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@me_mohit

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

awwwwwwwwwww....................

it's awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Feelin bad for Sammy!!

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I don't know! U tell me! :D ;)

@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#62

A SaJan Scene...

What if...

Hey once again guys! I know I haven't completed the last 'scene' that I am writing...but I just had this brain wave...and I had to pen it down.... Of course it is based on my ultra januable, extra cute, most mindblowing, maybe real life...couple on the face of this earth...SAJAN!!!!!!! So guys, plz do feel free to comment/ criticize on any of my work! Thx!

'Agar main tumhaare jagaa hota na, tho main Gunjan ko kab ka propose karta....'

I felt a wave of nausea hit me that was followed by red fury. I clenched my fists as I stood glaring at him.😡 He looked at me, with not the least bit of regret or apprehension on his face. He shoved his hands in his pocket before continuing.

'Par maine aisa nahi kiya Samrat. Jaante ho kyun? Kyunki Gunjan tumhe apni jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karti thi..hai... aur humesha karti rahegi. Issi liye main abhi tak apne feelings ko dabaa raha hoon.... Kyunki main jaanta hoon ke agar Gunjan ko kabhi bhi iss baat ka pata lag gayya ke main kissi aur se nahi, balki sirf usse pyaar karta hoon, woh poori tarha toot jaayegi Samrat. Aur main yeh nahi dekh paonga. Issi liye maine chor diya usse. Par shayad tumhe pyaar ki ahemiyat nahi maaloom hai. Tum andaaza bhi nahi lagaa sakte ke tum kitne lucky ho. Har kissi ko apna pyaar nahi milta Samrat.....Aur jin logon ko milta hai, unhe uski importance nahi maloom hai! Aur Samrat...tum unhi me se ek ho.'

I looked at him wondrously😲😡😲, trying with great difficult to not remove the anger from my face. But I felt my fury drain away. I nodded towards him.

'Tho agar tum mere jagaa me hote, tho kya karte? Agar Gunjan tumhaari girlfriend hoti, aur kissi aur ke saat itna waqt bitaaye tho tumhe kaise lagta? Agar zindagi me pehli baar woh tumse naaraaz ho jaaye, tho tum kya karte?'😕

He laughed sadly.

'Main kya kuch nahi deta tumhaare jagaa me hone ke liye.... Kya kuch nahi deta...? Agar Gunjan meri girlfriend hoti, tho main uspe itna bharose karta ke chaahe koi bhi ladka kyun naa aa jaaye, mujhe koi problem nahi hogi. Mujhe koi dukh nahi hoga ke Gunjan kissi aur ke saat time spend kar rahi hai...kyunki mujhe yeh baat pata hota ke Gunjan sirf aur sirf mujhse pyaar kar sakti hai...kissi aur se nahi.... Tho mujhe koi fark nahi padtha. Tumhe pata bhi nahi hai Samrat ke tum kitne lucky ho. Tumhe poora college ka pyaar mila hai...tumhe Gunjan ka pyaar mila hai.....Tumhe aur kya chahiye zindagi se?'😳

I shook my head.

'Nahi Neil..... Kabhi kabhi poora college ka pyaar bhi kam hota hai. Kyunki woh mujhse nahi....Woh cool dude Samrat se pyaar karte hain.... Aur woh tho main hoon hi nahi! Main sirf Samrat hoon. Sirf aur sirf Samrat. Main thak chukka hoon.... Main thak chukka hoon ke main main ban ke nahi rehe sakta. Main tang aa chukka hoon humesha iss image ke peeche bhaagte bhaagte. Agar mujhe kissi se sachcha pyaar mila hai, tho woh Gunjan hogi.... Usne mujhse pyaar kiya. Mere image se nahi...mere popularity se nahi. Jab main uske saat hota hoon, tho main sirf Samrat hoon.... Woh humesha mujhe ehsaas dilaati rehti hai ke main hi duniya ka sabse special ladka hoon.... Aur maine...?'😭😭😭

I burst into tears.

