-komal OS Corner-(JWM MN) OS, 28th july - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update.
Kaash...aisa ho...and Nups comebck...and we get to see a memory loss track + Sajan 2gether again.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

Yaaaayyy...
Me First..😃

I Just Loved This OS...
Superb...
Awww...
SaJan Married I Am Proud Of Samrat....👏
And Nupur Saved Mayyuuu...
Aur Usko Sab Kuch Yaad Agyaa...
Yaayyy...
Your OS Was Shooo Mindblowing...
Keep It Up <3...
*Sana*😳

Thanks jaan for you lovely comments.........you know how much i love when u comment...Embarrassed..

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

wao gr8 yr ...beautiful

thnkss means alot......Embarrassed

awesum yr
loved it full of drama suspence
but mast tha yr
finallyy npuur wapis agye

Thnxxx jaan.........i'm so glad tht u liked it........Embarrassed
thnxx dear.....Embarrassed

omg komal

that was really cute
i hope mjht mein bhi kucch aisa hi ho

thnxx jaan........i'm so so much glad tht u liked it.........Embarrassed

wowww yaar dis waz so cool do write more

n i hope stupid cvs k dimagh main ye jaaye lol
luv
fiza

thnxx dear..........Embarrassed

awesome

windblowing
loved it
thanks 4 the beatiful ff
loved reading it
thanks 4 da pm

thnxxxx jaan.........i'm really glad tht u liked it........Embarrassed
Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ramsha.aslam

AWESOME!!! i really liked it.but i have one request,continue it 😳.it was so cute when nupur said main kahan gaye thi 😆.missing mayur and their sizzling chemistry.
thanks a lot for reconciling mayur 🤗

thnkss dear...it really means alot..........🤗......

Originally posted by: ash_sajan

hey that was a good update!!

truly awesome os!!
both were too cute!!

thnxx dear........Embarrassed

Originally posted by: pagli91

That was awesome Komal... am glad it all worked out in the end and they all reunited and Nupur got her memory back. It was very careful thot out, something which CVs dnt know how 2 do.. so well done 2 u, if only they could read some of these ideas ppl r coming up with, they might actually learn something. 😆 Great job, do write another soon.😃

Oh jaan!!! i always love ur comment.........🤗.......your comments always touched me........Embarrassed

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

wooww owowowow wowowow wowowo amazing update yaar loved it alot and thx for the pm

thnxxxx jaan........Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi komal i am Aastha
i just luved it
please write more
and please pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
This OS is a short one on Arti's friendship.Iti s a very simple and sweet OS.Hope you'll like it.Do leave your feedback.

"Best friends" (Arti)
[Rati is in her home holding a photoframe of the mjht gang.Her eyes became teary as she is missing them badly especially Arjun.She remind every moment they spend together.The prank they used to play on eachother,to have lunch together,to go on party,etc.She is happy for them but in the past wo years they have became her family and now she finded somewhere that they have forgotten her,no one really miss her anymore not even Arjun, woh is her's best friend.]

[The bell rang and Rati opened the door and saw it was Arjun with some chinese food.]
Rati: What you doing here?
Arjun: What? We supposed to have dinner together,remember?
Rati: Oh yeah sorry i have forgotten that.Come in. So you bring chinese food huh?
Arjun: yeah because i know you love chinese food.
Rati: You comfort youself i'll bring the plates.
Arjun: ok....
[Rati brings thep lates and Arjun served the food.]

[Now they are eating their meal and chatting as well.]
Arjun: So how was your day?
Rati: Nice not at all boring,yours?
Arjun: Mine was Awesome.
Rati: Really?
Arjun: Yeah,you know me,sanaya and mohit went for shopping today.
Rati: Wow seems like fun.....
Arjun: Yeah. you know we always have fun on the sets.We do alot of thing.
Rati: ok (sad)
Arjun: You know today when sanaya entered her vanity van she saw a cockroach and shouted badly.(laugh) that was so hillarious you should have seen her face.Youk now we all have lunch together last night we went to a party.And that party was so awesome if you would have been there na you would have loved it.
Rati: Yeah but i'm not there anymore. (her eyes became teary)
[Arjun noticed her painful eyes.]
Arjun: Are you okay?
Rati: Yeah i'm fine. i'm done eating.
Arjun: BUt you ddint eat anything.
Rati: I'm i'm just not feeling to...
[He saw her walking away from the door.]
Arjun: Where you going?
Rati: Terrist need some fresh air.
Arjun: But its raining outside?
Rati: Yeah.
[Rati left.Arjun looked worried about her and followed her.]

