Ranveer's unsaid feelings #1 (Episode 108 updated page149)

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Bloomfield

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Posted: 9 years ago

#491

And it would be even more hotter if it's gonna be after the separation. :P

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malsa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#492

if u r comfortable with writing consummation scene plz go ahead.😉 it will b hot. i want love making b4 n after da separation😆

Edited by malsa - 9 years ago

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naush2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#493

Sakshi you can write con scenes very well you must go for it before also.even you have written it before both the chapters were really very nice.we are waiting for that.

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Priyanka Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#494

Hey sakshi no separation plz.. In show we already see this. If u r thinking about con scene then go for it.

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: cuteii
plzzz No sepration serial is enogh for torture of serpration

hi cuteii hey don't worry yaar my sepration won't be that tragedy let me try my best to make it interesting 😊😊😊

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
So, a separation...Okay, so firstly it shouldn't be dragged.

Secondly if you are confident enough to write a consummation episode/chapter you can go ahead with it :)

As to suggestions, I'll pm you...But you need suggestions like?

hi aarushi thanks for the response yaar ya ya i won't drag so much if it is long time but the track will be bit separation with a comedy scenes

ya let me aarushi the consummation will be made ya pm for sure aarushi because i have a wondered how great writer lol .. the suggestion i actually need is need consummation or not or should i made it before separation or after the separation 😊😊

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: Bloomfield
And it would be even more hotter if it's gonna be after the separation. :P

ya even i thought that but seriously i am confused whether to make it after or before 😊😊😊

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: malsa
if u r comfortable with writing consummation scene plz go ahead.😉 it will b hot. i want love making b4 n after da separation😆

hi malsa thanks for the response i am comfortable with it but it is before and after will you guys won't be bored or can i surely make it after separation