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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1ishveerian


I'm going to try it let's see


Heyyy I got it yahooo 🥳
Thanx LM 😳 😊
Edited by 1ishveerian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear what you are hinting towards in last two epistle is it something related to ishani's self harm spree and their breakup on that night because ishani lost two most important people who protected her from every problems. Well if it's not then I have to think again and as to her POV then I must say they both got exactly opposite of what they wished for
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Posted: 9 years ago

I don't know how to start and what to start with . Honest. And again , it's not a new thing , you always leave me spellbound , LM's spell 😆 😳.


The chapter was beautiful ( it maybe a small word for your 'god knows what to call' work but all I can say is , see the feelings behind it ! 😃 ❤️ ). Ah ! one more thing , the chapter was kind of future predicting , I'm happy that the present ( Interlude ) wali Ishani is reading all this ( I hope I'm right ). It gives me sadistic pleasure to think what she must be going through while reading this , how much she understood him , how much good she wished for him and what she ended up giving him 🥺 🥺 🥺.



Ishani being tagged as illegitimate and humiliated all the time by baa strongly reminded me of our show. And Ishani said this correctly that how come they managed to live with this high level insanity around them . What all Ishani said about herself and her future made me feel proud , it sounds weird but it really did ⭐️⭐️. Not just because I know she will achieve this but 'cos she thinks like this even in such a pathetic time when one could easily loose hope. This is one of the reasons why I love & admire your Ishani 😊.


Ranveer and his patience . God ! I seriously need to learn something from him rather than fuming all the time for how great he his 😵. I love how all the time he's the only one who can sooth & clam her in situations like this , he's not only Mr.Perfect but Mr.Tranquil too 😛. Ishani's stubbornness is not an easy thing to handle. Why people like Ranveer don't exist in real world ?? 😭 😭


Your Ishani is so good in predicting things , I know I said it many a times but that's what she makes me feel while reading her diaries. Their love is certainly going to destroy them 💔. I clapped ( mockingly ) in the para where she described her 'blind' love , goodness me ! never have I seen such a precise prophecy 👏 🥱. How can people change so much ? her love really destroyed her true self.


The last line was so perfect , yes , they are the most precious diamonds in making ! ❤️

Your FF is proceeding really well LM ! Keep writing and like Ishveer , you too are the precious diamond in making , wish you all the very best for your future. Hope one day I'll be proudly saying that yeah ! I was one of them who read the first works of this bestseller writer. Even though I don't know your name but I can recognize you by your works and for a writer her work defines her more than her name so yeah ! 😎 ⭐️ 🤗 ❤️


PS : The place where Ranveer goes to vent his frustration must be the bar , isn't it ? So the fatal addiction finally begin .


Edited by Katniss07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
LM, I won't be available till 3rd April. :( So, I'll reply to your replies and give reviews from the 4th. I'm really sorry for the sudden change but post-exam plans are weighing hard.

Love,
Poplu.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

What I was going to say there is that as to the diamond consignment hypothetical theory, I was so dearly hoping that I wasn't making the biggest fool of myself. 😕😕 It's all hypothetical and I cannot stress enough upon it, but still. 😆😆

Ahem, moving on, your mind always goes in the ulta direction. 🤣🤣 As to our ChirVeer, well I cannot even begin to tell you how much of their undercurrent sexual chemistry we've missed. It's only when I'm watching the episodes again do I realize all this. 😭😭


Moving on, I'm thrilled that you loved the special swaagat both Kailash and Amba had for him. 🤣🤣 And Finch can never leave a golden opportunity like that. 🤪🤪


And I knew you would pick up on that point. 😈😈 As to KAmba not knowing about IshVeer's last face-off, it's not something they are going to find out about, either. Some things are best kept the way they are. 🤔🤔






don't worry about that... as i said earlier also that keeping ur age in mind it was too good... the way u combined various concepts was truly amazing... 👏 👏
as to being hypothetical isn't it what fiction all about...😛 take our Ishveer also.. who are they.. still we are crazy...😕 but u made it sound realistic so applause for that..👏 👏



that i cannot help yar... it's all ishveer's fault n u all amazing writers are adding to it... coz hamari n Ishveer ki saari adhoori kahani yahi to poori hoti hai... 😃 😃 as to chirveer I think this is the first show jaha par hero n villain ka bhi pair bana with some crazy fans... 🤣 🤣



u know I have a special funny bone... 😆 😆 always love such light hearted moments... in addition Ranveer's band bajaoing session are always my favorite... he just turns more cute in such scenarios 😳 😳


what.. they will never know that.. 😲 😲 means matter is extremely serious... but right now even we r waiting for it.. so I think justification will come only after Interlude 15 (which is definitely one of the two things I am most excited about)... 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

*La la la la la la la la la la la la la la la* (Me singing)

Gosh, these two epistles were love!

