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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-


๐Ÿคฃ One day, zaroor. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Aur did you read dv's review? She has written that she ststopped breathing for a few seconds because she loves LM. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Another competitor for you! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

To LM,

So sorry. Broke my promise again. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ But I hope I'll be able to review all the IshVeer stories tomorrow. Hopefully. ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”



No I did not ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Everyone loves LMโค๏ธ Mujhe apni fiance pe bharosa hai๐Ÿค— Tu sirf jealouse hai that I am taken , and trying to make me jealouse๐Ÿคฃ Go and read my and LM 's convo u will see who loves who
Edited by ShadikaIshVeer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hii LM!!
Its was so beautiful update dear
I have no word for u ๐Ÿ˜Š Really u are perfect writer ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and i like u so much!
Now coming to chap oh! our boy and girl join the pottery class so well ranveer beat her in everything but this time ishani beat her not bad! ๐Ÿ˜Š hahaha...how funny both playing with mud and they look like
Puppies ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
Oh my god! our girl is so smart i mean she open the lock her hair pin no fear that she catch by anyone.And
How beautiful u have describe ishani's feeling so well they are friendship more deep the part of trerrce scenc when both of dancing together and ranveer express her feeling to ishani as a friend and both of them respect eachother feeling i liked it.
Honestly his relation with her so complicated yaar.
Sorry for small reply...
My examination will started this week and still going on this month so i'm not able to reply u but i will try if i got time.
And thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-


๐ŸคฃOne day, zaroor.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณAur did you read dv's review? She has written that she stopped breathing for a few seconds because she loves LM.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ŠAnother competitor for you!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

To LM,

So sorry. Broke my promise again.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญBut I hope I'll be able to review all the IshVeer stories tomorrow. Hopefully.๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”


No competitor for you mm because I love her as an admirer of her writing and nature and her way of thinking am pretty much sure that LM can never get a cutie pie like mm so their relationship is very much strong. Mm you can be bindas
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py


No competitor for you mm because I love her as an admirer of her writing and nature and her way of thinking am pretty much sure that LM can never get a cutie pie like mm so their relationship is very much strong. Mm you can be bindas


I know sweetie ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— U are so sweet โค๏ธโค๏ธ Dont worry it is only Effulgent trying to make me jealouse๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† And is failing๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Okey you are seriously making me blushโ˜บ๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi LM,

Really you deserve to be a writer dear ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Ranveer and Ishani joining Pottery class I loved it๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
They way they were playing with Mud was lovable to read๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Ishani seems smart here and the way you described Ishani's feelings was so good
overall a lovely chapter ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Love you LM
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

Hey hi LM

2 in 1 ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

You are simply impossible ๐Ÿ˜›

You take me to new experience for every time... Yeah really experience it,,,

Poterry barn.. Something pure desi type โญ๏ธ
Their no jhok, simply amazing
Supermantal with this boy''... Ishani is absolutely right.. Naham You are right...,
She is right while saying that she can never know everything about him,, he is definitely a mystery ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

In the 1 of 8th April
Ranveer told her something else and she got something else when he said ''ILOVE YOU''
I was right he did it what he could not in his senses ๐Ÿ˜‰

Actually it was too long so that I'm missing the points for sure... Will read it again and post my reviews again...

1 thing which came to my mind yesterday that Are You going for a 100
Means as You decided for 4 books,, and so far as I'm getting there are 20 epistles and 5 interludes accordingly per each... So it makes a 1000
If its so then I'm really so idiot to take too much getting it ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Thank you so much, sweetheart! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— I'm so, so happy that you liked it! StarStar
Coming to the review, the show has got so many unexplored arenas that I enjoy using them over here. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed And yeah, Ranveer is one mystery that till date even I haven't been able to decipher completely when writing. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† As to their nok-jhok, I love writing about it. TongueTongue
Moving on to the second diary entry, yeah, you were right. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ And don't worry about missing points, it's completely alright. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ As to hitting a century, yes that's the plan for now. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž Just pray that evenrything goes alright. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
And no, you haven't taken too long to get it. I keep changing plans, so with me, it's all to expect the unexpected. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž Thank you so much once again! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian

1 thing more to be discussed!
The painting in Ishani's room!
The time when You posted the epistles regarding this i was not use to of commenting over here...
That was really a crucial time ๐Ÿ˜ญ
The day Ranveer painted Ishani's posture--if I'm not so bad with my mamory-- it was the same day na when in his dream Love died.. At the same time in Ishani's Ranveer died...
That was really frightening one dear.. And You cant imagine for how many times i literally cried ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Ishani's dreams are getting their way in my mind somehow.. But to b very honest Ranveer's are above my thoughts Yaar, I'm not getting them actually... The Love is not less then a mystery for me... I just interpreted it personification for his Love for Ishani...,
I dont really know on which way i'm going

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I'm really happy that you liked the whole painting part. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Yes, those epistles were some really crucial ones. ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• And no, your memory isn't bad - infact, you've given a perfect synopsis of Epistles 35 and 36 in the easiest way. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
And I'm so sorry to make you cry. I always feel sad when people say I made them cry with an update. CryCry
You know, like I've said so many times here, the correct answer is often the most simplest one. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š And for Ranveer's dreams, you've given the most simplest yet remarkable explanation in just one sentence. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› This is really, really impressive. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I'm not going to say whether you are right or no (don't want to give out spoilers), but I think I've given you the hint. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
You've really got the mark of a very imaginative mind. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -FlameOfHope-


