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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
OKay so , FINALLY I READ ALL THE MISSED UPDATES ⭐️⭐️

Now first of all , I'm really really really sorry doll for not reading nor reviewing
the epistles , had been busy and i didn't visit the forum for suck long , i finally finished
reading from where i left , so i managed to read them all by spending a whole night awake
😆 , i read one then couldn't stop so had to

Now i really dont know what to say , because let me be honest with you , i read the in one
go so my brain is basically blown away , and I'm in complete loss of words , Lm you are one
heck of a writer , like really , you are like one of those very professional lit. author ⭐️
i wish i could write like you one day , and your writing is an inspiration for me , i loved all
the chapters and will now give daily review for the next epistle

Love you sweetie , and how are you??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Congratulations for the new thread sweetie 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Effulgent

This girl is going to kill me one day for certain, and I can give that to you in writing.


That was so.. deep. Another splendid update. I totally loved this one too; the topic being schools and exams - my favourite things. ⭐️⭐️ Well, back to school now for them, and exams! I'm sure Ranveer will do well.



Now, I'll quickly select my favourite parts.


Part 1

Can you believe that Baa hasn't even scolded me for nearly a month now? That's too much for me to bear that I'm almost afraid that either she's going to kick me off the job or else she's suddenly become a deity.


What's the change with Baa there? She seems to have toned down on her insults to the housekeeping staff. Ranveer describes her as a deity! 😆😆 Lol, that is next to impossible seeing the scenario in this FF.



Part 2

Every day, I think I only keep falling in love with her all over again, yet somehow, I cannot seem to expect anything from her. She sees me as her best friend only and I really wonder what would she think of me when she comes to know that I have a crush on her. Yeah, people say that this age is very common for crushes, but how can I have one upon a girl for four and a half years beats me. No, it is love. I know it because I can feel it.


Well, this is a pretty big selection. But what can I do? The whole thing was so true. Him speculating whether it is a crush or love is so nice to read. It's so true that love can only be felt, just like air. We can't see it but we know that it's always there. (:



Coming back to the update, this is one of my favourite as it deals with school life and exams! Yeah, I may sound weird that I like exams unlike other teens. But yes, that's me. (;



Okay, where did I deviate from. Ah, yes! Ranveer's exams are the next day and its science (my fave too). He describes more about the happenings from Christmas to early Jan. He has a feeling of foreboding. Ominous and as you've written, calm before the storm. That's intriguing. Everything seems too overly normal. It only shows how often he's already used to life being a prat. ):



There are more details on the dance competition. Ishaani seems to have taken it well till now. And wait, he says that the competition is after his exams which get over on 15th. Then... THE 18th Jan is it, I guess. The price money Rs.50,000/- is a great sum. But I'm dubious that something drastically went wrong in this event itself. I don't know but my intuition tells so. I hope that it doesn't turn out too bad for Ranveer.



There's nothing much to say here about Ishaani. She's such a devil here. ;) Made Ranveer eat his allergic food, got a good scolding from her father. She takes lessons from Ranveer in maths. After all, it's his forte! (:



Well, I can just hope that all goes on good. As you mentioned to Aarushi, THE 18th Jan update will come up in the next one. I wonder what really happened there. I'm not in a mood to discuss the mystery of dreams now (you know why - BM track :/). The news sort of spoilt my mood from yesterday [my MATSH mode's mood not my daily life's ;)].



On the whole, another great update. As I've told in the beginning, one of my favourite as well. :D Updates soon, sweetie. And before I forget, all the best for your upcoming exams. I've my own ones coming up too. So, it's like, you'll be delayed in updating, I'll be slow in reviewing too. ;)



I've replied in the prev. thread, before the A/N. Check it out.



Love you loads,
Effulgent



P.S - Happy new thread! 😳😳 I'm sure that this one will get over soon too. You'll be needing another one or two threads to complete Untold Stories. 😆😆

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Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! StarStar
Yeah, that line certainly is deep in its own way. 😛😛 And since school and exmas are what we find our lives centered around most of the time, I decided to give it a shot myself. 😆😆 School I enjoy, exams I don't. 😕😕
And let's say that Baa is in one of those hibernation modes when she prefers to keep her trap shut. 🥱🥱 Even Ranveer cannot believe it, but well, it's true. 😉😉 As for the second part, the teenage ages are always ones where you cannot decipher emotions, so the battle is constantly going to wage in his heart. 🤔🤔 But we all know what's the answer here. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Even I love Science. I find myself quite a natural at it. 😃😃 As to his foreboding, well that's something I do believe in as well - intuition. You just know when something's off, and here is one of those times. 😳😳 As to life being a prat, well, when has the poor soul gotten anything easy anyway?
Um, no, the event is in May, so that's not it. But the incident of the 18th will directly impact what happens ahead. You'll understand better once I post Epistle 31. 😒😒 And yes, that whole Maths thing was taken from me and my dad. He cannot understand till this date why I have problem with my exams when I clearly understand all the concepts.
And yeah, the BM track... well, no comments on it. 🤢🤢 Although, the OLV of the snake has kinda gone viral in terms of all that vampire love. ☺️☺️ And don't worry about the reviews, it's totally cool. All the best for your exams and do well. 👍🏼👍🏼
Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️ And yeah, I've replied to your posts in the previous thread. 😎😎 In case you want to reply to my response, do it in the old thread only. 😊😊
Loads of love,
LM
Ps. Hehe, thank you so much! StarStar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Bloomfield

This girl is going to kill me one day for certain, and I can give that to you in writing.

