A new mjht os:hope the plea has been accepted!!!

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Hi to all my lovely frnds out there.guys here is another one shot from my side.Hope
your response will be as warm as last time.Pls Pls Pls don't forget to comment or atleast hit the like button.
I have written this os keeping in mind the precap where mayank calls at bui's place……………….in this oneshot sajan and nupur are returning to Mumbai and mayank comes to know that the secret of him not being babloo is out and nupur is returning from maurena!!!!so sit back…read and pls comment.
Shifting sides on his bed….mayank felt extremely sick…not only bcoz he was surrounded with so many tensions….but bcoz while leaving maurena he didn't say even a word to nupur!!!His letter….though he wrote it but surely nupur didn't read it coz if she would have read she would have surely called!!!mayank realises there was no use of lieng on the bed trying to sleep coz since the last night he has been doing the same but failed to even have a nap!!! He had to call her in any way!!!so mayank gets up and quickly moves near the telephone….fingers move upon the numbers as if
this is the only contact he remembers…as if while sleeping if he is asked what is 2 + 2 he may get confussed but If someone will ask nupur's contact number he will say it in a single go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He is constantly praying to god to let nupur pick up the call…but alas!!!his hope turns into disappointment. Its bui who has picked up the phone…
Bui:hello……
M:hello…bui namaste main maya…mera matlab main babloo bol raha hoon….kya main nupur se baat kar sakta hoon………………
Bui:((rudely)nupur se!!!!!!!!!!!!pehle uski bui se to baat kar lo phir kisi se baat karne ki koi zaroorat nahin bachegi!!!
M:bui aap aisa kyun kah rahi hain…main to…
Bui:koi zaroorat nahin hai mujhe bui bulane ki….ye saare shahar ke ladke ek jaise hote hain…pata nahin ye Mumbai ke ladkon ne kya jaado chala dia hai gunjan aur nupur par….aur haan yahan daubara phone karne ki koshish bhi mat karna!!!
And she angrily puts down the receiver…without listening to mayank…now mayank who was already very depressed gets even more worried…he could sense that something had gone wrong!!!
But he doesn't lose hope and calls at bui's house again.This time chinky picks up the phone….
Ch:Hello….
M:hello…dekhiye pls aap jo bhi hain pls phone mat rakhiyega…mujhe nupur se baat karni hai…
Ch:aap…aap mayank hain na…main chinky bol rahi hoon.
M:chinky tumhein kaise pata ki mera naam….
Ch:dekhiye yahaan bui aur tauji ko aapke bare mein sab pata chal chukka hai isliye aap yahaan phir phone mat keejiye ga.
M:ek minute chinky….pls main sirf ek baar nupur se baat karna chahta hoon.
Ch:nupur didi yahan nahin hain…woh aur gunjan didi aaj subah hi dia aur uday bhaiya ke saath mumbai ke liye nikal gayi…and listening to bui's call chinky hurriedly keeps the receiver down!!!
Hearing all this though mayank is very happy but still he is scared that nupur hadn't read the letter…coz otherwise she must have called.now mayank wants to meet her asap…..so much he has to say to her….he just wishes to hug her once and then he knows that everything will be fine!!!
So he gets ready and leaves for nupur's house!!!
Scene shift:
Now samrat ,gunjan and nupur have arrived at Mumbai station.samrat ,gunjan and nupur sit in one auto and benji,dia and uday in the other…and all of them leave towards the bhushan house.
Samrat,gunjan and nupur arrive home first….n ofcourse samrat knows why…dia and benji must have had a fight abt the correct route and uday must have made both of them as well as the autu wale bhaiya much more confused!!! And as always they would have lost way in the very city in which they live since their birth!!!but nevertheless samrat,gunjan and nupur reach home….
before gunjan and nupur could say anything,..samrat speaks…
S:ahhhh its so good to be back!!!! Par waise chashmish agar tum mujhe ek cup coffee pilane ke liye itni excited ho…to main tumhein mana kaise kar sakta hoon!!!
G:coffee….par samrat…..
S:koi baat nahin chashmish don't worry main coffee zaroor piyoonga….
Though nupur is in no mood of entertaining samrat but she knows that her sweet sister wishes him to stay….and gunjan was not at all wrong….afterall she got her love after going through so much of pain!!!
So nupur asks both of them to freshen up while she will prepare the "coffee"…gosh this word only invokes an adrenaline rush inside nupur…bcoz this word is so intimately related to mayank…she can't understand what to do!!!his each memory…each word hammers inside her mind and pierces her heart every moment…she doesn't understand what will she do when he will be in front of her.and thinking all
this nupur goes to the kitchen.
Scene shift:
Now samrat and gunjan are having a sweet conversation….their love…its so visible…both of them could feel the serenity of aach others precence and are lost in this cozy experience when there is a telephone ring….Seeing samrat and gunjan lost into each other nupur who though was preparing coffee in the kitchen comes to pick up the phone.Its benji on line who actually misunderstands nupur as gunjan and speaks everything without a halt!!!
N:hello….
B:hello…hello….gunjan main benji bol raha hoon….gunjan hum…mera matlab dia main aur uday hum city hospital jaa rahe hain…..
N(shocked):par benji…..
B:dekho gunjan abhi kuch mat poocho…actually jab hum ghar wapas aa rahe the…to humne dekha ki road pe kissi ka accident hua tha….aur…aur jab hum auto se uttar ke gaye…to dekha ki woh koi aur nahin mayank hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
These words and nupur's world turned into upside down!!!!the floor beneath her feet slipped as if she was no longer bound to it!!!the receiver falls from her hand and she herself falls on the floor being completely numb!!!! Seeing such a shocked reaction samrat and gunjan rush towards nupur….
