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Posted: 16 years ago
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okkayy i recently read some scooops on how mayank and nupur r gonna go on their first date...😳
so well i wuzzz thinking aboutt how it wouldd bee... n i came up with this one shott...
do abide with the mistakes... first take on a one shott....
thanks everyonee...
love ya guyss.s....
okay here goes....
gunjan slowly entered her sisters room to find her sister standing there in front of the mirror, with 5 dresses in her hands, and another pile of dresses lying on the bed.
gunjan- di ye sab kya hai?
she asked her sister with a shocked look on her face.
nupur- kuch nahi gunjan.. wo aise hi...
gunjan- kya hua di? tum kahi ja rahi ho kya?
nupur- gunjan woo....
gunjan looked at her sister a little dissapointed, slowly tears welled up in gunjans eyes.
gunjan- di aapko yaad hai, jab aapko pata chala tha ki main samrat se pyaar karti hoon, to aapne kya poocha tha mujhse?
nupur looked up feeling a slight guilt welling up inside her.
gunjan- aapne mujhse poocha tha ki kya mujhe aap pe bharosa hai ya nahi?
nupur- gunjan main...
gunjan- (her voice slowly breaking) di ab aap hi hai jo mere saath hai, maine apna pehla pyaar aur apna sabse achha dost khoya hai di. ab aap to mujhse moo mat modiye.
saying this she sat down on the floor crying, unable to stop herself.
nupur slowly walked towards gunjan and comforted her.. hugging her in her arms.
after some time when gunjan had calmed down nupur sat by her and said- gunjan.. main darasal date pe jaa rahi hoo.
gunjan looked up shocked- kya?,,, kaun?... kaise??
she asked getting more hyper with each question.
nupur- gunjan mujhe meri baat to kehne de! main darasal mayank ke saath...
gunjan- di mayank aur aap? KAISEE???
nupur- gunjan wo play ke anth mein usne mujhse apni dil ki baat kahi thi aur maine bhi.....
gunjan- stage pe?
nupur- haan gunjan-
and suddenly she felt gunjan flung her arms around her as gunjan whispered- di aap bahut lucky ho.. aapko apna pehla pyaar mila.
and so was continuing their sisterly talk when suddenly some one bangged open their door and said- DOLL... TUMSE MILNE MAYANK AAYA HUA HAI.
nupur quickly got up and ran downstairs to find herself face to face with mayank who was wearing a white kurta top and blue faded jeans. the spikes were slightly broken this time.. all in all he looked hot.
mayank- chale nupur?
he asked holding out his hand
which she without a second moments thought took.
he slowly walked out of the door her hand in his.
they both could feel the electricity passing through them as their hands touched.
as soon as they reached the car mayank opened the door for her and made her sit inside after which he quickly pushed his way in and started driving. after an hours driving nupur who got exhausted of the excitement asked- mayank hum jaa kahaa rahe hai?
mayank smiled and said- dhekhti jao.
nupur- by god mayank. tumse koi bhi baat nikalwaana kitna mushkil hota hai!
mayank- shitt!!
nupur looked up and asked- kya hua mayank?
mayank- cotton bhool gaya ghar pe!
nupur- MAYANKK!!!!
nearly 3 hours later-
nupur had finally slept off, unable to control her exhaustion. mayank who sat by her driving couldnt help but smile at the innocence which her face displayd even when she was sleepingg..😛
as the air blew through her hair, it kept flying all over her face. mayank slowly parked the car at the destination and leaned close to nupur. so close that he could feel her warm breath on his lips. he slowly pulled off the strands of hair falling on her face and stroked her face with his finger then he slowly whispered- nupur?
when suddenly nupur jerked and got up only to hit her head with mayanks.
m & n- owwwwww....
nupur- sooo sorry mayank. wo mainn....
mayank- relax. chalo hum pahunch gayye hai
nupur- kahaan?
she asked looking around the unfamiliar surroundings.
mayank- ab sab kuch main bata dunga nupur.. to suprise to rahega hi nahi.
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plzz lemme noe if i shudd continuee!!!
do aur parts hai iske..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg omg omg omg omg... tuhina uve left me wanting more... wheres the resttt????? jaldi update kardoo plzzz.... shitttttt.... update karoo jaldi se!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWESOME TUHINA😉
PLZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE SOON..............I CAN'T WAIT......PM ME.....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww.................dear...............continue as sooooooooooon as possibleeeee............its truly awesomeeeeeee.........plz pm me when u post d next part(n btw do mention wht nups ws wearin....😆..)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww this is sooo cooll...
do pm me for nextt part!!
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U must continue!! Do PM me when u do so! :-)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Its awesum par ek gad bad ho gayi
Mayu ke paas gadi nahi hai
Waise i wuld lov to see this date
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good yaar!!.....update soon...and pm me if possible....
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i NEED more!! pls update soon...this is really good!
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plzzz continue soon....m waiting....
it was very nice.... 😊 😊

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