Defeated by Love[Mayur] Pt2 pg9 6/6 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

70

Views

5.3k

Users

25

Frequent Posters

Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow tht was amazinggggg part i love it rohit




Thanks for the comment dear😃
hgrhr thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Rohit, thank god you're updating this finally!!!
I can;t wait!
styleislife13 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Rohit, wen r u gonna update....waiting....

Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Senny

hey rohit it was awesome, i am speechless and spellbound. i loved it please do continue man. it was just the besttttttttttttttt, so sad, emotional and touching, awesomeeeeeeeeeeee.




Thanks for the comment dear, i am glad that you like it😃

Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Woooaaaahh Rohit.. that was amazing............. like ruchi said it nearly gave me a heart attack too.. wonderfull written . filled with emotion.. love.. passion.. do cont soon..

xxsonia




Thanks for the comment sonia, i am glad that you like it😉

Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sonakshi

By god....!!! tussi grerat ho rohit, just great and u are such a supherb writer, kyaaaaa baat haii🤗👍🏼

Thanks for compliment dear, i am glad that you like it

Mayuuu's dream gave me a heart attack, thank goodnesss it only a dreammm Yes it was only dream
plzzz update soon, will be waiting for it bro...!!!!

Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Aditi_MJHT

OMG awesome....!!!!👏....wonderful...outstanding.....!!! Thanks dear, i am glad that you like it😃


Loved the first part...!!!👏....!!!
waiting for next part...!!!

Thanks for the comment dear, i am glad that you like it😳

P.S.:-thanx for the PM😃

Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: jusrockingon

dis s getn ntrstn.u've n unique styl f story-telln,i mst say!




Thanks for the comment, i am glad that you loved it😃
Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sravani.gunturi

OMG how can u write like that i mean i think u r born with a boon yaar really it was jus awesome n mast

update it soon 😊



Originally posted by: _Monu_

_ GREAT😳

GREAT😳
and....
GREAT!!😳 _




Originally posted by: _Monu_

ALL WAS TOO GOOD!!

WAS SO PASSIONATE!!
THE FEELINGS WERE WRITTED WELL!!
LOVE IT!! CONT SOON!! WHEN U GET TIME!!
SEE YAA!!






Thanks for the copliments guys, i am glad that you like it😃

Rohit86 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Part 2





Mayank was driving in his Mercedes, His latest car going to college… car was moving at the rock hard speed, he was driving very fast looking ahead hearing the rock music at very high pitch, he adjusted the mirror of the car looking for the image of himself checking out if he was looking alright..He was always conscious about his looks. He has to look good for all those girls of his college; smirking at himself he beamed "I am too good…." He told himself…. 'Yes and he was too…That's why girls were always floored by his charms and on top of that he was a billionaire himself, that's the addition, like a cheery on the top' His dad was the best neurosurgeon of India…changing the gear of the car he was moving to the music that was blasting in the car…He just loved the song…." Rock-on….."

He sings to the tune moving to the tunes still driving, suddenly he caught someone in front of his car frowning he immediately stopped the car screeching pressing the brakes harder, Car screeched and halted….He glared looking ahead opening the car door he came out of the car glaring, burning in anger he was ready to kill the person who cane beneath his car….He looked at the person and was amazed to see who it was…!!!!

Nupur was standing at the bus stop…She was waiting for going to the college, she had just been arrived in Mumbai leaving Morena…She couldn't afford to leave in Morena anymore. It hurt her to leave there in those memories so she came to Mumbai when Rahul had called him here, as her parents had died in the accident just few days back …so she had transferred to Mumbai. She was looking at the road waiting for the bus, when something caught her eyes…she sighed looking at it…"Awww….how cuteee…." She giggled through delight taking step towards the road moving closer to the subject that caught her eyes….

she looked at him .." He is too cuteee….SO shooona…" She told giggling…she just loved the creature that caught her eyes…Looking at it she was moving slowly to catch him when she saw that a car was coming close to the little Puppy…horrified she ran towards the puppy to get him out of the way, panting heavily she caught it by her hands and looked at the car but it was too late…horrified she closed her eyes looking at the ground…holding the puppy to her chest scared to death, "omggg….what will happen now..???" she was horrified, she clutched the edge of her duppatta hard and twisted it holding the puppy closer, shielding it from getting any harm and scaring her life for that small creature…!!!

