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Posted: 16 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: kiranheer

lovely avani tm ne to inko comercial aad me dall deya 🀣

and very nice ffπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Reserved **
Goona read this 1..arram se :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
i hope u like it priya. wait today's epi did samrat miss gunjan? and anything with mayur happen.
Edited by sportskp - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64


"🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣avani u r dodo of r forum πŸ˜†... completely wacky ...πŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£...... Chiro Ji + Nups + Mayu were wacky enough πŸ˜†... But Shukla Ji + Shukantala + Mayu makes me fall from my chair ...🀣🀣🀣... do include shukla Ji + sheena + chiroji scenes next time πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
whens the next part coming??? This is one of the best ff ive read....im eagerly waiting for the next bit as much as 2mws episode....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
last time:

uday puts his arm around mayank..."wah mayank mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum films dekhte ho....lagta hai nupur ka asar hua hai". Mayank glares at uday (poof uday is gone)🀣🀣🀣

at the canteen...mayur and sajan meet up with benji and uday. dia comes with RV.

sheena walking toward the canteen ..encounters chiru!☺️

update:

at the canteen....mayur with uday meet up with sajan and benji. RV dia come too.

mayank and nupur say "hi samrat, gunjan, benji".

Rv-dia duo just enter.... "hey candy -RV!.."
dia looks at samrat... "hi sammy..hi gunjan, benji"

gunjan "hi dia....ranvijay"
sammy ....to create a friendly hawa... says "so guys aab kya kare?....play ka practice ya bhaar ka coffee (smiling towards gunjan) "

across the other side..towards sheena ji!

sheena is walking to canteena after meeting up with miss tamana for the play...hears "kaabab ko fry karna hai ji..aab nupur ji se baat kaise karu?"

she looks in..to see chiru ji.

chiru walking around looks out and notices sheena.
"ji aap? me myself Chiru ji"

sheena walks in.. hi i'm sheena. Chiru looks at up up and down.πŸ˜† thinking (kya yeh sapna hai ya such..)

he goes on to say...ji aap ne kaabab ko dekha kya? oh ji mera matlab hai mayank aur nupur ji ko dekha hai ji?

sheena says pata nahi par shayad canteen mein ho?
chalo mein aap ko le chalti hoon.

walk to the canteen chiru looks at sheena...jaise he saw anarkali 🀣
🀣🀣🀣

both arrive at the canteen..and sheena introduces Chiru ji.
samrat says ' oh aap , mein to aap ko kal mil chuka hoon...par candy aur rv se milye.' he intro chiru to them.

mayu looks on giving wide angle glares to chiru. chiru is in between looking at nupurπŸ˜‰

nupur ji ...aap ne baatya nahi ki aap ki ko bhen hai...(blushing). nupur. Nupur replies..ji woh mein na baat baat mein bhool gayi. she says gunjan meri bhen aur saabse aachi dost hai.

chiru says hi gunjan ji..smiling while he is blush. Samrat is little over the edge..thinking ( yeh langoor ko kisne allow kiya excel mein?)

mayank in between taps sammy....and raises his eyebrow (kuch kuch laga?)

mayank gets up to get some coffee and samrat joins him.. near the bar they talk...

sammy: dude yeh lagoor excel mein?

mayank: yeh to langoor nahi social service ki maha nagri hai. academic meet se yahaan tak agaya.

samart: hmm so yeh baat hai.....dude aab iski fikir mat karo. guru samrat tumhe help karega. dekhe langoor ko tandoor kaise kare.

taking coffee back samrat and mayank give short hints to each other. nupur and gunjan notice something to be strange. diya and sheena start looking at nupur and gunjan to get the scoop.
nupur wispers to mayank..kya tum paagl ho? samrat ko aakh kyun mar rahe ho?

mayank says kuch nahi...aabhi ravan ko shakuntala se bachna hai. tum gunjan se saath woh burger le ko aao na plz. bhook lagi hai.

nupur makes a by god face and goes with gunjan. sheena n dia walk with them.

sheena says omg nupur mayank aur samrat ko kya hua hai? Gujan says pata nahi.. diya says 'babes kuch to hua hai...abhi to laga jaise kuch dostana hai'🀣
🀣

nupur says 'kya? mujhe laga shayad drugs pe hai..uday bhaiya ne kaha tha..pehle'.

at the table samrat gives ishara to benji 'kuch plan hai'.