G:di di kya hua di….di tum kuch bol kyun nahin rahi,,,di kuch bolo di….kaun hai phone par!!!!
Seeing this samrat picks up the phone to know who was there on line…..benji tells to samrat what all he said to nupur leaving him completely shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Scene shift:
City hospital:
Benji and uday are walking around the corridor waiting for the doctor who had taken mayank inside for tratement to arrive…mayank's mom is sitting on the bench outside the room in anticipation of seeing her son…seing her mayu once!!!seeing her like this….dia tries to pacify her in every possible way but all her efforts go in vain.for the first time his mom felt so helpless…she didn't know what to do.
Only then samrat,nupur and gunjan arrive at the hospital….as soon as nupur sees mayu's mom she runs and hugs her!!!!
N:aunty!!!mayank….mayank …..
Seeing her like this even mayank's mom who till now was holding back her tears for so long breaks completely!!!!
MM:mujhe maaf karde nupur beta…na hi main mayu ko apni job ke bare main sab sach batati…na hi woh tujhe maurena se chod kar ata aur na hi ye sab hota!!!!
Nupur was shocked to hear this…
N:kya!!!job….aap kis ki baat kar rahi hain aunty???
MM:nupur….jab mayu ne mujhe ye batane ke liye phone kiya the ke woh teri bui ke saamne apne pyaar ka izhaar karne jaa raha hai….tabhi usko ye sab pata chal gaya ki meri job chali gayi hai aur humara ghar bhi humse khali karvaya jaa raha hai………..aur isliye woh kisi se bina kuch kahe Mumbai aa gaya….
mujhe us din hi us se kuch nahin kahna chahiye tha….
And nupur didn't know how to forgive herself………………how can she even think that her mayank will leave her midway like this….what all he did was for his mom!!!!realizing all this nupur's tears didn't know where to stop……………they flowed from her eyes as if they will never stop!!!but before she could gather any courage to speak….the nurse comes out and everybody looks upto her to know abt mayank's condition….
S:sister mayank…humara frnd…woh kaisa hai….woh…he is alright na…..
Nu:dekhiye unke sar pe bahut gahri chot hai….aur isliye unhein blood ki sakht zaroorat hai…..but…
S:but what sister!!!!
Nu:dekhiye pls aap dheere boliye…ye hospital hai….aur bcoz unka blood grp kafi rare hai humare paas us blood ki jo ek bottle thi woh hum unhein chada chuke hain…but he needs more blood….isliye aap kahin se bhi AB-ve blood ki ek bottle arrange kejiye!!!
Everyone look upto each other…..no one had AB-ve blood group neither mayank's mom!!!
While all of them are thinking this samrat speaks suddenly
S:guys main mayank ko blood de sakta hoon….yes ofcourse…I can donate!!!
B:but samrat tera blood grp O-ve hai….
S:exactly benji and so I am a universal donor….main kisi bhi negative bllod grp wale person ko blood donate kar sakta hoon!!!
Samrat immediately calls up the nurse who takes him for the necessary tests.after collecting samrat's blood sample the nurse asks him to wait outside till she will get the report ready!!!but he waits there only………….may be bcoz he knows that his haemoglobin levels are always less and if anyone would come to know this they will never allow him to donate blood to mayank…he knows…in no way gunjan should come to know this!!!after nearly half an hour…while samrat is still thinking all this….the nurse arrives with the report…
Nu:are aap abhi tak yahin hain….maine aapse bahar wait karne ko kaha tha na….
S:sister aap pls bataiye ki report mein kya hai…
The sister was surprised to realize his desperation….but she opens the report and reads it.
Nu:I am sorry mr.shergill aap patient ko blood donate nahin kar sakte…..
S:but why…sister kya mera haemoglobin level zyaada kam hai…..
Nu:zyaada to nahin but its on border.aap blood donate kar sakte hain lekin blood donation ke baad aap kafi dizzy aur weak feel kareinge aur aap faint bhi ho sakte hain isliye its better that u don't donate …………..
S:I don't care sister aap pls mera blood lelijiye….main mayank ko kuch nahin hone de sakta…. though the sister denies but it was samrat….who knows how to please ppl….but he asks the nurse not to tell anything to anybody…..especially gunjan.
Now samrat comes out of the room to find a really anxious gunjan who was eagerly waiting for him...
G:samrat tum…tum…itni der se andar kya kar rahe the…
S:kuch nahin chashmish woh bas kuch tests…but you know what main mayank ko blood donate kar sakta hoon…my reports are completely fine.
This brings a sigh of relief on everyones face and finally nupur smiles after so long………………..seeing this Gunjan's happiness knew no bounds.she so much wishes to thank samrat for always being with her and for always bringing smiles on the face of those whom she loves but only then the nurse comes to call samrat…
Nu:aap pls andar chaliye.
S:but sister ye to mayank ka room hai….
Nu:yes actually paas mein ek mall mein aag lag jaane ki wajah se aaj hospital mein bahut saari casualities hain isliye aur koi room is waqt khali nahin hai…..and bcoz is room mein extra bed hai aap yahin par hi blood donate kar sakte hai.
Well just listening this nupur understands that it was a good chance of seeing mayank atleast once and nupur surely knew that even gunjan didn't want samrat to go alone….so she requests the nurse to allow her and gunjan come along with samrat.samrat opposes this strongly as he didn't want gunjan to see him giving blood….she loves him so much and thus he knows how much sensitive she is especially when its upon him!!!but neither gunjan nore nupur heard anything from samrat and the nurse and they come along.as the three of them enter inside the room….within a fraction of a second nupur's eyes are stuck on mayank…..he was lying on the bed unconscious and his head bandaged!!!!!!!!!!!!!his hands had the IVs and the needles forced into them………….nupur cant see her love like this….within a moment her eyes are brim with tears and she almost goes blind due to them!!! On the other hand the nurse makes samrat lie on the bed and starts preparing the IV injection for him…gunjan was constantly looking at the needle but samrat at her….he knew all this will happen…that's why he didn't want gunjan to come inside.samrat sees that a small drop of tear trickles down her eye.seeing this samrat nods her head not to do so and through his eyes asks gunjan to see to nupur….gunjan wipes off her tear and turns towards nupur.
