE KYA KARNA CHAHIYE!!!
Benji (correcting him): Nitin!!! Dude, tune galat muhawara bola hain! ITS NOT ULTA CHOR KOTWAL KO SAMJHAYE! Its " ULTA CHOR KOTWAAL KO DAANTE!!!"
Nitin & Tashu are galring at him.
Nitin & Tashu: BENJI!!!!! YAHA PE SITUATION SAMBHLI NAHIIN JAA RAHI HAIN! AUR TUJHE MUHAAWARE KI PADI HAIN!! 😡 😡 😡

dats it guys! do read& leave ur comments! i'll try & update again 2mrrw!
tk cre. tania!
Edited by Tania92 - 15 years ago
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Precap-

Samrat: Tashu? Tu... Tu yaha pe? Tum sab abhi-bhi yahi pe ho?
Tashu: Haan Samrat! Hum sab abhi-bhi yahi pe hain! Aur waise bhi mujhe tujhse kuch bahut zaroori baat karni hain!
Samrat: Haan, bol na! Mein sun raha hu!
Tashu: Samrat woh.....

Part 7-

Tashu: Samrat woh..... mein...
Samrat (taking his hand into hers): Dekh Tashu, tu meri behen hain! Mein tujhe bachpan se jaanta hu! Tu jab bhi tension main hoti hain, tu haklaana shuru kar deti hain!
Tashu is looking at him wid red eyes, which are trying to say- "tum mujhe kitni achchi tarah se jaante ho Samrat!!"
Samrat: Aur isska matlab yeh bhi hain ki tu mujhse kuch chupane ki koshish kar rahi hain! RIGHT?
Tashu lokked at Samrat with a shocked expression on her face. 😲 😲
Samrat: HAINA? Toh ab bata ki kaunsi baat hain jo tu mujhse chupa rahi hain!
Tashu just looked at Samrat & then abruptly hugged him & started crying again! 😭 😭
Samrat was confused by that kind of reaction from Tashu! 😕 😕
However, he hugged her back and started to pacify her by caressing her hair.
Samrat: Bas Tashu! Bas! Shhhh.... Shhh... Shhh... chup ho jaao! Chup ho jaao!
Tashu (somehow breaking the hug & sniffing): S.... Sam....Samrat. Tere Liye ek achchi khabar aur ek buri khabar hain!
Samrat: Hmmmm. Toh pehle achchi kahbar suna!
Tashu: Achchi khabar yeh hain ki Bhabai aur Mayank khatre se bahar hain aur hosh main hain!
Samrat (kind of now sensing ki SOMETHING HAS HAPPENED): Hmmm. aur BURI KAHBAR??
Tashu (somehow regaining herself): Sa....Samrat! Buri khabar yeh hain ki....N....NUPUR C....COMA MAIN CHALI GAYI HAIN!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Dats it guys!
do read & comment!
tk cre.
tania 😊
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RECAP-

Tashu goes inside Samrat's ward & sees Samrat sleeping peacefully. She goes to his bed & sits on a chair beside it. She looks at Samrat & recalls every moment spent with him- from the first tym she tied a rakhi on his wrist to the tym where she made Sam realise that Gunji is THE GURL for him, everything!

Suddenly, Samrat ko hosh aa jata hain & he looks at her.

Samrat: T.... Tashu. Tu..... tu gayi nahi?

Tashu looks at him & makes himsit upright.

Tashu: nahi.... woh mein aur nitin hain. baki sab chale gaye!

Samrat: Tumne nupur waali baat kissi ko batai?

Tashu looked up at him.

Tashu: Nahi!


PART 10-

Samrat: Tumne nupur waali baat kissi ko batai?

Tashu looked up at him.

Tashu: Nahi!

Samrat: Oh.

A long pause.

Samrat: Ab'' Chash''' Chashmish aur Mayank kaise hain?

Tashu looks up at him.

Tashu: Bhabhi aur Mayank theekh hain. Par'''

Samrat: Par? Par kya?

Tashu: Par who dono sirf ek hi insaan ke baare main pooch rahe hain.

Samrat gives her a look of -"kaun?"

Tashu (sighs): NUPUR!

Samrat & Tashu are not talking to each other ,verbally, bcoz their eyes are doing all the talking & so a song starts in the background:

Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hai
Tasveerein Si Ban Jaati Hain
Main Kaise Inhein Bhooloon
Dil Ko Kya Samjhaaun
(Samrat looks at Tashu & remembers all the times they have spent together)

Kitni Baatein Kehne Ki Hai
Honton Par Jo Sehmi Si Hai
Ik Roz Inhein Sun Lo
Kyun Aise Gum-sum Ho
(Tashu looks at Sam & asks him why is he so quiet.)

