The Art of Breaking Hearts - An IshVeer Drabble.

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She didn't know why arts weren't among her favourite in school. The teacher used to say that she would never be good at that. Oh, now she could proudly display the smithereens and finely chopped pieces of his heart to Ms. Swati and prove her wrong!

Who said that she sucked in arts? She could break hearts like no other.

She knew his heart was breaking when she said those unerringly accurate loathing words to him.

She knew his heart was breaking as she initiated the signing of the papers.

She knew his heart was breaking as she was taken away by the police.

She knew his heart was breaking as hers broke too.

And she didn't know how to put them back together. They got so tangled and twirled with everything that the sharp pieces of their hearts just hurt their insides. But could they ever be free of their hearts even if it prodded them with gusto?

Never.

How can you live without your heart even if it's been powdered into pieces?

And as she broke the dipped in red hearts, she looked on with a steely firm gaze, pretending to be unaffected by the happenings.

She was a heartbreaker. Nothing was supposed to affect her, no?

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A/N : I don't even know what I have written. This was scribbled in a 15 minutes. So, no chappals for this. And as you can guess, this was the last year's March divorce/jail track.

This is sort of my farewell gift to all. :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
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TRIPLE POST. 😆
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Updated. Forgive my phone's erratic nature to make so many posts. :| No PMs are sent for this, though. If time permits, I will.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey poplu I will wait for more surprises link this.
Nice drabble just signifying her ability to inflict pain on both of them
Last line of steely looks was my favourite
This was one of my favourite episode with so much pain I loved it.
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ah, this little things... it was lovely. Ishani the heart-breaker. She indeed knew how to break the heart of the one she had loved. Oh, that episode. That brutal one! You were looking for that episode for the drabble or you got an idea while watching it?

Either way, hamari lottery. xD

A brilliant work, girl. And I'm sorry, I can't give a longer review since have been stuck. And what do you mean by farewell gift?
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Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey poplu I will wait for more surprises link this.
Nice drabble just signifying her ability to inflict pain on both of them
Last line of steely looks was my favourite
This was one of my favourite episode with so much pain I loved it.
Thnx for pm


He he, you never know what is the case with me. 😆

Thank you! 🤗 Yes, she is always the common denominator of why they were pulled apart.

Glad you liked it. 😊

Mine, too. <3

No need to thank me for the PM. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Ah, this little things... it was lovely. Ishani the heart-breaker. She indeed knew how to break the heart of the one she had loved. Oh, that episode. That brutal one! You were looking for that episode for the drabble or you got an idea while watching it?

Either way, hamari lottery. xD

A brilliant work, girl. And I'm sorry, I can't give a longer review since have been stuck. And what do you mean by farewell gift?


Hey, Elvish! 🤗

YES. THAT EPISODE! I swear, MATSH had to have more episodes like those for us sadistic souls. So happy you liked the drabble. 🤗

I was looking for the episode to write the drabble as I didn't know the exact dialogues. And I wanted it to be an OS. But drabbles are small and proper, so I changed it to a drabble as I didn't get the episode.

He he. 😆

It's completely alright. This was more than enough for me. 🤗
I am leaving I-F, that's why.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-


Hey, Elvish! 🤗

YES. THAT EPISODE! I swear, MATSH had to have more episodes like those for us sadistic souls. So happy you liked the drabble. 🤗

I was looking for the episode to write the drabble as I didn't know the exact dialogues. And I wanted it to be an OS. But drabbles are small and proper, so I changed it to a drabble as I didn't get the episode.

He he. 😆

It's completely alright. This was more than enough for me. 🤗
I am leaving I-F, that's why.



MATSH already has plenty of such episodes. Frankly, sometimes I couldn't watch the episodes because of the pain that Ranveer was inflicted with. The lawyer track was worst in that regard. Hopeless pain and suffering, and so much that Ranveer had to die completely for his own sake. But, hey! when has fate been easy with him?

Oh, that's cool. You'll be writing more drabbles, too, right?

But why are you leaving IF now?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lawyer's scenes were meh. But I did feel in some parts. When Ishani comes to lecture Ranveer on love and sees him with Ri. I felt nothing for her but he was just...

And do write more. I'll be waiting. It's upto you how you make it. But I think for drabbles, one thread would be enough. And with no continuation of the story or plot, you can do it whenever you want and they're not long either.

Haha. That's right. Less chances of shoes and rotten tomatoes. :p and the less said about LM the better. 😳 😳 She'll kill me. *hides in a corner already*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey... Its niz post dr... Ya.. Ishani knows how to break his heart... And afterall only she can break him like that... Its a really a painful epi of matsh... The pain of ranveer can be felt in a... 😭 ... Well... Keep smiling... 😆

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