Originally posted by: 1ishveerian
Hey hi Hobbit!
Sorry for being so late,
1st of all congrats for a new 1 👏
To author's note,yeah we were waiting for LDE, yet this one was no less a treat
And beatifully said that lack of evidence does not mean the evidence of lack...what a great philosopher you are
Now comming towards the os...
It's simply lovely dear...
Dont know what to say...
Mmm...you know what how i wish that cvs'd have made something good out of such a beatifull script, but to say they wer unable to built a good plot...
But you people simply rock dear...
I mean from where you people get such amazing ideas...
The plot was good dear and the background too good...
Now coming to contents...
Ranveer's pain...something which hooks us to the story...
And you nailed it dear...for you are too good at this...
For a month he is living away from his family, and his family was devoid of understanding his feeling, makes his pain more pythatic 😭 😭
Then comes Ishani...
Aaah... You know what i was alsoleft awestruck on her appearance...
I mean married 😲
But to say you are too good at suspence...
It was amazing when she said he is here, in response to his query about her husband... Though i got it later...
Then ishani's pov... Remarkable
Ranveer's outburst...justified
O ooo! Liplock 😲 and ranveer reciprocated too 😛
O god ranveer fainted, or to say went into a peacful sleep after so long
Then the psychatrist... Eh Ranveer's nerves would have broken down yaar if he had not tried to attempt suicide...
But tgen second chance is given... To say it was needed, for Ishveer had no other chance...
Keep rocking dear
Hey, what a pleasant surprise! After a long, long time!
How are you? What about the FF you\d started working on? Are you going to work on it and finish it? :)
Moving further, thank you so much! And it's okay. :) I will update LDE. I'm not getting proper time to work on it. By the way, it's also a pleasant surprise that you're following LDE since you were not seen here since long.
Coming to the review, well, ideas come from the show and unfulfilled desires which we wished should have happened but it never did. :( This OS was long pending and finally it happened. xD
Ranveer's family always failed to see him. They were all about Ritika, Ritika! Yuk! 🥱 Good for them he left. I always wished he left everyone like that and no one could find him. Not Ishani, not his family and no one. They'd all have their brains back as well, albeit late.
Ah, Ishani's appearance was just... I was just hoping (while writing) that he must hold on for a little more while and things will be alright- or at least get better. Though he was too broken and thus the outburst. 💔
Kiss was necessary for both of them, given how much they longed for "that". 😆
Yeah, his suicide attempt was kind of because of that only.
Yes! Second chance was finally given to them after their sufferings and so much pain. :(
Thank you, girl! I'm glad you liked the OS!
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