G:(keeping her hand on nupur's shoulder)di tum bilkul chinta mat karo…mayank bilkul theek ho jayega di…bas use ab tumhare saath ki zaroorat hai……
Listening this nupur who still had tears in her eyes goes near mayank's bed and sits there holding his hand while he was still unconscious.as gunjan sees nupur has seated there she turns around towards samrat to find that the nurse had already injected the IV in his arm and he was still having that innocent and pacifying smile on his lips….gunjan understaood all…that's why he asked her to look the other way round to nupur….coz he didn't want her to see him getting injected!!!gunjan cannot understand how someone can love her so much!!!!!!!
Scene shift:
Samrat had donated blood to mayank and as the nurse said he started feeling dizzy…but he tries to hide all this.now all of them are sitting outside waiting for the doc to arrive and tell abt mayank.after an hour the doc arrives.and everybody gets up to enquire abt mayank…
Doc:don't worry he is alright now….unhein hosh aa gaya hai aur ab aap unse mil sakte hain.
Listening this nupur benji dia uday and yes mayank's mom rush inside.as they enter inside they see that mayank's eyes are open but he is stii very weak….mayank's mom goes and hugs him!!!
MM:thank god mayu tu theek hai…main to dar hi gayi thi…kya zaroorat thi road bina soche samjhe cross karne ki???
M:woh…woh…maa main nupur ke bare mein soch rahe tha aur….(and he coughs…he is too weak to speak) and nupur can see this.she quickly comes to him.mayank is surprised to see her!!!
N:mayank pls zyaada bolne ki koshish mat karo…tumhein rest ki zaroorat hai!!!
M:nupur tum….nupur mujhe maaf kardo ki main bina kuch kahe hi maurena se aagaya…main tumse…
N:mayank tumhein kuch kahne ki zaroorat nahin hai aunty ne mujhe sab sach bata dia hai…..aur sorry to mujhe kahna chahiye ki main…(and she breaks mid way).
D:oh nupur pls ab nahin…ab to mayank bhi theek ho gaya hai…ab tum dono ko sirf khush rehna hai…
And nupur nods to her but she is still crying.
B:dia tum bhi na!!!khush to yeh tab rahenge na jab hum yahaan se jayenge….kyun mayank???
D:U r right benji humein bahar chalna chahiye.
And all of them leave.along with dia ,benji and uday mayu's mom also is going out.
N:aunty aap kyun baahar jaa rahi hain…aap yehin bethiye mayank ke paas.
Nupur beta mujhe kuch kaam hai….tum dono baat karo main abh aati hoon.as she leave mayank and nupur are left alone in the room…and now they didn't need any words to explain….they just come closer to each other and are lost into a hug…...well that was the only experience both of them were waiting for since nearly ages!!!
Scene shift:
Gunjan is sitting with samrat outside the room.she is very tensed.thats why they didn't come to see mayank…actually samrat was almost abt to fall due to weakness when gunjan noticed this and stepped behind.
G:mujhe samajh nahin aa raha samrat….tumne to kaha tha ki tumhari report bilkul theek hai…phir itni weakness!!!
S:aaaaaaaaaa…woh chashmish….
MM:(coming from behind):woh isliye gunjan beta kyunki samrat ka haemoglobin level bilkul border par hai but isne hum sabse ye baat chupai….
Gunjan is shocked to hear this.
MM:mujhe samrat ki aankhein dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki woh theek feel nahin kar raha….isliye maine nurse se poocha to usne kaha ki mayank ko blood donate karne ke liye samrat ne ye baat humse chupai!!!Tujhe pata hai gunjan main kuch din pehle ek mandir gayi thi…wahan se ganesh ji ki ek murti lene keliye….kahte hain ki wahan ki ye murti agar koi bada kisi naye couple ko de to woh unke liye ek lucky charm ki tarah kaam karti hai…unhein kabhi alag nahin hone deti.woh main mayu aur nupur ke liye lene gayi thi but ghar aakar dekha to galti se mere paas ek ki jagah do murtiyan aa gayi thi….tab se woh dono mere bag mein padi hain aur mujhe ye samajh nahin aa raha tha ki main doosri ka kya karoon….par aaj mujhe samajh aa gaya hai ki mere paas do murtiyan kaise aayi aur kyun aayi….and saying this she takes out that golden divine idol and keeps it on gunjan's hand.she kisses on samrat's head and leaves from there!!!!and gunjan and samrat are left still….gunjan couldnot believe her dream came true….the blessings for which she was longing….the blessings which gunjan wanted bui to give to her and samrat…..she got them from mayu's mom!!!!she feels as if her love has become even more pure and divine!!!and it was all bcoz of samrat….samrat's love and his goodness made her experience this heavenly emotion…..so she begins to speak to thank samrat but he keeps a finger on her lips………and both of them just like mayank and nupur are lost into each others arms!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well that's it guys.I hope ite good.pls don't forget to leave your comments even if you don't like it.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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so...m d 1st one to coment!!!
hey...so wow man...twas sooo nice...
really...
i luvd it!!!
pls do pm me next time when u rite an OS...
this was awesum!!!
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@A-N-S-H-I-K-A thnx so much anshika.............i will surely pm to you.and thnx for commenting dear...thnx a ton!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's a good oneshot dear :0