sammy n mayu take chiru on side.
mayank: 'dekho phoolo ki dukhaan...ji ka paigaam...'
samrat: '...dude last warning hai ladies se dhoor raho'
mayank: 'warna...
yeh chand jaise chera..'
samrat: 'nahi ko dekhe ga..aur pooche ga'

chiru ji ..afraid...says ' ji aap mujhe bvakoof samjhe te hai ji?...nupur ji meri dost hai ji..aur aab to gunjan ji aur sheena ji bhi (blushing)'

both mayu and samrat say ' theek hai bachu'

both leave.


more i will update friday
Edited by sportskp - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
hope its ok scene i need to write better πŸ˜”
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
Amazing update sweets!!πŸ‘πŸ‘
lolzz.. my fav line was "langoor ko tandoor' hahahahahahaha 🀣

bechare Chiru ji.. unke saare sapno ka kya hoga jam sammy n Mayu milke watt lagayenge..lolzzz


Im craving for more updates!😳😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
samart and mayank go back to the table, chiru thinks on "kabab mein haadi aab ek se do hogaye" aab mein nupur ji aur gunjan ji se kaise baat karu??πŸ˜†

chiru walks over and sits. and the ladies come back with some food. all of them starting eating....mayank glares up at chiru in between....
sheena notices this and starts to chat with chiru.😳😳

so chiru ji...aap excel mein kisi ko phele se jaante ho kya?

haan ji..ji plz call me chiru..my pet name ji. mein nupur ji se mila tha...

mayank jumps in 'haan...aur bhool bhi jao ge..'πŸ˜† mayank tries to control himself....

benji says..samrat aaj ghar drop karga?

samrat says nahi benji..aaj chashmish ke liye seat booked hai. he looks at gunjan and holds her hand...kyun chashmish😳

they get up to leave..and mayur and chiru left with sheena. mayank tells nupur "hume bhi jaana chaye. and ask sheena..if she needs ride in rikshaw" she says no thanks...

chiru ji says ji mein sheena ji ko chod duga ghar. mayanks smiles and holds nupur had and they leave. nupur tries to say bye..but mayu come in between as they keep walking.😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

sheena says....aab mujhe bhi jaana chaye. chiru looks on with puppy eyes. she gets up about to walk when she slips..but chiru gets up and holds her in time! they have long eye lock😍😍😍😍 (this jodi is perfect!!)πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£

chiru holds her up..she says thanks chiru. chiru keeps looking at her as she is his own shakuntala....
🀣🀣 he says ji no problem ji..yeh to meri duty thi ji... she is about to walk...and he follows...

she stops and says kya hua? ji aap janti hai ki yahaan ek ghar kahan milega?πŸ˜‰ she tells him to come and stay at her house....they have guest room. chiru lost in her eyes.....says haan ji aap ko problem na ho to.

both leave to her house.

scene goes towards shilpa mayu

shilpa (aunty) tells mayu "to aaj college kaisa tha?" mayu says "aaj to woh chiru ayaa tha...aur nupur nupur nupur bol raha tha....kaash use mein jungle mein chod deta...". shilpa looks on shocked at her possessive mayu!

"wah pehle tum nupur se door the aur aab nupur ka bhajan hai?"
mayu says 'nahi ..ma woh to chiru aacha ladka nahi hai..is liye.."

scene shifts to nupur gunjan in bed

gunjan tune dekha kya? by god mayank ko kya hogaya chironji ji ko dekh ke?
haan di...aaj samrat bhi mayank ki thara kuch ajeeb harkat ki. nupur says....par pata hai...mayank aaj kal to rahul ki thara pyaar karne laga hai...kuch kuch hota hai mein rahul tha woh. by god...mein bhool gayi!

gunjan says kya hua di...kya bhool gayi? Nupur says mein mayank ko phone karna bhool gayi...πŸ˜† aaj kal phone pe baati hooti hai.

gunjan smiles and hugs nupur frm back. di..woh to pyaar ka side effects hai...aur dil mein guitar...ke tune. nupur says paagli....mujhe bhi pata nahi tere dil mein samrat ke guitar baaj rahe hai.....gunjan says...diiiii tum bhi na.

gunjan's cell rings in back its samrat..who says "chashmish tum na kaab se phone kar raha hoon..chalo window ke bhar dekho..."

gunjan looks out where sammy is waiting for her on his bike. nupur looks out too and say to gunjan..jao...par bahut der mat karna!

more update laters..on sajan date and mayur call & sheena-chiru eyelocks 🀣
🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
Avani!! πŸ€—
fantastic update sweety!!! lolzzz
i cant blv it .. Chiru n Sheena!!! hnahahahahhhahahaa .. amazikng jodi yaaar🀣
but pls make Mayu a lil more jealous na.. lolzz .. he is so funny when he is jealous.πŸ€ͺ

abso brilliant update yaar .. ye dil mange more!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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