MY POEM ON NUPUR'S FEELINGS(part-1)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey everyone this is me vrinda.😊.Ive written this short poem about Nupur's feelings.i am a complete Rati fan and nowadays her performance is just par excellence👏...i hope you guys like it😳

Nupur's feelings (Part-1)

Thousands of questions running in my mind,

Whats this new feeling ,yes its one of a kind
Its like tingling in my stomach,chills in my spine,
Heart's beating faster,I am on cloud nine!!
I was so sure its not you whom I saw in my dreams,
For whom I could break all boundaries and realms,
So now why does my heart tell me that you are the one,
When theres nothin I dreamt of that you have ever done!
I used to go on and on,this is love, thats love,
But now when it has come to me myself,
The advice and preachings seem useless,
Here I stand looking at you compltely spellbound and clueless!
Cant forget how we used to fight and argue,
I would feel this for you someday ..this i never knew
even though we fought all the time,
somewhere in my heart i wanted to be your friend
and all this hatred to end
Whenever i need you,you were there for me,
To wipe my tears or to protect me,
Why is it that in your eyes,
Its just love for me that i see
Am i mistaking your true friendship to be love?
Coz your expectations have always been a notch above,
when i look in your eyes
why do i sense it..why do i feel it then?
Thanks for reading!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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good ... very good 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

good ... very good 👏

thanks a lott sana..im not gettin how to end it..on a positive note that yes he does feel something or a negative one...that no hows it possible😕!!thats why i divided it into parts..though it hasnt turned out so well!!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Supercool yaar awseome amazing dear..

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