The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~

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Sayanti Das

@Raee_Salvatore

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1071

fantastic part debz.i totally luvd the MN interactions ovr the phone..n mummy n nupz scene was fantastic...hayeeeeeee.lolz dia dod scene was funny.......😛 n liked the CJ,Nupz n sammy scene.......hmmmm daal kali.😉.....lolz i completely luvd the part..thnxxxxxxxx a lot for sharing it...........do continue soon....u know i am addicted to ur FF😃

Luv Raee🤗🤗

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Sanah tendulkar

@sanahVM

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1072

hey debby...!!🤗

part 56 huh...!!!!??? hw do u manage 2 write so much yaar...!!! 😆

mai toh eng.. me ek essay likhne k lie h mar jaati hu..!!!😆😆😆

nyway..!! it was an awesome update as usual...tere writing ki toh jitni tarif karo kum hai yaar..!!!👏👏

"Khushi magnet ki tarah hoti hai. Agar hamare andar ho, toh bahar se aur khushi ko kheech leti hai."

wah..wah..ji..kya thought hai..!!!😉👏👏seriously...i thought it was a beautiful thought...!!👏👏

n hay ram..!! kya keh rahi ho debby mayu kabhi second bhi aaya tha...!!!😲😲 yeh baat xcel me toh kya....mai bhi nai maan sakti...!!!😆😆😆

bt i do luv dis future saas-bahu bonding huh...!!😉

d phone convo was sweet..!!😳😳n mayu askin nups 2 do d notes...!! omg..!!! ye kya kar diya usne...i hope ki woh dhang k bana le...!!😆😆

n sam xcitd 2 go 2 class..!!!😲 enuf 2 suggest ki daal me smthing is black...!!!😆😆😆

keep writing..!!

xxx

sanah...!!

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1073

@Raee.. thanks a million Sayu.. your comments always make me smile.. Thanks for being such a loyal reader.. you make me want to go on and on. 🤗

@Sanah.. haan yar, 56 tak aa gaye.. lol kya karen, I love writing anything.. its my stress buster. U liked that thought? That's what a friend of mine keeps saying..
Hehe, zarur banayegi ache se notes.. saaf saak likhke.. nethin for our..oops, her Mayu. 😳
Thanks a lot darling.. !! 🤗

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#1074

DEBBYJIIII!!!!

O mannn I'm such a paagal gadhi yaar!! Feel free courier a big chaped to me!! How did I not see your update?? *smacks herself on the head* 😳 Woh kya haina Debby....I'm getting old toh iss umar mein meri telepathy is going down!! Budhape ka assar you know. 😆😆 Ahhh so sorry dear sweet Debs (apun makhan lagane mein ustaad hai 😉) please forgive me for replying so late!! Hopefully my comments will make up for that bewakoofon jaissi harkat!

Chal ab point pe aati hoon. First things first you portray Gunjan as soo cute in your FF Debby!! And mann the mummy-nupur convo of mayur was too cute!! This line touched my heart: "Woh tumhara dil kabhi nahin todega Nupur, akhir beta kiska hai" Ahhhh so sweet! Mummy is right ofcourse Mayu hai hi itna sweet....itna caring....itna acha...itna smart...itna good looking.....😍.....*sigh*....goes into daydream...

.....*comes back to reality* see what you did there Debs!! Your updates are soo dangerous yaar!! Humesha mujhe daydream mode mein daal dete hain! There should be a warning sign before each update of yours! Ki kripya dhyaan se padein...padne ke baad daydreaming side effects ho jaatein hain, dhanyawaad. Seriously takki hum prepared to rahein kum se kum!! 😆😆

O ya back to the update...I LOVED the phone convo!!! He called her "pari ji" 😳😳 O mannn that was soo sweet!! Debby you still have that glucose handy na? I'm gonna need some right now....emergency case hai boss. And as usual all the other characters were bang on!! Very well written mahaan writer Debbyji!! *bows down*

Ahhh what a great update Debby!! A perfect bday present to me!! 😳😳 Loved it completely and love you even more!! Although I have to tell you ki tere aur tere FF ke beech mein tough competition hai boss!! 😆😆 Love you loads Debbyji!! *big jhappi* 🤗🤗

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sherizzz

@sherizzz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1075

heyyy debs.....nice update yaaar.......i lovveddd mayu's mom-nupz scenes...dat was the highlight of this part.....waah mayank...he gonna make nupur to prepare notes 4 him😃

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1076

@sheri.. thank u sooo much di..hope Nupur ache se notes banaye..😃

@Pallo..Oye hoye, itni jaldi budhape ka asar shuru ho jaaye toh baap re baap! As I always say, jab jaago tabhi savera.. haha tujhe muhavra sunaye bagair din pura nahi hota! 😆
I know man, Mayu is dangerous territory. Daydreaming comes glued with any random thought of his..dere is no escape!
I am glad that u liked every1 else too.. Mayank ke jaddo chakra se bahar nikalke.. Competion ki bachi, tu dekh is baar main courier me kya bhejtu hu! Hope ur birthday was super fun.. love you Pallojee.. *big hug* 🤗

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1077

hey Debby di.......

it was a gr8, fab,outstanding update bole toh ek baariya aur jaandaar update tha............

aap ka update bilkul " sarvgunsampan" tha BY GOD!!!!

kal mera hindi exam haina isliye practise kar rahi thi...........

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1078

ok! my horrible sis is back.......so heres her comment......

hi, I'm nivi.....Adu ki behan....... I hope u remember me....

I agree with her ur update was really nice......both of us have exams now she has only 2 subjects left but I have 6 more to go........so I'm busy from past two weeks.........

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1079

@Adu.. shukriya hai meri pyari Adu.. apke suhane vichar ne meri sham aur suhani bana di..haha ho gayi Hindi practice.. gud luck and thanks luv!

@Nivi.. thanks so much dear.. happy u liked it! Gud luck to you too.. hope u rock ur exams.