IshVeer FS: Fire and Ice. [COMPLETED] - Page 31

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Perceptions! I loved this! 😆😆

Ps. And no. Please. No further arguments will be entertained. 😕😕

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

Cheers to SADI!! 😈🤣😈

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

I explained about killing long back. 😆😆

Yeah, loved it. 😛😛

Bad reputation nahi. Earning appreciation for this genre is tough. 😊😊

Cheers to Aaru who has always been there for me! 🤗 ❤️

Did we just... spam this thread? 🤣

Hi poplu!!!!
Long time I mean this much time you took to kill people
So coming to the update that explanation for fire and ice was awesome girl.
And then she dismissed him that was wonderful seriously was she born to always tolerate his attitude really. He already killed her with the fact that he was here not for her. Too late. I expected that you will kill her something new in the forum you see.
Then that payal admits banter was a comic relief seriously you all have made RV no less then a film star but payal was cold water to all the enthusiasm shown by her colleague.
Then he is just waiting why didn't he clarified this well how come he can after all he has to feed sadism.
Before dieing people do look good you see.
All his nightmares came true too much uncanny resemblance of the place surrounding everything same.
She was happy that he was here though late but he did came to give their life another shot but this happiness blinded her and she could sense hear or feel nothing except for him.
This was cruel no not at all I thought either she will suicide given that he was late or will get killed by accident but bomb blast well that was brutal. Poor girl had her life infront of her eyes but this time her luck betrayed her.
Seriously girl you nailed it with so much of beautiful description of chaos surrounding the place but still his mind and body cold all he wants that she should come back.
And their last conversation felt very heart touching with all she cared was his well being and all he gave was ignorance.
Though I was prepared for the one the second death was a surprise because given that sadism lover you are I thought you will separate them that will be much more pleasurable you see.
But he died a simple death I mean atleast blood should have spread. See what you guys have done to me.
Both died taking each other's name and having their picture.
This was tremendous work dear given your age you have shown immense maturity in your writing
And pain and coldness was evident from every sentence
This was hands down the best I felt this much sadistic only for just a dagger away and elvish's as where ranveer dies but this was close to them.
I just want to read more from you if time permits then do write.


PS elvish is joining soon well given that the way she is carrying the suspense I am sensing something. Suddenly the whole forum has turned into sadist or is this the actual feeling which was hidden since so many days. Yours, LM ,EH, AV all of them.

It was a majestic FS Poplu... U have done much more than just a wonderful job...👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: life_is_fun

It was a majestic FS Poplu... U have done much more than just a wonderful job...👏 👏 👏

Seldom or almost never do I cry watching a movie or reading a story.😈. But this has made me cry since the very first chapter till the end... 😭 😭

And by the time IshVeer reached their end, it felt ab is duniya se chale hi jayen toh acha hai and they went away... 😭

huhhh... What more can I say...

Well Done dear... 👏 👏

Popuuulll !!