mayur ff_--dekhnay bus unhain Part4 pg 32 - Page 22

Part 3 : yaar this was such a romantic chapter ...the way she put her head on his shoulder in auto .😳..the whole mom scene . was sweet 😛.. and after that the way mayu pulled her and she crashed in him was lovely to read .😳..the Kiss thing both in auto and afterward in house when she kiss him was sweet 😳.....then the rest room dialogues were Ufffffffffffffffffffffff ... i love u ... and the way they fed each other ....mazaidar chapter tha yaar .....❤️❤️❤️.... very very sweet and romantic .... smile face say hatee he nahi rahee thee 😆

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

"Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size=3>anna as per ur note on pg 29 : how about .... bomb theme ... there is a bomb threat in college ... they evacuate the whole college ...everyone come out but nobody can find nups .... Mayu went back tosearch for her....he finds her and save her ........( nups is probably looked in wash room thats why was not able to get out ....) .....they come out of college ... expert team comes and decativate the bomb ......

hey finally caught up with your ff......

very sorry for such a late reply but i was busy.....

Coming to your ff loved it loads.......

Its romantic as well emotional.......your description is fantastic......read all the 3 parts.....MN romance make me blush......I'm so loving it.....👏

Keep up the great work.....👍🏼

Thankssss for your PM......😊

for ideas i think some college camp can be shown & to add to it you could show nupur getting into danger while doing something & mayu saving her......For coll life some trips/camps could be very good......

Hiiiiiiiiiii

U can bring som one frm past lik bring som1 from Morana frm whom Nups gets very scared

How Mayu helps her to com out of that fear.........................