She heard a screeching sound…."Omggg…..it will hit me in few seconds now…I will die….Mummy I am coming…I am so sorry rahul…I cant fulfill my promise…Horrified a tear escaped her eyes…she was going to die… Huh…??? She frowned thinking "why didn't it hit me …??? Why…???" she thought frowning…what was that sound, she opened her eyes to look at the road the car had stopped just inches away from her feet, she sighed clutching her heart, it was raising too high she was scared to death…coming back to life she heard the sounds from the puppy…..

"Uuuummm….oooohhh….uuuummm…." He was shouting scared to…Nupur instantly held the puppy in her lap and caressed his fur., she giggled feeling pleasant sensation she felt by touching him, he was too furred…there was fur on his whole body he was a little dog….caressing it…she heard some noises from the road looking at the source of the noise…she saw that there was the man from the car who was shouting at her…anger took over her, How was he driving…??? How…??? Doesn't he have any sense…??? If he doesn't then I will teach him some…..she blazed in anger keeping the dog on the floor and hushing him to get off the road she looked at the man…None other then Mayank glaring at him in anger..!!!

Mayank stooped the car suddenly seeing the lady coming in front of the car, he groaned "Pagal ladki!! Cant she see my Rambo coming that she is running like this on the road…What would have happened to my car if I had hit her…??" he thought caring about his Barbie car…it would get damaged by hitting this people on the street….He blazed in anger and came out of the car looking at the girl to give her some piece of her mind…

"Hey you stupid girl…….." He stopped instantly as he looked at the girl, Something in the girl made him to look at her..She was beautiful in fact very beautiful…He looked at her intently she was wearing a red color salwar suit…which was hugging her figure delicately highlighting the right curves shaping it delicately, He looked at her she was sitting there hugging herself like a ball. He frowned looking at her, 'why is she sitting like that…??? Why…???' He observed her she was heaving heavily, suddenly something caught his eyes it was a tail like something…He frowned what is it…???

He was looking at her amazed, she was like a god sent beauty…it was not like he hadn't seen a girl so beautiful…yes he had…!! Even more beautiful then her, more prettier and hot then her, then what did he find that is making him to look at her…He looked as she raised her goodly face up to look at him and his eyes caught the goodly beauty he gaped looking at her face…she was hiding that gorgeous face inside her lap he was bold looking at her, She was like some princess…He had seen many girls before but something in her caught his eyes…He looked at her intently caressing her whole figure with his vicious eyes, undressing her completely by just looking at her…He observed her face it was perfect, with nothing as a make-up she was natural beauty unlike those girls who uses many cosmetics to make them self look good…She was looking gorgeous in that salwar too that he didn't liked …He looked at her as she raised up on her feet and looked at him…He looked in her eyes..He could only see that she was innocent, too nave, too childish..He giggled seeing her he knew she was childish…other wise who would run on the road like this..??? He saw something and frowned, 'she was carrying a puppy in her hand??

'Did she run to save that little ugly Puppy?' He thought amazed with himself, 'how could she do that??' He made a puppy like ugly face to depict his reaction…He looked closely, "Holy crap! She did just that…?? Is she mad…she was risking her life for that dog??' he thought 'How foolish??'

…what was she thinking while running…??? What if car would have hit her??' ………and for whom was she risking her life?? He asked himself.

'For that ugly puppy, that street dog…!'. He thought.

