😳MayUr SCENES ENTRIES OF THE CONTEST😳
Scene By bubblygurl (Amber)
Nupur and Mayank are in the canteen...As usual Nupur is blabbering sumthing and Mayank is luking at her all amused...
N : Ye Gunjan bhi na ..pata nahi usko kya ho gaya hai...aajkal bas apni hi duniya mein khoi hui rehti hai aur kabhi muskuraati hai to kabhi aisa expression banati hai ki kuch samajh hi nahi aaye
M: Hai toh woh tumhari behen ...Magar aisa kuch usse expect nahi kiya tha ;)
N: Achcha tumhare kehne ka yeh matlab hai ki mein pagal hun??
M : isme kehne ki konsi baat hai :P tumhey yaad hai woh fancy dress competetion jisme tumne edum FANCY kapde pehne the *Laughs*
N: *upset at the same time pissed off* tumhare se toh baat hi nahi karni chahiye...har waqt bas mujhe cheddte rehte ho * gets up to leave*
M : Nupur...yeh coffe dekh rahi ho??
N : ha toh?? mujhe nahi peena hai coffee....tum peelo ....Mr sadooo
M: Yeh coffe mein agar sugar na ho toh ye bilkul kadvi lagegi....usi coffe ki tarah meri life ki sugar tum ho....Aur sugar daaldo aur use hilao nahi toh uska taste bilkul nahi aayega...waise hi mein tumhare saath jabtak mazaak na karoo ...ya tumse baat na karoo toh meri life mein bhi taste nahi rahega....
N : (smiles n tries to hide her blush) Arrey waah Mr. Sadoo koi bollywood movie dekhke aaye ho kya??? itna achcha dialogue tumpar suite nahi karta??
M: achca dialogue bolne ke liye mujhe bollywood movie dekhne ki zaroorat nahi hai....Mere pas woh hai jo tumhaare paas nahi hai...DIMAAG..!!!
Nupur gets angry again
M : Ms Sapno ki pari ka pagalpan aur Mr. Sadoo ka dimaag ekdum rocking combination hai .....humlog toh Oscars jeetne waale hai kyu????
========================================================
Scene by Kavya_Krazqueen (Kavz) {Winning Scene}
Principal, Shukla decide to have traditional day in college on the eve of Holi. All the students of Excel College are excited about it and so is our Nupz. She runs excitedly to Mayank.
N: Mayank tumne T'Day ke bare main suna? By God, kitna mazaa aayega naa?
Mayank smiles in agreement.
N: Accha tum kya pehanne waale ho? Tumhaari diwali waali Sherwaani?
M: Pata nahin, shaayad. Actually , maa se poochna padega.
N: Main toh saree pehnoongi, woh bhi Yash Chopra film waali chiffon saadi. Accha Mayank bye, mujhe ab jaana hai. Kal ke liye kapde bhi toh tayaar karne hai.
Nupur leaves hurriedly and Mayank watches her go with an affectionate smile playing on his lips.
Mayank's place in the night-
Phone starts ringing, Mayu picks up the phone.
M: Hello
N: Hi Mayank
M: Nupur? (surprised a bit) Kuch kaam tha?
N: haan Mayank, mujhe naa, actually thodi help chahiye. Woh saadi hai na….(Mayank starts speaking before she finishes her sentence)
M(smirking to himself): Mujhe pata tha, saadi choose karne main tumhe meri madad ki zaroorat padegi. Ab kyunki tumhe meri suggestion chahiye , main bataa deta hoon ki tumhe koi light color waali saadi pehnni chahiye – ek toh light color Holi theme ko signify karega aur doosri baat…(hesitates a bit)…tum par light color bahut suit karega (smiles imagining Nupur in a light pink saree)
N(blushes on hearing the last sentence and is speechless for a moment; then resumes talking ): Mayank, kya tum aaj kal bina soye hue sapne dekhne lage ho?
M(feels embarrassed realizing that she was indeed right as he was imagining her in a saree just now; stammers): k..k..kya matlab hai tumhara? Main thodi na sapne dekh raha tha, Aur tum…tum kaise bol sakti ho ki main sapne dekh raha hoon?
N(laughing): Mayank, itna ghabra kyun rahe ho? Tumne yeh kaise soch liya ki mujhe tumhaari raay ki zaroorat padne waali hai? Khair yeh sab chodo aur meri aunty se baat karwaao, maine unke liye phone kiya tha? Aunty hai na ghar pe?