Kyun Poori Ho Na Paayi Daastaan
Kaise Aayi Hai Aisi Dooriyaan

(they both are wondering as to what life & destiny has done to them.)


Dono ke dilo main sawaal hain

Phir bhi hain khamoshi

Toh kaun hain kisski doshi

Koi kya kahein''

(Samrat is having an fb of the accident & the news that Tashu gave him abt Nupur.)


Kaise uljhano ke yeh jaal hain

Jinme uljhe hain dil

Ab hona hain kya haasil

Koi kya kahein''

(Tashu is wondering as to how will she go to Nitin & ask for forgiveness from him.)


Dill ki hain kaisi majbooriyaan......

Khoye the kaise raaho ke nishaan

Kaise aayi hain aisi dooriyaan......

(Samrat is wondering how to break the silence.)


Kitni Baatein Kehne Ki Hai
Honton Par Jo Sehmi Si Hai
Ik Roz Inhein Sun Lo
Kyun Aise Gum-sum Ho

(Tashu is wondering ki_ "Yeh Samrat itni der chup hain! Boss, isske dimaag main koi na koi toh baat chal rahi hogi!"😕😕)


Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hai
Tasveerein Si Ban Jaati Hain
Main Kaise Inhein Bhooloon
Dil Ko Kya Samjhaau........


(ok guys, now i want some help from u all. IF u r a good VM maker, then can ny1 of u pl make a VM 4 me on this song. Coz, i wont b able to make 1, dats y, am asking u guys! PL HELP!!)

Samrat (breaking the silence & getting ROYALLY frustrated): TASHU! TUM AUR NITIN JAAKE MAYANK AUR CHASHMISH KO SACAHI KYUN NAHIN BATA DETE? 😡

Tashu looked at him in horror!

Tashu 😲😲(shocked & PRACTICALLY screaming in a low tone): WHAT!! SAMRAT! SAMRAT KYA TUM PAGAL HO GAYE HO?? I MEAN LIKE......... HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND? TUM''' TUM JAANTE HO ISSKA KYA NATEEJA NIKLEGA? HUH!!! OK. MAAN LETE HAIN! MAAN LETE HAIN KI MEINE AUR NITIN NE JAAKE BHABHI AUR MAYANK KO JAAKE SACHAI AGGAR BATA BHI DI, TOH TUM BATAO...... KYA WOH DONO MERI BAAT PAR YAKEEN KARENGE? BOLO! KYA WHO DONO MERI BAAT KA YAKEEN KARENGE? 😡😡😡

Samrat was getting really pissed off.

Samrat (angrily): MEIN KUCH NAHI JAANTU HU TASHU! (holding her shoulders) PAR MEIN SIRF ITNA CHAAHATA HU, KI CHASHMISH AUR MAYANK SE KUCH BHI NAHI CHUPNA CHAHIYE! 😡

Tashu: Mujhe tumhari baat samajh main aa rahi hain Sam, par'' par tumhe bhabhi aur Mayank ke baare main bhi toh sochna chahiye'''

Samrat (cutting her in between): Un dono ke baare main soch raha hu tabhi toh yeh faisla liya hain meine! (holding her holders) Dekh Tashu, mein achchi tarah se jaanta hu ki tu abhi kya soch rahi hain! Par...... aggar hum un dono ko sach nahi batayenge toh unko toh yahi lagega na ki woh dono huamre liye important nahi hain!

Tashu raises her head & looks at him. Her eyes are depicting of what kind of turmoil her heart is going through! Samrat cannot see Tashu in pain so he immediately hugs her & tries to pacify her & she also breaks down when he hugs her.

Meanwhile, Nitin is outside the ward & he has heard everything.

Nitin: Samrat ki baat main dum toh hain! Aggar hum sab ne bhai aur Gunjan ko kuch nahi bataya toh unke lagega ki humari life main unki koi importance nahi hain! Lekin aggar unko yeh baat pata lag gayi, toh unki duniya toh hamesha-hamesha ke liye tham jaayegi, especially Gunjan; kyunki woh toh Bhabhi ke bina ek pal ke liye bhi nahi rah sakti!

Precap-

Tashu & Nitin sort out their diffrences; Mayu & Gunji get to know abt Nupur & 1 SHOCKING TRUTH!!

Dats it guys! Do read & comment. Oh & BTW, pl suggest a good title for this OS.

Your suggestions are welcome!

