my second OS on sajan- you r the one

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys this OS is based on new track's end as track has not started properly yet so this is only my speculation from end of the track i hope you will enjoy my second OS


gun comes to know abt sam's insecurity and his love for her made him to move away from her life and after knowing sam's unconditional love for gun neil tells the truth to gunji that he is only her good friend and respect her and appreciate her and he only want to test their bond and did everything , sam without saying any word with broken heart goes from there and gun feels sorry for him and start searching him and here starts my OS



king of night MOON is seeing one heart broken guy on the bench of one small tea stall his fav place whenever he becomes happy and sad he comes here to share his happiness and his sadness all r gone from there as its becoming so late but today he looses everything as we can say he looses his soul mate his love and his only one support and family CHASHMISH

SAMRATchashmish i want you to be happy fir bhale tum mere pas na ho neil tumhe bahot khush rakhega and that's why i did that to you and insist you to accept his love as he is best for you chashmish

his pain and his lost soul carving for her happiness and make him to speak this he is hurt but happy for his chashmish and while speaking this tears come into his eyes , tears of happiness for her but sadness for his lonely life
and to echo his pain clouds covers with darkness yes this is not season of monsoon but pure heart and true love make this happen in summer , clouds r there with water and waiting for his last cry for his love so to console him and to hug him they can fall and touch him

suddenly he stands up and start talking to his only supporter his dude ( ALMIGHTY GOD)

SAMRAT: hey dude mere sath hi aisa kyu why why why always me when i love someone from bottom of my life why you snatch them from my life why i don't deserve love from anyone first mom and dad left me then suhani left me and now my soul my only love and support chashmishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

saying this he kneel down and burst into tears , with his tears winds blows hardly to console him we r with you he has now no any meaning to live as his soul and heart is not there for him then how can he live without his chashmishhhhhhhhhhhhh

on the other side
NEIL: gunjan samrat tum se bahot pyar karata hai aur aaj samrat ne jo bhi kiya woh sirf tumhe khush rakhane ke liye kiya this si called true love

GUNJAN: muje pata hai ki samrat muje khush dekhana chahata hai par woh kyu nahi samajata ki main sirf usha se pyar karti hu maine apani puri jindgi ushke nam kar di hai phir woh kyu chahata hai ki main tum se pyar karu aur tumhari ban jau ye kaise hosakata hai
pyar sirf ek bar hota hai aur main woh kar chuki hu main sirf samrat ki thi , hu aur rahungi main bas ushke aise behaviour se naraz hu ki woh muje tumhe sop ke chala gaya

NEIL: gun main to sirf apani achhi dost ke pyar ko test karana chahata tha ki meri sabase innocent dost ka pyar samrat ushashe kitana pyar karata hai par aaj muje apane aap par sharm aa rahi hai ki main ye socha bhi kaise ki main kabhi tum dono ke pyar ke bond ka test le saku

GUNJAN:ushme shayad meri hi galati hai ki maine samrat ko u adhuri bat pe hi jane diya agar ushe main batati ki main sirf ushki hu toh woh muje ish tarah chhod kar nahi jataa

NEIL:gunjan abhi bhi der nahi huyi hai chalo ham ushake pas jake ushe sab batate hai

GUNJAN:thanks neil par please main akele ushe milane jaungi kyuki aaj tak aisi koi bat nahi hai ki jo hamane kise ke medium se solve ki ho ham ek dusare se pyar karate the ushse pehale best friends the aur ham apani bat khud hi solve karenge aur koi hamare bich nahi aa sakata

samrat aur main apani bato se hi ish bat ko suljayenge kyuki ham ek dusare par khud se bhi jyada trust karate hai

saying this she leave the place and neil feels proud to have such a beautiful couple in the world true love and best soul

gunjan tries his cell but in vain as sam leave his cell in his house so she reaches there but she sees close house and start thinking ki samrat abhi kaha hoga wind still blowing heavily as if it wants to give her a hint of him

GUNJAN: benji se puchhane ka bhi koi fayada nahi hai kyuki samrat ne ushe bhi nahi bataya hoga ki woh kaha hai muje hi pata karana padega ki woh kaha hoga

but after so much search she seat on one bench on the road and start thinking their best moments his madness for her and while thinking that smile comes on her face with tears

i am sorry samrat ki maine tumhe kabhi apane dil ke gherai se bataya nahi ki main tum se kitana pyar karati hu ki tumhari chashmish tumhari januableeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

januable hit her mind samrat ne muje ek bar januable kaha tha jab hum ushke fav tea stall par gaye aur ushe bataya tha ki jab woh udash ya khush hota hai woh waha par jata hai

she stands with confidence ha ha woh wahi hai mera dil kehata hai aur jab ushe ne ye kaha tab wind starts blowing again and she feels his pain in it and she start running to tea stall

why why why dude why always me kyu main itana bura hu ki kisi ke pyar ke layak nahi kyu aapane chashmish ko mere pas bheja ye dard dene ke liye par agar chashmish khush hai toh main ushki yado ke sath apani puri jindagi bita dunga kyuki she deserves besttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

ha i deserve best he hears this voice and shocks with it as very known voice says that he turns behind and finds gunjan

GUNJAN: ha samrat i deserve best ishi liye main aaj yaha aayi hu kyuki tum mere liye best ho samrat saying this she comes to him

both r looking each other their pain in their eyes their love

SAMRAT:chashmish neil bahot achha hai aur tumhe khush bhi rakhega aurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

at that moment gun put her finger on his lips and says bas samrat kintana juth bologe apane aap se ye tum bhi janate ho ki main sirf tum se pyar karti hu aur tumhare sath hi puri jingi gujarungi

SAMRAT: let go her finger par chashmish woh toh tumse pyar karata hai na aur tum bhi ushke sath khush rahogi

GUNJAN: nahi samrat woh toh hamare bond ki test le raha tha aur ham ushme pass bhi ho gaye by saying this naughtily she lightly hit him on his cheek and smiles with tears

SAMRAT: matalab ki woh sab ek natak tha aur tum ushe ...................