M(a lil jealous): Tumhe MERI maa se kya baat karni hai?
N(teasingly): Woh hum auraton ki beech ki baat hai, tumhe kya lena dena hai usse? Ab jaldi aunty ko bulaao.
M(frustrated, yells out loud): Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Aapke liye Nupur ka phone hai.
Nupz closes her ear by the receiver because of his loud voice.
MM: Kya hua Mayu? Aisa gala phaad ke kyun chilla raha hai?
M: Aapke liye aadarneeya Nupur ji ka phone hai (flashing a sarcastic smile)
MM(takes the receiver from him):Hello Nupur, kaisi ho?
N: Hello aunty, main teekh hoon. Aap kaisi ho?
MM: Main bilkul teekh hoon, toh kaise phone kiya?
N: Aunty, mujhe naa aapki madad chahiye. Woh kal college main Traditional Day hai aur mujhe saadi pehen na hai aur mujhe toh saadi pehen na nahi aata, kya aap mujhe saadi pehnaayengi?
MM: Of course beta, yeh bhi koi poochne waali baat hai? Tum subah ghar yahaan aa jaao aur yaheen se college chale jaao Mayank ke saath.
N(happy): Thanks aunty
MM: You are welcome, bye
N: Bye
Mayank's sitting on the sofa beside the phone all this while, curious to know more about the girl talk. After his mom hangs up and turns towards him, he gives her a big grin.
MM(puzzled): Kya?
Mayank raises his eyebrows pointing his eyes in the phone's direction.
MM: Ohh tum jaan na chahte ho ki Nupur ne mujhe phone kyun kiya?
Mayank closes his eyes in acknowledgement with grin intact.
MM: Woh toh hum auraton ki beech ki baat hai, tumhe kya ? Tum padho (leaves from there)
M(irritated): Pehle Nupur, ab maa! By God, yeh auraton ko samajhna kitna mushkil hai
He follows his mum into the kitchen and asks very sweetly-
M: Maa, kya main aapki kuch madad kar sakta hoon?
MM(raises an eye brow in doubt): Kya?
M(being sweeter): Aap jaake baithiye, main khaana serve kar doonga.
MM(holds his ear): Accha bacchu, toh ab mujhe makkhan lagaa raha hai yeh pata karne ke liye ki Nupur ne phone kyun kiya?
M(scratches his head in a cute "I am caught" way): Woh………..Kya Nupur kal subah yahaan aane waali hai?
MM: Haan, usey saadi pehenne main mera madad chahiye that oh maine kaha teekh hai aa jaao kal subah. Kyun tujhe koi problem hai?
Mayank is already lost imagining her wearing a saree, with her hair open and looking gorgeous
MM(aloud): MAYANK………
M(back to senses): Huh haan?
MM: Kahaan kho gaya tha? Nupur ki khayaalon main?(teases him)
M(embarrassed): Aap bahut zyaada sochti hoon. Mujhe bahut bhookh lagi hai, chaliye khaana khaate hai. (leaves from there)
MM(to herself): Tu kitna bhi chupa le Mayu, amin jaanti hoon ki tujhe Nupur bahut pasand hai. Dekhti hoon aur kitne din yeh baat mujhse chupaayega.
Mayu is on his bed, trying to read a book but all he can see is Nupur in a sari in each page.
M(troubled by his own thinking): Yeh tu kya soch raha hai Mayank, FOCUS, FOCUS.
He closes the book, takes a deep breath and reopens it , once again he can only see images of Nupur in a sari. Flustered, he throws his book away, switches off the lights and buries himself within a blanket. Nupur comes to his place early in the morning-
MM: Aao Nupur, aao main tumhaara hee wait kar rahi thi.
N: Aunty, aapko meri wajaah se der toh nahi hui naa?
MM: Don't worry, abhi mujhe office jaane main bahut time hai. Tum andar mere room main jaao, main Mayank ko uthaake aati hoon. Pata nahin kab sudhrega yeh ladka
N: Aunty, aaj main Mayank ko uthaati hoon. Thoda pareshaan karoongi usey (winks)
MM: Go ahead, main tumhaare saath hoon.
Mayank is buried deep in his blanket, sleeping. Nupur slowly sneaks by his bed side and playfully twitches his ear .
M(still in his sleep): Maa, please mujhe sone do
Nupur climbs onto the bed, beside Mayank she tries to ruffles his hair but Mayank suddenly grabs her hand, still in sleep and shifts his head from the pillow onto her lap snuggling up to her and startling her. Nupur tries to move away but then she finds him sleeping so peacefully like a child on her lap and hence cannot bring herself to do that. Mayu looks so adorable in that pose, that looking at him, she cannot help but flash a sweet admiring smile at his baby like antics.
