OS: |~|Sweet Revenge|~| - Page 5

Originally posted by: Effulgent

Yes, that I am. ;)

You have a sister? Well, how is she? Troublesome (since most siblings have this problem) or silent? :D Well, I'm glad to have shocked you. xD

Gandhiji's last words. ;)

Love,

Effulgent

I do have one. She is well...wait...I am counting.

Yeah, she is 14 now. I was right :D :D Troublesome? Ha! Do you have one? 3:) She is not troublesome but is strikingly different from my character. Very talkative, over-enthused, humorous, fun-loving unlike me. I am more of sober, quiet and reserved :)

Love,
Aarushi

I've been wanting to reply on this so bad, but I had to get a breather before I sat down to write a review for this. 😆😆 So before I start on with anything, you and Aastha can got take a bow to yourselves, because this was something that you two girls have come up with. 😉😉

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

I've been wanting to reply on this so bad, but I had to get a breather before I sat down to write a review for this. 😆😆 So before I start on with anything, you and Aastha can got take a bow to yourselves, because this was something that you two girls have come up with. 😉😉

And before we still go ahead, congratulations on breaking my record. 🥳

And now let's get to business. ☺️☺️ I really like the whole concept of this OS. 👍🏼👍🏼 A day before they get married and they've been yearning to see this day together since a long time. 😳😳 Alternate Universe rocks only for this sole reason. One story can have so many deviations, yet so many similarities.

Now before I get too drooly, let's continue further. 😛😛 So Ranveer hates the rains over here as well. But I see that water doesn't hamper him when it comes to getting the job done now, does it? 😎😎 And their whole "tryst" is something that left me awe-struck. I'd just woken up when Elvish told me about this and I wanted to see what was the hulaabaloo about. Let's just say that this FF rid me of all my sleep. 🤣🤣

Bath-tub sex. 😳😳 Okay, I don't know why but did make me giggle. 🤪🤪 Their work upon each other, however, was as fine as we could hope it to get. 👏👏 And that did raise quite the temperature around here. ☢️☢️ I'm assuming that it's the flower con that drove you girls to writing this. 🤡🤡 And I also read that you completed this entire thing in just an hour. 😈😈

Coming to details, you've been subtle with it for most of it, which I like. 😊😊 Now the concept if sex is obviously not going to be subtle throughout, so that's not something I could ask for more sublety. 🤣🤣 Goodness knows I've never read the first chapter of RotD more than twice after I and Parin first wrote it together. But I must say, you're imagination for a 16 and a half year old girl is very sharp. 👏👏

Congratulations of doing such a fine job with it once again. 🤗🤗 And I think I can safely say that this is actually amongst your best pieces of writing for far. ⭐️⭐️ Keep writing like the way you are and I hope to read more from you! 😃😃

Love,

LM ❤️

Ps. You do realize that there would be quite some underwater ground work for Ranveer in their whole bath-tub tryst now, don't you? 😉😉

TBH, Aastha was waiting for your review.🤣🤣 That doesn't mean that I wasn't. I was waiting too😛😛

When did I break your record?😕😕 I never did🤣🤣 Okay, now this makes me ask of what is an AU? Is it an alternate version of the story or something else?

Elvish read it? I never knew! I don't think that she read, at all!😆😆 I remember her comment she made on ROTD😉😉 Did your sleep just vanish after reading this? I never wanted that🤣🤣

Not the flower con, not at all. Us din hum log FB pe chat kar rhe the and we were throwing some random 18+ jokes when we made up our minds to write one. So I gave her the idea of the setting of the story and she gave the idea for their 'tryst' as such. I penned it down as quickly as possible and deleted the whole content from my Word file🤣🤣

Yes, we decided on the story for about ten minutes and the writing part took me around forty five minutes. Quite fast, I know...and cheap too😛😛

I am yet to proof read this. Likhne mein I did not take much of my time. But whenever I sit to proof read it, I fail in doing so. I am like "Nai, ye galat hai."🤣🤣 *Silly Me*🤪🤪 I am a Leo, you see. (Hope you got that.)😎😎😈😈

Thank you so much, LM. Best so far? That makes me realize of how cheap I am🤣🤣

Love,
AV

Ps. I don't get you.😳😳

@aarushi kameeni 🤣 🤣
i m laughing lyk hell after reading ur reply to LM 🤣
hmari kaali kartute sbke samne 🤣

Originally posted by: ..BABYGIRL..

@aarushi kameeni 🤣 🤣
i m laughing lyk hell after reading ur reply to LM 🤣
hmari kaali kartute sbke samne 🤣

*Ahem Ahem*

See the real me🤣🤣

Originally posted by: matsholic

nice
liked it 😳

Thank you :)

Hey, Arushi! Really sorry for the late reply.

Coming to the OS, this was awesome and made me remind of a song about a mom's son being bigdofy from a not so very old movie. Anyway, the only difference it had that I imagined your name over here. xD

Anyway, I love the rain scenes of theirs; they are beautiful. This one too carried that passionate feel of it which we'd seen in the Lahu Muh Gaya sequence. But... there was more, and those parts were well... I won't say anything. May be in chat sometime later. :D

Otherwise, a very, very, very daring work.

PS. I was telling LM the other day, when I was in 11th STD, I used to watch Pokemon and you gals are just... tehehehe.

Keep the good work, darling. Waiting to read more from you.

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

I do have one. She is well...wait...I am counting.

Yeah, she is 14 now. I was right :D :D Troublesome? Ha! Do you have one? 3:) She is not troublesome but is strikingly different from my character. Very talkative, over-enthused, humorous, fun-loving unlike me. I am more of sober, quiet and reserved :)

Love,
Aarushi

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Hey, Arushi! Really sorry for the late reply.

Coming to the OS, this was awesome and made me remind of a song about a mom's son being bigdofy from a not so very old movie. Anyway, the only difference it had that I imagined your name over here. xD

Anyway, I love the rain scenes of theirs; they are beautiful. This one too carried that passionate feel of it which we'd seen in the Lahu Muh Gaya sequence. But... there was more, and those parts were well... I won't say anything. May be in chat sometime later. :D

Otherwise, a very, very, very daring work.

PS. I was telling LM the other day, when I was in 11th STD, I used to watch Pokemon and you gals are just... tehehehe.

Keep the good work, darling. Waiting to read more from you.

HI EH!

I am really sorry for the late reply, now😆😆 I just realized that I had not replied back to you.

And what's the song?🤣🤣 Oh MY EH, you have a good sense of humour, too.😛😛

Well, I can understand.😆😆 They are really passionate when it comes to love and with water, they are literally something else. ANd I am still receiving them in the chat😆😆

Ask me how it was. It was as if I was performing on KKK xD xD With typing them as quickly as possible and deleting them, it was no less than the KKK stunt.

Ps. Ahem, I was doing that until mu 8th. And then, I switched to books(textbooks, I mean.) And then, after two years, I started to watch MATSH and TV, for that matter.

Thank you so much, EH! My Mama! xD

AV

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-

No. I don't have a sibling. And yep, even I am the sober, quiet, reserved, bookish girl among my out-going cousins.

Love,

Effulgent

OMG! Two months back, look at the way we were conversing with each other! POPLU 🤣🤣

Hello, Madame, out of all the people of your age, you are the only one like this😆😆

Love,
Daaru