'M-maine usse buhot burri tarha se bartaaw ki hai Neil.... M-Main kya karoon ab...?'😭😭

Neil cocked his head and smiled.😊

'Jo tumhaara dil abhi abhi kehe raha hai.....'

I was confused.😕

'Woh kya hai?'

He chuckled.

'Seriously, maine aaj tak apne zindagi me itne badde budhoo ko nahi dekha hai..... achcha, aankhen band karo....'😃😃

I closed my eyes.

'Kisse dekha?'

Without a second thought, I replied,

'Gunjan. Gunjan.... Mujhe Gunjan se milna hai.... Mujhe Gunjan se baat karna hai.... Mujhe Gunjan se maafi maangna hai.... Mujhe uske paas jaana hai....'

Suddenly, I opened my eyes.

'Neil!? Kahan hai Gunjan!? Mujhe abhi, aur issi waqt usse milna hai!'

He nodded, surprised at the urgency in my voice.😲

'Haan.... Actually hum aaj shooting bahar kar rahe hain.... Tho iss liye Gunjan shooting location me already puhonch chukki hai. Challo, main tumhe le chalta hoon!'

I nodded as we hurried down the hallway to Neil's limousine. 😊😭

PART 1 END!

Plz tell me if u want me to continue! I will only do so with ur response! Love u loads guys!

Babydoll!😳😊

Hi guys! Here's the next part I know that I haven't replied to all of u...but I did read all the commets tht I have recieved on this thread! And I'm continuing only because of ur wonderful words! So I really hope that u enoy this updates!

Luv,

Babydoll!

I was trying to push back the tears that were forcing their way out of my eyes. Oh god Samrat..... Tum kyun aisa kar rahe ho mere dil ke saat...? Kyun khel rahe ho tum mere feelings ke saat...? Kya tum mujhe maaf bhi nahikar sakte? Kya maine itni baddi galti ki hai....?

I wiped my tears with the sleeve of my salwaar and tried to focus on the script in front of me. But my eyes were blurred with the water....

Oh god Samrat.... Oh god...... Shayad jo hota hai, achcha ke liye hi hota hai..... hayad yeh pyaar hi nahi tha.... Agar yeh sachcha pyaar hota, tho tum mujhpe wishwaas karte..... Tum kabhi nahi naraaz hote mujhse. Samrat..... Kya tum sab kuch bhool gayye...? Kya tum yeh bhi bhool gayye ke main sirf tumhari Chasmish hoon....? Tum badal gayye ho Samrat.... Tum buhot zyaada badal gayye ho. Tum mere Samrat nahi rahe..... Main iss Samrat ko jaanti tak nahi...... Mera Samrat mujhpe itna pyaar barsaata tha ke...ke...poori duniya jaise khil uth tha. Mera Samrat mere liye 150kmjaaya karta tha...sirf ek phool laane ke liye.... Woh tho mujhe dekhe bina ek pal nahi rehe pata.... Aur ab...? Do din ho chukke hain....Aur tumne ek baar bhi mere baareme nahi socha...apne Chashmish ke baareme nahi socha....? aise Samrat...? Tum itne naa samajh kaise ho sakte ho...? theek hai Samrat.... Agar tum yhi chahte ho...ke hum alag ho jaaye...tho wohi hoga.... Main bhi tumse baat nahi karoongi.... Nahi sochoongi tumhaare baareme.....Main tmhe aur tang nahi karoongi Samrat..... Tum kehte ho na, ke main tumhaare baa kabhi sunti nahi hoon. Fine Samrat.... Ab wohi hoga jo tum chahoge..... Main bhi tumse nahi miloongi..........Bas....Buhot ho gayya.....

I stalked away, furiously...................................

I gazed out of the car window, lost in my thoughts.