M(still in asleep): Maa, aaj aapki god kuch zyaada hi soft lag raha hai, uthne kaa mann hi kar raha hai. Jee karta hai ki aaj main aapke godh main sota rahoon.
She smiles and ruffles his hair playfully. Mayank slowly opens his eyes yelling "Maa, meri baalon ko mat….", and stops there. He cannot continue as his eyes suddenly meet hers; there is long eye lock with Mayank staring at Nupur still lying on her lap, which is broken by Mayank's Mum's voice.
MM: Nupur, Mayank utha ya nahin? Lagta hai mujhe hi aana padega usey uthaane ke liye
Mayank immediately gets up from his position and Nupur gets down the bed.
M: Tum…… tum mere bed room main kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe pata nahin hai ki ladkon bed room main nahin aana chahiye?
N: Wah, jab meri god main baccha ban kar aaraam se soh rahe they, tab tumhe apni bed room ka khayaal nahin aaya ?
M: Woh…woh mujhe laga ki Maa hai. Mujhe kya pata tha ki tum ho?
MM(cuts in): Tu uth gaya? Chalo, jald se jald fresh ho jaao aur aaj breakfast banaane kaa kaam tumhaara hai, yaad hai na? Abhi kaam pe lag jaao, Nupur tum mere saath chalo.
Nupur and Mayank's mom leave the room. Mayank recollects what just happened and smiles.
M(to himself): Jo bhi ho, lekin Nupur ke god main neend toh bahut acchi aati hai. Kabhi phir se try karna chahiye (suddenly realizes what he is thinking). Mayank seedha soch beta, seedha soch. Aaj kal tere dimaag main khayaal bahut aa rahe hai, CONCENTRATE, abhi uth aur jaake fresh ho jaa.
Mum's Room:
Mayank's mum is helping Nupur wear her sari, when the phone starts ringing.
MM: Nupur, maine pallu set kar diya hai, tum use blouse pe adjust karke pin lagaao. Main phone dekh kar aati hoon, shaayad office ka kuch important phone hoga.
N: Teekh hai aunty, aap door band karke jaayiye
MM:Teekh hai (but forgets to close the door in hurry)
Mayank is irritated at his mom for not picking up the phone for so long, he comes yelling into her room. Nupz who is still busy setting her pallu, observes that the strings behind her blouse are not tied. She lets the pinned pallu down on the floor and starts to tie the strings before adjusting the pallu on her blouse. Just then, Mayank enters the room opening the unlocked door
M: Maa aap……suddenly stops as he sees Nupur knotting the strings behind her blouse.
N: aaaagghhhhhh
M: aaaggghhhhhh
Nupz immediately grabs a blanket to cover herself and Mayank turns his face away from her.
N(angrily): Mayank, tumhe sharam nahin aata ? Aise …aise bina knock kiye ladkiyon ke room main aate hue? Woh bhi jab koi kapde pehen raha ho?
M(embarrassed): Sorry, mujhe nahin pata tha ki tum yahaan ho. Aur waise…. (is about to turn back in anger)
N: Khabardaar Mayank, agar peeche mudne ki koshish ki toh. Jo bhi bolna hai mooh udhar karke bolo.
M(stops turning back and irritated): Maa kahaan hai?
MM(holds his ear): Mayu, tu mere kamre kya kar raha hai? Yahaan Nupur kapde badal rahi hai, kitna embarrass kar diya tumne usey. Yeh bahut buri baat hai , tujhe ladkiyon ko kapde badalte hue aisa nahin dekhna chahiye
M(angered at his mum's comments): Maa aap aise bol rahe ho jaise maine yeh sab jaan booch ke kiya . Waise bhi, Nupur ko door ko lock karna chahiye tha mujhe thodi pata tha ki yeh yahann aise ….mera matlab…iss position main….. whatever! Main yahaan se jaa raha hoon (walks away)
MM(laughs at Mayu who is walking away in anger): Yeh Mayu bhi naa, aise kaam karta hai aur mooh phulaake chale jaata hai
M(murmuring to himself in worry): Yeh subah subah mere saath itni durghanaayein kyun ho rahi hai? Pehle Nupur ke god main so gaya aur ab yeh. Mayank tujhe subah subah Nupur ka chehra dekhte hue nahin uthna chahiye thaa, isiliye toh tere saath sab gadbad ho raha hai.