A car moved from the road making the breeze to blow through them which made her hairs to flow, He looked at her she was struggling to control her hair to pull them up and make them in a bun…She was trying hard. He observed her, her forehead was highlighted by a frown on her face, he wanted to ease her from that frown…Mayank gawked at his thoughts…What are you thinking Mayank…?? Huaaahhh….where did that came from…??? He thought smacking himself…You are thinking about this mad girl…Huh..?? Yeah he is sexy…he looks at her figures scrutinizing her perfect curves at all right places, she was damn beautiful perfect '36-24-36' …He grinned thinking…what is not there…??? She has everything..?? Yes she has…!!! She is god damn sexy and Hot…!!!

HE thought…"What if she is Hot!!, you have seen many girls like her…you have and you did play with them too….what is there in her that you are thinking so much about her?' Mayank never thinks about any girl ..Girl comes after Mayank…!!! His mind told him…He smirked…Yes that's true….but I will have her for the day….she would be my new girlfriend..!!! He smirked looking at her…

"Hey Andhe ho gaye ho kya?? Gadi dekhke chalani nahi aati aapko…???" She asked him glaring with her hands on her hips.

Mayank looked at her coming out of his process to check her out looking at her, 'what did she tell me….??? How dare she…?'

'Hey Listen Girl, Don't you dare talk me like that. I could see better then you. It was you who came between my car while i was driving on the road and road is for the cars not for the crazy girl like you to roam like this…." He said to him in anger too….blazing at her…Her nerves to talk like that to me…all the good thoughts, attraction that had developed vanished from his heart, and anger took its way…!!!

Nupur huffed hearing what he told her… "What…??? What did you tell…??? You are crazy, Mad monkey…I am not crazy…Yeah the road is for driving but it doesn't mean that you will blow off the people who are walking there….you cant do that…!!!" she told him glaring too…

She thought to herself "kitna rude ladka hai, Hamare morena mein toh log aisa nahi karte, Low class people"

"Hey..!!! Shut your Damn mouth…I have seen many girl like you…" he huffed beaming in arrogance..he told her…"Yeah you all middle class girls , you all just do like this for getting money..i know it….you will come in front of the car so that you can take money from them…" He told her…blazing….

Nupur looked at him shocked.." What is he telling…??" she was shocked to hear something like that…"are people of Mumbai like this…??? Are they…?? She thought…anger took over her and she huffed moving towards him she glared at him…" Hey..?? What do you think haan…?? Kya aamir ho toh kya kuch bhi bologe…haan..?? What did you tell…haan…that we people trick you to get money from you..haan…that shows how low class you are…?? To think something like that..If you have car it doesn't means that you can do anything….you were going to kill that little puppy….there is lot of thing other themn money but for you people money is everything…how will you see that creature on the ground as you always look up…you never look down as you consider yourself as superior and everyone else as your slave…but I can see that dog..i cant see him die…" She told him…

"You put your life in danger just to save that Puppy…I cant believe it…??" he laughed at her foolishness…

Nupur looked at him horrified…?? What kind of man is he…??? What does he think…??? That dog also has life it doesn't means that he is not human then you would not try to save him….He is just a jerk…!!!

"You are just hopeless…I don't understand what you all rich people think of yourself…?? did you purchased whole world…so that you can do anything…??? Get lost from here I don't want to see your damn face…." She told him and went back as she saw her bus coming….glaring at him for last time she went into the bus…Groaning…

Mayank looked at her parting figure groaning…What does she thinks…??? I won't leave her…!!!

******************************

"Sanjeevani medical college….." It was one of the most prestigious college of Mumbai…Not only Mumbai..It was the most prestigious among Whole of India well known for its High quality teaching and staff…and the talented batch of doctors who pass through them, It was known for its reputation, situated along the coastline of Mumbai…It was one of the best institute to Study and live in….!!!!

Mumbai 12 June

Finally after the long vacation colleges were reopening today, students were eventually excited as they were going to be in the new classes from today and there was going to be the start of the new Academic year….College start means…Many new student…Which means Fun….!!!

