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Posted: 16 years ago
actually in the womens day episode,the side hug was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,i dont have any words.the sparks between them was quite visible there.and most of it mayur chemistry,4m the 1st episode was full of xtreme sparks.which is a bit unnatural.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Uff luk at this pic the way She is luking at him.....its awesum dunt i say their eyes r just so awesumly expressive,the promo was dud but they aint they r superb...esp the intensity in their eyes speaks sooooooo much.........luk the way ABz face is all angerd up....stifend n all.wow.thts like real anger.....man!! dunt u dare touch my girl luk uffff its awesum........n nupz her eyes r doing such a awesum acting u can feel the pain n awe she is going thru.......ArTi r just fantastic guys🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bubblygurl

brb guys.... i love this topic ....more than any other topics...e.ven of MN 🤣 I'll be back!!!

bye amby jaani.see u later.🤗love u.
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Posted: 16 years ago
soo true sayyy.. wot a pic... n their xpression.. ahhhh
_ArTi4ever_ thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
woh1raee what a picture!!simply undescribable emotions.they dont need speak all the time,their eyes clearly speak it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
but guys,they r going to shoot each and every day.i m sure,that rati will change her a bit,and one day all us artians dream will come true.
Edited by ghtk1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
@pallu n zarwa: totally guys........they r just so prfct.hats off to them ArTi r brilliant.........they r WOW WONDERS....lolz!!
btw herez the link to the new paradise once we finsih this we can move to their
link:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1146053
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Posted: 16 years ago
Salam every one .....................


This is my first try to write a future scene for Mayur ... do read and do comment ......

Nupur at home of Mayank to help his mom to pamper the injured Mayank

She tries to cut apple for Mayank n cut her hand with the knife.Mayank quickly tries to stop the blood flow with mouth suction.

MAYANK:dekh kar kabhi kuch na karna

NUPUR: (still in shock with Mayank's reaction,says embarrassingly )Mayank haath choro

MAYANK:nahi.(holding her hand more tightly)

N:kia matlab hai nahi.


M: (taking nupur buy hand and going towards the drawer and then releasing her hand to take a tube of medicine from the drawer,then he turns seriously towards Nupur....... looking straight in her eyes,says : MAI NAI PYAAR KIA

N: (shocked)kia?

M:dekhi hai mai nai

N: (looking confused)

M:tum nai kaha tha mai nai nahi dekhi.par main nai dekhi hai.ek baar nahi teen baar dekhi hai.dosti ki hai nibhaani tho paraygi

(Nupur slowly smiles at Mayank and he smiles back.Mayank takes her hand and applies the ointment.after applying Mayank says :

M:tumhara naam "girtam partam " rakh daita hun.girti rehti ho aur chot laga daiti ho.(mayank gussay mai) dard nahi hota??

N:hmm kabhi haan kabhi na

M:kia???

N:haan kabhi hota hai dard aur kabhi nahi hota.

(Nupur's head is downcast as she is looking at her wound on her hand but Mayank slowly lifts his head )

M: (thinking in his mind)mujhay hota hai humaisha......dard mai nahi dekhna chahta tum ko.

( Nupur lifts her head and catches Mayank looking at her but this time she also seriously looks back at Mayank.the eyes contact only breaks when Mayank's mother enters the room)

Mom:beta kia hogaya haath mai??

N:aunty kuch nahi saib kaatay hoey haath kat gaya

M:dawa lagadi hai mai nai .theek ho jaeygi.

Mom: (smiling and raising her brows to Mayank)tum nai dawa lagai hai??

M: (glaring at his own mom)haan tho..??

Mom:kuch nahi (still smiling)

(while Nupur unaware of mothers n son eye exchange watches her wound)

Mom:tum nai baal abhi tak nahi sukhaey mayank lao mai sukhadun

M: (smelling and sniffing something)maa kuch jal raha hai??

Mom:chaawal rakhay thay cholay pai!(she says this quickly ,hands over the towel to Nupur n walks out of the room)

N: (masti mai).lao mai sukha daiti hun(she teases mayank)

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M:khud ka haath theek nahi hai aur sukhanay chali

N: (sighing and smiling mischievously)dosti ki hai nibhaani tho paray gi

(they both look at each other n start laughing)

N:zindagi mai pehli baar larna nahi aur sukhanay daina.dekho mai nai bhi tho ointment laganay dia.ab tumhari baari hai.is baar khamosh bethay rehna

(She picks up the towel and dries his hair)

(Mayank slowly closes his eyes and intensely thinks about nupur)

(mom views all this from outside the room.she smiles to her self and instead of entering the room moves back and goes back to the kitchen)


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ghtk1

but guys,they r going to shoot each and every day.i m sure,that rati will change her a bit,and one day all us artians dream will come true.

😳😳i know she has laready changed quite a lot.all AB influence i guess😆😳she is really a swthrt........but lil media conscious thts it.........😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow sana....florred completely i can picturise tht scnee totally awesum.....lolz.i am absolutely MN/ArTi struck.lolz!!!!!!!

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