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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Its amazing LM
The chracters are mature & act like humans

Read first 14 chaps in a go then lil bit from other chapts as well.
Its well written & fab
Coming to this update it was mindblowing and my heart skipped a beat while reading the last para

Do cont soon & plz write another FF after this one

You can also give 100 chapters of this one also
After reading your FF one can get over the trauma of MATSH IshVeer ๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Hey LM,
Just read the update n ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ <- this is my reaction after reading the last few lines of the chap...
After I reading the title I was a bit scared and my fear came true๐Ÿ˜•..

However the first scene of ishveer was as usual cute๐Ÿ˜ณ..

LM, please don't make ishveer's bachcha to die.. I can't take that๐Ÿ˜ญ..

Hoping to have a still more darker chap...๐Ÿ˜”..

But I'll b strong while reading the next chap. since u mentioned in MM's reply that the next one will be a darker one..

And thanx fr the pm๐Ÿ˜‰

Aarushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: MM123456


I am not angry on you LM , I have the tendacy to be mean when I am heartbroken - I am so sorry that u had to meet that side of me ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ญ

What , LM the next one is going to be more dark ? Is ishu and the baby going to be fine , just tell me these two are going to be okey please because if something happens to them I am going to say tatta bye to this forum

My friend is telling me to relax so I wan 't to end this on a positive note :

LM , the first part was really beautifully written , I loved how Ishani was reading the book IshVeer conversation was beautiful โค๏ธ

In case we are not online tomorrow on the same time I also want to wish you a happy independence
day ๐Ÿค—

With love
#yours1fan

ps : I am sorry for putting my all anger on you ๐Ÿ˜ญ




As I said earlier, I was expecting the same kind of response, so I'd mentally prepared myself for the same. As to getting to see your other side, isn't that how friendship grows stronger? Besides, if I see you and manage you at your worst, it's only then that I deserve to have you at your best as well.



And coming back to your query, well, Ishaani and baby are not the only ones to worry about. In fact, there will be more things to worry about as well. Keep a grip on your spirits though, if you are reading the next chapter.



And thank you so much, dear! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— I'm really glad you liked it. โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ And Happy Independence Day to you too! ๐Ÿฅณ




And stop apologizing, for crying out loud! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Love you loads! โค๏ธ I should be updating either by tomorrow or Sunday.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue





As I said earlier, I was expecting the same kind of response, so I'd mentally prepared myself for the same. As to getting to see your other side, isn't that how friendship grows stronger? Besides, if I see you and manage you at your worst, it's only then that I deserve to have you at your best as well.



And coming back to your query, well, Ishaani and baby are not the only ones to worry about. In fact, there will be more things to worry about as well. Keep a grip on your spirits though, if you are reading the next chapter.



And thank you so much, dear!๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—I'm really glad you liked it. โญ๏ธโญ๏ธAnd Happy Independence Day to you too!๐Ÿฅณ




And stop apologizing, for crying out loud!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Love you loads!โค๏ธI should be updating either by tomorrow or Sunday.



LM , now I feel even worse why do you have to be so freaking adorable โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Seriously you are to cute ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Well I will try to be strong during the next update , but thank you for letting me know but if I skip you next chapter and go babysit instead , will that be okey with you ?

Ofc I liked it , after all I am your biggest fan ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿค— I can 't apologizing ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† That 's just who I am ๐Ÿ˜‰

Love you to ๐Ÿ˜Š I am so glad you are updating on Monday ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And thank you ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

PS : You have to stop being so cute , cause it only makes me feel more bad that I put my anger on you ๐Ÿ˜• Gosh I can be so stupid at times ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ..Enchanteur..

Its amazing LM

The chracters are mature & act like humans

Read first 14 chaps in a go then lil bit from other chapts as well.
Its well written & fab
Coming to this update it was mindblowing and my heart skipped a beat while reading the last para

Do cont soon & plz write another FF after this one

You can also give 100 chapters of this one also
After reading your FF one can get over the trauma of MATSH IshVeer ๐Ÿคฃ




Thank you so much, sweetie! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— I'm really glad that you liked the FF so far. โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ



Mature and sane IshVeer are pretty much a surprise now, aren't they? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Well, I'll try to write a new one soon enough. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



And thank you so much once again, dearie! โค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ishveer4eva

Hey LM,

Just read the update n ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ <- this is my reaction after reading the last few lines of the chap...
After I reading the title I was a bit scared and my fear came true๐Ÿ˜•..

However the first scene of ishveer was as usual cute๐Ÿ˜ณ..

LM, please don't make ishveer's bachcha to die.. I can't take that๐Ÿ˜ญ..