Chashmish..... Maine tumhe buhot dukh diya.... Aur mujhe pata hai ke maine itni baddi galati kardi ke meri maafi bhi kam padegi.... Tumne humesha mere liye achcha hi socha Chashmish.... Tumne mujhpar apna pyaar barsaaya..... Aur main...? Main humesha tumhe hurt kar jata hoon..... Mujhe pata hai ke in do dino me humaare beech jo bhi duriyan hai, woh sirf aur sirf meri waja se hai.... Tumne mujh kitni samjhaane ki koshish ki...par maine ek nahi suna.... Par ab main aane waala hoon Chashmish.... Ab main tumhe itna pyaar dunga...itna pyaar dunga ke tum kushi se paagal ho jaogi..... Main promise karta hoon Chashmish.....

Suddenly, I was snapped out of my thoughts.

'Don't worry Samrat.... Tumhaare aur Gunjan ke bich sab kuch theek ho jaayega....'

I gazed at him nervously....

'Aur agr theek nahi hua tho...?'

He laughed.

'Samrat...kya tum Gunjan se sacha pyaar karte ho...?'

I nodded.

'Haan par-'

'Par war kuch nahi.... Main tumse ek seedha sawaal poocha aur main seedha jawaab expect kar raha hoon. Kya tum Gunjan se sacha pyaar \karte ho? Haan...ya na...?'

I nodded.

'Haan.'

I replied confidently.

'Tho phir tum humesha ek baat yaad rakhna Samrat.... Sachcha pyaar kabhi nahi haarta. Woh humesha jeet tha aaya hai, aur humesha jeetega. Samjhe? Ab chinta choro aur uthro gaadi se. Hum puhonch gayye hain!'

I looked around me.... It was a beautiful garden...filled with flowers and shrubs. It was a beautiful scenery.

'Gunjan kahan hai?'

I asked urgently. He nodded in her direction.

I turned...and stood there mesmerized..... I had never sen anyone prettier. She was an angel from above. My steps faltered and I had to hold on to eil to seady myself and my spinning head. He laughed.

'Sambhaal ke Samrat! Behosh mat ho jaana! Main tumhe pakar nahi paonga!'

He warned. I nodded in acknowledgement. I walked closer to her...trying to keep my racing heart under control....Precap: 'Tum!??? Tum yahan kyun aaye ho?! Nikal jao yahanse.... mujhe tumse baat karne ka koi shauk nahi hai!' I shook my head.

'Nahi Chashmish.... Main nahi jaonga.... Main tumse baat karne aaya tha...aur baat kiya bina main jaonga nahi....'

'Ufff....!Tang aa chukki hoon tumhaare bachpana se! Tang aa chukki hoon tumhe har waqt samjhaate samjhaate! Mujhe nahi lagta ke mujhe uss insaan se baat karni chahiye, jo mujhe trust bhi nahi karta!'

I shook my head once more.

'Nahi Chashmish. Tumhe meri baat sunni hi padegi.....'

I clutched onto her hand tighter.

She clenched her teeth....

'Samrat.... Choro mera haath..... Mujhe sach me buhot guzza aa raha hai.....'

She wrenched her hand out of mine. She was just about to leave, when I called out,

'Chashmish! Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi!??

END

That's it for now guys! Plz do comment on it! Love ya loads! Babydoll!

Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago

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sonal

@sweetsonal156

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

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Sanju....it was awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....Mindblowing jaan.....Loved it to the CORE!!!....Fantastic dear.....Ab jaldie cont kar...warna tu mujhe janti hai lolz😆😆....
luv ya
Sona

Edited by sweetsonal156 - 15 years ago

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I don't know! U tell me! :D ;)

@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sweetsonal156
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Sanju....it was awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....Mindblowing jaan.....Loved it to the CORE!!!....Fantastic dear.....Ab jaldie cont kar...warna tu mujhe janti hai lolz😆😆....
luv ya
Sona

Yep! Will continue asap! Arre, mujhe koi marne ka shauk nahi hai! 😆 Aur nxt update me SaJan romance bhi maujood hoga!😉😳 Hope u'll like that part 2222222!

Love u!

Sanju!