There were huge chaos inside the campus of the sanjeevani…There was a group of student standing along the corner different from amongst all of them, They were the Student council Group….The president of them Mayank Khanna….!!!! …..Mayank was standing with his group talking about the new curriculum this year…. He was studying in the Final year of the college. He had achieved a respectable position in so less amount of time, He was captain of the Boys basketball team, He was even President of the student association and the Most intelligent student of the college. He has topped the entire college in the every year...among all the grades... He was arrogant, intelligent, Handsome and the heartthrob of the college…"He loved girls".

"Girls….." That word which came to his mind it instantly, unknowingly brings smile on his face….How wont it…??? Don't you agree….???

"Girls…"They were the most beautiful and gorgeous creature made by the god, Yes they were, and he thought that if there is beauty then there should have to be the person who should care for them…Yes that's what he did…!!! He made them all to realize that they are the most beautiful creature of God, They are most beautiful..and that does it all, They will come running after him "…Girls…." What would the world do without them?? How would be our life if girls would not have been there….Think of it…A World full of Boys…!!! Huaah…That sounds horrible naa….!!! How can he live without those pretty eyes, that beautiful face, that warming fresh, glowing skin, those long smooth legs, those long silky hairs…!!! He sighed…He just can't think of living without them…If they are so gorgeous and Hot then, How could any one not love them?? That was what he thought…

Every time he laid his eyes on a hot looking chick, He could just imagine how good she look with him…What does he look for in her…??? Her figure…?? Her figure and her clothes…??? Yeah that's it…!!! How shorter they are…That's all….!!!! The much shorter the cloth the much fun it would be…That was his philosophy. Yup, you could pretty much call him an obnoxious, self-centered, over confident Jerk or even a Jack-ass…!!!. But then, every other guy on the planet was like him…I mean come on, when a guy sees a girl for the 1st time, do you know what he is thinking?? What is going through his mind..?? He always looks at her outer beauty, He even thinks many things about her…What can I say…??? He does visualize many things…When ever a Hot looking babe walk by, the first thing we do is to check her out…Yes…This even goes with girls…They even do that….!!! That's an honest opinion for the first time but as the time passes you get to know her more you tend to realize that is she the girl you need…Of course as time goes by and you come to know a particular girl, your thoughts about her might change. But what affect you more….??? When you see a mini skirted babe walk by, or you are introduced to a figure hugging, gown wearing lady or just a beautiful girl in a sari…??? It depends…!!!



He was always a point of gossiping among the girls...He had broken hearts of loads of them...HE does that...It was not like he enjoyed playing with them...No...!!! But what can he do...??? He didn't meant to do that but he was looking for that someone special in his life who would make him feel so special…He was looking for the girl who was made for him, who will rule his heart…But the girls he had met till now didn't make him feel anything that's why he dumped them and now he was the Heartthrob of the college…Which he wasn't…He wasn't Casanova that people called him…Yeah he played with girls but he was searching for that special girl…....He looks at his gang....They were his life...Yeah he loves them dearly being away from his family they were all like his second family....He looked at the door…it was the first day of the college…He was in final year…He was going to enjoy the first day…He will….!!!!

"Hey honey…!!! You are here…??? You know how much I missed you…???" A girl wearing mini short dress revealing her sexy figure spoke in her sultry voice making her impact on the people around her…She came to Mayank and hugged him from behind…Kissing his neck…!!!!

Mayank turned around to look at the source of the sound…and frowned feeling her lips on his neck…."Damn…This girls…" He sighed…heaving from her contact she was coming to close to him and was massaging his neck, circling her hands there….."What do they need…??? They cant leave away from me…!!!!" Mayank turned completely and looked at the girl holding her from her shoulder; He looked at her and thought…." Damn…Who is she….????" He tried to recognize her but was finding it really hard to recognize her..

"Is she Ria…..????" Mayank thought hard looking at her…Yeah she is…!!!!

"Ria…??? I missed you too dear…where were you…??" She missed me..??? Huh…?? What can I do if she missed me..i didn't asked her to miss me..Awww…These girls…!!! He sighed…!!!!

