Mayur love-can't b away nemore-an OS

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hii guys,was sitting idly in d evening n hence thought of writing an OS on mayur-my jaans!!itz a romantic one.mayur romance.itz mainly my version of Mayur's sajda coz they didn't get d proper space there.dunno whether u guys wud like it or not.!!!just leave ur comments plzz.... OK,ppl-time 2 blush...n drool.....



Nupur moved backward awkwardly and was about 2 trip over the floor rug when she felt Mayank's hand on her waist.in a moment of weakness,all of it came back to him-he was worried for her coz he loved her. he needed her for himself.not a single moment now to lose of their togetherness.
Bending his head towards her he slowly locked glances with dis most beautiful woman in front of him.he cud feel her shyly returning d same lovestruck stare-she stood hypnotized by his masochistic yet romantic stare.it was all more than a mortal man cud resist,and he never claimed to be a saint though!he stepped forward and felt her heat all along his body while he realized every single thing bout her-her incoherent thoughts,d eyes dilated with passion 4r him and gleaming in d light of d candles.she stirred too many things in him-this woman with her stubborn independence,honesty ,poise and pride.though they had always been good friends and then even their relationship was great after it solemnized into d marriage,he never felt d love so deeply for her as he felt at this moment.her lips quivered as he touched them with his own and it ignited a need inside him which needn't and cudn't be resisted.reasoning didn't entered into this equation.Mayank's world narrowed down to this room,to her.As for Nupur,she cud feel his masculine scent and d heat of d intimation pervaded inside her which now wud never lose itself!!!his hands caressed her back,he felt her tremble as she submitted herself to him with her body and soul.losing control over himself,he hugged her and took her.the night was going to b d sole spectator of the pure love that was to be there for eternity.
The candles flickered and went out,leaving it all darkened,hush-hush and full of love.


guys,do comment plzz...
Edited by Deblina_ArTi - 15 years ago

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MrsJaimeFraser thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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do comment guys..plzzzzzzzzz......dese rd only stuffs we hav till we get Rati back n mayur together... 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its lovely deblina .........i was blusing throughout while reading it .............you wrote it beautifully .........the feelings of both of them at that point of time is very beautifully written by you ................loved the OS lots...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnxx stuti....actually got into aromantic mood-well,all thnnx 2 mayur-was watching videos of pehli baar n sajda n d sweet n cute scenes then,hence d inspiration!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awww..damn cutee!! and so romantic!! :D:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Beautiful Deblina!!!!!

Loved it. 😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
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So romantic 😳 the smile on my face is jus nt leavin 😳 thanx!!!

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Shruti 😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Debz it lovely 😳
very romantic 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnxx 2 all of u guys who read n commented......it really means alot.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nd evn i wa blushing tooo while writing 😍 😉

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