Mum's Room:
MM(looking at the image of Nupur in the mirror in front of her): Aha! Perfect! You are looking so beautiful Nupur beta! (kisses her on her forehead)
(Guys, imagine her in any light colored sari with her hair open and matching jewelry.)
N(feels shy): Thank you aunty, mujhe accha dikhna hi tha, aapne saadi itna accha jo pehnaaya mujhe.
MM: Chalo ab bahar chalo, tumhe college bhi toh jaana hai na? (hears Mayank's voice)
M: Maa, please naada baandne main meri help karo na!
MM and Nupur giggle on hearing that.
MM: Mera Mayu, itna perfectionist hai lekin naada nahi band sakta. Kabhi kabhi bas bacchon jaisi behave karta hai. Tum ruko, main abhi aati hoon.
Nupz checks herself out in the mirror, adjusts her jewelry, bangles and takes a close look to see if her make-up is right.
MM: Ho gaya madam? Apne aap ko gaur se dekh liya?
N(a little emabarassed): Woh main bas….
MM: Koi baat nahi, main sab samajhti hoon. Excel College main ladke aaj toh tumhe dekhte hi reh jaayenge, mera guarantee hai. Chalo, pehle Mayank pe test karte hai (winks). Agar usey pasand aa gaya toh samjho aaj line pakka lagegi.
MM(goes out of the room): Mayank, hamein tumhaara opinion chahiye. Bataao ki Nupur kaisi lag rahi hai?
Nupz comes out of the room adjusting her sari. Mayank, while arranging the plates on the dining table, looks at Nupur who is looking really gorgeous and is unable to take his eyes off her. Nupz looks at him confused, waiting for his response but Mayank is too stunned to speak. Mayu's mum shakes him-
MM: Mayank, Nupur acchi lag rahi hai ya nahi? Kuch toh bata, aise chup kyun khada hai?
M(still in a daze, looks at his mom and back at Nupur): Beautiful (its almost a whisper)
MM: Kya? Tumne kuch kaha? Hamein sunaayi nahi diya
M(gets normal and clears his throat): Accha hai! Acchi lag rahi ho Nupur .
N(smiling): Thanks Mayank
MM: Nupur, toh aaj line pakka (Nupz and Mum exchange a high five)
M: Line? Kaunsa line?
MM: College main, ladkon ki line
M: Matlab?
MM: Buddhu, ab agar tujh jaisa ladka Nupur ko dekh ke do min ke liye chup ho sakta hai toh baaki ladkon ka khair nahin. Tu baith, main breakfast laati hoon (leaves)
N: Mayank, kya main sach main acchi lag rahi hoon? Kuch zyaada toh nahi ho gaya na?
M: Actually kuch kami hai.
N: Kya?
M: Come with me
Mayu takes her into Mum's room and starts searching for something.
N: Mayank, yeh tum kya doondh rahe ho?
M: Ek min. Mil gaya!
N: Kya?
Mayank turns towards Nupur and gives her a nose ring.
N: Yeh kya hai?
M: Nose ring, tum apne naak pe yeh pehnogi toh aur PERFECT dikhogi. Tumhaare soft naak (lightly brushes his finger on her nose) par yeh bahut accha lagega I am sure.
Nupz takes the nose ring and wears it.
N: Ab kaise lag rahi hoon?
M(lost looking at her): Maine jitna imagine kiya tha, ussey bhi zyaada accha.
N(unsure if she heard it right): Kya?
M(out of the trance): Mera matlab hai pehle se aur khoobsurat lag rahi ho (smiles)
N(shy): Thank you
M: ek aur cheez (moves very close to her, freezing Nupur in her position) baaki hai
Fixing his gaze on her, he gently flicks a few strands of hair from behind her ear on to her face.
M(still looking into her eyes; lost): Truly Beautiful! (eye lock again)
MM(calls out from the dining room): Nupur, Mayank aaj breakfast karne ka iraada hai ya nahi?
N(turning away): Mayank, aunty bula rahe hai, ab hamein jaana chahiye
M(moves away leaving her some space to go): haan chalo.
Nupz stumbles upon something and trips. Mayu, as usual prevents her fall by holding her.
M(laughing): yeh lo, isiliye toh aaj subah se yeh sab ho raha tha.
N(confused): Kya?