Ranveer has got a new place now and Ishani still is in the store-room, finding for answers for unwanted questions! Ranveer is a of my age! Yay! : D:D This guy has become too matured now! Stock brokerage, helping HP , Oh my god! So much changed in the few years! <3 One can never be as happy as I am now. Don't know why. The way you've described about his tough victory over his hard days is commendable. I need you autograph. Kab milega?


And this update was no less! Ishani has only become cuter with years. Dunno, I felt like I was reading about MM when I read about her argument with Ranveer. And poor girl, she is still receiving them from everyone---the tag! God! Cruel society!

ANd Ranveer!! Man, how can he do so much for her? Ranveer is Ranveer! <3 <3 How can't she even get an inch of love or at least crush over this guy? Ishani s dumb, we all know! His words are enough for me to die! <3 <3 LM! You beauty! <3

And now comes his burnt hand! And Ishani applies the ice cream over it. *Blushes* Oh My! They are so damn beautiful! Why can't they stay the same? :( :(

Update the next one soon, darling! ANd, autograph ko bhulna mat!

AV

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Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked both of them. ⭐️⭐️
Coming to the review, yes Ranveer has found a new adda. 😆😆 And that's a nice way you put across Ishaani coming to the store room - to find answers to unwated questions. 😛😛 Yeah, they are both along the ultimate teenage phase (I hate this age, I'm telling you). 🤢🤢
Moving on, yes Ranveer is quite the boy now isn't he? And I'm glad that you like the description. 😳😳 And don't make me blush so much. ☺️☺️ Ahem, coming to Ishaani, hehe, she's cuteness overloaded. 😃😃 It's a pity that her one stupidity costed her a price much heavier than she ever needed to pay.
As to the society, well it's an expert in giving tags to people. 🥱🥱 This is one of the other important points that I've been wanting to highlight with this FF too. 😕😕 Anyways, moving forward, well Ranveer is a fantasy that we're never going to find in this world, so I love cherishing him over here. 😉😉 As to Ishaani... well, stupid girl who should've realized it earlier.
The ice-cream part I loved writing about as well. 😎😎 And yeah, there's a reason why they say that childhood is a phase that should be best cherished because the moment we grow up, we learn new tricks to screw up our lives every day. 👎🏼👎🏼 Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next one in a while! ❤️❤️
Love,
LM
Ps. MM Cherie will be thrilled reading this. 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked both of them. ⭐️⭐️
Coming to the review, yes Ranveer has found a new adda. 😆😆 And that's a nice way you put across Ishaani coming to the store room - to find answers to unwated questions. 😛😛 Yeah, they are both along the ultimate teenage phase (I hate this age, I'm telling you). 🤢🤢
Moving on, yes Ranveer is quite the boy now isn't he? And I'm glad that you like the description. 😳😳 And don't make me blush so much. ☺️☺️ Ahem, coming to Ishaani, hehe, she's cuteness overloaded. 😃😃 It's a pity that her one stupidity costed her a price much heavier than she ever needed to pay.
As to the society, well it's an expert in giving tags to people. 🥱🥱 This is one of the other important points that I've been wanting to highlight with this FF too. 😕😕 Anyways, moving forward, well Ranveer is a fantasy that we're never going to find in this world, so I love cherishing him over here. 😉😉 As to Ishaani... well, stupid girl who should've realized it earlier.
The ice-cream part I loved writing about as well. 😎😎 And yeah, there's a reason why they say that childhood is a phase that should be best cherished because the moment we grow up, we learn new tricks to screw up our lives every day. 👎🏼👎🏼 Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next one in a while! ❤️❤️
Love,
LM
Ps. MM Cherie will be thrilled reading this. 😆😆


Girls I need details😲😲
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovemyself...

Hey LM!!!

So I m not too late this time...
So coming to chapter...
It was mind blowing...
The way u described ishveer friendship & care for each other
Baa... I think it will be great if someone burn her😡
She always loves to disrespect ishani & showing finger towards she is not own blood🤢
Ishani knows that he goes somewhere bt never asks him...
That's the special thing about their friendship...
Ranveer... my god he is so amazing in all aspects...
That's the biggest reason I m crazy about him...
He burnt his hand for her...
He can never change...
Their conversation was...👏
I loved it...
That was amzing...
Icecream scene was cute...
Hugging scene was also cute..😳
Ishani & her thoughts about love...
This girl can never change...
I like her words about being herself & make name of who she is...
I love this confidence of ushani in ur ff...
Ishani & her doubts about future for both...
Yup... she was right ...
Even she can't do anything about what will happen...
She was right about being crazy for the person..
Bt the only thing she did wrong was choosing wrong person...
Bt now she will rectify it by veing crazy for him...😛
(Sorry I gone into interludes...😛)

As I told u I have given u long review though it is very lame bt... kindly bear wid it...😃

Ps. I just have one doubt...
What is there age in this epistles...
I know u r mentioning dates...
Bt I m too bad to remember it...😉


Thnx for pm...
Update soon...