[Rati standing in the rain.She always enjoyed being in rain.She lvoe the sound and the smell of the rain.But this time she wasnot enjoying anything.Only one thing was in her mind that have everyone forgotten her? When people whom we love stop showing the careness towards you it hurts and that's what Rati was going through.In past two years Mjht has became her family.And now she is feeling left alone.She closed her eyes.]
[Arjun came and saw her in the condition.He went ot her and looked at her and was in thoughts "why she is so depressed?"]
Arjun: Rati?
[Rati opened her eyes.]
Arjun: Tum thik toh hona?
Rati: Haan mein thik hun..
Arjun: Rati please mujhse toh kuch mat chupao...please batao na tumhe kounsi baat khaye ja rahi hai?
Rati: Arjun aisi koi baat nahi hai.
Arjun: Pease Rati....
[Rati looked at him..]
Rati: Baat yeh hai ki jab tum mujhe woh sab baatein bata rtahe the ki kaise tum log maaze karte ho yeh sa sun kar mujhe bohot bura laga.I mean mein khush hun ki tumlog khush ho but ab aisa lagta hai u guys don evem remember anymore.And you know what hurt most that you have also forgotten me.
Arjun: Youi think i dont miss you? offcourse i dont miss you. Why would i miss you? People miss those who get far away from them.And you are not apart from me.Rati we all miss you.What you think why i always call you after my shootings? why i always come to your home just to meet you? because rati for the last two years you have became a special part of me.And i dont think i can ever forget you kyunki jab logon se saath kuch bura hota hai toh woh usse humesha yaad rakhte hain.
[Rati gets teased.]
Rati: Arjun.(hit him)
Arjun: Rati you are my best friend and very special person to me i can never forget you never.
Rati: I'm glad that you said that.Youk now Arjun if mohit and sanaya have forgoteen me than it wouoldn't have effected me this much.But i always wanted you to be in my backside because you are my best friend.
Arjun: And we will be foreve.Ab chale yeh tumhe or thodi der baarish mein rukna hai?
Rati: Bas tohdi der aur?
Arjun: Thik hai....but lets dance.
Rati: What?
Arjun: come on na?
Rati: ok...
[They started dancing with eacother.And arjun is singing.]
Arjun: Khuda jaane ke mein fida hoon..Khuda jaane mein mitt gaya...khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hai ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda..
Rati: Bas karo mera kaan dard karne laga.(teases him)
Arjun: Hello itna bura bhi nahi gata hun mein.
Rati: Accha ab chale niche?
Arjun: Chalo.

[They are now at Rati's apartment.Arjun is about to leave.]
Arjun: Chalo now i'm going.Kal milta hun..
Rati: Ok.bbye.......and thnxx for everythnig.
Arjun: Thanks bolne ki zarurat nahi hai.
[Arjun was about to leave but then he remember somethnig.]
Arjun: Ek chiz toh mein bhool hi gaya..
Rati: Kya??
[Arjun took out a big packet of chocolates and gave it to her.]
Arjun: yeh tumhare liye.....tumhare chocolates bohot pasand hai na....or ek reason hain inn chocolates ke piche.
Rati: kya?
Arjun: Ki tum yeh sab kha kar jaldi se moti hojao or mien tumhe moti rati bulaun.(teases)
Rati: Stop it..mein moti nahi hungi.
Arjun: Dont worry moti hokar bhi tum bohot cute lago gi.Or mein tumhara best friend uss waqt bhi rahunga.I promise.
Rati: Thanks Arjun tum bohot acche ho.
Arjun: Janta hun (sweetly) bbyee and good night.
Rati: Byeee....

The End!!!
Hope you'll like it..
Do comment..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Komal
wow dear
i loved this shot
it was so sweet and simple
u portrayed their frship in a beautiful way.
ya ya ya we RAti is a special person to Arjun.
and he will never forget our angel .

haa moti rati sound very cute

awesome OS
fantastic
Do write more

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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice OS loved it alot plz do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey it was really nice one
Loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago

awwww.....that was so sweet n cute....!!...indeed both r cutie-pies!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing OS komal ArTi and their friendship it was a treat to read .......................loved it lots .................

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