Hey, Ishveerian. I quoted your post to convey that LM is aiming for five books with twenty epistles in each. The interludes are in the number of 6, 4, 4 and 6 between two books. So, LM has finished 44 epistles and 10 interludes now. Combining all the epistles and interludes, LM initially had a whooping 120 updates to go. Now you can hope for 66 more, I guess. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š Hope it helped. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Aha! Now you've given a very succint plan of what I've been sketching as the pattern for this FF. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ But like I'd told you some time back, I've been doing major re-revisions with the structure of the FF, so now there will be 80 epistles and 20 interludes amidst four books. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey hi dear
You stopped breathing in this epistle with few lines for few minutes
I mean I love you
OK now coming from start so ishani is alone with all circus clowns gone for a break though they left disha but how come baa left her ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
OK so why do I feel that there is something coming our way I don't know just I felt
Pottery like seriously I mean how much you have studied this whole serial that you justified each and every scene in your ff its true that your ff gave blood flesh and life to ishveer story that too a soulfull one I just cannot stop admiring all the efforts you take ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
OK like seriously ranveer beats her in everything but this time our girl was true competitor to him and she was so gaga about it that was really very much adorable and these cities with mud all over them are way too cute I was imagining them
Harshad and ranveer I swear HP would have got to know how she was bragging about it and he loves ranveer way too much sometimes I feel more than ishani I guess
Now comes the best part OK these teenagers and their mood swings though even I had terrible one but seriously you portrayed so well because in that phase of our life we actually don't know what's happening to us and why we are reacting like that sometime even now I cry for no reason just like her
Our girl is too smart am telling you a total gundi like seriously opening locks with hairpin this girl will not get into trouble but she herself walks willingly towards trouble
Ranveer is so droolworthy yar why you guys make him so much loving that other all people feels like nothing
That part of he dancing singing and both in middle of terrace doing confession though it was as a friend but that's the truth they felt from heart I mean that was the best part
And he reciting poetry and ishani was listening so peacefully though not understanding anything was true friendship
But it hurts to know that inspite of coming that far in their relationship they separated so painfully
You know what every time your epistle give me a new lesson about life it's like the way ishani described is learning makes you the best and not winning
Well that painting and their emotions attached to it are so surreal
O LM I speak to much I guess and every time just admire the way you have written this beautiful ff but I just can't help it
Thnx for pm dear waiting for next

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Thank you so much, darling! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— I'm so happy that you liked it! โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Coming to your review, how do you always make me blush? โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ I really feel honoured and humbled that my writing does that to you. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Now before I get too sentimental, let's move ahead. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Yeah, Baa leaving Disha alone is quite a surprise, no? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† And yes, Ishaani is alone for the first time without any of the clowns. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ I can only imagine her relief. And well... what makes you say that something's going to happen? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• I'm curious to know.
Moving on, oh yes, I've scrounged this serial for so much material that I surprise myself too, at times. But I'm glad that you like the efforts I take for this FF and that whatever I've done so far is something that all of you are enjoying as well. Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Coming to their pottery classes, yes our girl must have gone silly in happiness of being at par with him. ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช And I could totally imagine them coming home all muddy and Falguni shooing them away. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž As to the HP-Ranveer part, well, that's something even the show-Ishaani complained about all the time.
Moving over to the next part, yes the mood swings are the worst. Given that I'm in the same phase, they really, really get very annoying at times. ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก I don't cry (although her crying experience is exactly the way I react), but well... it's still annoying. ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿผ But yes, I'm glad that I tackled this decently. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Coming to their 'antics' with the hairpin, hehe, she's loves inviting trouble for herself all the time. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ As to Ranveer, well, I can't help it. โค๏ธโค๏ธ Now you can only imagine how my state must be when I'm writing about all this. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed As to the confession and the listening to poetry without understanding much, you've said it all perfectly. ClapClap
Yes, unfortunately that's the biggest irony of the story. As to every lesson that I put in the epistles, I'm happy that you like them. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And coming to that painting... it's going a long, long way into the story (no more spoilers now ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ).
Thank you so much once again and the next chapter is here! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lifesobeautiful

Hii LM!!
Its was so beautiful update dear
I have no word for u ๐Ÿ˜Š Really u are perfect writer ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and i like u so much!
Now coming to chap oh! our boy and girl join the pottery class so well ranveer beat her in everything but this time ishani beat her not bad! ๐Ÿ˜Š hahaha...how funny both playing with mud and they look like
Puppies ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
Oh my god! our girl is so smart i mean she open the lock her hair pin no fear that she catch by anyone.And
How beautiful u have describe ishani's feeling so well they are friendship more deep the part of trerrce scenc when both of dancing together and ranveer express her feeling to ishani as a friend and both of them respect eachother feeling i liked it.
Honestly his relation with her so complicated yaar.
Sorry for small reply...
My examination will started this week and still going on this month so i'm not able to reply u but i will try if i got time.
And thanks for pm...

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Thank you so much, sweetie! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— I'm so happy that you liked it. โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ And gee, you're really a dear. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Coming to the review, yeah, those two are just cuteness overloaded in my head. As to Ishaani using her hairpin to open the lock, yes she's very resourceful when she uses her brains. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† And I'm really happy that you liked their terrace scene and the way Ishaani's emotions have been described. โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
You've said the million-dollar line here - their relationship is indeed very complicated. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Thank you so much once again and the next update is here! โค๏ธโค๏ธ And please don't apologize, I completely understand. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› Concentrate on your studies and all the best for your exams! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago

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