Thnx.

tk cre.

tania😊

Edited by Tania92 - 15 years ago
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Precap-

Tashu (somehow breaking the hug & sniffing): S.... Sam....Samrat. Tere Liye ek achchi khabar aur ek buri khabar hain!
Samrat: Hmmmm. Toh pehle achchi kahbar suna!
Tashu: Achchi khabar yeh hain ki Bhabai aur Mayank khatre se bahar hain aur hosh main hain!
Samrat (kind of now sensing ki SOMETHING HAS HAPPENED): Hmmm. aur BURI KAHBAR??
Tashu (somehow regaining herself): Sa....Samrat! Buri khabar yeh hain ki....N....NUPUR C....COMA MAIN CHALI GAYI HAIN!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Part 8-

Tashu (somehow regaining herself): Sa....Samrat! Buri khabar yeh hain ki....N....NUPUR C....COMA MAIN CHALI GAYI HAIN!!!!
Saying this, Tashu again cried & hugged Samrat.
Samrat, for once, could not believe his ears. HE WAS SHOCKED TO THE POINT WHERE HE WAS NOT ABLE TO BELIEVE WHAT TASHU HAD JUST SAID. HE COULD NOT BELIEVE THAT BECAUSE OF OVER-SPEEDING, NUPUR HAD "ALMOST" LOST HER LIFE!!
Samrat (breaking the hug & holding her shoulders): KYA????? YEH TUM KYA KEH RAHI HO TASHU? TUM…… TUM JHOOTH BOL RAHI HO NA???
Tashu just nodded her head which meant a "NO."
Samrat: 😲 😲
Tashu looked up at Samrat & saw the shocked look on his face. She suddenly remembered the doctor's words.
Tashu (wiping her tears & trying to smile): Par, pata hain Samrat ki doctor kya keh raha the? Unhone kaha ki…… ki jo humari Nupur haina, woh…… who theekh ho sakti hain!
Samrat just looked at her.
Tashu: Lekin yaar, ek chotti si problem hain. Who doctor keh raha tha ki Nupur ko theekh hone main 5 saal lag sakte hain!
Samrat still did not respond to this news.
Tashu shakes him, pinches him, slaps him and does all sorts of stuff which would at least make Samrat utter a word, but Samrat does not say anything as he is in DEEP SHOCK!
Tashu: Sam…. Samrat! Samrat uttho Samrat! Samrat kuch bolo, please!! 😭 😭 😭 (checking his pulse & she can feel it going down) OH MY GOD!!! Samrat, tumhari pulse toh bahot low hain!
Samrat's eyes become heavy & he slowly becomes unconscious.
Tashu gets scared seeing Samrat unconscious.
Tashu: OMG!!!! SAMRAT!! Doctor…….. Doctor! 😲 😲
Hearing her scream, Nitin, Diya, Benji, Uday & the doctor rush inside Sam's ward.
Tashu: Dekhiye na doctor, Samrat……… Samrat behosh kyun ho gaya hain? Usski pulse bhi bahot low ho gayi hain!
Doctor is putting all the equipments in order & checking Samrat.
Nurse: Dekhiye, aap sab log bahar jaaye. Doctor ko patient ko check karne deejeeye.

All of them go outside, Tashu is sobbing and everyone else is tensed.
Nitin: Tashu, tum Samrat ko aisa kya bol diya ki who behosh ho gaya?😡 😡
Tashu was scared as to how she will be able to Nitin the truth.
Tashu (stammering): Who…… who…… Nitin…… meine S…… Samrat ko……. Bhabhi aur Mayank ke baare main bataya. That's it!
Nitin (shocked & suspicious): THAT'S IT!!! TASHU, MUJHE NAHIIN LAGTA HAIN KI THAT'S IT! KUCH AUR BHI HAIN JO TUNE SAMRAT KO KAHI HOGI! VARNA WHO BEHOSH KYUN HO JAATA?
😒 😒
Tashu (trying to change the topic): Ab…….. Woh....... Gunjan bhabhi aur Mayank kaise hain? Tum logo ne unko sab kuch bata diya?
Nitin (sighing): Nahin abhi nahin. Waise unn dono ko hosh toh aa gaya hain, par meine yaa baaki sab ne ab tak unhe kuch nahin bataya.
Tashu heaved a sigh of relief.
Tashu: Chalo achcha hain! These guys don't know the truth!
Nitin (ALMOST SHOUTING): BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT TASHU! THE POINT IS KI TUMNE SAMRAT KO AISA KYA KAHA KI WHO BEHOSH HO GAYA? 😡 😡

