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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii
it was lovely
i was totaly lost into ii swear some people on this forum like u can right and think of better sceens then the cvs ever will

they shpuld totally see this

and im sure naveena enjoyed her birthday gift

and thanx to her i also got a little treat

in the forum of this wonderfull os

Awwww!!! Thanks a million dear for ur lovely reply. I'm extremely glad that u liked it. Ur comments have really touched me.

Thanks again..😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95
resvered

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awesome os so touching it was superb I'm speechless mindblowing

Thanks a lot dear..😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -Ragini-
Ayesha!! First of all i love the title of ur OS..I owe my life to you! uve written the whole thing so beautifully, i was just lost in it!! and i imagined each and every scene..It is very SaJanish indeed! and u wrote every moment so well!! i was touched when i read tht part where Sam hugs his mom!! i could just imagine this beautiful scene and then the blushing of Gunjan! I so wish the CV's had shown Sam's mom just once and nice bonding between mother and son, but i'm guessing we wont get to see it anytime soon! Im sure Navz is going to adore this gift of yours, because its perfect, i wish to see a scene like this on Sajan

Ragini, thank u sooooo much dear for liking my OS. I was thinking of several other titles, but found this one to be the most suitable. Awww!!! u cud really imagine the scenes!!! I'm soo happy and relieved after knowing this. The parts that u've mentioned (Sam hugging his mom, and Gunjan blushing) r amongst of my favs. too.

Thanks again sweety....U rock!!! 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: yasri
Wowwwwwww..............I'm speechless....!!

Thanks a lotttttt 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ---ishita---
beautifl pice of writing...
it could'nt be more approprtiate....

that was indeed awesome....

Thanks a lot Ishita for liking this scene..😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: zummi03
it was awesome dear..
wonderfully written..
loved it..

Thanks a lot for liking it 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: maisha.hossain7
awesommeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: xaviara
OMG Ashu !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you sooo much !!! This is so sweet of u !!!! I can't believe you wrote such an amazing OS for my birthday !!!!! *hugs* I'm SO touched !!! You all have made my day so special, that I will never ever forget this birthday ever and this is one of the most sweetest and beautiful gifts ever !!!!

U know Sam and his Mom's reunion could have have been better then this !! You have written Sam's emotions so brilliantly !! Especially his fear and panic about loosing Gunjan, how he desperately asks her not to go in front of mom, because she is is his only family left and how he is scared that she will steal her from him !!!! You have worded it so beautifully !!! But my favorite bit is definitely the conversation between SaJan which his mom over heard !!! Ashu I really want to request you to send this OS to the CV's, even if they can't take the whole scene, but when the time comes for Gunjan to talk to Sam about his mom, I want the CV's to your your dialogues !! They are PERFECT !! 😳 Absolutely perfect !!! I wish save and cherish this OS forever, as it has touched my heart, because not only you have written it with so much love, the OS itself describes LOVE so beautifully, whether it is the love between SaJan, or the love between Sam and his mom, which has always existed in Sam's heart, but only needed Gunjan's guidance and support for that love to come out in the open from the sorner of his heart !!! 😳

Thank you for such a beautiful gift sweetheart !!! Love you so much !!!! *hugs*

Firstly, Naveen i wasn't expecting that u'll read this OS and that too, so soon. So, thank u sooo much for taking time out and reading it. *hugsssss*

U know wat, the credit for this goes to u sweetheart. When we were discussing abt the upcoming SaJan track and v both were somewat disappointed wid Sam's mom's track being almost ruled out, just then this idea clicked me. And also, it was ur birthday, and i had to gift something to u. So, this is the only thing i cud try my hand at. But ur reply, love and affection has sooo very much touched me and i'm really at a loss of words to express my thanks to u.

Naveen, i'm extremely delighted and am dancing over the moon coz of the fact that u found this OS perfect. Believe me, it IS NOT at all this much praise worthy, and being perfect is toh out of question. I've just tried to keep intact the emotions, feelings, apprehension, insecurities of SaJan that wud surface if such a thing ever happens. The part that u've mentioned reg Sam asking Gunjan not to go infront of his mom, made logic to me, coz as u said, Gunjan IS his entire world, his only family, an he cannot even think of a life widout her. So, its but natural that he doesn't want her to go in front of his mom, coz somewhere he feels that she'll take Gunjan away from him. He has already lost his family and now cannot ever bear the pain of losing Gunjan.

Abt the SaJan dialogues, when i was writing them, i just had Sam and Gunjan in my mind and was only thinking wat she wud say in such a situation, and how he will repond to her, and the words automatically came flowing.

OMG!!! Ur reply is like a wish come true for me Naveen. I'm elated that u liked this small gift from me. Thank u soooo much sweetheart. All the best and God bless u. Loads and loads of love!!! 🤗

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: sweetsonal156
awsomeeeeeeee...
too good...
mindblowing...

Thanks a lot dear 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: zobsheh
a fabulous one shot but ALAS ab humein ye scene pat nahin kab dekhne ko milega kyunki suhaani to chali gayi...oh i so hope that suhaani comes back as a cameo for this track other wise it will not be the same :( ...i hope we get this track soon

Awww thanks a lot for ur sweet reply. I also think that we'll not get dis track and that's y i tried and wrote this scene.

Thanks again for liking it. 😊