M: Jiss din maine tumhe bathroom se unlock karke girne se bachaaya tha, tab se meri zindagi main shanti gaayab ho gayi hai
N(angry): Matlab? Aur please , matlab mujhe uthaake samjhaana warna iss position main aur do min rahoongi toh mera kamar toot jaayega by god! Aur maine saadi pehen ne main jitna mehnat kiya woh sab waste ho jaayega
M(helps her back to position): Kuch nahi, chalo!
Mayu n Nupz join Mum for breakfast and start for college as soon as they are done. Nupz is waiting for Mayank outside his house.
MM: Yeh le , tu yehi book lene ke liye waapas aaya tha na?
M: Thanks ma, bye!
MM: Mayu sun, tu Nupur ko kab bataane wala hai?
M: Kya bataana hai mujhe ussey?
MM: Tujhe lagta hai ki tu mujhse sach chupa sakta hai? Maine tujhe tabhi pakad liya tha jab tu ussey goor raha tha.
Mayank hugs his mom and rushes outside like a girl who is feeling shy.
MM: Aaaj toh ussey batade
Mayu and Nupz reach college. As soon as Nupz enters college, some guy or the other keeps complimenting her on looking so beautiful. She even gets a lot of flowers from guys; Mayank, who was by her side all through this does not feel so good about it.
M(acting a bit jealous): Nupur tum in sab ko nahin jaante hue bhi unse flowers kaise le sakti ho?
N: Phoolon ka jaan ne se kya lena dena? Kisi ne itna pyaar se phool diya hai toh uska dil kaise tod sakti hoon main? Waise bhi jinhe main jaanti hoon, woh toh phool dene se rahe, kam se kam jinse phool mil rahe hain unse toh leloon
M: Tumhaara kehne ka matlab yeh hai ki maine tumhe phool nahi diya?
N: Shukar hai, tumhe yeh baat samajh main toh aayi. Ab chalo, class ke liye der ho rahe hai hum.
Nupz starts to walk away but Mayu holds her hand and stops her. She turns back to find out the reason and is surprised to see Mayank on his knees, holding a pink rose in front of her.
N(totally amused): Mayank yeh ….tum..phool….mere liye?
M(smling): Toh tumhe kya laga? Agar woh sab tumhe flowers de sakte hain toh tumhaara dost tumhe bhool jayega?
N: magar..maine toh expect his nahi kiya (excited)
M: Agar tum expect karti, to mazaa nahi aata. Ha na? Thrilling? You will get used to it (winks at her, again surprising her) Ab class ke liye chalte hain, tum mujhe yeh surprised look baad main dedena.
And they leave for the class.
==========================================
Scene by ghtk1 (Pallabi)
mayank and nupur on their way back to mumbai.chunki mishra arrenged a private car 4 their safe return.so they r in the private car.suddenly nupur felt hungry.because they have started the journey early in the
morning.
nupur-mujhe bhook lagihe.
mayank- to main kya karoon!!Angry
nupur-yahaan meri bhook se jaan ja rahihe or tum kaherahinhon ki 'main kya karoon'?nupur badly immitates him.
then before nupur can say something mayank shut her mouth and andhandeled her a chokolate bar.he said that'kabhie kabhie non-stop bolne ke bich thori si break lia karo.sehath ke liye acha hain,tumhari bhi,or meri bhi.nupur was again about to say something being completely surprised seeing the food.but mayank again stopped her.ab kuch bolneki jarurat nahi hain.chup chap khao.
nupur-par ye tumhe kahan mili?
mayank-asmaan se tapak pari.simple.LOLLOLare baba,mujhe pahelesehi pata tha ke raste mein agar tumhe bhook lagegi,to tum to mera sar khaogi,to apne sar ko bachane keliye maine yeh sab order kiya.taki jab tumhe bhook lage tum mere sar ke jaga ye khaon.and then the shared a very cute eye-lock moment.
==============================================
Scene by Anwaya
He finally said it,
he coudnt believe it...............
She was in front of him, shocked.
It was first time that Nupur dnt had words.
On that night, they were on beach, blue light of moon was reflected due to water directly on Nupur's face who was literaly in tears.
Mayo's heart skipped a bit, no...........it cnt be........., Nupur cnt say no.
The beautiful scene arround him now was most ugly n cruel for him.
Fighting back his tears he turned and was walking away from Nupur when he heard footsteps and he turned to find himself face to face with Nupur.
She hugged him and said, ' i love you too Monkey Mayank'.
Grinning he was about to hug her back when he heard,
'Mayooo...........jaldi kar college ke liye der ho jaegi'.