Dats it guys! i'll try to post more 2mrw!
till then, tk cre.
tania. 😊
BTW, HAPPY FRIENDSHIPS DAY 2 ALL!!! 🤗 🤗
Edited by Tania92 - 15 years ago
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Tashu (trying to change the topic): Ab''.. Woh....... Gunjan bhabhi aur Mayank kaise hain? Tum logo ne unko sab kuch bata diya?
Nitin (sighing): Nahin abhi nahin. Waise unn dono ko hosh toh aa gaya hain, par meine yaa baaki sab ne ab tak unhe kuch nahin bataya.
Tashu heaved a sigh of relief.
Tashu: Chalo achcha hain! These guys don't know the truth!
Nitin (ALMOST SHOUTING): BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT TASHU! THE POINT IS KI TUMNE SAMRAT KO AISA KYA KAHA KI WHO BEHOSH HO GAYA? 😡 😡

Part 9-

Tashu got scared and very nervous at Nitin's reaction.

Tashu (thinking): BY GOD!! ABHI TOH ISSE PURI BAAT NAHI MAALOM HAIN. PAR JAB' JAB USSE SACH KA PATA CHAL JAAYEGA, TAB TOH MUJHSE ITNA NARAAZ HO JAAYEGA KI SHAYAD''. SHAYAD WOH HUMARA RISHTA HI TOD DE! NAHI'' NAHI! MUJHE KUCH KARNA HOGA! HAAN!

Nitin is REALLY REALLY ANGRY BY NOW! Usske dil main aag ubal rahi thi & Tashu could see that in his eyes.

Nitin somehow, felt that Tashu might have told Samrat the truth.

Nitin: TASHU! KAHIIN''. TUMNE'' SAMRAT'' KO'' SA'' SACH'' TOH NAHIIN BATA DIYA?

Tashu looked up at him & was shell-shocked!!!!

Tashu (thinking): HEY BAHGWAAN! NITIN KO KAISE PATA LAG GAYA ISSKE BAARE MAIN??? AGGAR'. AGGAR ISSKO SAMRAT SE PATA LAGA KI YEH SAB KUCH SACH HAIN, TOH YEH TOH MUJHE MAAR DAALEGA! KYA KARU? KYA KARU? HAAN! ISSE SACH BATA DETI HUN!

Tashu took a deep breath. She was just about to exhale it when Nitin caught hold of her shoulders.

Nitin: KYA TUMNE SAMRAT KO SACH BATAYA?

Tashu just got more scared by Nitin's question. She looked at him making a puppy face.

Nitin: Mujhe apna yeh puppy face mat dekhao! OK!! JUST TELL ME THE TRUTH!! KY TUMNE SAMRAT KO SAB KUCH SACH-SACH BATA DIYA HAIN YA NAHI??

Tashu (finally exhaling): HAAN!!!!....... {It echoes} MEINE SAMRAT KO SAB KUCH SACH-SACH BATA DIYA HAIN!!!!

Nitin is shocked by Tashu's reply. He immediately frees her, looks at her & then goes away. Tashu tries to stop him but then she feels a hand on her shoulder. She turns around to see that Samrat is behind her & he nods his head in a way which means- "NOT NOW!"

Tashu just nods her head & looks in the direction where Nitin went. She turned her head around to see that no one was standing behind her. 😲 😲 She understood that she had been hallucinating. Then she realised that the doctor had not come out of Sam's ward as yet! She ran towards Sam's ward and then the doc came outside.

Tashu: Doctor........ Sam.....Samrat kaisa hain?

Doc: Dekhiye.... filhaal toh woh bilkul theekh hain! Lekin ek baat ka aap khayal rakhe ke inhe kissi bhi buri tarah ki cheez se dur rakhe varna inki health par asar pad sakta hain!

Tashu: jee theekh hain! Thank you, doc! Ab.... Kya mein apne bhai se mil sakti hu?

Doc: beshakh!

Tashu goes inside Samrat's ward & sees Samrat sleeping peacefully. She goes to his bed & sits on a chair beside it. She looks at Samrat & recalls every moment spent with him- from the first tym she tied a rakhi on his wrist to the tym where she made Sam realise that Gunji is THE GURL for him, everything!

Suddenly, Samrat ko hosh aa jata hain & he looks at her.

Samrat: T.... Tashu. Tu..... tu gayi nahi?

Tashu looks at him & makes himsit upright.

Tashu: nahi.... woh mein aur nitin hain. baki sab chale gaye!

Samrat: Tumne nupur waali baat kissi ko batai?

Tashu looked up at him.

Tashu: Nahi!


Precap-

Mayu & gunji get 2 knw abt nupur; tashu & nitin's break-up & patch-up!

dats it guys! i hav 2 go now. do read & comment!

Edited by Tania92 - 15 years ago

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