Okay.So that was🤔🤔

Well, coming back, this was splendid! Exams, exams! Okay😆😆Well, I hate Maths, too.Wondering how can people like the subject🤣

So Ranveer fearing something's wrong somewhere because everything is falling in place. Okay. So I have guessed a few things and one tops my list. Cannot wait to know that. And HP has Pneumonia!😭😭My sis had that when she was three months old. Cannot forget those bitter days :/ It is a dangerous disease.😕😕

And him saying that dancing with her was the sweetest of his dreams and confessing his love❤️Oh boy, this guy makes me blush every-time! No wonder I love him! If I say about your writing, I'd bet on Ranveer's POV. According to me, you are awesome in writing about his POV😳😳

Update the next one soon <3

Love
#Yours3Fan
Aarushi

Ps. I wished her and she said a thanks. :-) And yeah, she follows your FF😛😛

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
Well, don't balme me , it's true you know. ErmmErmm And welcome to my 'Hate Maths Club'. I seem to have an unknown enmity with it since the day I started schooling. OuchOuch As to Ranveer foreboding, well, he knows that his life can never remain this peaceful. That's a very strange thing to accept in a way, but then that's how things are. ConfusedConfused
Ah, I want to know what you've guessed. TongueTongue
Yeah, I've heard that pneumonia is terrible. 😒😒 And coming to Ranveer's adorable confessions, I seem to fall for him everyday. And seriously? Gee, thanks! ☺️☺️ Thank you so much once again and I'll try to update the next chapter soon enough! ❤️❤️
Ps. I'm nervous now. 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hi dear
Congratulations for this new thread 🥳 [:D/]
Now coming to update that WS quite quick I must say 😉
Just want to ask your ranveer only one thing " abe khata kya hai" 🤓 🤔
He is first in everything he does practically there is nothing in this world which he cannot do I can understand why ishani envy him 🥱
So he knows that girls drool over him and ishani gets ngry with that gud yar 😎
PoorPoor boy can't even think in his wildest dream that ishani will retaliate back his feelings 😕
Calling ranveer feelings for ishani a crush sort is an insult to the name of love his love is pure that never changed with tym
Even m also worried how cum evrythng is gng on so smooth in there life I mean at least I don't xpct such thing from baa.
Poor ranveer how much he loves his Mota bapu. 😳
And boy he is even afraid to think what ishani will say if she finds out well nothing to worry our dumbass is too dumb to realise her true feelings
Now xams is a good thing but how ll he tolerate that if ishani backs out from competition because he have sum imp reason to attach to that.
M dreading coz epistle 30 is approaching nnow and u have told 2001 thing which rv ll b guilty.
Thnx fr pm
Waiting for next

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Thank you so much, darling! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️ And yeah, this was a quick update. 😆😆

Coming to your review, that's a very, very valid point you raised. 🤣🤣 I can only imagine how Ishaani must feel when he outshines her. 🤪🤪 And yes, I love when she gets all possessive of him. 😈😈 Like I mentioned above, Ranveer is at a stage where he would naturally wonder about his feelings for Ishaani, but we all know the answer over here, so let's wait for him to sort out his own strand of thoughts. 😉😉
As to his calm life, I always feel that the poor fellow has never really had any relief in his life. 😭😭 That's why he's become strong yet fragile in a way. OuchOuch As to his love for Harshad, I can never get enough of it. And you've said this perfectly - Ishaani is too "oblivious" to realize her feelings for him.
The competition has an entirely different situation attached to it. ErmmErmm
Thank you so much once again and I'll be updating the next chapter shortly! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

Thanks LM

Love the way you narrate the story👏⭐️

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Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you're liking it so far! StarStar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .DarkandTwisty

Hii Congrats for new thread🥳

Absolute perfection as always 👏
Ranveer is so nice n good at everything..he is the best thing about ur fic..I can't wait to read the next part! Hope they wins the dance competition
All the best for your exams👍🏼

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
Yeah, Ranveer is truly a gem. 😳😳 As to the competition, that's a whole different episode with a complex situation attached to it, so I'm not really certain about what's to happen with that aspect. 😕😕
Thank you so much once again! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Hii congratulations for new thread... Wonderful epi ...thanks for pm

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Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sakshi5050

congrats for the new thread dear
the way you narrate the story is lovely keep going 😛😛😛

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you're liking it! ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ..BABYGIRL..

hey sweetie🤗
First of all congratulations on new thread 🥳
and i like the title CHILDHOOD FEVER😉
Coming to the chapter it again was beautiful❤️
So there exams r going to start..sigh that reminds me of myself😆
And ishani's panic wid maths🤣 well that's quite common promblem...😆 i opt for PCB to escape from maths but my bad physics was ready wid straw to choosofy my blood🤣
and the line when ranveer talks about his love for ishani... ya it cant be a crush for sure as crush is a temporary feeling and his love for ishu is eternal ❤️❤️
Yes you potray so well wen u r in ishani's shoe but wid ranveer u r no less 😊😊
and sakranti on the way ... wud love to read about kite flying...
waiting to read more from you😳
loads of love,
aastha 😊❤️

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Thank you so much, love! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it! ⭐️⭐️
You like the book name? Even I like it too. Suits them loads. 😉😉 Yeah, the exam fever reminds me of myself too. And Ishaani and her chemistry with Maths is again a part of me. ROFLROFL And that's what Maths does truly - suck our blood and marks too. 😡😡
As to the crush part, like I said above to, we all know what the answer is, but Ranveer is still finding his way. 😛😛 So let him find out for himself. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed And gee, thank you so much. ☺️☺️ As to the Sankranti part, I'm not going into too much detail with it because that's something I want to save for Book 4. 😆😆
Thank you so much once again and I'll update the next part soon enough! ❤️❤️

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