He opened his eyes, so it was a dream, i still have to go long way, he thought and gave a sheepish smile.
=======================================
Scene By RuchiMayur[Ruchi]
nupur and mayank are asked to collect sum samples for there assignment
..........................................................................................................................................
nupur was wearing white suit and evryone complimented her that she luked beautifull but mayank didnt
.........and nupur is still pissed off with mayank and now becoming ill-tempered
mayank; nupur mujhe lagta hai uss jagah [pointing towards a botanical garden] se sample mill jayega
nupur; toh ......
mayank; toh matlab kaya hai.........chalo mere saath wahaan par
nupur; meiin nahin jaa rahii hoon......tumhe jaana hai toh jao
mayank; kyun kya hua hai aapko ab?
nupur; mujhe kuch bhi ho tumhe kya?...mein thak gayii hoon chal chalkar
mayank[sarcastically]; haan haan mein toh train meintravel kar raha tha jaise..
nupur[ angrily]tumhe jaana hai toh jao.....otherwise mat jao but i am not comiing with you
mayank[rudely]; fine ...you dont care about our project but i do.i am going you stay here
mayank leaves from there and nupur goes and sits on the nearby bench
nupur; samajhta kya hai aapne aapko?.yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? usse kuch nahin kaha toh mein kyun gussa ho rahi hoon?.....aahhhhh lagta hai iss monkey ke saath reh kar mera dimaag bhi kharab ho gaya hai
in the mean time mayank comes back with some samples .......
but suddenly his calm expression changes to an angry one........he sees a guy talking to nupur .......nupur was also enjoying his company......mayank thought soo coz nupur was smiling......
mayank was getting furious and he went to nupur
nupur; tum aa gaye.mayank yeh..
before nupur could complete her sentence,,,mayank held that guys from his collar.......
mayank; abbe tere problem kya hai?
that guy was shocked..he removed mayank's hand from his collar......
guy; listen dude ....mereko koi problem nahin hai....tumhe kya ho raha hai?
nupur; mayank chodo usse.......
mayank [luks at nupur]; tum beech mein mat bolo
guy; hey dude.......she was luking pretty so jst came to tell her.....
mayank's anger was at peak now.....he clutched his hand into a fist
the guy was aware of it and rushed from there coz he knew that afterwards he will not be able to walk on his feet
the guy left and nupur luked at mayank with a confused expression but mayank was still not calm
mayank; tumhe kuch pata nahin chalta kya?
nupur; kya pata nahin chalta mujhe? aur tumhe kya hua hai?
mayank; kisi bhi ladke se baat karte hain kya?
nupur; toh issne bura kya hai?
mayank; you lost it nupur....dont you have some brains?
nupur; you are over-reacting maynak......itni badi baat bhi nahin thi..
mayank; mujhe pata hai mein kya kar raha hoon......if anyone compliments you, it doesnot mean that you start talking to that person
nupur[pissed off] ; toh tumhe yeh problem hai ke ussne mujhe compliment diya?you are impossible mayank.
mayank; baat yeh nahin hai
nupur; phir kya hai
mayank; kissi bhi ladke se aise baat nahin karni chaheyi
nupur judges mayank's mind now.......she decides not to irritate him more
nupur [naughtyly] ; accha.tum bhi toh ladke ho....phir tumse bhi na baat karun?
mayank; mujh mein aur uss mein difference hai
nupur [smiles] kya?tum ladke nahin hoo?
mayank [notice nupur smiling] tumse baat karna bakwaas hai........chalo hummein aur bhi samples collect karne hai
nupur[teasing him] waise jo bhi kaho mayank...woh ladka bahut sweet tha, hai na?
mayank; tumhe itna sweet laga toh ek kaam karna..jab raksha bandhan aayega toh usse rakhi bhej dena..
mayank starts walkng and nupur laughs
AT NIGHT....IN FRONT OF BHUSHAN MANSION
mayank and nupur were returning back after depositing there files at the uni. hall.......
nupur; mayank..[luking around] lagta hai gunjan soo gayii.par itni jaldi?mayank; agar tumhe nahin pata hai toh bata dun ke its 10pm.
nupur; kya??itni late..sab tumhare galti hai..
mayank; mere kya galti hai?
