Originally posted by: DiyaS
am back ... after the rather disappointing episode tonight, this was AMAZING ... 👏 👏 👏
first of all, I just loved the way you started with that dialogue of samrat's -"koi shaadi ko lekar itna khush ho sakta hai, maine kabhi socha nahin tha" ... and gunjan looks at him realising for the first time that he NEVER meant to propose to her any time at all ... she had just misunderstood him completely ...
"ore manva, tu to baawra hai, tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai. tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai baawre, kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte" ... what were you thinking, why did you dream those dreams???
and her expressions ... the words ... as though the song was made for her!!! 😭 😭 😭
"jo barse sapne boond boond, naino ko moond moond" ... her eyes, tear filled ...
and then he dances with her ... and the mood switches to "goonja sa hai koi iktara" as she tries to smile with him ...
"Sun rahi hun sud budh kho ke ... koi main kahani" ... and he takes out the ring ... and she wonders - was this just a story I was listening to ... and I LOVED the way you interspersed the dialogues here ... why she started thinking about a proposal in the first place ... idiot sam - the whole gang knew the ring was Adhiraj's, you couldn't tell Gunjan???? 😡
"poori kahani hai kya, kise hai pata" ... what she saw was just a part of the story, not the whole ...
"main to kisi ki hoke, yeh bhi na jaani ... rut hai yeh do pal ki ya, rahegi sada" ... and the dialogues again ... if he never thought about marriage, how can they stay together forever as he promised to do ...
and again, he takes her hand and says ... yeh shaadi and all, i've never thought about it ... "dekh na sakun, kaise main chalun, anjane raaste" ... she can't see the way ahead, how can she carry on, the path she thought was all mapped out and planned for eternity is suddenly blurred, completely different from the one she'd seen for herself - so where does she go from here ...
and the last bit ... "main tumse bahut pyaar karta hun chashmish"
and she replies "par shaadi nahin karoge" and the music changes to melancholy with the last haunting aalap ...
👏 👏 👏 this was beautiful!!!!
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@ blue : ABSOLUTELY !!! I mean...I stil tried to take in the BEST out of all the mediocre stuff tht v got ... but the overall picture seems depressing ... in a way m glad abt it ...coz now I can safely and completely console and convince myself - they are jus a GOD DAMN TV couple and fictional characters !!!
diya...I was afraid how it wud turn out to b frankly..coz I hav NEVER made a VM soo soo fast ( except I think pehli baar ) ... I mean, I heard the song and then almost immediately in one hr or so it was dun! and I was like..huh?! 😲 but mayb..coz like u said...the lyrics were as good as WRITTEN for tht one scene ..
@ red : yeah now its easier to get angry on sam ... coz he doesnt seem to b in AS MUCH pain as I expected him to b after sat ... 😡😡😡 guess v KNOW who is to b blamed for it .. no point in even venting and ranting abt it ..
@ voilet : yeah thats MY fav bit too from the VM .. I mean, I hadnt changed the scene after I put in "kaise main chalun.. dekh na sakoon..anjaane raaste.." and this scene jus flowed in wit the "goonja sa hain koi iktara.." coz at tht moment ... both of them were in LOVE ... both knew tht life is incomplete without each other ... and YET, there were certain feelings only from one side ...
honestly, I HATED the sajan bits from the song sajda ... mohit's expressions irritated me ( reminded me of those days when he cudnt act much ) and I felt like giving him a tight slap .. but wit the "goonja sa hain koi iktara" it seemed a lil bearable .. 😆😆
m soo soo GLAD u loved it diya ... and its all thank to u..I wudnt hav ever though of it ... 🤗🤗🤗