Just awesome !!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sahika..................by god...........another rockin awesome os dear.........uff...........superb.........heavenly superb....👏..................this time.............i wished 100% ditto hi hote in serial too lik in this OS......uff...it ws tht much perfect yaar............har ek scene............i'm in love wid dis.............👏.............yaar......plzz..its high-time u start a MJHT ff yaar........plzzzzzzz...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@nikki028
oh thnx so very much nikki.................i am so happy you liked my one shot.as far as ff is concerned i already had started an ff but just wrote two parts of it!!! i was actually thinking of reviving that one.may be you have read...it was posted by the name of "the wedding bells" pt1 and pt2.but yes if i will revive it i will surely pm it to you.but seriously yaar thnx for such a warm reply.
lots of love
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Yashika!!!

Very emotional & happiness se bhara hua OS. & i m sooooooooo happy that u created a scene for sajan & mayu's mom. & after watching 2day's episode, i m actually talking abt samrat & bauji scene, now i really want mayu's mom & sam's scene. Main to tumhe aise bol rahi hun jaise ki tum hi creative team ki member ho & i m requesting u to put some scene like that. 😆😆😆

But anyway, it was awesome/ Pichle waale jitna itnaaaaaaa acha nahi tha but acha tha.

Vinu

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Posted: 15 years ago
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@mjht_admirer oh thnx so much vinu!!! and yes even i loved the scene between bauji and samrat it was just too awesome and touching and nice!!!and yes i agree this os couldn't be that good...actually just wrote that during the diwali holidays...i was totally free and thus spent a good deal of time thinking abt that but this one wrote it today only even couldn't edit it properly.but still so happy that you replied...i will surey write more and better one shots.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fantastic Work I think u shud be one of the creative of MJHT atleats kuch naya toh dekhne ko milega
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@moonlitnisha Thnx sooooooooooooooooo very much dear for liking the os and thnx so much for such sweet reply!!!
Lots of Love!!!

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