nupur; aur nahin toh kya...kabhi udhar se sample lena hai aur kahi idhar se..meinne kaha bhi tha tmhe ke mein thak gayii hoon
mayank; agar tum bhool gayii ho toh yaad dila dun ke chat, paani puri..yeh sab tumhe he khana tha .....meinne ya tumne
nupur; toh iss mein bura hi kya hai...hmm
mayank was quiet now but nupur was in no mood to stay shaant.so she starts with a new topic
nupur; kitni aachi hawa chal rahi hai na mayank...zaroor barish hogi
mayank [smiling broadly] ; accha.......tumhe weatherforecasting aati hai......mujhe nahin pata tha..
nupur [irritated] tumse koi baat he nahin karni chaheyi
mayank; tum subahse itni irritated kyun ho?
nupur[pissed off]; aacha......tumhe face-reading karne aati hai?
mayank; sabki toh nahin par haan tumhare zaroor kar sakta hoon
nupur; really? but i dont think soo....
mayank; accha agar mein tumhe bataun ke tum kis baatse gussa ho toh.....tum maan jayoge?
nupur; mujhe kuch nahin jaanana hai......
mayank[ without listening to nupur] meinne tumhe abhi tak nahin bataya ke tum aaj kaise lag rahi hoo.......yehi baat hai.......i know it
nupur didnt know wat to say now.......coz mayank was absolutely correct
nupur; mujhe nahin pata ..........i am going
nupur was just going to leave when mayank held her wrist
mayank [with a smile] ; sunna nahin hai ke tum kaise lag rahe ho?
nupur; mujhe kuch nahin sunna hai...mera haath chodo
mayank gives her a sweet smile and pulls her towards himself........
nupur was shocked than surprised.........
they were soo close that mayank could easily feel nupur's heart thumping and not just beating, they were soo close that mayank could easily see lots of questions in nupur's beautiful eyes, they were soo close that mayank could easily see blush creeping up her neck.....they were soo close that mayank could easily make out nupur's lips trembling
mayank [softly]; kya sunna chati ho?
nupur couldnt say anythng....mayank's intense gaze was making it impossible for her to evn utter a single word
mayank comes more closer , he puts some of her strands behind her ears.....his touch gave a tingle at her spine......
mayank [luking in her eyes] ; tum bahut aachi lag rahi ho,....tumhe dekhta he reh gaya..[nupur was blushing hard now] kal tak mujhe lagta tha ke angels sirf kahani mein hoti hain......but you proved me wrong, i could see an angel standing near me..soo pure and serene......evn u made moon doubt its beauty today coz ur glow is even fading moon's light..you...
mayank could see her cheeks gng more and more red....he didnt speak further
nupur was feeling weak from knees now.........she was lost in his eyes
they both stood still and at that time even time stood still.....they were lost in each others eyes.........
then only it started drizzling....both came back to there sense and separated, nupur without uttering a single word rushed inside as if she didnt want rain to wash away mayank's sensation from her body
mayank was still standing ....enjoying showers from god..
AFTER SOMETIME......
MAYANK'S ROOM
mayank was standing near the window sill......trying to make out what happened to him...........it was the first time he felt soo close to somebody, it was the first time he could see somebody's heart from her eyes...it was the first time he wanted to touch his lips with hers...........
NUPUR'S ROOM
nupur was standing infront of the mirror.....anybody will say that she is luking the same as she luked in the morning except that she was wet now
but for nupur a new person was standing before the mirror...with sparkle in her eyes and the sensation of mayank's touch evn made her blush now...........
it was the first time she that she wanted to submitt herself to somebody
==============================================
Scene By Triv
INT. MAYANK'S HOUSE – EVENING
Mayank is sitting on the couch and Nupur on the chair. Nupur is chattering as usual about something. Mayank is staring at Nupur, dazed.
Nupur (annoyed): Mayank! Meine pucha Aunty abhi tak nahi aayi.
Mayank(dazed still): Huh? Aa jayegi.
Nupur (staring at him like he is a Pythogorus theorem): Mayank? Andu gundu thanda paani.
Mayank (nods): Haan zaroor.
Nupur (astonished): Tum meri baat nahi sun rahe ho. Mayank!
Mayank (annoyed): Mein Hamesha har baat suntan hoon. Sirf tumhari baat sunna zaroosi nahi samajhta.
Nupur (taking a deep breath and muttering to herself): Nupur, shanth..Mayank ke gharpe hi uska murder nahi kar sakti. Aunty ko bura lagega.
Mayank: Kya?
Nupur: Kuch Nahi! (looking at the door) Aunty kab aayegi.
Mayank (getting annoyed again): Sirf Maa se milne aayi ho kya? Baar Baar darwaje ko kyun dekh rahi ho?