The girl left Mayank astonished looking at him, she told him…"What…?? Who is Ria…??" She asked him scrutinizing him for his answer looking at him with murderous eyes.

Mayank looked at her groaning…"Omggg….She isn't ria…!!! Who is she?? Is she tia…??? Or Preeti…or suzi…??? Or Rita…?? Is she sweta..?? He thought his eyes wide looking at her, she was giving him vigorous looks as if she was telling him that "You are gone…!!!" Is she sweta…??? Whom I ditched two days before…??? "Omggg…I just can't remember their names…Damn its so irritating, why cant they leave me when I ditch them..??? They should know that they are not meant to be with Mayank Khanna…They should know that they are old now…I am not dating her….no not now…He thought about the girls he was dating at that time…I am just dating Rina, Miya, Nupur, Deeya..She isn't one of them…or is she…??? !!!!

"Who is Ria..Mayank….???"

Mayank looked at her she was giving him strange looks, sighing he asked her again…"Ria..?? She is my Pet dog…." He told her just to curse himself for acting so insane…What did I tell her…Ria is my dog…I just called her Ria and now I am telling that Ria is my dog.." He cursed himself for his stupidity….."Omggg…What happened to me..???" What was I thinking…how can I tell her that…he thought, then groaning he told himself 'Like I care…!!!' Cut the crap..Why am I scared…?? Damn..i don't care…Let her do anything..!!

"What..??? Ria is your Dog…?? You called me dog..?? Am I mad Mayank…?? Who is ria…??" She asked him again she was not going to take it..She knew that he was dating other girls too..but she didn't mind..but he doesn't remembers her name too…???

"Hey listen…?? Whoever you are..Eena, Mina, Tina…Anyone…I don't remember you, so just get your damn ass out of here and even i don't care who you are and you don't have right to talk like that with me…??"

The girl looked at him her eyes becoming moist…How can he talk to me like that…How…??? He told me that he loves me…He did….Then how can he do that…???

"Mayank don't talk like that…I am sorry if I troubled you..You know naa I Love you…You love me too…You told me several times…!!!!"

"Hey Girl Listen…??? I don't love you…" He told her

Gunjan looked at them both they were fighting for long time, She looked at Mayank angrily…When will he change…?? Doesn't he care about them..?? How can he tell her like that…?? She looked at the girl and went to her, looking at Mayank murderously she spoke to him.

"Mayank How can you say like that…You love her so much…You just told me yesterday…Don't you remember…??" Gunjan looked at Mayank's shocked face. "What is she telling…??" Mayank thought looking at her then sighed as he saw her grinning. "She is trapping me..?? It's not so easy to trap Mayank…He glared at her…

"Anjie…When did I tell you that…?? I don't remember" He told her glaring at her. "If I did too then i don't care, Not at all as i tell it to every girl.." He told Gunjan ruthlessly.

"And you…??" He told looking at the girl murderously…."She is Tina…." Gunjan told him groaning.."He doesn't even remembers there names.

"Yeah…anything…Tina…I Told you that I Don't Love you….." He told her too looking at her glaring.."Why doesn't this girls understand.."

Mayank told her ruthlessly not even caring that that words…That single phrase "I Don't Love You…." Will have what effect on the other person…It rips their heart into thousand pieces as the person they Loved tells you that he doesn't loves you…He never did…!!!! Those words could even kill a person. And they usually do. It effect the mental strength of the other person rather not in the physical way. It just breaks your Heart…!!!

Tina looked at Mayank shocked to hear him, She was in Love with him..How can she not react to his charm…How…??? She looked at him angry crying she ran away…..

Gunjan looked at Tina running off from there, she groaned and looked at Mayank scrutinizing "He will never learn…But he will pay for it, He will definitely do sometime…That time he will know it..!!!" Gunjan looked at him murderously and broke off at him…

"Mayank…why are you doing all this..??? Why do you play like this with them…?? Don't you feel bad for them..??" Gunjan asked Mayank..