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
Coming to the review, well Baa is a nuisance. 🥱🥱 And as to Ranveer and Ishaani's friendship, it's the love, faith and honesty between them that makes their bond so strong. 😳😳 And that's partly true what you say, Ranveer and Ishaani both cannot change in a lot of ways, but something you'll get a clearer idea of in the future chapters. 😛😛
I'm glad that you liked their entire store-room scene and the conversations and conclusions that Ishaani drew from it. 😃😃 Yes, I like my Ishaani better than the silly one in the show. 😕😕 And you've explained her whole situation so well, so kudos to you on that. 👏👏
Thank you so much once again! ☺️☺️ And please, this review is not lame at all, it's rather brilliant. I'll try to have the next part up soon enough! ❤️❤️
Love,
LM

Ps. Ranveer is currently 17 (he'll turn 18 in this Book in a couple of months), and Ishaani is 16 (she'll turn 17 again in a few months). 😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey dear what you are hinting towards in last two epistle is it something related to ishani's self harm spree and their breakup on that night because ishani lost two most important people who protected her from every problems. Well if it's not then I have to think again and as to her POV then I must say they both got exactly opposite of what they wished for

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You've mentioned two of the main reasons over here with astute reasoning. 😛😛 But there's a lot more smaller details that'll be used in the future chapters. 😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Katniss07


I don't know how to start and what to start with . Honest. And again , it's not a new thing , you always leave me spellbound , LM's spell 😆 😳.


The chapter was beautiful ( it maybe a small word for your 'god knows what to call' work but all I can say is , see the feelings behind it ! 😃 ❤️ ). Ah ! one more thing , the chapter was kind of future predicting , I'm happy that the present ( Interlude ) wali Ishani is reading all this ( I hope I'm right ). It gives me sadistic pleasure to think what she must be going through while reading this , how much she understood him , how much good she wished for him and what she ended up giving him 🥺 🥺 🥺.



Ishani being tagged as illegitimate and humiliated all the time by baa strongly reminded me of our show. And Ishani said this correctly that how come they managed to live with this high level insanity around them . What all Ishani said about herself and her future made me feel proud , it sounds weird but it really did ⭐️⭐️. Not just because I know she will achieve this but 'cos she thinks like this even in such a pathetic time when one could easily loose hope. This is one of the reasons why I love & admire your Ishani 😊.


Ranveer and his patience . God ! I seriously need to learn something from him rather than fuming all the time for how great he his 😵. I love how all the time he's the only one who can sooth & clam her in situations like this , he's not only Mr.Perfect but Mr.Tranquil too 😛. Ishani's stubbornness is not an easy thing to handle. Why people like Ranveer don't exist in real world ?? 😭 😭


Your Ishani is so good in predicting things , I know I said it many a times but that's what she makes me feel while reading her diaries. Their love is certainly going to destroy them 💔. I clapped ( mockingly ) in the para where she described her 'blind' love , goodness me ! never have I seen such a precise prophecy 👏 🥱. How can people change so much ? her love really destroyed her true self.


The last line was so perfect , yes , they are the most precious diamonds in making ! ❤️

Your FF is proceeding really well LM ! Keep writing and like Ishveer , you too are the precious diamond in making , wish you all the very best for your future. Hope one day I'll be proudly saying that yeah ! I was one of them who read the first works of this bestseller writer. Even though I don't know your name but I can recognize you by your works and for a writer her work defines her more than her name so yeah ! 😎 ⭐️ 🤗 ❤️


PS : The place where Ranveer goes to vent his frustration must be the bar , isn't it ? So the fatal addiction finally begin .


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Thank you so much, love! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so happy that you liked it! StarStar
Coming to the review, first point, perfectly put. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed And yes, a lot of this is going to play a pivotal role for the future Ishaani. 😕😕 Enough said for now, no spoilers. 😉😉 Second point, again check. God, you are just speaking my mind out over here that I have nothing more to add to it. 😆😆
Third point, check again. 😃😃 If only people like Ranveer existed in this inhumane world... CryCry. Fourth point, check that too. Seriously, you are on a spree today. 😲😲 If only she had not let Chirag break into her mind that easily... The last line was my favourite as well. Day DreamingDay Dreaming
And gee, you guys really praise me so much, it terrifies me at times because of the expectation you all have from me. 🤔🤔 Thank you so much for always being there for me and for always being so loving, encouraging and supportive of whatever I put up. ☺️☺️ There's no bigger honour and moment of humility for me when you guys appreciate what I write the way you do. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
Ps. No, it's not a bar, it's the forest. 🤣🤣 Although you are not off the mark at all with the alcohol thing. 😈😈
Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago

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