Nupur (sarcastically): Arre Nahi..mein kisi aur se bhi milne aayi hun.
Mayank (suspiciously): Kisse?
Nupur: Chironjee ji se! Of course, Mr Bore se! Jo ho tum! Sach Mein Mayank tum thoda kashth nahi le sakte, mujhse baat karne ki? Mein kab se baat kiye ja rahi hun aur tum patah nahi kya soch rahe ho.
Mayank: Chironjee ka naam mat lo aur mein bore nahi hu.
Nupur (sarcastically): Haan, haan. Tum toh sharukh khan ki film ho.
Mayank (staring at her): Kya?
Nupur (exasperated) : Arre sharukh khan ki movie entertaining hoti hain..toh samajh mein aaya?
Mayank: Nahi Kyun ki normal logon ko tumhari baatein samajh nahi aati.
Nupur (worked up): Matlab mein normal nahi hu?
Mayank (teasing): Ye mein nahi tume khudne abhi accept kiya.
Nupur (gritting her teeth and talking to herself again): Nupur shanth, shanth. Mayank ka khoon kal kardena. Aaj khoon nahi kar sakti. Aunty ne dinner pe bulaya hain, unhe sach mein bohot bura lagega agar meine unke Mayuu ko maar dala toh..aur uparse khana bhi nahi milega..aur jail mein chakki peeessing and peeesing.
Nupur gets a Flash of her in dull jail clothes, chakki peesing.
Nupur: Nahii!
Mayank (startled): Kya hua?
Nupur (distressed): Main Khoon nahi kar sakti.
Mayank (staring at her like she is Agra ke mental hospital se bhagi hui pagal): Ok.
Nupur notices Mayank is actually silently laughing.
Nupur (fuming): Haso mat.
Mayank: Thik hain
He starts laughing loudly.
Nupur throws a pillow at him but it bounces off him and hits the flower vase on the coffee table. It shatters.
Nupur: Ohno!
Mayank (exasperated): Ye dekho tumne kya kiya. Ruko..mein sametta hu.
He leaves the room.
Nupur (glancing at the door and talking to herself): Agar aunty ne dekh liya toh kya sochengi mere bare mein. Ye Nupur ladki hain ya toofaan, hamesha kuch na kuch gadbad karti rehti hain.
Nupur gets up and starts picking up the large glass pieces in her hand.
Nupur (muttering to herself and distressed): shayad fevistick se inhe jod sakoon.
Mayank (entering the room): Nupur!
Nupur squeaks and jerks up. The glass pieces slips and shatters again. She gives a cry of distress. She stares at Mayank.
Mayank (taking a step forward): Hilna mat. Kaach….
Nupur had instinctively taken a step backward with Mayank's forward step. A piece of glass enters her foot. Nupur gives a cry of pain.
Mayank (continuing): ….chub jayega….Nupur!
Mayank slips a hand around Nupur's waist and hauls her close to himself. He almost frog hops her to the chair and lowers her in it carefully.
Mayank (furious that she is hurt): Dekhne do.
Nupur, big big tears, dropping from her eyes is sniffing pitifully.
Mayank (appalled at the blood dripping from the cut): Ruko..main first aid box leke aata hu.
He doesn't listen to anything said by Nupur and leaves.
Nupur is sniffling and making a big fuss on her injury. Mayank enters the room again with a First Aid box in his hand.
Mayank (hunching down near Nupur and looking at her tenderly but talking sternly) : Chup.
Nupur shuts up and glares at him.
Mayank (smiling): Is Nupur ko main jaanta hu.
Nupur makes a face and then yelps in pain as Mayank begin to clean the injury with dettol.
Nupur (angry): Tum Savlon nahi use kar sakte kya?
Mayank (grim but amused look): Har baat pe complaint karna zaroori hain kya?
Nupur is quite but fuming quietly.
Mayank slathers cream on the cut, places cotton and sticks a bandage on it.
Mayank (inquiringly): Chal paogi kya?
Nupur glares at him some more and stand up with attitude. She promptly starts to fall. Mayank catches her by her waist again. She is in his arms. They stare at each other. Mayur's bg music plays.
Their staring session is interrupted by a doorbell.
Mayank blinks and drops his hands away from Nupur. Nupur falls in the chair in a heap. She is left swearing at him when he opens the door to his Mother.
Nupur (in an about turn, her face wreathed in smile): Aunty. Aap kaisi hain?
========================================================================
Edited by Raee_rockz - 16 years ago
Advocate Anjali Awasthi
Members Lounge