Hoping to have a still more darker chap...๐Ÿ˜”..

But I'll b strong while reading the next chap. since u mentioned in MM's reply that the next one will be a darker one..

And thanx fr the pm๐Ÿ˜‰

Aarushi



Yes, that was pretty much everyone's reaction. And well, in the next chapter you'll get the bigger picture as well. All I will tell you is that have faith in me. ๐Ÿ˜Š And yes, the next chapter will certainly be a dark one. ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•



I'm happy that you liked the first part. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ And I'll try to update soon enough. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: MM123456



LM , now I feel even worse why do you have to be so freaking adorable โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Seriously you are to cute ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Well I will try to be strong during the next update , but thank you for letting me know but if I skip you next chapter and go babysit instead , will that be okey with you ?

Ofc I liked it , after all I am your biggest fan ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿค— I can 't apologizing ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜† That 's just who I am ๐Ÿ˜‰

Love you to ๐Ÿ˜Š I am so glad you are updating on Monday ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And thank you ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

PS : You have to stop being so cute , cause it only makes me feel more bad that I put my anger on you ๐Ÿ˜• Gosh I can be so stupid at times ๐Ÿ˜†




MM, well I can't help it. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† But truth be told, when I say that I welcome Constructive criticism, I do stick to it and welcome everything that comes my way. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ



And yes, I think that babysitting will be a good option. ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› But you might miss out on two or three key things but you'll get the gist of it in the chapter After it so it is alright. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



And love you too as well and stop feeling bad. โค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue




MM, well I can't help it.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†But truth be told, when I say that I welcome Constructive criticism, I do stick to it and welcome everything that comes my way.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ



And yes, I think that babysitting will be a good option.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›But you might miss out on two or three key things but you'll get the gist of it in the chapter After it so it is alright.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



And love you too as well and stop feeling bad. โค๏ธ



Hahaa ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Yeah and I know emotional and dark chapter will be difficult to write for you as well since it always takes a toll on the one who write so I just wanted to say that I wish you all the best and I know that no matter what you will give full justice to it and you going to write it well as you always do ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿค— So sending you hugs ๐Ÿ˜‰

I am the new babysitter in the town ๐Ÿ˜› You know what I might surprise myself and the read chapter , I don't know what will happen but I truly believe I won't be able to miss anything you write ๐Ÿ˜Š

Once again good luck rock star , I am sure you are going to a marvellous job ๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
LM u must hv got sadistic pleasure ๐Ÿ˜•
Dis update ws awesome ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
U knw a writer shud explore evry arena nd u hv mastered evry arena โญ๏ธ ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธ
Dis update made me cry ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
I hope its jst d slit on her back coz d way u described her tht ws terrifying ๐Ÿคข ๐Ÿ˜•
Dear I ws so sad ystrday after reading spoilers nd nw ur update brought tears in my eyes acting as a cherry on d cake
๐Ÿ˜ญ
Ishveer conversatn s awesome loved it nd ishu mood swings wud hv been wowwow ๐Ÿ˜›
It's said tht whnevr sumthng bad is abt to hppn thn dogs ar pets get an indicate wel here u justified tht ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Nw wid heavy heart m nt able to write nymore review BT to b honest as a writer I really became die hard fan of urs d way u described hw a beautiful day change suddenly into a nightmare tht to dreaded one ๐Ÿ‘
M jst doubting one dreadful thng nd it shud nt b true I hope u gt wht I mean ๐Ÿ˜•
Wel dis tym m in dilemma whether to request a faster update or ntnt ๐Ÿฅฑ
Thnx fr pm ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: MM123456



Hahaa ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Yeah and I know emotional and dark chapter will be difficult to write for you as well since it always takes a toll on the one who write so I just wanted to say that I wish you all the best and I know that no matter what you will give full justice to it and you going to write it well as you always do ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿค— So sending you hugs ๐Ÿ˜‰

I am the new babysitter in the town ๐Ÿ˜› You know what I might surprise myself and the read chapter , I don't know what will happen but I truly believe I won't be able to miss anything you write ๐Ÿ˜Š

Once again good luck rock star , I am sure you are going to a marvellous job ๐Ÿ˜‰




Hugs to you as well. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— Till before Neapolitan City, most of my works have always contained that element of angst (save for 2-3 others), so I've mastered the art of writing it and not letting the mood affect me. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ



See, I told you that you'd be a brilliant babysitter now, didn't I? ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ f you read the next chapter, I'd be happy and even if you don't, I'd be happy because I don't like causing you pain.



Thank you so much once again, champ! โค๏ธ

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