FORGETFULNESS-A MINI FF last part upd on pg 12 - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
sorry sorry Sayli!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗
I am soo sorry for the late comment..
before you kill me ..
let me tell you..... that you did AN AMAZING JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do continue more.... .
the good thing was each part was not soo long..
so it didnt take so much time to read all 🤣
Keep up the AMAZING WORK!!
and make sure you post in Media Center everytime you update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

OMG gagan u replied???

thank u so much
ur comments mean a lot
yup d updates r quite short becoz its a mini ff lolz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Ok guys here cumes d last update,i knw u ppl wud be shocked but as i lawys said its a mini ff

hope u all like it
part 3
As gunjan entered her office she felt a different thrill!!!She felt as though she came dere after a long tyme, but then that feeling was so weird, her office was like her second home!!!

Gunjan suddenly felt as though she was forgetting sumthing, but she ignored it since her forgetfulness was not a new thing. As she reached her room, many smiling faces greeted her. Sum faces had a diff frown on their face, one elderly colleague even came n hugged her!!!!Gunjan found this very weird but then she just simply hugged her back. This day was full of weird things. The most unbelievable thing that happened that day was d colleague who hated gunjan like hell even smiled at her!!!!!Sheena smiled at her. Sheena was gunjan's old frnd turned foe turned colleague. Sheena smiling was a big shock!!!!But then gunjan thought that may be everyone is in a good mood 2day!!!!Afterall it was a SATURDAY!!!!Gunjan always loved Saturdays because d next day wud be Sunday!!!

Saturday was very special to her because she got had got married on that day!!!!N simply to make their wedding day special samrat wud plan a surprise for gunjan every Saturday after wrk!!!!Tht made Saturday very special!!Samrat n gunjan both had a half working day on Saturday!!!So on every Saturday they enjoyed their seleves.either it was a candle light dinner or a cinema!!!!sumtymes they just sipped hot tea of their fav chaiwala!!!!

Under their complex their was this chat wala n chai wala.samrat n gunjan loved both d places to d core!!!!To add to their romance the chaiwala wud play a romantic song every Saturday!!!!Hence Saturday was full of fun!!!N 2day was that day

As gunjan began going thru her files,she was called by her boss for a short session.gunjan's boss was her greatest critic in d office but was d best jiju ever outside!!!!

Mayank n gunjan both maintained that professionalism at wrk, but outside they were very diff!!!!!As gunjan entered mayank's room she felt mayank's diff approach towards her. He smiled n even came n hugged!!!!Gunjan was too shocked!!!!then they began discussing abt a project for sum tyme,after a couple of hours or so he got up from his place n said," We all r always dere for u gunjan".gunjan was taken aback.but then this day was full of shocks!!!!As she was about to leave mayank's room, she was suddenly stopped by him

He said,"Ur di has yet again tried to make gajar ka halwa, here is it.anyways its lunch tyme now, so surely taste it n tell her how is it. Try to be a bit unfair she will feel better".gunjan cud not STP smiling at him.It was a day indeed of shocks!!!!

During lunch time she was trying to call samrat but as usual d fone was busy, then her ultimate option was her di!!!!She called her up.nupur was a very caring sis. A sweetheart!!!Gunjan was really close to her. Both of them nearly spoke for a hour.2day gunjan found nupur also a bit weird!!!But then she had a lot of work so she just ignored all d weird happenings!!!!

As gunjan was busy wrking she got her 15 th bunch of flower!!!!Her room was filled wid flowers!!!She was super confused. But then she dint cared enough to clarify it, since she had to leave from her office to enjoy her special day!!!!at last the clocked was in her favor n she left from her office!!!She was almost running!!!!As she reached bandra station she quickly got inside a virar train.she so wanted to see her angel's face waiting for her at d door!!! Throughout her journey she was just smiling!!!!SHE WAS SO HAPPY!!!SHE WAS GOING HOME!!!SHE WAS GOING TO SAMRAT!!!

As she reached borivli station her heart began beating fast, she at once caught a rickshaw n managed to skip thru d traffic!!!!She loved Mumbai, but hated its traffic. Since it always made her late!!!!!But now at last she was below her complex!!!She reached her building!!!Smiling n glowing she got off d rickshaw!!!

As she entered her building sum ppl gave her a very cold look. she heard sumone say," why is she here?".sumone other said,"sshh".but gunjan dint bother she ran n ran!!!!As she was approaching her flat she felt herself getting goose-pimples.all of a sudden, clear out of blue, there was sum thing wrng, and she could feel it. At first it was only a feeling, a suspicion, and then it grew and thickened in her, it began whispering in her ear," don't go". She slowed down n then came to a dead stop. The door of her house was in front of her. A dustly, dirty door.full wid piles of newspapers!!!She found everything very strange!!!

Slowly n steadily she had a full recollection. She was no longer living dere any more but at her bro uday's palce.she realized that d house inside was empty. She at once ran downstairs!!!!She reached her fav chaiwala n she collapsed

She had now remembered!!!!She had now fully recollected!!!!She now knew why was everything weird 2day!!!!She just sat down looking at d ground, not knowing what she should do!!!There was a big lump in her throat n she felt like crying. Tears came down her eyes n she wanted to cry aloud!!!!Ppl gathered around her. She was always forgetful but 2day she had forgotten her bitter truth of life!!!!Suddenly everything seemed nonsence.suddenly she hated Saturday.becoz she had now remembered that

SAMRAT HAD DIED A WEEK AGO!!!!!!!!

She was very lonely!!!!!she now cried aloud!!!!!Dere was no romantic song in d BG this tyme, but this song filled d air

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3bAvvuxC_E

***************THE END***************
PS :i knw guys this is very sad!!!!but this is only ma ff.i wanted to write sumthing emotional.sry if i made u cry.i cried too.sry again
INSPIRED BY D STORY,LETS GO HOME BY KEWLIAN SIO !!!!!!!!

LOV YA

SAYLI

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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
sayli, wat is this
i dont know wat 2 say
i dont know
anyway plz post the link in media center
i cant say anything more than this now
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
is this last part , is there no cont.. for this
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
Mujhe bal vidhwa banadiya tumneeeeeeeee

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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
Sayali...what to say?????
i wud have given kisses but its not at all happy ending...even i m feeling like crying..this is a bitter truth of life..but i never imagined that ur ff will end up in this manner..u made me cry yaar...i told u in the starting only..no matter the character is mayank or samrat...feeling bad for gunjan...life kaisi hoti hogi...i just can't even imagine...coz we guyz always think about happines,masti and all...
luved ur mini ff...but plz..next time aisi ending mat karna...dil toot jayega...
a big round of applause 4 u...👏👏👏



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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

I got the story frm half

As even im in 12th i read this stry som days ago only

I really feel pitty for that boy in stry and here Gunjan

Thanxxxxxx for updating me

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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
sad endingg but it nice part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
omg omg omg omg........*runs n sits in a corner n cries*

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