mayur ff_--dekhnay bus unhain Part4 pg 32

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iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

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yeaaaaa annaa..... superrbbb part 2.. nupur mayank shaerma?? hayyee shoooo cute.... yaaarrr i love ur writtin.... next part ke liye cmmnt main sunday ko karoongi ab.... cuzzzzz well m gonna b busyy... gonna cum onl on sunday only...

luv ya loadss...

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iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: xxXAanchaLXxx
waisee sindhyas nt updatin her once upon a lifetime waala ff today??
she said she wudd....

sighs...

wo to waise hi karti nahi hai...

i just cheked unka bitter swt ka 12th part wuzz sumwhere postd in feb!!!

nahiiiii....

mujhpee jhoota inzaam lagaya jaa raha haii!!!!

i do nt alloww...

maine feb mein nahi march mein update kiya tha...😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: mohseena
<br>thank u sooo much!!!<br><br><br>

ur welcome! plz update soon!

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iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

n annaa.... by sunday i dnt meann cumng sunday...

i mean the 19th of julyy...

soo till themm buh-byee!!

muaahzzz

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iwantitall

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

newyzzzz m gng offl noww....

agli baatcheet aapse 19th ko hogii...

tab tak alvida...

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Afshan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

it was really nice + romantic too the small small fights they use to fight just for the sake of each otherzz health is really cute😳......................... and again wating ahead for the nxt part😊...........good job👏

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shinella

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

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Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

hey anna what are you saying man, this part was just brilliant, i am totally in love with it, this is the kind of cute and fun romance i always want to see for mayur, it all looks so real and simply heart warming. you are doing a wonderful job, keep it up.

i love the way you have depicted mayank and nupur and their feelings, i love nupur strong brave yet innocent and cute,

mayank pretends to be really strong and he is strong and brave too but a part of him is totally childish and naive, you just go and hit there, i mean to say this is how you have beautifully narrated their characters, feelings and exposed us to their vulnerable side.

mayank and nupur are the greatest strenghts and support of eachother, i am sooo glad to see that being so beautifully shown by you anna, i lovedddd it.