The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~

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ruchi

@simranruchi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#521

awesome work yaar

mayank turning into srk.........so chweet

loved it yaar

good going

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#522

@Amber
🤗🤗
Thanks soooo much sweetie.. was really hopin u'd like it..love you!

@Ruchi
Love you.. thanks a lot.. !! 🤗

Edited by debby - 16 years ago

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legends

@legends

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#523

oyeeeeeeee debby yaar kya confession tha MAYANK ka
"BY GOD" mazaa aa gayaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#524

Debby, what to say.. OMG.. It was so well-written.. Dodo said yes to Vatsala, Sammy told Dia that he loves Gunjan (and he yelled it too! I can see him saying it like that to her, him on the roof of the school, her trying to get him down, and then him yelling, "I love you, Gunjan!" down to her and her blushing. Then he will pretend to jump until she also tells him how she feels..)

The best of course would be the MayUr confession.. Hai, kya adha theh.. *swoon* What a way to confess his feelings for her.. And she also, sort of, confessed in her ranting.. *sigh* Brilliant part Debby, waiting for more.

Ooh, and get me a guy too?

Love,

Radz

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Tanya

@TINAMALHONTRA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#525

👏

Your best update till now debby.
MAYANK KA BY GOD toh cha gaya.
Itna maza aaya. And Mayank really gave
out his feelings now
Aww....and the last scene was touching.
Ab toh Nupur ko koi shikayat nahi hogi
apne sharukh se.😳

👏

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#526

@legends
Thanks a lott sweetie.. 🤗

@Radz
Yes.. I like that vision of urs.. Sam has to be a bit over the top wid all he does..glad u liked the Mayur scene, it was an imp junction in the story..
Sure. Let me knw wht kind of a guy u'd like.. 😉
Thanks so much Radz! 🤗

@Tina
Yeah.. finally he managed to tell her his dil ka haal..
Happy u liked it Tina.. thank you! 🤗

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Anjalika

@Anjalika Khanna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#527

wow......

it was awesum..................😊

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sherizzz

@sherizzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#528

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....no words yaarr..........

bigggg hug for you🤗🤗🤗

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#529

@ Debby: A mix of Mayank, Benji and Sammy.. Smart, sarcastic, funny and sweet.. And goodlooking would be a bonus.. Ooh, call him Adi please? Short for Aditya.. As in KGGK Adi.. *swoon*

Love,

Radz