GUNJAN:cutting his words in the middle samrat woh mera dost hai bas aur kuch nahi tumne shayad muje kabhi kisi aur ladake ke sath nahi dekha ishi liye shayad laga ki main ushe pasand karati hu ha main ushe pasand karati hu par sirf ek dost ki tarah

SAMRAT: i m sorry chashmish main shayad kuch jayada hi possessiveness main ye soch liya tha aur shayad kabhi tumhe kisi aur ke sath nahi dekha toh insecurity main tumhe ushe ke pas chhod diya tha

GUNJAN: samrat sorry toh muje tumhe bolana chahiye agar maine pehale hi clear kiya hota ki woh mera achha dost hai toh kabhi ye sab nahi hota par thanks samrat kyuki ishi wajase aaj hamane apani life ki sab se badi exam pass karali

SAMRAT: (with relief and in naughty mood )chashmish sorry aur thanks ke alava bhi kuch hai jo aaj main sunana chahata hu ki tum mujse pyar karati ho
as he is aware of that this means to her a lot as last time she kissed him on his cheek when he demanded those three magical word so this time for kiss he says this

gunjan shyly understands his heart that what he mean to say by saying this

GUNJAN: samrat agar main kehane ki jagah pyar karake dikhau toh

samrat has a victory smile on his face as again he will get kiss like last time and he turn his face to let her kiss on his cheek
but all of sudden gun turns his face infront of her and sam doesn't know why she does this and with shock she kisses him on his lips and the time she kisses him rain starts , their first soulful kiss and to be witness of this soul clouds pour out water in the form of love ,rain of kiss, rain of love and rain of victory over insecurity ,demons and jealousy

and then after breaking their first attempt of love they feel joy and in the presence of rain they hear a song on that tea stall with their departure, rain of love

SASO KO SASO MAIN DHALNE DO JARA LAMHO KI GUJARISH HAI YE PASH AAJAYE HUM HUM HUM TUM TUMMMMMMMMMM HUM TUM
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ramramramram thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2

Yipieeeeeeeeeeee me first 😆 😆 😆,

Okay dear loads of hugs to you and a round of applause 👏 👏 👏 👏,
It was a beautiful OS
The emotions were exactly what SaJan would have felt
Loved how you described the way rain was falling to console him,
Ansd the ending was superb 👍🏼,
Keep writing more beautiul os's
Edited by sayankgunur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG..!!!
You are amzinngggggg......
Liked the whole scene...Please kash aisa hiii hooooo.....
Cant wait for more now tooo the track....
And the last scen was tooo good with the songggg in the background....please make more and more.....rhona dhona pyaar naughtiness is the biggest sign for love in relationship and I think SaJan have verything in their love...Nothing missing...UUFFFFF....Sorrrry zyaada hi bol rahi hoon...Not just the scene lekin main tooo SaJan kaaay pyaar main bolrahi hoon Sorrrryyyyyy 😆 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeee os
loved it
i dnt have words im speechless
it was mindblowing
loved it
wish something similar happen in the show
lov
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aashiiiiiiiii.... jaana its beautiful...!!!
srsly.. amazinggggg...
the way u explained sam's pain in d beginning.. tears of happiness n joy both...!!! it ws all awesomeee..
luved it to d core..
n d ending.. hayeeeeeee 😍 😍 😍 sam gt a kiss... 😳 n saason ko saason mein.... 😍 😍 😍
lovely dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sayankgunur

Yipieeeeeeeeeeee me first 😆😆😆,


Okay dear loads of hugs to you and a round of applause 👏,

It was a beautiful OS

The emotions were exactly what SaJan would have felt

Loved how you described the way rain was falling to console him,

Ansd the ending was superb 👍🏼,

Keep writing more beautiul os's

hey thanks reeshu for your support and ya you r first hon this time 😳 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aashi meri jaan....that was brilliant dear....god the way samrat connect to god i just felt so bad for a such a lovable yet lost soul....it reminded of salman's emotional scene of his talk with his father in HDDCS......the rain correlation was so apt n filling aashi.....and the hey shona kiss connection in the end, wat do i tell about it....it gave a good continuity sweety keeping the freshness of track in mind.....loved it totallly👏👏👏👏👏....n last scene looks like gina ka asar tum pe finally kaam aa gaya😆😆😆.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashizin

hey thanks reeshu for your support and ya you r first hon this time 😳 😃 😃

Dosti main no sorry no thank you
Okay kuch zaada filmy hogaya😆 😆 😆,
butit was my pleaure to read, aur friends support hone ke liye hi hotein hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
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And please give me the link tooo your first one OS.....
You are too good...
Soo I want the other one toooo
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

OMG..!!!
You are amzinngggggg......
Liked the whole scene...Please kash aisa hiii hooooo.....
Cant wait for more now tooo the track....
And the last scen was tooo good with the songggg in the background....please make more and more.....rhona dhona pyaar naughtiness is the biggest sign for love in relationship and I think SaJan have verything in their love...Nothing missing...UUFFFFF....Sorrrry zyaada hi bol rahi hoon...Not just the scene lekin main tooo SaJan kaaay pyaar main bolrahi hoon Sorrrryyyyyy 😆 😳

hey dear thank u so much for your reply and dear need not to say sorry as sajan hai hi itane januable ki hame pyar aajaye 😉 😃

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