Samrat looked at them both he was a mere spectator for so long, He was looking at Gunjan asking Mayank…"Gunjan…Chal chood naa…vo aisa hi hai…tujhe pata hai naa..Jane dee…!!!!"

*********************************

"Mayank you didn't remember her name too..?? Huh..??" Samrat asked Mayank laughing at him.

"Yeah champ…Kya karo…yaad hi nahi rehta…There are so many girls that it's really hard for me to remember them…" Mayank answered him laughing too….

"Kya yaar…sudhar jaa…" Samrat told him and looked at Gunjan who was not atall listening to them.

"Hey anjie…What happened to you…??? Did Samrat kissed you last light…Tera chera itna laal kyun hai…" Mayank asked Gunjan chuckling at her sulking face.

"Shut- up Mayank….Voh kya mujhe kiss karega…Main toh bore ho rahi hoon…" Gunjan answered Mayank looking at Samrat glaring…He was so innocent, but she loved him…Looking at him she answered Mayank…!!!

"What…??? I can kiss you Gunjan…You don't say like that…" Samrat told Gunjan advancing towards her…How can she tell that..??

"Okk….i know it…Don't you remember Samrat what happened last time when you were going to kiss me…Haan….???"

Samrat sighs remembering that…"Yes he does remembers that…How could he forget that…His thought went to that day….

"Valentine nights…..Sanjeevani college"

Samrat was dancing with Gunjan it was valentines night, He had dared to take her for the Ball dance, What could he do..??? He just gets scared in front of her..!!! sighing he looked at her she was looking into his eyes staring at it intently, Samrat stared at him back with same intensity dancing with her moving to the tunes. He looked at her, she was looking breathtaking…Too beautifull…Gorgeous.

"Gunjan…" Samrat called her holding her from her waist.

"Hmmm…Samrat…???" Gunjan whispered still in daze of the moment, It was being hard for her to resist him. She looked at him getting more closer to him, pulling her into her embrace.

"Gunjan…you are looking too beautifull…." He whispered gasping as he felt her hands on his shoulder tightened and her face coming closer to his closing the distance between them.

Samrat looked at her, Her lips was just few cms away from him, Gathering his courage he looked at her moving himself closer, He couldn't hold himself with her, He doesn't knows what happens to him in front of her. Gunjan looked at him his lips few cm's away from her.

Samrat told himself…"Hey control….You have to do it….dont get afraid…why are you afraid…??? Why..??"

He lowered himself on her and lightly touches his lips on her, Gunjan gasped feeling his lips on her, She waits for him to kiss her, She wanted it as much he did…She waited for it but finally frowned not feeling him kissing her…Desperate she caught him hard and kissed him….Samrat felt her lips grasping his lips intoa lip lock as he felt her lips on him, He felt chill run down his spine, shocked to feel her kiss him…It did registerd to his brain…He beamed in delight…"she kissed me….She did….." Feeling overwhelmed from her kiss…..Finally registering what is happening…He was shocked….She is kissing me…??? She is…??? Yeah….he fainted…grasping her….Gunjan looked at him shocked…He collapsed in front of her..with a smile on his face…She looked at him sighing…"What happened to him….??? He fainted because of the kisss….???" Horrified she looked at him….

Samrat came out of the thoughts…."Huh…She is telling right…But I will kiss her one day…I will…He laughed looking at her embarrassed.

"So….What were you telling Samrat….??? You will kiss me…..????" Samrat looked at Gunjan she was smirking at him…He looked at her growling…."I will Gunjan…." Gunjan looked at him shocked at his voice…It was full of determination….!!!!

"Ho gaya…!!! Ho gaya tum dono kaa….Chalo aab…..Aaj first day hai naa college kaaa…Did you remember something….???" Mayank stops them both and asked them about the day…..

"Yeah….aaj freshers aayenge…." Samrat told Mayank….

Mayank looked at college gate…They were standing there looking for some freshers…They will be having some fun….!!!! Mayank smiled seeing someone. 'It would be fun....."



Edited by Rohit86 - 16 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".