FF: |~|Departed Souls|~| A/N: Important Note- Page No. 118 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You killed them both !! 😈 Very good job dear... 👍🏼 👍🏼
I love you for this... ❤️
They deserve to be killed if the world can't let them live... ⭐️
At least they can unite in heaven ... walk and run hand in hand...
Laugh like they used to when they were kids . ⭐️..
without anyone around to feel jealous from their happiness... 😳
Great story. 👏.. I was scared to read it as I avoid dark ones but I am glad that I read this... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ! It was amaaazing dear. I loved it. It was mind blowing.
Please continue.
Thanks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow what an amazing Prelude Arushi👏👏
I love reading all sorts of genres ,as far love is concerned that too dark shaded one 's that makes me melt ,really wonderfully👏
Waiting to read u story further,please do continue soon😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Suta :) It's cute :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: life_is_fun

You killed them both !! 😈 Very good job dear... 👍🏼 👍🏼

I love you for this... ❤️
They deserve to be killed if the world can't let them live... ⭐️
At least they can unite in heaven ... walk and run hand in hand...
Laugh like they used to when they were kids . ⭐️..
without anyone around to feel jealous from their happiness... 😳
Great story. 👏.. I was scared to read it as I avoid dark ones but I am glad that I read this... 👏



I killed them, yeah! *EVIL ME*😆😆 Thank you🤣 Ye to bas start hai...You'll get to know more, Just wait :D :D Thank you, on a serious note.😳😳 Why do so many avoid dark here? It's quite good, you know?⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Sania03337

Hey ! It was amaaazing dear. I loved it. It was mind blowing.

Please continue.
Thanks for the pm 😃



Hey Sania,

Welcome back after a long time! Thank you so much and I'm missing your poems!
No need of thanks for a pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Wow what an amazing Prelude Arushi👏👏

I love reading all sorts of genres ,as far love is concerned that too dark shaded one 's that makes me melt ,really wonderfully👏
Waiting to read u story further,please do continue soon😃😃



Thank you so much Jenni :) I'm glad that you liked them :D Love is the only thing which I trust above evrything in life and I love all forms of love. Be it torture, bliss, dark, anything!😳😳
I'll update it asap :) But it'll take time😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aha! 😈😈 Aha! 😈😈 Gimme two seconds, please.
Yeah, I'm back. 😉😉 Finally a dark fic! Yeah, baby! 😃😃 I've been wanting to read something dark for so long now (the reason I can't write dark is obvious 😭😭), and I could not have been happier right now! ⭐️⭐️ And yeah, you killed them! 😃😃
Freddie and I have been killing him for so long and have been praying for something to make him slap her but alas. 😡😡 But this prelude provided me with a strange solace. 😈😈 Oh yeah, I'm floating in a peaceful abyss. 😛😛

And before I start soundind demented to you, let's get serious. 😳😳 Your prelude is perfect - not too long, not too short. 👏👏 You've captured the darkness necessary to make it work and you've already got me curious as to how this FF is going to shape - another good sign.
Only one thing for you to work upon - don't make your narrations look abrupt. 😕😕 It breaks the flow of the darkness that floats alongside and especially when dealing with a theme like angst/tragedy, you need to be doubly careful. 😎😎
Apart from that, I've always told you that you have it in you to write an angsty fic with full justice, and so far, I'm impressed! 🤗🤗 Do post the next part soon, you've got me hooked into this now. ❤️❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bloomfield



Hey Sania,

Welcome back after a long time! Thank you so much and I'm missing your poems!
No need of thanks for a pm :)


Thanks dear for the welcome😃. No needs of thanks.😉yeah I will post 1 of them soon.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!! I just loved it!! I don't know how you are going to continue it,since you have killed them both at start itself. That's a big mystery to me and I am willing definitely to read further. Besides ishani confessing her love was nice but she died after that!! Oh now I am so curious!!

BTW you made me feel their love all over again at the end .they are soulmates, can't live without each other.

You got time to write again, I had said so.I am happy, very happy. So sorry for late review but I had to go to marriage of relative.now I am back!!

With tonnes of hugs
Vaishali

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